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Timewalker #1
Wham!
When the World Alliance seized power from all the governments of the world, they said it was for the greater good. They said it was necessary to unite all the nations of the globe under one banner in order to bring universal peace, equality and prosperity to the world.
To most families throughout the world, the rise of the Alliance and their grandiose promises meant little. They had long grown weary of the lies of the corrupt law-makers and heads of state and were far more concerned with their day-to-day struggles to survive.
The Greenwood family was no exception, and for a time life went on much as it had before the rise of the Alliance. In time, individual cultural and racial identity were outlawed. They said it was for the greater good. They said it was necessary to create a more harmonious, homogenous world community. The Greenwood family adapted.
But then they took away freedom. They made it mandatory for all households and public buildings to have skinwelers, crystal spying balls in every room, in order to watch the people’s every move. They said it was for the greater good. They said it was necessary for public safety and civil order. And the Greenwood family adapted.
But then the state took their family farm and lands and moved them to Gollsport where they had built barracks for all the displaced citizens. They said it was for the greater good. They said the countryside had become contaminated by farm chemicals and the relocation was for their continued health and safety. Once again, the Greenwood family adapted.
But then they came in the night and took away seventeen year-old Tess Greenwood’s entire family. They said it was for the greater good. They said Tess would adapt and in time she would be far better for it.
But Tess cared not for the Alliance’s greater good. She did not adapt. She wanted her family back and vowed to do whatever she must in order to see them again. Little did she know, that to keep her vow, she would have to become a timewalker.
To most families throughout the world, the rise of the Alliance and their grandiose promises meant little. They had long grown weary of the lies of the corrupt law-makers and heads of state and were far more concerned with their day-to-day struggles to survive.
The Greenwood family was no exception, and for a time life went on much as it had before the rise of the Alliance. In time, individual cultural and racial identity were outlawed. They said it was for the greater good. They said it was necessary to create a more harmonious, homogenous world community. The Greenwood family adapted.
But then they took away freedom. They made it mandatory for all households and public buildings to have skinwelers, crystal spying balls in every room, in order to watch the people’s every move. They said it was for the greater good. They said it was necessary for public safety and civil order. And the Greenwood family adapted.
But then the state took their family farm and lands and moved them to Gollsport where they had built barracks for all the displaced citizens. They said it was for the greater good. They said the countryside had become contaminated by farm chemicals and the relocation was for their continued health and safety. Once again, the Greenwood family adapted.
But then they came in the night and took away seventeen year-old Tess Greenwood’s entire family. They said it was for the greater good. They said Tess would adapt and in time she would be far better for it.
But Tess cared not for the Alliance’s greater good. She did not adapt. She wanted her family back and vowed to do whatever she must in order to see them again. Little did she know, that to keep her vow, she would have to become a timewalker.
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553 pages, Kindle Edition
Published May 14, 2016
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Carol Marrs Phipps
12 books163 followersI am an author who writes fantasy, mainly with my husband. We currently have nine books independently published on Amazon. I currently live in the country with my husband, eight cats, two cockatiels, a raven and a parrot.
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November 24, 2018
"First they came for the communists,
And I did not speak out because I wasn't a communist.
Then they came for the trade unionists,
And I didn't speak out because I was not a trade unionist.
Then they came for the Jews,
And I did not speak out because I wasn't a Jew.
Then they came for me,
And then there was no one left to speak out for me."
(Martin Niemoller)
Does the quotation noted above resonate with you in any way? The possibility of individual rights and freedoms being gradually stripped away. The very lives of individuals at risk while others stay silent in witness to such atrocities in hopes that they themselves will remain safe. Grim notions indeed! Now take these weighty thoughts and sprinkle in some thrilling fantasy in the form of trolls, wizards and fairies who are attempting to survive in an oppressive dystopian world. For lovers of intelligent and imaginative fictional fantasy which will engross you from start to finish... Wham! by Carol Marrs Phipps and Tom Phipps is a top pick!
The novel primarily follows the escapades of the Greenwood family. They are living under the cruel and tyrannical rule of the World Alliance who have seized power from all the governments in the world and united as one supreme power. All individuality, freedom and liberty has been removed from the citizens of the world in the name of the "greater good". Under the constant and watchful eye of the crystal spying balls called skinwelers, all citizens have to be extremely careful and cognizant of their every action. One false move under this unforgiving realm will lead to utter disaster. Alas, a lesson the Greenwood family finds out first hand. One night their home is invaded by government agents and the family is moved, separated and forced into unbearable situations. It is under these conditions that we are able to see the formation of a resistance begin in this fantastical world. Will the Greenwoods ever come back together as one? Or will the dark and evil forces ultimately impose their will on this mystical world?
I found the plot of this novel to be very fast-paced, engaging and utterly creative. The coming of age theme is supported by beautifully flowing writing which is full of action while it pokes and stirs up a variety of emotions within the reader at the same time. For instance, you cannot help but become entirely livid...yet hopeful... by the abusive situations which the Greenwoods are forced to endure. All of this takes place within an imaginative story-world in which this breathtaking setting is entirely darkened by the oppressive overtones contained within. Such juxtaposition is not only clever, but entirely captivating as well. If I had any "complaint" to make about the book, it would be that some of the language is hard to comprehend as it takes place in various tongues (e.g., fairy and troll). However, to be clear, this was quite necessary to make the story more authentic and believable. Potential lack of believability in a fantasy story-world will kill any novel very quickly. Also, it must have taken the authors a great deal of effort to concoct the language. It just sometimes impeded with the wonderful flow of the story for me personally.
There are also a plethora of very intriguing characters in this novel. They are not your typical cast of human players however. There is a dynamic mix of trolls, wizards, faeries and humans. One of the elements which makes this story so great is that in such a "fairy tale" like atmosphere, the characters are very believable and authentic. They face dire and devastating circumstances and still find the fortitude within to rise up against such overpowering odds. Tess, who can certainly be seen as the main protagonist, is a perfect example of such a well developed character. We see a great deal of growth in her and Nia, and get the sense that something very big is yet to come.
Overall I found this novel to be an excellent read and I would highly recommend it to all readers. It is actually very difficult to "categorize" it as one particular genre. It hits so many different interests and groups: fantasy, science fiction, mystery, political thriller...you get the picture!
Wham! 5 out of 5 Fantastical Stars for this one!
And I did not speak out because I wasn't a communist.
Then they came for the trade unionists,
And I didn't speak out because I was not a trade unionist.
Then they came for the Jews,
And I did not speak out because I wasn't a Jew.
Then they came for me,
And then there was no one left to speak out for me."
(Martin Niemoller)
Does the quotation noted above resonate with you in any way? The possibility of individual rights and freedoms being gradually stripped away. The very lives of individuals at risk while others stay silent in witness to such atrocities in hopes that they themselves will remain safe. Grim notions indeed! Now take these weighty thoughts and sprinkle in some thrilling fantasy in the form of trolls, wizards and fairies who are attempting to survive in an oppressive dystopian world. For lovers of intelligent and imaginative fictional fantasy which will engross you from start to finish... Wham! by Carol Marrs Phipps and Tom Phipps is a top pick!
