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Los cuerpos de mujeres asesinadas grotescamente están apareciendo en las afueras rurales de Virginia y, cuando llaman al FBI para pedir su ayuda, no tienen respuesta. Hay un asesino en serie cuya frecuencia está aumentando, y saben que solamente hay una agente lo suficientemente buena para resolver este caso, la Agente Especial Riley Paige.

Riley se encuentra en un permiso pagado, recuperándose de su encuentro con su último asesino en serie y, frágil como está, el FBI está reacio a aprovechar su mente brillante. Sin embargo, Riley se suma al caso, necesitando luchar contra sus propios demonios, y su búsqueda la lleva por la subcultura inquietante de coleccionistas de muñecas, a los hogares de familias desintegradas y por los caminos más oscuros de la mente del asesino. Mientras Riley profundiza en el caso más y más, se da cuenta de que está enfrentando a un asesino más retorcido de lo que había imaginado. En una carrera frenética contra el tiempo, se encuentra presionando sus límites, su trabajo en riesgo, su propia familia en peligro y su frágil psiquis colapsando.

Sin embargo, una vez que Riley Paige toma un caso, ella no se da por vencida. La obsesiona, llevándola a los rincones más oscuros de su propia mente, ofuscando las líneas entre el cazador y la presa. Después de una serie de giros inesperados, sus instintos la llevan a un clímax estremecedor que incluso Riley no podría haber imaginado.

Un thriller psicológico oscuro con suspenso emocionante, UNA VEZ DESAPARECIDO marca el debut de una nueva serie fascinante—y un nuevo personaje querido—que te dejará pasando páginas hasta bien entrada la noche.

El Libro #2 en la serie de Riley Paige estará disponible pronto.

214 pages, Kindle Edition

First published December 10, 2015

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Blake Pierce

685 books5,778 followers
Blake Pierce is author of the bestselling RILEY PAGE mystery series, which includes seven books (and counting). Blake Pierce is also the author of the MACKENZIE WHITE mystery series, comprising four books (and counting); of the AVERY BLACK mystery series, comprising four books (and counting); and of the new KERI LOCKE mystery series.

An avid reader and lifelong fan of the mystery and thriller genres, Blake loves to hear from you, so please feel free to visit www.blakepierceauthor.com to learn more and stay in touch.

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Profile Image for Obsidian.
3,230 reviews1,146 followers
May 3, 2016
Please note that I gave this book half a star but rounded it up to 1 star for Goodreads.

Has been done better by others out there. Who knew a book about a serial killer and a former case involving another serial killer could be boring.

Taking place in Virginia and Washington, D.C. (FYI authors, guess what, you can't drive from Quantico from Washington, D.C. in 30 minutes) we follow FBI Special Agent Paige Riley who is still recovering from her last encounter with a serial killer. Apparently no one is as smart as Paige. No one can understand killers like Paige does. Heck, Paige even shares a special connection to her partner and best friend, Bill. There is a mention of what Paige looks like, but I blocked it out because I couldn't take one more utterance of how freaking great she is.

There is no depth to Paige, her partner, her daughter, her ex, other agents. Shockingly the only person we get some insight into is the serial killer.

And the entire premise of Paige's daughter not getting what her mother does and it being hidden from her was idiotic. She is 14 years old, she doesn't know what Google is? And how the heck did they keep from her, her mom was in the hospital? And let's discuss Paige's genius idea to not tell her ex that their daughter was smoking pot and apparently had been drinking in the past?

BIG EXHALE.

Moving on.

Paige's ex is portrayed as stupid and abusive and you have to wonder how smart she is if that's the guy she ended up with.

The only time the author slaps Paige down is when she goes and gets in the face of a U.S. Senator and is shocked when she is treated like everyone else who would do something so colossally stupid.

The second time was when she pretty much throws herself (verbally) at her partner and he was not a happy camper. That's the only reason why I gave this book half a star, at least Bill as a character realized how messed up she is.

