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304 pages, Kindle Edition
First published March 20, 2013
I got through a little over a quarter of this book, but I just couldn't do it. It's just so poorly constructed and lazily put together. For starters, it seems there are 5 main characters that seem to be the focus of this book plus the witch after Zac, all of which seem to be pretty poorly put together (though with Aya, this might be because she was only just introduced, so I'll forgive that one). Zac and Sam are the two original vampires in this group who later come across Liz dead and already turned and teach her how to become a vampire. Later, the three of them meet Gabby, and then when Zack pisses off the wrong witch, they summon Aya.
Zac, the primary main character is a complete asshole and seems to have the maturity of a 13 year old teenage boy, despite being 147 years old. This, to me anyway, seems like it would be incredibly unlikely because you'd think after 147 years, he'd have learned not to be such an idiot and insult vampires who are older and more powerful than him for no particular reason. While he admitted that the first fight they had was his fault, he goes back because he believes this vampire is a threat to him and his brother and their "blending" in with this town. Now before I go any further, I think we should stop and think about this idea of "blending" because the way it is introduced in this book make absolutely no sense at all. For starters, if "blending" is such a priority, then why during the entire say 27% of the book I have read haven't any of the characters had even a single conversation with a human. You'd think being a part of human life would be an essential part of "blending" wouldn't you? I mean, it is mentioned that his brother, Sam, has a job as a gardener, but come on, that's it?! That's what you call blending?! Secondly even if blending really is a priority, what makes you think that this vampire would have been a threat to it? He was only there in the first place because he was looking for someone, and held back from hurting Zac at first despite the unwarranted taunts. It wasn't until Zac went back that the vampire hurt him. Thirdly, if blending is a threat with this guy, then how the hell is going back and insulting him some more, and then going back once again to kill him due to a hurt ego supposed to help with this supposed blending? Quite frankly, I think Zac deserves to die a slow and painful death from this witch, and if she hadn't have threatened is family and friends as well, I'd be right with her.
Now, as for the other characters, there doesn't seem to be much character development at all. Taylor seems to have put the minimal effort into explaining what the hell the character is doing there and that's about it. Take Gabby for example: We know that she's a witch and how she came about her powers and met Sam, Gabby and Liz, but according to the book there seems to be a hatred between witches and vampires, but her only explanation about how she became friends with them is:
"It took her a while to trust the vampire brothers, being their mortal enemy and all. She quickly came to realize that they were different, despite all their faults."
Another problem I have with the book are some of the errors with continuity. In the beginning of the book, it is mentioned that most vampires they come across are older than them. However, later in the book they say that they haven't met many vampires older than them.
I'm sure there would have been many more complaints had I continued to read this book, but because of the lack of explanations for the characters, I failed to gain any interest of compassion for these characters that might compel me to read further. I hope Zac dies, but considering that this is a recently published fantasy book that seems to be following the recent trend for vampires, it's more likely that he lives and becomes the hero and falls in love with Aya. Don't waste your money buying this book.