The novel primarily follows the escapades of the Greenwood family. They are living under the cruel and tyrannical rule of the World Alliance who have seized power from all the governments in the world and united as one supreme power. All individuality, freedom and liberty has been removed from the citizens of the world in the name of the "greater good". Under the constant and watchful eye of the crystal spying balls called skinwelers, all citizens have to be extremely careful and cognizant of their every action. One false move under this unforgiving realm will lead to utter disaster. Alas, a lesson the Greenwood family finds out first hand. One night their home is invaded by government agents and the family is moved, separated and forced into unbearable situations. It is under these conditions that we are able to see the formation of a resistance begin in this fantastical world. Will the Greenwoods ever come back together as one? Or will the dark and evil forces ultimately impose their will on this mystical world?
I found the plot of this novel to be very fast-paced, engaging and utterly creative. The coming of age theme is supported by beautifully flowing writing which is full of action while it pokes and stirs up a variety of emotions within the reader at the same time. For instance, you cannot help but become entirely livid...yet hopeful... by the abusive situations which the Greenwoods are forced to endure. All of this takes place within an imaginative story-world in which this breathtaking setting is entirely darkened by the oppressive overtones contained within. Such juxtaposition is not only clever, but entirely captivating as well. If I had any "complaint" to make about the book, it would be that some of the language is hard to comprehend as it takes place in various tongues (e.g., fairy and troll). However, to be clear, this was quite necessary to make the story more authentic and believable. Potential lack of believability in a fantasy story-world will kill any novel very quickly. Also, it must have taken the authors a great deal of effort to concoct the language. It just sometimes impeded with the wonderful flow of the story for me personally.
There are also a plethora of very intriguing characters in this novel. They are not your typical cast of human players however. There is a dynamic mix of trolls, wizards, faeries and humans. One of the elements which makes this story so great is that in such a "fairy tale" like atmosphere, the characters are very believable and authentic. They face dire and devastating circumstances and still find the fortitude within to rise up against such overpowering odds. Tess, who can certainly be seen as the main protagonist, is a perfect example of such a well developed character. We see a great deal of growth in her and Nia, and get the sense that something very big is yet to come.
Overall I found this novel to be an excellent read and I would highly recommend it to all readers. It is actually very difficult to "categorize" it as one particular genre. It hits so many different interests and groups: fantasy, science fiction, mystery, political thriller...you get the picture!
Wham! 5 out of 5 Fantastical Stars for this one!
July 21, 2018
A wonderful story of the hero’s journey and awakening in a sci-fi fantasy dystopian world.
Wham! is a wonderfully written and richly woven story that fully engages the reader from the beginning! The book’s setting is a dystopian world of oppression. It is hard to say whether this is a world in the future or the past as the author deftly weaves ancestry, history, alliances and conflicts with the magic and fantasy world of wizards, dragons, elves, and secret wisdom.
Quickly the reader sees that this dystopian world is also a world of hope and that Wham! is an epic story of the hero’s awakening as well as a coming of age story that is appropriate for both YA and adults much in the same way Tolkien is appropriate for all ages.
An absolutely delightful read that left this reader wanting more from the author! Highly recommended.
Wham! is a wonderfully written and richly woven story that fully engages the reader from the beginning! The book’s setting is a dystopian world of oppression. It is hard to say whether this is a world in the future or the past as the author deftly weaves ancestry, history, alliances and conflicts with the magic and fantasy world of wizards, dragons, elves, and secret wisdom.
Quickly the reader sees that this dystopian world is also a world of hope and that Wham! is an epic story of the hero’s awakening as well as a coming of age story that is appropriate for both YA and adults much in the same way Tolkien is appropriate for all ages.
An absolutely delightful read that left this reader wanting more from the author! Highly recommended.
June 7, 2019
A dystopian AND a fantasy novel, WHAM (Timewalker 1) is a fabulous story! It takes place in a world that reminded me of Orwell's 1984, highlighted with the presence of fairies, elves, orcs... and magic, adding colors to this dark world.
Indeed, beyond the bleak description of this cruel society and the tyrannic rules imposed by the World Alliance, there is a beautiful and shining world where hope survives thanks to the union of different races (humans, fairies, elves, orcs..) and to their commitment to freedom and peace.
In fact, as the story unfolded, I couldn't help but feel very close to Tess; I could sense her courage, fear, confusion, and her lost parents.
Needless to say that I can't wait to read THEN (Timewalker 2) so that I can get the rest of the story! Definitely a FIVE STAR
Indeed, beyond the bleak description of this cruel society and the tyrannic rules imposed by the World Alliance, there is a beautiful and shining world where hope survives thanks to the union of different races (humans, fairies, elves, orcs..) and to their commitment to freedom and peace.
In fact, as the story unfolded, I couldn't help but feel very close to Tess; I could sense her courage, fear, confusion, and her lost parents.
Needless to say that I can't wait to read THEN (Timewalker 2) so that I can get the rest of the story! Definitely a FIVE STAR
April 10, 2017
From the first few pages of WHAM, you are immediately drawn in. When her family is ripped apart by, Children and Family Assistance, Tess vows to find her sister Nia and bring her family together again.
This amazing book completely threw me off guard. Filled with elves, fairies and a touch of time travel, WHAM is one of those rare books that grabs you and pulls you along.
Both Tess's and Nia's stories are captivating, though I found myself more intrigued by Nia's story arch. Held captive, she endures sexual abused by government officials, though it's never graphically described. With the help of her friends Jill and Sam, will she be able to escape from the Capitol? Will Tess find her sister? You'll have to read to find out.
I never divulge the entire plot of the book, but I can say that this is a must read for anyone who is a fan of fantasy. The main characters are the most fleshed out characters that I've read in an indie book. The writing is top notch. The story flows effortlessly and the element of dystopian Earth and magic blend together with ease.
Looking forward to reading the next book in what is going to be a magnificent series.
5 all seeing stone balls out of 5
This amazing book completely threw me off guard. Filled with elves, fairies and a touch of time travel, WHAM is one of those rare books that grabs you and pulls you along.
Both Tess's and Nia's stories are captivating, though I found myself more intrigued by Nia's story arch. Held captive, she endures sexual abused by government officials, though it's never graphically described. With the help of her friends Jill and Sam, will she be able to escape from the Capitol? Will Tess find her sister? You'll have to read to find out.
I never divulge the entire plot of the book, but I can say that this is a must read for anyone who is a fan of fantasy. The main characters are the most fleshed out characters that I've read in an indie book. The writing is top notch. The story flows effortlessly and the element of dystopian Earth and magic blend together with ease.
Looking forward to reading the next book in what is going to be a magnificent series.
5 all seeing stone balls out of 5
March 30, 2019
Wham! by Carol Marrs Phipps and Tom Phipps takes us to a dystopian world all too easy to imagine as our own future. The World Alliance maintains control by poisoning the land, sea, and air, then herding the displaced population into communal barracks where every word and action can be monitored by the ever-present 'skinnies'. And all of this, of course, in the name of the greater good. Enter the Greenwood family, torn apart before we can even get to know them. It seems that seventeen-year-old Tess has managed to stand out from the crowd at school by thinking for herself; an unforgivable transgression in the new world order. Her odd behavior prompts a visit from Children and Family Services which, in true Orwellian fashion, provide a service rather counter to what their name suggests. While Tess deals with a mountain of guilt and grief in a kind of foster home-cum-prison, her sister Nia is spirited away to the capital where she experiences a different kind of Hell. But the Greenwood girls have a secret. A secret that might even be powerful enough to bring down the World Alliance, once and for all.