The writing was not very good, I found some typos here and there. The dialogue was pretty terrible between characters. And Paige's amateurish assumptions was laughable. I think I did laugh when Paige goes to confront the serial killer with no freaking backup.

The flow was a joke since we kept leap frogging around.

The setting of DC, Quantico, and Georgetown makes it seem like the author looked up mapquest and that's it. She doesn't give you a sense of any of these places at all.

The ending was eye roll inducing.

There needs to be more world building by the author. She needs more believable characters, and better dialogue. At this point I know more about the FBI just based on tv than this author does. The thing she has other agents and the head of a division do was so dumb it was painful. No way that the FBI would wrap up a serial killer case based on the bullshit nonexistent evidence they had. Sigh.

And I would also say that the author needs to stop having Paige act like a half-wit when it comes to her kid and her ex husband. Don't tell me how she can see into serial killers mind but is not able to grasp what her daughter is thinking/feeling.
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665 reviews
January 20, 2016
The basic premise was good but the main character was terrible. The more I thought about it, the angrier it made me. No one, FBI agent or not, would get away with acting like that. First, there is no way Riley would be allowed to return to work in that condition. Then, she thinks how wonderful she is at understanding evil and everyone else, including. the partner she adores, is so dumb. And yet she's the one who gets herself caught by a serial killer, not once, but twice for not following protocol and putting herself in stupid situations. She also gets drunk and nearly od's and it's her teenage daughter who has to pour out the alcohol and nurse her through the hangover. And we're supposed to believe her ex is a terrible father?! Apparently it's okay to run around assaulting people and making false accusations as long as you eventually get the bad guy. Give me a break...

If you like every FBI cliche rolled together, go ahead and read it. After all, at least it was free on Kindle.
Profile Image for Linda Strong.
3,878 reviews1,708 followers
June 23, 2018
FBI Agent Riley Paige is called to investigate a series of deaths. Bodies of women are turning up, each killed in monstrous ways.

Riley is on paid leave ...having survived two attacks by serial killers. The FBI isn't sure of her mental state, but she's the best they got. She's one of the few who seem to be able to get into the head of the killer. As her investigation progresses she realizes she's up against a killer more twisted than anyone could have imagined.

This case will have her doubting her abilities, and her sanity. She may lose her job, her family, maybe even her life.

After having read the prequel to this series, I couldn't wait to get started on the series. The characters are great. Riley is smart, ambitious, and can be stubborn when she knows she is right. Bob is the perfect partner ... he knows she is smarter than he, and has this amazing ability to read crime scenes.

The story is well-written with some twists and turns and plenty of suspects. There is a small cliff-hanger, but the second book in this series , ONCE TAKEN, is already available ... no waiting to see what happens next.

Many thanks to the author / Kobo Writing Life / Netgalley for the digital copy of ONCE GONE. Opinions expressed here are unbiased and entirely my own.
Profile Image for TXGAL1.
393 reviews40 followers
August 19, 2021
3.5 rounded up. It would have been a 4 rating had there been better proofreading. Errors certainly don’t enhance storytelling and most definitely break the sense of urgency in a thrilling mystery.

Other than the above, I would not be able to share anything new that has not already been ably covered by other Goodreads friends.
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Author 8 books282 followers
July 23, 2021
2,600 amazon reviews, average rating 4+.

I didn't like the cover; it did not grab my attention at all. But it came recommended on Book Blurb and was free.

A female FBI field agent, who is great, is damaged psychologically. A serial killer kills young women and poses them. The agent comes back to help too soon.

I really liked this book. It was very interesting the way dolls were involved in it. Then for me, it slowed down at about halfway through. Then the ending although it was fine was rather predictable.

I am becoming a tough critic. Everyone else seemed to love it. I liked it too, just wanted a little more.

Well worth the read. The author Blake Pierce has a number of books out, and a few different series and seems to be very popular. You might check him out.

If it holds up, look for my next review, 41% through and it is great.

