Failed SciFi Storyline & eBook
"Onslaught," is the final nail in the coffin of the "Rise of Empire," series. The sixth eBook clearly and demonstratively shows the writing failures of the author, Mr. Kal in both execution and concept.
A mediocre storyline has attempted to overachieve through six (6) eBooks: multiple narratives, plots revolve around a central core of a cultist, somewhat fascist, group of Earth humans, who discovered an ancient alien spaceship beneath an ocean, and leveraged the obtained technology to start a galactic empire, in a new stellar neighborhood.
The parallels with, and influences of, Eurocentric socialism, specifically Germany, c. 1930's through present day (including the EU), is disturbing. The thinly veiled veneer of progressive meritocracy, cannot hide the underlying philosophy. Mr. Kal, the author, has written a tome to a Fourth Reich, in the guise of a SciFi series.
Additionally, the writing is poor, incompetent, lifeless, and without intellect. The most cursory reading, shows broken syntax, improper grammar, missing and/or wrong words, redundant passages, conflicting datelines, and many other defects. Among the author's favorite words or phrases: "...obviously...," "...of course...," and "...had had [sic]...." The most egregious is the use of "...but...." The word appears so frequently, it has become a comma or period to the author. Mr. Kal is without any writing skill. The listing of an editor/proofreader on the copyright page, amounts to a fraudulent fiction. The cold and perverse acceptance of killing and death, of genetic manipulation to achieve racial superiority, governmental reproduction control and productivity guidelines, by the one dimensional characters is beyond off putting. The characters are reminiscent of the Germans interviewed at the end of WW II-silent enablers of horror.
This is the last eBooks of Mr. Kal, I will suffer to read. The eBook was fully read via Kindle Unlimited and is not recommended.