Carol Marrs Phipps and Tom Phipps know how to do dystopia right. No preaching, no proselytizing, and best of all, no lengthy explanation of how and when things went so horribly wrong. They simply drop us into that weirdness and tell us that this is how things are. I love that. And I love that the world of Wham! is hauntingly familiar, even if it is one where a girl can get her hair cut by a troll, and where legends claiming that the last of the fairies vanished centuries ago might just be wrong. It is a world populated with well-rounded and entirely believable characters, both human and otherwise. With their own culture, their own rituals and their own language, even such fantastical creatures as fairies and trolls don't seem out of place. Of course, Tess steals the show with her brains, her courage, and her bright green mohawk, but Nia is no slouch either. They are both strong, they are both resolute, and although they currently exist at opposite ends of the World Alliance spectrum, they will both fight to the death to get their family back together again. To say more would risk spoilers, but in a book featuring fairies and wizards and carrying the subtitle 'Timewalker, Book 1', you can bet that the rest of the story is as unconventional as it is entertaining.
Part fantasy, part scifi, part thriller, Wham! is nothing less than sheer joy from cover to cover. Five huge stars for Tess and Nia and the Phipps', and if I could, I'd give another star to big, loveable Maxi. After all, if anyone can steal a scene, it's an oversized troll with a heart of gold and a good pair of scissors.
Carol Marrs Phipps and Tom Phipps know how to do dystopia right. No preaching, no proselytizing, and best of all, no lengthy explanation of how and when things went so horribly wrong. They simply drop us into that weirdness and tell us that this is how things are. I love that. And I love that the world of Wham! is hauntingly familiar, even if it is one where a girl can get her hair cut by a troll, and where legends claiming that the last of the fairies vanished centuries ago might just be wrong. It is a world populated with well-rounded and entirely believable characters, both human and otherwise. With their own culture, their own rituals and their own language, even such fantastical creatures as fairies and trolls don't seem out of place. Of course, Tess steals the show with her brains, her courage, and her bright green mohawk, but Nia is no slouch either. They are both strong, they are both resolute, and although they currently exist at opposite ends of the World Alliance spectrum, they will both fight to the death to get their family back together again. To say more would risk spoilers, but in a book featuring fairies and wizards and carrying the subtitle 'Timewalker, Book 1', you can bet that the rest of the story is as unconventional as it is entertaining.
Part fantasy, part scifi, part thriller, Wham! is nothing less than sheer joy from cover to cover. Five huge stars for Tess and Nia and the Phipps', and if I could, I'd give another star to big, loveable Maxi. After all, if anyone can steal a scene, it's an oversized troll with a heart of gold and a good pair of scissors.
March 13, 2020
Brilliant Dystopian Fantasy!
This read, by far, is one of the best Dystopian Fantasy books that I have had the absolute pleasure of reading (and reviewing). It follows the story of the Greenwood family and in particular of young Tess and her sister Nia. The family ripped apart by the World Alliance, the all powerful government that rules with an iron fist, whose word is law and death for those who dare to oppose. Nia is taken away to be used as a prostitute for the ruling elite, and is lucky enough, if one can use the term lucky, to be picked by the potentate, Pandora, as her own plaything. Is it an infatuation or does Pandora only want her own magical faerie child with Nia?
Tess, who always thought of herself as half elf, discovers that she is actually a full faerie, even though her mother was human. With the help of Maxi, a Troll and her new family and friends from 750 years in the past, after a trip through a fairy-ring to the unspoilt world as it was before, Tess wants nothing more than to free her parents and sister and return the world to how beautiful it was.
The use of Troll and Fairy language, for me, is quite easy to read and follow, and in no way detracts from the wonderful story. It actually lends a touch of realism to the story and I can’t wait to continue the saga in Book 2, Then....
An absolute five ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️ star read for fantasy at its best!
This read, by far, is one of the best Dystopian Fantasy books that I have had the absolute pleasure of reading (and reviewing). It follows the story of the Greenwood family and in particular of young Tess and her sister Nia. The family ripped apart by the World Alliance, the all powerful government that rules with an iron fist, whose word is law and death for those who dare to oppose. Nia is taken away to be used as a prostitute for the ruling elite, and is lucky enough, if one can use the term lucky, to be picked by the potentate, Pandora, as her own plaything. Is it an infatuation or does Pandora only want her own magical faerie child with Nia?
Tess, who always thought of herself as half elf, discovers that she is actually a full faerie, even though her mother was human. With the help of Maxi, a Troll and her new family and friends from 750 years in the past, after a trip through a fairy-ring to the unspoilt world as it was before, Tess wants nothing more than to free her parents and sister and return the world to how beautiful it was.
The use of Troll and Fairy language, for me, is quite easy to read and follow, and in no way detracts from the wonderful story. It actually lends a touch of realism to the story and I can’t wait to continue the saga in Book 2, Then....
An absolute five ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️ star read for fantasy at its best!
June 6, 2017
I read the Heart of the Staff series by Carol Marrs Phipps and Tom Phipps and enjoyed it tremendously. When the duo released Wham! (Timewallker # 1), it went on my TBR immediately! Read on for my thoughts.
Synopsis (from the author): When the World Alliance seized power from all the governments of the world, they said it was for the greater good. They said it was necessary to unite all the nations of the globe under one banner in order to bring universal peace, equality and prosperity to the world.
To most families throughout the world, the rise of the Alliance and their grandiose promises meant little. They had long grown weary of the lies of the corrupt law-makers and heads of state and were far more concerned with their day-to-day struggles to survive.
The Greenwood family was no exception, and for a time life went on much as it had before the rise of the Alliance. In time, individual cultural and racial identity were outlawed. They said it was for the greater good. They said it was necessary to create a more harmonious, homogenous world community. The Greenwood family adapted.
But then they took away freedom. They made it mandatory for all households and public buildings to have skinwelers, crystal spying balls in every room, in order to watch the people’s every move. They said it was for the greater good. They said it was necessary for public safety and civil order. And the Greenwood family adapted.
But then the state took their family farm and lands and moved them to Gollsport where they had built barracks for all the displaced citizens. They said it was for the greater good. They said the countryside had become contaminated by farm chemicals and the relocation was for their continued health and safety. Once again, the Greenwood family adapted.
But then they came in the night and took away seventeen year-old Tess Greenwood’s entire family. They said it was for the greater good. They said Tess would adapt and in time she would be far better for it.
But Tess cared not for the Alliance’s greater good. She did not adapt. She wanted her family back and vowed to do whatever she must in order to see them again. Little did she know, that to keep her vow, she would have to become a timewalker.
What I liked: Wham! Brought back great memories of The Heart of the Staff series by tying the old with the new. Though the books are nothing alike, the familiarity was a great bridge. I liked the dystopian feel to the world, and Tess was an easy character to like. Nia was a sympathetic character in impossible circumstances, but found friends, an unlikely ally, and an uneasy relationship with the potentate. Add to the mix Maxi the troll (and an amazing hairdresser), and the stage is set for an enjoyable tale.
What I didn’t like: Maybe it will come in future books, but I needed more background on how the world reached its current state. Additionally, the dialogue from Maxi was a bit hard to follow.
Overall impression: I liked Wham! the start to the Timewalker books! As mentioned above, I liked the bridge to The Heart of the Staff series, and the characters were excellent. As with The Heart of the Staff series, Wham! (Timewalker #1), this is a series fantasy readers will enjoy!