Review by Mike
www.mikeslavinauthor.com (award-winning Kill Crime-crime/thrillers)
Profile Image for Anu.
374 reviews944 followers
January 31, 2016
This one gets an extra star solely because the writer seems to like serial killers Criminal Minds as much as I do. Also Silence of the Lambs. Okay premise, pretty bad execution. For a clever woman, Riley was kind of an idiot sometimes. A word of advice, writers? Please don't try too hard to make the reader like the MC. That effort is definitely going to backfire.

P.S. I've seen so much of said T.V. show, and read so much about serial killers, the profile, and by extension the plot kind of became predictable for me.
Profile Image for Louie the Mustache Matos.
1,427 reviews138 followers
May 16, 2024
I really enjoy Blake Pierce's stories. Pierce infuses the characters with believability, and a passion for law-enforcement one would wish all protectors might embrace. The plots are rapid-paced, page-turners, overflowing with action and suspense, although they always seem derivative. If there is one complaint I have, it is that the novels generally follow established tropes, so as to make them all seem very similar to each other.

Once Gone is the first book in the Riley Paige series, which follows the investigative exploits of an FBI agent named Riley Paige. Riley is a highly capable Special Agent but has a flaw which I often find alienating. She acts impulsively. She often feels incapable of demonstrating restraint. Needless to say, such impetuousness is ill-advised when dealing with dangerous personalities.

When Once Gone opens Riley is on leave due to being captured and held during her last mission. She is trying to be an at-home Mom to her 14-year-old daughter when she is invited to return to work to assist in the capture of a serial killer. The problem for me is that her partner loves working with her due to the facile way she can imagine herself into the killer's mind to accurately predict what the killer is attempting to accomplish, but that her hasty method places her partner in danger as well.

Don't get me wrong. I love how easily Pierce enfolds the reader in the narrative with such impressive alacrity that it feels like you turn the first few pages and then realize you have read 50 pages. However, I can't stand characters that have poor impulse control, and excuse their behavior with "I just had to." It's a crock, but I still like the novel.
Profile Image for Una Tiers.
Author 6 books375 followers
March 30, 2016
Despite a strong start, the main character is dumb and not likable. The repetitiousness of arrest, no wrong guy was tedious.
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5,074 reviews3,012 followers
June 12, 2022
Special Agent Riley Paige was on extended leave after the previous case when she saved a woman, and almost was killed herself. The trauma and nightmares had changed Riley and she was a shadow of her old self. When an artfully posed body turned up, Riley’s partner Bill told the FBI that they needed her expertise to solve this horrendous crime. Everyone was reluctant, even Bill but when he approached Riley, after first declining, she set herself onto the case.

Riley’s one fault was that she wouldn’t give in, she wouldn’t quit, until she’d found the killer. When another woman was taken, she gave it her all, chasing clues and following shadows. But she was fading. Alice, Riley’s fourteen-year-old daughter, was being shuttled between her mother and father, their recent divorce causing friction. But Alice was more on Riley’s side than she realized. But would Riley find the killer before anyone else disappeared?

