Let me not lie, some aspects of this rubbed me the wrong way.
I didn't love the idea that the MMC stepped into the role of father figure and then subsequently also decides to enter into a romantic relationship with what is now supposed to be his pseudo daughter. In my mind, one generally doesn't equate the other and for me it's hard to build a love match I might root for based of off that sort of dynamic. On the one hand, you have this (small spoiler ahead! Stop reading here to avoid being low key SPOILED, last chance.....alright you've been warned) you have this post suicidal, twenty something with severe daddy issues escaping the tight and understandably over bearing control of her mother to live in the house of an older, more collected, well connected self-proclaimed dominant that is now her boss, warden and by his own tongue, stand in father. The power dynamic between them is WILD.
I did love how the MFC came into her own, really transitioning from victim of her life circumstance to survivor of it. When she needed to, she played the grown-up rather than the lost child and I liked that bit. This I'm sure was done to combat the obvious difference in power between her and the MMC with the author hoping to show how smart and mature she is so we as readers can see a woman, rather than a kid. And it works well, the issue at least for me is, whether you see her as a woman, or a child is neither here nor there when it comes to the role he is supposed to play.
Listen, don’t get me wrong, I know it’s just media, and I generally don’t have an issue with the whole ‘legal guardian’ trope or what have you when the power scale isn’t leaning so far one way, everyone involved is legal and there is clear indication that parent/child relationship was never established or intended. Here, I think because he’s a professor who’s quite literally studying the lasting negative effects on young women who have been abandoned by their father, it just seems kind of…I don’t know, predatory? I can’t wrap my mind around, him taking this women out of her home, moving her into his house all to help her, giving her a job and a contract that detail how he’s stepping into the role of her father, full well knowing the detriment and chaos loosing her actual father played on her mind and spirit just to then say, it’s perfectly natural for you and I to feel this desire and attraction and want of physical consumption. My guy….what?
No, it doesn’t work for me. The writing isn’t bad, it just…I’m very clearly not the intended audience. The whole thing didn’t gel for me.