My rating: 4.5 Stars (rounded to 5 Stars)
Synopsis (from the author): When the World Alliance seized power from all the governments of the world, they said it was for the greater good. They said it was necessary to unite all the nations of the globe under one banner in order to bring universal peace, equality and prosperity to the world.
To most families throughout the world, the rise of the Alliance and their grandiose promises meant little. They had long grown weary of the lies of the corrupt law-makers and heads of state and were far more concerned with their day-to-day struggles to survive.
The Greenwood family was no exception, and for a time life went on much as it had before the rise of the Alliance. In time, individual cultural and racial identity were outlawed. They said it was for the greater good. They said it was necessary to create a more harmonious, homogenous world community. The Greenwood family adapted.
But then they took away freedom. They made it mandatory for all households and public buildings to have skinwelers, crystal spying balls in every room, in order to watch the people’s every move. They said it was for the greater good. They said it was necessary for public safety and civil order. And the Greenwood family adapted.
But then the state took their family farm and lands and moved them to Gollsport where they had built barracks for all the displaced citizens. They said it was for the greater good. They said the countryside had become contaminated by farm chemicals and the relocation was for their continued health and safety. Once again, the Greenwood family adapted.
But then they came in the night and took away seventeen year-old Tess Greenwood’s entire family. They said it was for the greater good. They said Tess would adapt and in time she would be far better for it.
But Tess cared not for the Alliance’s greater good. She did not adapt. She wanted her family back and vowed to do whatever she must in order to see them again. Little did she know, that to keep her vow, she would have to become a timewalker.
What I liked: Wham! Brought back great memories of The Heart of the Staff series by tying the old with the new. Though the books are nothing alike, the familiarity was a great bridge. I liked the dystopian feel to the world, and Tess was an easy character to like. Nia was a sympathetic character in impossible circumstances, but found friends, an unlikely ally, and an uneasy relationship with the potentate. Add to the mix Maxi the troll (and an amazing hairdresser), and the stage is set for an enjoyable tale.
What I didn’t like: Maybe it will come in future books, but I needed more background on how the world reached its current state. Additionally, the dialogue from Maxi was a bit hard to follow.
Overall impression: I liked Wham! the start to the Timewalker books! As mentioned above, I liked the bridge to The Heart of the Staff series, and the characters were excellent. As with The Heart of the Staff series, Wham! (Timewalker #1), this is a series fantasy readers will enjoy!
My rating: 4.5 Stars (rounded to 5 Stars)
May 7, 2017
“WHAM!” is the first book of the “TIMEWALKER.” The authors initiate this series with a unique concept-“Time does not Exist,” then stride into the action immediately. Readers can capture the theme of the story and the “wants” of the main characters without feeling the drag.
The story stretches from centuries ago to the unknown (future) time, where the entire world is controlled by one government, the “World Alliance.” All the elements of a fantasy story: trolls, elves, witches, fairies, wizards, a dragon, magic balls… are cleverly intertwined into this series as the plot and characters develop.
The authors also incorporate a robot and futuristic ideas into the storyline, which adds extra dimensions and takes you to a whole new world of fantasy.
I enjoyed this book very much and look forward to the next installment. You do not want to miss this series if you are a fantasy literature fan.
The story stretches from centuries ago to the unknown (future) time, where the entire world is controlled by one government, the “World Alliance.” All the elements of a fantasy story: trolls, elves, witches, fairies, wizards, a dragon, magic balls… are cleverly intertwined into this series as the plot and characters develop.
The authors also incorporate a robot and futuristic ideas into the storyline, which adds extra dimensions and takes you to a whole new world of fantasy.
I enjoyed this book very much and look forward to the next installment. You do not want to miss this series if you are a fantasy literature fan.
September 7, 2016
An epic fantasy
Young Tess and Nia Greenwood are torn apart, and yanked away from their family in a dystopian world. Nia is whisked away to The Capitol, where she is force to serve “at the pleasure” of The Potentate. Tess, on the other hand, finds herself in a magical world of strange beings, with their own language and ways of doing things. It was a very creative touch by Carol Marrs and Tom Phipps to provide a means to decipher the text. However, after a while, I felt comfortable with it.
Tess buddies up with these unlikely creatures to formulate a plan rescue Nia, her family, and her world. But the doing is harder than the planning. It’s full of interesting twists and turns.
I found this book imaginative and intriguing enough for me to read it in one sitting, which I rarely do. I highly recommend it for all ages
Young Tess and Nia Greenwood are torn apart, and yanked away from their family in a dystopian world. Nia is whisked away to The Capitol, where she is force to serve “at the pleasure” of The Potentate. Tess, on the other hand, finds herself in a magical world of strange beings, with their own language and ways of doing things. It was a very creative touch by Carol Marrs and Tom Phipps to provide a means to decipher the text. However, after a while, I felt comfortable with it.
Tess buddies up with these unlikely creatures to formulate a plan rescue Nia, her family, and her world. But the doing is harder than the planning. It’s full of interesting twists and turns.
I found this book imaginative and intriguing enough for me to read it in one sitting, which I rarely do. I highly recommend it for all ages
February 10, 2017
I've given 5* for sheer imagination and originality.
What's a 'skinny?' At first I thought it was a bit of bathroom/toilet equipment...but no...an Orwellian 1984 spy device fitted into every home across the world wide government's attempt at mass control of every aspect of human activity. The central character of Tess Greenwood rebels and refuses to adapt as her family are commandeered and their goods and property seized for the greater good of society. Her refusal and rebellion turn this dystopian narrative into something else....it shifts into an amalgamation of magic, fantasy and the supernatural that rescue it from descending into the depths of no-hope gloom...The language is different and takes a bit to get used to...readers of Clockwork Orange shouldn't have any difficulty, that was far harder to get your head around
What's a 'skinny?' At first I thought it was a bit of bathroom/toilet equipment...but no...an Orwellian 1984 spy device fitted into every home across the world wide government's attempt at mass control of every aspect of human activity. The central character of Tess Greenwood rebels and refuses to adapt as her family are commandeered and their goods and property seized for the greater good of society. Her refusal and rebellion turn this dystopian narrative into something else....it shifts into an amalgamation of magic, fantasy and the supernatural that rescue it from descending into the depths of no-hope gloom...The language is different and takes a bit to get used to...readers of Clockwork Orange shouldn't have any difficulty, that was far harder to get your head around
June 1, 2019
Dystopian Fantasy
Wham is a fitting title to a dystopian scenario that hits you between the eyes. There are elements of Margaret Atwood in the class divisions, but the authors have their own style. They bring across their message with compelling prose. The characters, be they elves, fairies, wizards, potentates, or ‘ordinary’ school children, are convincing and real. The world building is as strong, and the wasteland of the ‘normal’ world contrasts resoundingly with the hidden fairy country. As the first book of a series, it sets the scene for coming adventures. Here, my personal view is that ‘Wham’ is too short.
For me, the problem with series is that the necessary hook often leaves the reader without a sense of closure. True, if the ending is definite, there’s no reason to continue. All the same, there are several examples of series (e.g. by Guy Gabriel Kay or Ursula Le Guin) where every part has a conclusion, although the readers want to know what happens next.
This doesn’t detract from the excitement and heart-stopping agitation that Wham gives its audience.
