I wanted to like this one. I love summer camp and spent as much time there as possible as a kid and then counselor, so the biggest downfall of this book is that I could not suspend my reality for the story line.
This is about the worse camp I've read about. Apparently most of the staff are minors and in charge of kids for the whole summer (if this was a day camp then sure but it is not), some of those kids are the same age or maybe a year older, there seams to be only one true adult - the camp director, the camp director is terrified her son is going to hook-up with the whole camp, so she is more worried about that than the campers, there is often only one counselor with a group of kids, and the main character is often alone with one child, there is a minor/18 heading up the kitchen. And apparently this camp pays enough for someone to pay tuition AND books for a full semester. ALL of those things are all wrong and I really can't get past the absurdity of it.
Next, and I am glad this slacked off about half way, but EVERY thought the main character had was negative and hung up on her weight. It was frustrating to read and I got tired of being in her head and hearing it all. And this is coming from someone who was and is over weight, so I know those feelings. My sport is equestrian, so I know a thing or two about horse and what they can carry. If you are going to have ponies who cant carry the weight of an active softball player (honestly how heavy is this girl really) then you need to supply some other ponies of horses. One, little ponies are little shits and not really great for camp anyways, large ponies can handle some weight, and if you have campers who are just as old as your staff then you are going to run into weight issues with them and a bigger issue height, so having some horses on hand would be better.
I did actually like and enjoy the connection between Logan and Bren, so that is why this is getting three stars. It was sweet and awkward and all that new relationship in high school is.
But I am glad I got this on the audible escape and did not spend a credit. The narration was good. Normally I would rather have the male POV as well but I was ok only having Bren's POV in this story.
So overall, while I did enjoy the connection between Logan and Bren, I could not get past the location and all the wrongness of the camp.