Once Gone is the 1st in the Riley Paige series by Blake Pierce and it was fast paced and electric. But Riley made many mistakes, putting herself on the line when she should have had back-up. She took too many risks and yes, she’s a flawed agent, so I certainly hope she gets better as the cases move forward. A good police procedural with a serial killer – recommended.
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1,199 reviews
October 29, 2020
This is the first book I have read by this author and I will certainly be reading more!
Riley Paige is an FBI agent dealing with PTSD having had a narrow escape from a sadistic killer. She is unable to get over her ordeal but a new serial killer has her work colleagues pressuring her to return.
Will she be able to keep the demons at bay as she tries to get inside the mind of a killer who tortures his victims before making them into 'dolls' and displaying them?
Not for the faint hearted this is a fast paced thriller with a very good central character with a few issues of her own.
Profile Image for Jenn.
25 reviews
February 14, 2018
I've read two and a half of these books and I just can't go on. For the author, Blake Pierce, women fall into three categories; meat to be tortured, butchered then posed in revolting, creepy ways, teenagers who are brooding, moody and irascible or idiot savant detectives.
Pierce creates female protagonists who are detached, emotionally unavailable mothers, women who cannot learn a simple lesson. For instance, in the Riley Paige series, Paige is caught by a serial killer and tortured because she's too hot-headed to wait for back up. Six weeks later, she's back on the job and twice more she hurtles head-long into the same dangerous situation, refusing to wait for her partner to turn up. I mean, what an IDIOT.
Each female detective has these 'instincts' that kick in and eventually lead to the capture of the creepy criminal but first we must endure the detectives being lambasted, harassed and ridiculed by their colleagues. And for such brilliant sleuths, they never seem to have a good comeback. They never stand up for themselves, preferring instead to scurry away silently with their tail between their legs. It's beyond frustrating.
It leads me to this inevitable question: Blake Pierce, do you even LIKE women?
Profile Image for Mandy.
320 reviews415 followers
November 22, 2017
3.5/4 stars. Loved the cliffhanger ending... pretty good book. A couple mistakes here and there but pretty good. I like this author. His books grab me and make me want to read them.
Profile Image for Andrea.
695 reviews
November 8, 2019
Really enjoyed this read this book free on kindle,now waiting till book two and the rest of this series goes on offer on kindle as thought this book was a fantastic read.Riley paige was on a case and she rescued a woman called Maria but ended up captured but has flashbacks and can't cope she doesn't know if hes still alive,she goes on a case with her old partner Bill. murders of woman that resemble dolls will they catch the killer.first time read of this authors books.enjoyed it.recommend this read.
Profile Image for Ariannha.
1,395 reviews
March 7, 2021
3.5 ⭐️

Primer acercamiento con este autor y a esta serie con la Agente Especial del FBI Riley Paige, la cual hasta los momentos lleva 17 libros…

Es un libro muy introductorio en sus personajes, ya que apenas logras ver en su superficie. Sabes que Riley se está recuperando de un suceso recientemente acaecido en su trabajo, pero vas obteniendo pinceladas de este. Tampoco logras entender el por qué de su matrimonio roto, o el distanciamiento que parece haber con su hija. Lo mismo no pasa con su compañero Bill Jeffreys, con el que hay una tensión interesante… Imagino que al haber tantos libros en la serie la intención del autor es ir profundizando en sus personajes, sus personalidades y sus relaciones.

La historia narra cómo misteriosamente van apareciendo cuerpos de mujeres asesinadas dispuestas con apariencia de muñecas. A pesar del desacuerdo que parece haber en el FBI ante su reintegro, Riley acepta el reto de enfrentarse con sus propios demonios, y a costa de su propia salud mental, para descubrir que existen asesinos más retorcidos de los que ella misma ha podido imaginar.

Está muy bien narrado, es un libro súper corto que no llega a las 300 páginas, así que el autor es preciso y no se extiende en florituras innecesarias. En muchas ocasiones su pluma y el estilo me ha recordado a la Serie El Coleccionista de Dot Hutchinson, con la diferencia que “El jardín de las mariposas” me causó un impacto mucho mayor que este libro.

¿Qué me ha faltado? La tensión y el suspenso están muy bien manejados, sin embargo como me espero de este género, los giros inesperados en la trama son esenciales, y aquí son escasos.

En definitiva, es un thriller psicológico oscuro con un suspenso emocionante, como ya he dicho bastante introductorio, pero al que le ha faltado el factor sorpresa. Sin embargo, voy a dar la oportunidad de continuar con la serie, puede que se torne interesante.