Wham is a fitting title to a dystopian scenario that hits you between the eyes. There are elements of Margaret Atwood in the class divisions, but the authors have their own style. They bring across their message with compelling prose. The characters, be they elves, fairies, wizards, potentates, or ‘ordinary’ school children, are convincing and real. The world building is as strong, and the wasteland of the ‘normal’ world contrasts resoundingly with the hidden fairy country. As the first book of a series, it sets the scene for coming adventures. Here, my personal view is that ‘Wham’ is too short.
For me, the problem with series is that the necessary hook often leaves the reader without a sense of closure. True, if the ending is definite, there’s no reason to continue. All the same, there are several examples of series (e.g. by Guy Gabriel Kay or Ursula Le Guin) where every part has a conclusion, although the readers want to know what happens next.
This doesn’t detract from the excitement and heart-stopping agitation that Wham gives its audience.
June 9, 2017
The title, “Wham!” makes an impact, and so does the opening scene where the Greenwood home is invaded, and the family is separated by the evil “Children and Family Assistance.” At first, I thought this was your typical dystopian story, but I quickly learned it is so much more. Layer upon layer was peeled back as I read, revealing themes of corruption, power, and greed as well as familial love and loyalty that spans the ages. I instantly liked the youngest Greenwood, Tess, and felt for her and the almost hopeless situation in which she finds herself. And, as the story progressed, I discovered that Tess and most other characters are straight out of a fairytale—a dark one. Regardless, the characters are believable, and I found myself relating to them despite the fact that they aren’t completely human. All of the story elements are woven into a well-written storyline that flows well and is full of surprises; and glossaries of characters, locations, and terms are included at the end of the book to assist the reader. “Wham!” is a wonderful, imaginative tale that I wouldn’t hesitate to recommend to all readers.
October 21, 2017
Wow! I love dystopian novels and this book was amazing. Some really great writing and the story flowed. If you enjoyed the Wizard of Oz, The Hunger Games and LOTR then you'll love this book. Incredible world building with unique characters. As a father of a young daughter I really enjoyed the two strong lead female characters. When my daughter is older I will definitely recommend she reads this book. The use of imagination is spectacular. I'm not one for giving away plot, so you'll have to trust me that this book needs to be added to your must read list. I look forward to the next book in the series. Great read!
March 26, 2019
When the Greenwood family is separated, the parents taken off to who-knows-where, daughter Nia taken to the capital to be sexually abused, and daughter Tess left alone at home to wonder what is next for her family, the story begins to unfold. A dystopian world of humans, trolls, fairies, and wizards, with a single oppressive government entity that is brutal in the way it treats its citizens “for the good of all” where clean air and water are no longer available, due to the excessive chemicals used, has created a toxic environment.
But all is not lost. Nia has plans to get her family back. Tess is working with others with plans of her own. I don’t want to give anything away but I’m rooting for them both, even though neither will ever be the same after what they’ve been through.
The authors’ imagination is outstanding with vivid imagery you’d expect in a fantasy novel. The story is one that keeps you engaged from the minute you open the book. The characters are alive with emotion and adventure. But what blew me away was the ability of these authors to create new languages! It reminded me of Tolkien in that respect, but the character Maxi speaks English but a different style, which is difficult to comprehend, but still understandable. A glossary is included at the end.
I had so many emotions reading this story, mostly anger - at the Children and Family services, the government, those in power, the guards, the potentate, abusers, the destroyed environment, and others who stood by without doing anything to help, pretty much everyone. There are a few shining examples of heroism beyond the Greenwood family, and Maxi is one of them.
This is a story that will stick with me for a very long time.
But all is not lost. Nia has plans to get her family back. Tess is working with others with plans of her own. I don’t want to give anything away but I’m rooting for them both, even though neither will ever be the same after what they’ve been through.
The authors’ imagination is outstanding with vivid imagery you’d expect in a fantasy novel. The story is one that keeps you engaged from the minute you open the book. The characters are alive with emotion and adventure. But what blew me away was the ability of these authors to create new languages! It reminded me of Tolkien in that respect, but the character Maxi speaks English but a different style, which is difficult to comprehend, but still understandable. A glossary is included at the end.
I had so many emotions reading this story, mostly anger - at the Children and Family services, the government, those in power, the guards, the potentate, abusers, the destroyed environment, and others who stood by without doing anything to help, pretty much everyone. There are a few shining examples of heroism beyond the Greenwood family, and Maxi is one of them.
This is a story that will stick with me for a very long time.
September 28, 2018
I totally enjoyed reading Wham and the best description I have of it is WOW. The book took off from page one and never slowed, I could not put it down. I highly recommend this to all fantasy lovers.
March 19, 2018
The opening scene in this dystopian/fantasy tale is extremely fast-paced with zero explanation and maximum use of action verbs. It’s well done and fits the definition of the word and title of the series perfectly. “Wham,” book one in the Timewalker Series, by Carol Marrs Phipps and Tom Phipps is a fantastic start to what will undoubtedly become a bestseller in the science fiction/fantasy/dystopian genres.
There is much to praise in the writing of “Wham.” The characters, action scenes and world/societal designs are exceptionally well orchestrated. I was also impressed with the lack of overly long narratives describing things and events such as how the world came to be what it is, what the skinwelers were and how they worked and much more. Instead, the authors relied and excelled on their abilities to “show” rather than “tell.”
The mesh of humans, trolls, fairies, and wizards is a remarkable feat of authoring and within this combination is one aspect I was especially excited about... language. The language of the trolls, fairies and wizards was fantastic—more so as Phipps incorporated slight changes to these languages within the parameters of their time periods. I could go on and on, but often the shorter review carries the most impact. So, I’ll close now with one final phrase: If you read just one scifi/fantasy/dystopia novel this year, make sure it’s “Wham”, you’ll be glad you did.
There is much to praise in the writing of “Wham.” The characters, action scenes and world/societal designs are exceptionally well orchestrated. I was also impressed with the lack of overly long narratives describing things and events such as how the world came to be what it is, what the skinwelers were and how they worked and much more. Instead, the authors relied and excelled on their abilities to “show” rather than “tell.”
The mesh of humans, trolls, fairies, and wizards is a remarkable feat of authoring and within this combination is one aspect I was especially excited about... language. The language of the trolls, fairies and wizards was fantastic—more so as Phipps incorporated slight changes to these languages within the parameters of their time periods. I could go on and on, but often the shorter review carries the most impact. So, I’ll close now with one final phrase: If you read just one scifi/fantasy/dystopia novel this year, make sure it’s “Wham”, you’ll be glad you did.
July 23, 2017
WHAM
TIMEWALKER Book 1
CAROL MARRS PHIPPS
& TOM PHIPPS
Reviewed by Author Roy Murry
WHAM is not the first Phipps' book that I have read. I follow an author because they add something interesting to my life.
In TIMEWALKER, Book 1 in a trilogy, they have presented a fantasy that will keep the reader amazed. The story line is not complicated, but the imaginary back ground is intriguing.
Children and Families, a futuristic government agency, in a military action, arrives at a family's home. They abduct Tess’s parents and her sister, for the betterment of society, because they have not done a good job bringing up their children.
Tess stays in their home but will have new roommates that will help her move in the right social direction. Her parents are in jail, and her sister is in sexual servitude unbeknownst to all.
