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34 pages, Paperback
First published December 28, 2007
This is an exciting time nationally and internationally for poetry. Last year we saw poets who are normally positioned at the margins taking centre stage. We saw traditional poets pushing against our rigid criteria of what constitutes a poem. Poets are experimenting, redefining and reconstructing their poetics. I have seen some amazing new collections hit the market place already and am therefore delighted to be able to read this year's poetic offerings whilst chairing such a distinguished and talented cohort of Forward Prizes judges.Breadfruit is her first published pamphlet, consisting of 16 short poems, and I have to say that I am not the biggest fan. I know that one shouldn't judge debut collections too harshly, but this was very underwhelming.
Mum said my brothers got their letter,The second part of this collection, the so-called Garden Poems, fell completely flat for me. I think it was Malika's attempt at experimental poetry in a stream of consciousness style, so she basically sat down on park benches and described what she saw or wrote the thoughts down that popped into her head. It was way too jumbled for me, it lacked meaning. She tackled some imporant themes such as suicide, the loss of a beloved family member, cheating within relationships etc. - but she really couldn't woe me emotionally. I never stopped to take the beauty of the words in, or the honesty of the scene - because they simply didn't exist.
but being boys they will not respond
until it is too late. They will speak
to gravestones of regrets.
I got the letter - nine folded A4
pages blaming yourself for slammed doors
and bad choices. Telling stories of your dad
playing silly games, shouting up drain pipes
Who's down there? and you would shout
Who's up there asking who's down here?
which you now know
were your dad's shy attempts
to create tender moments.