“Atraes lo que sientes que mereces. Creas tus propias circunstancias de vida.”
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1,231 reviews97 followers
March 27, 2020
Per chi è un lettore abituale di thriller, alcune scelte dell'autore possono risultare dei cliché, ma non mi sento di bocciarlo in toto. Innanzi tutto ha creato un investigatrice interessante, fuori di testa, ma in un libro del genere ci sta benissimo, e con un istinto molto sviluppato.
Qualche scena mi ha ricordato il modus operandi della serie televisiva Criminal Mind, soprattutto nella parte iniziale. Leggerò altro dell'autore perché, come dicevo non è da bocciare e suppongo che con l'esperienza possa migliorare.
Profile Image for Saimi Vasquez.
1,951 reviews94 followers
March 29, 2025
Riley esta de reposo después que su último caso la dejara con un PTSD tan fuerte que apenas podía salir de la cama. Pero hay un nuevo asesino serial suelto, y parece que ella es la única capaz de encontrar el sentido a estas muertes. Así que regresa al trabajo, mientras lucha con sus pesadillas y demonios internos, esperando poder resolver este caso y salvar otras vidas. Pero será capaz de dejar sus problemas de lado y concentrarse en el trabajo? Podrá encontrar al asesino antes de que haya mas victimas?

Es un libro de "misterio e investigación policial", pero realmente es mas un drama que le ocurre a un agente del FBI durante una investigación. No puedo decir que fue un mal libro, ya que me resulto bastante entretenido y lo leí muy rápido. Pero no era lo que esperaba en un libro con esas etiquetas. Sin embargo, entiendo que al ser una serie, el autor quiera enfocar los libros mas en la prota y sus "circunstancias" que en el crimen como tal.
En fin, me gusto la forma en que fue escrito, y me llama la atención saber mas sobre la prota, así que seguro leeré otros libros de esta serie mas adelante.
Profile Image for Alaina.
7,344 reviews203 followers
October 21, 2019
Man.. murder mystery books make work a lot better.

Once Gone is a murder mystery book that takes place in the state that I actually live in: good ole' Virginia. Mostly known as "Virginia is for lovers"... well this book makes it known for murdering women. Details I know.

In this, you will meet Riley Paige. Now this girl has been through some serious shit. Her whole life has been messed up since day one. I honestly felt so bad for her and she kind of reminded me of this one amazon original show - Absentia. If you haven't watched it, you should.

Now it's not just her life reminding me of this show - no there's so many other things. Pretty both main ladies work for the FBI. Both had some time away from their job as well. They are also really bad at claiming who the killer is (okay it sometimes happens but then again - no one is perfect).

It was so good that now I kind of want to rewatch season 1 and 2 of the show lol (but I wont because who knows when season 3 will be out). Luckily for me, and her, Riley finally listens with her gut. ALWAYS trust this thing guys - it works every damn time.

Overall, this book was so good. I'm definitely going to continue on with this series.
Profile Image for Fanny.
2,395 reviews50 followers
April 8, 2018



Una Vez Desaparecido es el primer libro de la serie Un Misterio De Riley Paige escrita por Blake Pierce y tiene como protagonista a la agente del FBI, Riley Paige.

Esta es mi primera lectura del autor, por lo que la inicie un poco dudosa, la sinopsis me atrajo desde un primer momento pero cuando comence a adentrarme en la novela no encontre lo que esperaba, no me malentiendan, no es un mal libro pero yo imaginaba otro tipo de historia.

Esta historia se podria describir como una buena premisa con un mal desarrollo, la trama tenia muchisimo potencial y la pluma del autor es amena pero tiene pequeños detalles que me sacaban de la lectura una y otra vez, ademas me molesto mucho lo mal traducido que esta : verbos mal utilizados, faltas de ortografia, repeticion de palabras, etc, son pequeñas cosas que le quitaban protagonismo a lo que leia, ya que estaba mas centrada en encontrar fallos que en la historia en si misma.

Tampoco me parecio un libro del todo verosimil, algunas de las actitudes de la protagonista no me encajaban, como por ejemplo su forma de proceder en algunas situaciones, se supone que es agente del FBI pero en momentos actuaba como una adolescente impulsiva.