A Fairy Grandfather comes from the past to intercede. The comparison of past and present is akin to how many feel about today's living versus living before the nuclear age arrived - governments taking too much control of everyday life.
In WHAM, these two worlds collide, the Fairy's world versus the Elite controlling one. The contrast is brought alive in the Phipps' vivid and sometimes dark prose.
You have to go through the mushroom ring to find a pleasant place in WHAM.
TIMEWALKER Book 1
CAROL MARRS PHIPPS
& TOM PHIPPS
Reviewed by Author Roy Murry
WHAM is not the first Phipps' book that I have read. I follow an author because they add something interesting to my life.
In TIMEWALKER, Book 1 in a trilogy, they have presented a fantasy that will keep the reader amazed. The story line is not complicated, but the imaginary back ground is intriguing.
Children and Families, a futuristic government agency, in a military action, arrives at a family's home. They abduct Tess’s parents and her sister, for the betterment of society, because they have not done a good job bringing up their children.
Tess stays in their home but will have new roommates that will help her move in the right social direction. Her parents are in jail, and her sister is in sexual servitude unbeknownst to all.
A Fairy Grandfather comes from the past to intercede. The comparison of past and present is akin to how many feel about today's living versus living before the nuclear age arrived - governments taking too much control of everyday life.
In WHAM, these two worlds collide, the Fairy's world versus the Elite controlling one. The contrast is brought alive in the Phipps' vivid and sometimes dark prose.
You have to go through the mushroom ring to find a pleasant place in WHAM.
March 7, 2019
Wham! spins the tale of two young fairies in a science fantasy dystopian world. And I mean an actual dystopian world, not the husk of one bolted to the end of its real genres just to earn another tag.
Upon Unity Day, all nations the globe over ceded their authority to the World Alliance, leaving it free to shape the planet and its citizens to their will. It didn’t waste any time, killing off nature with its mass spraying of pesticides, corralling undesirable populations, and indoctrinating children through a cocktail of institutionalized propaganda and subliminal messages. Take what Scar did to the Pridelands, multiply that by six, and you’re almost halfway to the state of things.
Much of what we uncover doesn’t come from long-winded, out of place, exposition. That’s an important marker for good worldbuilding and storytelling. A truly fleshed out setting won’t typically need chapters worth of tangential lore dumped on the reader’s lap. It feels very organic when we learn about how rare meat is, the widespread necessity of inhalers, and the fact that the younger generation has never seen a star in the night’s sky. Each revelation hurts a bit inside, and I get the feeling that it’s meant to. Every time you think you’ve understood the depths of the World Alliance’s depravity, you turn the page and find that they can, indeed, go lower.
Interactions between Tess and her fellow serfs citizens maintain the solid form of the setting. Not once was did I forget the mire they were in, and neither do Wham!’s characters. Dialogue, motivation, and action remain consistent and logical for all parties, not just the protagonist. Those who don’t directly oppose the World Alliance try to lead the best life they can, bitter as it may be. The underground bleeds constantly, and they are losing. The world feels believable and thus stays interesting even when the point of view shifts to minor characters.
Case in point; Maud, Tess’ caretaker after Children and Family Assistance takes away her sister and parents, is by far my favorite. Every time I got a look inside of her head, I was intrigued rather than annoyed. Pieces of the story that couldn’t be told through Tess or Nia’s eyes are neatly divulged without ruining the pacing. This is quite the accomplishment given how many threads Wham! runs at a time, a praiseworthy aspect of the Phipps’ writing, and a bold statement against the current meta. Too many guides and publishers tell us to draft works with one perspective and a stock-standard style of delivery. Had Wham! been timid and bowed to the latest trends, it wouldn’t be as good as it is.
That being said, this rare piece of art has its cracks. The most pronounced of which is a very interesting issue with narrative weight. You see, I usually find that new or pandering works will feature protagonists that obtain power or achieve their goals without actually “earning” anything. That is to say, the effort spent doesn’t match up with results rendered. One of the best examples from my generation would be the sudden reveal of Kirito’s “Dual Blades” in Sword Art Online (it’s a little less slanted in the light novel but doesn’t come off well at all in the anime). It grants him a massive advantage that was justified with little more than a few handwaves and some exposition. Sure, the rule of cool softens the blow a bit, but the whole situation leans against one’s willing suspension of disbelief. Even worse are the titles that do this without any sort of justification at all, it’s enough to make me want to run to my local torch and pitchfork dealer.
With Wham! the problem presents itself in reverse. Both the protagonists and main villain come across as capable, intelligent, and rational actors. As I previously mentioned, they are written consistently, and enough build up is given to make their movements believable. How they move, and what they accomplish, however, leaves me for a loop.
*The next two paragraphs hold moderate spoilers, be warned*
One of the most powerful magic users on the side of good drops her legendary staff in combat, her ally attempts to collect it long after it’s too late. The mess feels like it was orchestrated just to get it into the villainess’s hands.
Pandora was built up as a cunning, sadistic witch that didn’t make me groan when she killed off her own minions. The culture of the World Alliance and her consistent nature made such a thing work. She did it because she was evil, not to show how evil she was. Why is it that she only steals the staff through a stroke of misfortune?
The intelligent, plucky protagonists regularly avoid surveillance by the skinwelers (basically vision/auditory wards with communication functions) by simply covering them or moving to different rooms with no immediate repercussions. This is in spite of the fact that the government has been around long enough and has been written competently enough that they should know the most basic tricks and be in a position to throttle those that try them.
Characters are given credibility through their development, that all-important narrative weight, but the sturdy handles of their mallets are attached to paper heads sometimes. Some of the direct conflict in Wham! is like watching boxers politely take turns beating each other’s faces in.
If this all sounds like I’m being harsher with my criticism than some previously reviewed works, it’s because I am. While it still might qualify as an indie novel (I’d judge it even harsher if it didn’t) It’s seen a wider audience, was drafted by seasoned authors and had the eyes of multiple beta readers.
That being said, it’s important to mention that I enjoyed the book. It’s highly likely that I will set a course for the Phipps’ version of Earth again, and when I do, you’ll hear about it. My desire to continue is tenuous, though. I want to know what happens to the friends I’ve met, but at the same time, I’m reluctant to see my net-positive impression tank. Wham! is on the crossroads between Elysium and Mordor.
It’s still a destination worth dipping into at least once. If the fairy ring is still intact, you can find your way through Amazon (free for Kindle Unlimited users). Those of you without perception filtering spells are advised to bring something to deal with the skinwelers. It wouldn’t be wise to let the powers that be know of our existence.
Upon Unity Day, all nations the globe over ceded their authority to the World Alliance, leaving it free to shape the planet and its citizens to their will. It didn’t waste any time, killing off nature with its mass spraying of pesticides, corralling undesirable populations, and indoctrinating children through a cocktail of institutionalized propaganda and subliminal messages. Take what Scar did to the Pridelands, multiply that by six, and you’re almost halfway to the state of things.
Much of what we uncover doesn’t come from long-winded, out of place, exposition. That’s an important marker for good worldbuilding and storytelling. A truly fleshed out setting won’t typically need chapters worth of tangential lore dumped on the reader’s lap. It feels very organic when we learn about how rare meat is, the widespread necessity of inhalers, and the fact that the younger generation has never seen a star in the night’s sky. Each revelation hurts a bit inside, and I get the feeling that it’s meant to. Every time you think you’ve understood the depths of the World Alliance’s depravity, you turn the page and find that they can, indeed, go lower.
