Readers interact with Ryan’s journal and Sarah’s videos. The two best friends are being separated by their parents after Ryan suffered a severe injury and has been bedridden for weeks. The story catches readers up with what led to the injury—a paranormal investigation of an old mining dredge. Then the two friends have to sneak around their parents and continue investigating. Since Ryan is still recovering, he has to do what he can with research while Sarah continues
The story is quickly paced and straightforward, and it uses video clips that can be watched online. My reluctant readers get hooked quickly because of the videos. They can tune out the reading, but they will watch the videos, which gets their attention. Then they’ll start reading with us.
The addition of Ryan’s artwork adds to the book’s appeal. The book is aimed at an age group that is transitioning from illustrated books, so the occasional artwork breaks things up and help them visualize the story. We also had fun comparing Ryan’s artwork with Sarah’s videos.
The story requires books one and two to complete, as the end of book one is a cliffhanger. Since the books are not very long, this seems like a trick to sell more books—force readers to buy two books in order to read one story. I’m not a fan of this tactic. On the flip side, I also got to point out to a class of reluctant readers that we’d read two books in two weeks, so there’s also that win. I have mixed feelings.
The story has kind of a Scooby-doo vibe, but more grown up. Much of the horror comes from pop-out-and-yell-boo shock value, which my sophomores have a fun time with. I think it would lose its appeal with an older audience. I’m actually stretching it with sophomores.
Ryan and Sarah are pretty flat, static characters, but the focus is squarely on the mystery, and the book is quite short, so this wasn’t bothersome. Their motives are clear, which is all I really needed from them.
I noticed some errors in spelling and dating throughout the series—sloppy mistakes that should have been caught prior to publication and definitely should have been corrected before issuing the paperback editions.
I definitely recommend the first two books for reluctant readers in 6-10 grades. The ghost story might be a bit much for younger readers, but otherwise, it’s free of any potentially offensive material.