En resumen, Una Vez Desaparecido es de esas novelas que no recuerdas pasado un tiempo, lo que narra es demasiado basico y simple para volverse memorable.

Hoy por hoy no planeo continuar la saga, no lo descarto completamente ( quizas en un tiempo le de otra oportunidad ) pero ahora mismo no me apetece demasiado.

2.5 Estrellas!
Profile Image for Adam.
40 reviews
November 30, 2016
English:
It was my first book of the author and it was "free" on Google Play Store. one thing that I could say about this book and it is "OUTSTANDING". I really got shocked by this book, cause I didn't expect it to be such a great book. I actually didn't like it, but loved it!
while reading this book I felt as if I was watching an episode of Criminal Minds, which I love it too. very well written and compiled with a interesting story that focused mostly on the main plot, rather than other things, made this book an outstanding and really pleasant read. from the beginning to the very last page, It definitely worth to read. I strongly recommend it to everyone; as Blake is among my favorite authors from now on. I will read every one of the books on the list.

Turkce:
bu yazardan okudugum ilk kitapti. Google Play'de bedava olarak aldigim kitab gercekten bir surpriz cikti. o kadar guzeldi ki galiba kendimi Criminal Minds dizisini izliyormusum gibi his ettim. guzel kurgulanmis, hic fazla oyalamadan o kadar guzel anlatilmis ki hic boylesini beklemezdim. ilk sayfadan itibaren kendimi bir korku ve heyecan icinde buldum ve bu hisler en son sayfanin en son satirina kadar devam etti. gizemle dolu bir kitab istiyorsaniz mutlaka okumaniz gerekecek bir kitap. her kese siddetle ve zevkle tavsiye ederim.
Profile Image for Carol.
3,759 reviews137 followers
July 3, 2022
This is not starting out to be a spectacular reading month for me...or maybe I am becoming too critical. At any rate the 1 star I gave this mystery (???), police procedural (???) ...again, was extremely generous. Meet Riley Paige...Special Agent with the FBI and her p_ _ _ _ _whipped, lapdog partner, Bill. We learn right away that the case was given to Riley because "she is the best agent the FBI has", or...to hear them tell it...EVER HAD! If that's truly the case...Heaven Help Us ALL!!! I'm pretty sure that she hates the entire male gender. She spent 75% of her time handcuffing and questioning men that had done nothing wrong except be born male and breath air. I borrowed a thought from another reviewer that expressed my feelings for this book SOOOO much better than I could and I totally 150% agree with. "She had the sole authority to assault, arrest, and violate the rights of anyone she might FEEL to be guilty with impunity makes this more of a super-hero comic book than a legitimate novel for adult readers." Thank you, Steve...whoever you may be, for summing this up so beautifully. I also liked the reviewer that suggested it be read in the bathroom and the pages used for an entirely different purpose.
Profile Image for Katie (spellboundbooks_).
509 reviews124 followers
January 20, 2024
2 stars

Solid plot but Riley Paige has to be the stupidest FBI agent in all of history…

I’ll admit I was invested when I started this. The case was interesting and I desperately wanted to know who killed all these women. I was even invested in Riley’s past case and her kidnapping.

But her actions in this book alone made me RAGE while reading this. She literally broke into peoples houses, tricked witnesses into giving her information and arrested the WRONG GUY all AFTER SHE GOT KICKED OFF THE CASE AND OUT OF THE FBI. She was rude to the deceased peoples relatives and none of her actions would have held up in court.

Not even to mention the fact she was KIDNAPPED because she didn’t call for backup in a previous case so you know what - let’s do it again. Plus for all of her talk about how good her “instincts” were she managed to get herself into some stupid scenarios and arrested the wrong guy. But it’s okay she got a promotion and let back on the force after all her stupidity.

An unlikable MC is not the way to go especially when creating a whole series with them.

Plot was decent. But 2-stars purely because of how mad I was in the second half of this book and how it felt the killer just came out of no where.
June 25, 2018
This book is difficult to rate because I thought it was really well-plotted and rather amateurishly written. Three stars may be a bit generous but the plot really was quite interesting and held my attention throughout.