Interactions between Tess and her fellow serfs citizens maintain the solid form of the setting. Not once was did I forget the mire they were in, and neither do Wham!’s characters. Dialogue, motivation, and action remain consistent and logical for all parties, not just the protagonist. Those who don’t directly oppose the World Alliance try to lead the best life they can, bitter as it may be. The underground bleeds constantly, and they are losing. The world feels believable and thus stays interesting even when the point of view shifts to minor characters.
Case in point; Maud, Tess’ caretaker after Children and Family Assistance takes away her sister and parents, is by far my favorite. Every time I got a look inside of her head, I was intrigued rather than annoyed. Pieces of the story that couldn’t be told through Tess or Nia’s eyes are neatly divulged without ruining the pacing. This is quite the accomplishment given how many threads Wham! runs at a time, a praiseworthy aspect of the Phipps’ writing, and a bold statement against the current meta. Too many guides and publishers tell us to draft works with one perspective and a stock-standard style of delivery. Had Wham! been timid and bowed to the latest trends, it wouldn’t be as good as it is.
That being said, this rare piece of art has its cracks. The most pronounced of which is a very interesting issue with narrative weight. You see, I usually find that new or pandering works will feature protagonists that obtain power or achieve their goals without actually “earning” anything. That is to say, the effort spent doesn’t match up with results rendered. One of the best examples from my generation would be the sudden reveal of Kirito’s “Dual Blades” in Sword Art Online (it’s a little less slanted in the light novel but doesn’t come off well at all in the anime). It grants him a massive advantage that was justified with little more than a few handwaves and some exposition. Sure, the rule of cool softens the blow a bit, but the whole situation leans against one’s willing suspension of disbelief. Even worse are the titles that do this without any sort of justification at all, it’s enough to make me want to run to my local torch and pitchfork dealer.
With Wham! the problem presents itself in reverse. Both the protagonists and main villain come across as capable, intelligent, and rational actors. As I previously mentioned, they are written consistently, and enough build up is given to make their movements believable. How they move, and what they accomplish, however, leaves me for a loop.
*The next two paragraphs hold moderate spoilers, be warned*
One of the most powerful magic users on the side of good drops her legendary staff in combat, her ally attempts to collect it long after it’s too late. The mess feels like it was orchestrated just to get it into the villainess’s hands.
Pandora was built up as a cunning, sadistic witch that didn’t make me groan when she killed off her own minions. The culture of the World Alliance and her consistent nature made such a thing work. She did it because she was evil, not to show how evil she was. Why is it that she only steals the staff through a stroke of misfortune?
The intelligent, plucky protagonists regularly avoid surveillance by the skinwelers (basically vision/auditory wards with communication functions) by simply covering them or moving to different rooms with no immediate repercussions. This is in spite of the fact that the government has been around long enough and has been written competently enough that they should know the most basic tricks and be in a position to throttle those that try them.
Characters are given credibility through their development, that all-important narrative weight, but the sturdy handles of their mallets are attached to paper heads sometimes. Some of the direct conflict in Wham! is like watching boxers politely take turns beating each other’s faces in.
If this all sounds like I’m being harsher with my criticism than some previously reviewed works, it’s because I am. While it still might qualify as an indie novel (I’d judge it even harsher if it didn’t) It’s seen a wider audience, was drafted by seasoned authors and had the eyes of multiple beta readers.
That being said, it’s important to mention that I enjoyed the book. It’s highly likely that I will set a course for the Phipps’ version of Earth again, and when I do, you’ll hear about it. My desire to continue is tenuous, though. I want to know what happens to the friends I’ve met, but at the same time, I’m reluctant to see my net-positive impression tank. Wham! is on the crossroads between Elysium and Mordor.
It’s still a destination worth dipping into at least once. If the fairy ring is still intact, you can find your way through Amazon (free for Kindle Unlimited users). Those of you without perception filtering spells are advised to bring something to deal with the skinwelers. It wouldn’t be wise to let the powers that be know of our existence.
January 31, 2018
Set in a world poisoned and strictly monitored, this is a work of absolute imagination. Yes, there are fairies, elves and trolls (and other strange creatures) but not as you think you know them. High-tech and magic stand side by side here, and it works, an urban fantasy that is also epic, dystopian, and much more.
I loved the added languages! And the ingenuity amid the characters is riveting. As reader, you experience a range of emotions, from despair to hope, anger to celebration (and sometimes you wish you could climb into the story to smack someone around a bit) and then you wonder how will it all possibly work out? The fact that I am left wondering about what comes next, proves this is a story worth reading! I want to find out!
Well done to the authors. This is imaginative and original. Despite a few edit errors I stumbled over, WHAM! deserves your attention – you will be glued to the pages …enjoy!
I loved the added languages! And the ingenuity amid the characters is riveting. As reader, you experience a range of emotions, from despair to hope, anger to celebration (and sometimes you wish you could climb into the story to smack someone around a bit) and then you wonder how will it all possibly work out? The fact that I am left wondering about what comes next, proves this is a story worth reading! I want to find out!
Well done to the authors. This is imaginative and original. Despite a few edit errors I stumbled over, WHAM! deserves your attention – you will be glued to the pages …enjoy!
July 9, 2018
An imaginative, epic story!
WHAM! Is the first book in the Timewalker series and I can't wait to read the next installment! I enjoyed everything about this book. The action-packed beginning, overall story, characters, the introduction 'Time Does Not Exist', and even the added glossary meant to help readers navigate through the (easy to get used to) beautiful language.
The corrupt World Alliance has taken over, and the Greenwood sisters must wade through some dark waters in order to survive. In their quest to reunite after Children and Family cruelly tears them apart, they run into some unforgettable, remarkable characters. (No spoilers.)
A well-written, imaginative, exciting, dystopian/fantasy. Five stars.
WHAM! Is the first book in the Timewalker series and I can't wait to read the next installment! I enjoyed everything about this book. The action-packed beginning, overall story, characters, the introduction 'Time Does Not Exist', and even the added glossary meant to help readers navigate through the (easy to get used to) beautiful language.
The corrupt World Alliance has taken over, and the Greenwood sisters must wade through some dark waters in order to survive. In their quest to reunite after Children and Family cruelly tears them apart, they run into some unforgettable, remarkable characters. (No spoilers.)
A well-written, imaginative, exciting, dystopian/fantasy. Five stars.
May 5, 2017
What attracted me to Carol Marrs Phipps' WHAM! was the cover. Then, upon reading the first page, I was hooked.
WHAM! is a truly great, original story full of surprises, twists and captivating turns. I think my favorite part was when Tess and Nia discovered their heritage, especially Tess, talk about a much-needed ego boost...
If you enjoy fantasy adventure told in the tradition of RR Tolkien and the Brothers Grimm with a healthy dose of apocalyptic realism, you'll love this story.
Can't wait for the next book in the series!
WHAM! is a truly great, original story full of surprises, twists and captivating turns. I think my favorite part was when Tess and Nia discovered their heritage, especially Tess, talk about a much-needed ego boost...
If you enjoy fantasy adventure told in the tradition of RR Tolkien and the Brothers Grimm with a healthy dose of apocalyptic realism, you'll love this story.
Can't wait for the next book in the series!
January 7, 2018
One of the best Sci-Fi / Fantasies I've ever read.
In Wham (Timewalker) Vol 1, Carol Marrs Phipps and Tom Phipps have delivered us a truly fine novel. One that blends elements of a dystopian Science-Fiction piece with those of a rich and colourful fantasy.
The book moves seamlessly between the two genres, is compelling [Truly a difficult novel to put down] and the pace is brilliant.
My highest recommendation for the ingenuity and especially the creativity.
TE Mark - Author and founding member of Writers International.
In Wham (Timewalker) Vol 1, Carol Marrs Phipps and Tom Phipps have delivered us a truly fine novel. One that blends elements of a dystopian Science-Fiction piece with those of a rich and colourful fantasy.
The book moves seamlessly between the two genres, is compelling [Truly a difficult novel to put down] and the pace is brilliant.
My highest recommendation for the ingenuity and especially the creativity.
TE Mark - Author and founding member of Writers International.
March 26, 2018
I loved this book! From the first page you're pulled into a very ugly dysfunctional world where the characters are what you care about. Human, Elf Fariy, Troll, Elves... And the Potentate! Such evil in a beautiful body who, at the end of book 0ne of this series, appears to be able to inflict even more misery onto this already miserable, suffering world. I can't wait to read more from this pair of authors.
July 5, 2018
I love dystopian books but I had some trouble getting into this one. The troll speaking gave me a headache trying to read and didn’t get the fairy talk. The plot is really good, I like the conflict of what’s happening. Knowing the author is from the UK I got the slang but for those who don’t, it could be confusing.
September 28, 2018
This is usually the kind of stuff that I like to read, kinda like my closet passion since I’m usually into history and non-fiction but I wasted my money on this one. I didn’t finish it because it dragged on and on without end and at times it was definitely weird. Just couldn’t do it, sorry.
February 19, 2020
This book has some fresh and unique worldbuilding that I thoroughly enjoyed. The story takes place in a dystopian future. The air is poisoned, the land withered, and there’s a clear sense of Big Brother ugliness about the place. The ruling class, a mega-powerful organization called the Alliance, controls the world and monitors everyone’s lives through surveillance orbs called Skinnies. The main character, Tess, is a disgruntled teen with a green-mohawk and combat boots. She doesn’t know it yet, but she’s also a fairy with magical powers. Her barber is a troll, and her friend’s pet crow is a skinshifter.
The story starts with the government brutally whisking away Tess’s parents and sister, Nia. Nia is taken to the Capital and is forced to be a sex-worker for the Potentate (the main antagonist). Despite this role, there isn’t any explicit sex in the book, and her role quickly changes. Tess is assigned to live with a couple of mean-spirited derelicts, the Warrens. Book One focuses on Tess’s and Nia’s adjustment, as well as Tess’s discovery of her heritage and her attempt to rescue her parents with the help of the underground.
The characters all struck me as three-dimensional and authentic with full emotional lives and flaws. Maxi, the troll, has a unique way of speaking which I found incredibly creative. There is also some fairy-speak, which was difficult to read and understand, but short in duration (thank goodness). As part of the world-building, it was all a lot of fun.
Great pace and clever writing with vivid descriptions. The plausibility suffers a tiny bit when all the magical beings come together for the big showdown, but it’s well-down overall, and things don’t go magically well, of course. The book ends smack dab at the climax of the action. Be prepared to read the next book or you’ll be left hanging. If readers can deal with the abrupt end and plan to continue with the series, I can highly recommend this fantasy novel.
The story starts with the government brutally whisking away Tess’s parents and sister, Nia. Nia is taken to the Capital and is forced to be a sex-worker for the Potentate (the main antagonist). Despite this role, there isn’t any explicit sex in the book, and her role quickly changes. Tess is assigned to live with a couple of mean-spirited derelicts, the Warrens. Book One focuses on Tess’s and Nia’s adjustment, as well as Tess’s discovery of her heritage and her attempt to rescue her parents with the help of the underground.
The characters all struck me as three-dimensional and authentic with full emotional lives and flaws. Maxi, the troll, has a unique way of speaking which I found incredibly creative. There is also some fairy-speak, which was difficult to read and understand, but short in duration (thank goodness). As part of the world-building, it was all a lot of fun.
Great pace and clever writing with vivid descriptions. The plausibility suffers a tiny bit when all the magical beings come together for the big showdown, but it’s well-down overall, and things don’t go magically well, of course. The book ends smack dab at the climax of the action. Be prepared to read the next book or you’ll be left hanging. If readers can deal with the abrupt end and plan to continue with the series, I can highly recommend this fantasy novel.
March 8, 2019
I picked this up because the reviews sounded great, but I have no idea how people gave it such a good score. First off, there should be a massive trigger warning, not only is there rape, it is a significant part of the storyline. Second, it tries to be sciency, but misses the mark pretty hard in some cases. For example, if two women were to conceive, the result would be female, there is no "choosing the sex". Third, the slang and fae language is (borderline) illegible. Even trying to read it with a bit of a Scottish accent only helped some of the time. Fourth, the female characters are all one-dimensional (this in a book with at least 4 female MCs). They are either useless and never seem to know anything, or incredibly evil bitches (with Bart being the only exception). Finally, the idea that if you remove parents that everyone will inevitably become rape-happy bastards only looking out for themselves is tired and cliché.
Also what is up with the book ending at the 77% mark? If the information from book two is important enough to be 1/4 of the ebook, then it should just have been in book one.
Also what is up with the book ending at the 77% mark? If the information from book two is important enough to be 1/4 of the ebook, then it should just have been in book one.
September 14, 2021
Fantastic storyline!
Don't let the page count defer you from reading this book! There is an excerpt from the sequel at the end thankfully so you aren't left hanging, and quite a glossary of all the characters, places mentioned in the book, as well as translations of the languages. It's very extensive!
That being said, I've had this book for a while but not being a genre I usually read it kept getting put aside. Don't do that either!
It's really quite fascinating! The characters are extremely diverse and other worldly! I'm astounded at the amount of creativity and imagination invested in the writing of this story!
I could easily see this made into a movie that would no doubt be a hit!
Don't let the page count defer you from reading this book! There is an excerpt from the sequel at the end thankfully so you aren't left hanging, and quite a glossary of all the characters, places mentioned in the book, as well as translations of the languages. It's very extensive!
That being said, I've had this book for a while but not being a genre I usually read it kept getting put aside. Don't do that either!
It's really quite fascinating! The characters are extremely diverse and other worldly! I'm astounded at the amount of creativity and imagination invested in the writing of this story!
I could easily see this made into a movie that would no doubt be a hit!
May 27, 2020
I was drawn in by the gorgeous cover art and the many great reviews of this book, but alas... I just couldn't connect with the writing style. The voice in which this book is written utilizes a lot of dialect, which is a hard sell for me. Plus I felt like the dialogue didn't sound the way actual people talk. The plot wasn't enough to keep me engaged, and I ended up DNFing at around 40%.
Clearly this book is somebody's cup of tea, but it seems it isn't mine. :(
Clearly this book is somebody's cup of tea, but it seems it isn't mine. :(
October 8, 2020
The title was a huge turnoff, but I gave it a chance because the rest of the cover was so pretty, and the story itself seemed intriguing. Unfortunately, on just the first page, characters gasp, cry, bark, wail, hiss, shout, roar, bellow, and scream their dialogue. I gave it a few more chapters, but it was just too juvenile for me.
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