Riley Paige is an FBI agent who seems to have a sixth sense for sniffing out criminals and criminal activity. She is a brilliant but seriously troubled cop. Unfortunately, some of her troubles were portrayed in a rather silly manner as was some of her brilliance.

In Once Gone, she is on the trail of a very elusive serial killer and this pursuit takes her on quite a roller coaster ride.

I can't really recommend the book because of the poor quality of the writing nor can I condemn it to mystery book hell because of the interesting plot.

The End
1 review7 followers
September 21, 2019
I’m listening to the audiobook. I can’t even finish this. Why the British narrator for a book that takes place in Virginia?
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57 reviews3 followers
December 22, 2016
Riley is foolhardy with a serious death wish so boohoo to all her sorrows and issues. I really expected more from this read but it was like watching a really bad imitation of a criminal minds episode that revolves around one narcissistic character. I DO NOT recommend this read.
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770 reviews83 followers
June 15, 2024
I love a good Blake Pierce series! This one is decent, nothing mind blowing but still nice read.
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362 reviews122 followers
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May 26, 2022
Abandono, con esta traducción horrorosa y tal como está colocado el texto no puedo seguir, me saca constantemente de la historia. Quizá si lo cojo en inglés... pero así desde luego no.
Profile Image for Rosa Dracos99.
694 reviews55 followers
December 4, 2018
Me ha costado mucho terminarlo, pero no por los personajes (muy carismáticos) ni por la trama (bien desarrollada); sino por la traducción. Pese a que no soy purista y que normalmente me pasan desapercibidos errores gramaticales u ortográficos que otros lectores comentan, me parece que el castellano (español o latino) no es ni primera ni segunda lengua del traductor. Tiene un gran problema con los verbos: no distingue el indicativo del subjuntivo; usa la voz pasiva de forma incorrecta; tampoco sabe diferenciar correctamente los verbos ser y estar; usa distintos tipos de pasado en el mismo párrafo... Tampoco conoce la diferencia entre el trato de usted o el tuteo, ya que en la misma frase y con el mismo interlocutor, usa ambos; no tiene en cuenta que existe la doble negación... y muchas cosas más.
Si añadimos que la tipología usada no es la habitual (en lugar de guiones para indicar diálogos, usa comillas), se me ha hecho muy ardua la lectura; ya que había frases tan mal escritas que me cortaba la concentración.
Solo seguiré con la serie si me apercibo de un cambio de traductor.
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1,489 reviews150 followers
April 8, 2021
We continue to marvel at the literal quantity of author Pierce’s output – but now we suggest the secret – he (or she?) just writes the same book over and over. We’ve now read the first MacKenzie White, the first Keri Locke, and the first Riley Paige (herein in “Once Gone”) to discover that all three are smarter or better or more beautiful or more perceptive than all their partners or colleagues. All three women are such undisciplined law enforcement officers that they routinely put themselves in life-threatening danger, ignoring normal procedure (and often their boss’s orders) to pursue usually serial-killer villains only they have been able to identify. They all get fired or suspended for their efforts, only to be saved at the end by their inferior counterparts who are only too glad to immediately welcome them back to the fold.

We totally enjoy female crime-solving tales, but we need a little more variety and skill than represented in these three “thrillers”. Good grief!
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218 reviews16 followers
June 5, 2018
Ok, so Riley Paige is one messed up chic. Bad childhood, bad husband, captured by a serial killer. Yikes!

I feel badly for Riley but for some reason she annoyed me. She is a FBI agent and has an instinct that others do not have. BUT throughout the story she has the epiphanies that say, "I have the killer" and she ends up being wrong and thinking about it. She then "goes with her gut" to find the killer. Isn't going with your gut and having a great instinct the same thing?

I read Blake Pierce's Cause to Kill and Cause to Run and I felt kinda of the same way about the stories. I like them but they are just so-so.
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