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396 pages, Kindle Edition
First published May 22, 2016
I'm not sure how I'm going to start reviewing this book. Or rather, my rant. I don't think I've ever been this enraged, disgusted even, with a book, that much is clear. Beware of possible spoilers and a rather long rant.
I thought I knew what I was getting into with this book. It's a trope that's used very often in the genre, alien males who don't have enough women left on their home planet and they need more to assure the survival of their species. They're also domineering and the women in their culture are always expected to defer to the male. It's fantasy, who cares. People have different cravings, and I don't think there's anything wrong with wanting things that most would find highly offensive or just plain disgusting. The kink in this book (domestic discipline) is quite tame compared to others. I've read plenty of books were women are treated considerably worse, but this book...dear god did this book rub me the wrong way.
In the beginning I kind of liked it. The language barrier, the barbarian males and the confused women trying to make sense of it all, it certainly got me hooked. It sounded like it might be something similar to Ruby Dixon's alien series. But then, suddenly, they're no longer barbarians. They're civilized people, from a highly civilized planet, and just because they think women are little more than pets, doesn't make them barbaric. They live well, have nice clothes and properties, elaborate meals, etc. They also have highly advanced technology, even teleporting. So yeah, I found the title and blurb quite misleading.
I also didn't care much for the way this book is written. For a long time, about a third of the book I think, it was just the male character explaining the ways of his world to Eva. It's not very engaging to keep reading extensive explanations of how his world works, especially since there were very few surprising facts along the way. It would've gotten extremely boring if the things that were said and thought weren't so damn enraging. Which brings me to why I hated this book so much.
As I mentioned earlier, I liked the first part. Which was what I expected the book to be after reading the blurb. But the moment they planted that chip in her that allowed for them to understand each other perfectly, the book just took a complete nose dive for me.
I had already accepted that in this world men were the dominant species and that women deferred to them. It's their world, they can do whatever they want with it. You wouldn't even have to go on intergalactic travels to find something like it, it's not like there aren't very similar cultures right here on Earth.
My problem was the way the author handled the women's integration in this society. It was the way this book seemed to very abruptly turn into some kind of very sexist propaganda. Discussions after discussions explaining why their way is the better way. The things that were said and easily accepted by the heroine as logical and factual turned my stomach. The only reason why I continued reading was because when I skimmed through the last chapter and the epilogue, it seemed like maybe the men of this world accepted that women were at the very least pea-brained. But the more I read, the more I realised that was not happening. In fact, it was getting worse.
When the heroine is implanted with that chip that allows her to understand and speak his language, their lengthy conversations begin. He kept spanking her for her 'transgressions', and she is mortified, obviously. So they start talking, and he begins convincing her of how much better their ways are. She tells him how on Earth, women have been considered equals to men for centuries. So he asks her, do you believe in a higher power, a creator? She says yes. So he asks:
"Then if our Maker wanted us to be the same, why make us different? (...) We believe it's because each gender has a distinct purpose. (...) the female was made smaller, softer, with a great capacity to love, the perfect helpmate and loving nurturer of our young."
To which, she says: "So did we, until the twentieth century. Then we evolved."
And then....oh my fucking God how this enraged me. He asks, her:
"Is that so? Tell me, how is that evolution working in your society?"
Holy. Fuck. From there, she goes on to think how Earth was a mess, how the "world social order was in disarray". Is this really being suggested here? That the reason we have wars, famine, overcrowded population, violent crimes etc. is because women are equal to men? How is this necessary for a dime-a-dozen spanking erotica novel? I feel 0 regret in bashing the book for this. Zero. If this were about any other group of people except for women, this book would probably be pulled from Amazon.
But, of course, there's more. Following this 'revelation', he continues to explain how "our males usually deal with things under their own roofs before it gets that far." That far being "conflicts that arise outside the family and affect the public good", which usually result in public floggings in the town square, or something of the sort.
Immediately after he makes her understand that her spankings aren't really beatings, so they're basically ok. It's not like he left any bruises.
"Usually a few swats with an open palm is sufficient." And not to worry, hitting with closed fists was prohibited a while ago.
At this point, she's still not convinced that she should be spanked by her mate, never speak out of turn, and generally listen to his every command. So he goes on to explain it some more, comparing her situation with him with her role and life in the military. Apparently, since in the military you're always supposed to listen to your superior, and never question him/her, with the threat of a punishment, makes it the same as having to listen to a man you barely met spank you, tame you, correct you when you don't want to fuck on command, or when you say the word "fuck", among many others. So at the end of this very profound analogy, she realizes that she prefers taking a spanking from him rather than staying in solitary for 3 days as punishment in the military. It's not just spankings, obviously. Women are such crazy, flimsy creatures, sometimes the males really have to think outside the box to correct their behaviour.
"Let's just say our men can be very creative if the behaviour doesn't change."
I feel like I have to repeat myself here, before anyone jumps me for criticizing something that I was warned by the publisher note would happen. I have no problem with domestic discipline erotica. Nor with these aliens' way of life, it's their business. But here it's being clearly suggested that women are stupid creatures, good for one thing only (that is breeding, in case you're a woman and your small brain simply can't understand), and not even that, that the collapse of the planet probably sits on their shoulders. I felt like this book tried to be more than erotica, but rather some kind of manifesto against women's rights disguised as erotica.
I just wanted it to stop trying to make this rational. Trying to make it sound logical. Like this is the only way a world can be peaceful and rich, if the women are controlled by their men. But it didn't. And obviously, some discussions were necessary for the heroine to understand her situation, but the way they were handled enraged me. I just couldn't read it as a fantasy anymore. It became too real, I think. Especially since it didn't feel that erotic compared to many of the contemporary romances currently on the market.
Now on with the rant.
The heroine tells the hero about the troubles that Earth had in recent years, why they had to go look for other planets. He says that Earth sounds horrendous, and thank god we saved you from that place. She is, as she should be, appalled at that:
"To what end? To be enslaved by another race?"
But he sees it as being "cherished, cared for and protected." Fair enough, that's how he was raised to understand the world.
But then Eva complains about how they're just dressed up pets put on display, wearing clothes, collars etc that show who they belong to. He asks if they don't do such things on Earth too, like somehow the fact that women take their husbands' names is the same thing.
Then apparently she's also a judgemental bitch for not wanting to take part in their way of life. I'm sorry, but if you're making her live a completely different way of life, she has all the fucking right in the world to judge.
When she makes a reference to his sexual experiences, he says this:
"You are trying my patience, little one. Would you like to discuss why you weren't chaste at your breeding, or with whom or how many males you were intimate with?"
Wtf??? Is he actually suggesting she's a whore for having sex before he raped her the first time, even though she never could've known she'd meet him?
One of the other methods for dealing with hard-to-tame women is a so-called silencer. Another women that was captured with Eva had too much of a backbone for her gender, so her 'mate' had to put a silencer on her that basically made it so no one would hear what she was saying. Sexy stuff.
And then I got to the climax of this story...oh my god did it annoy me. Some of the women captured along with the heroine found a way to escape this foreign planet and they come to take her with them. The heroine is very confused at this point, not completely sure if she wants to leave, because let's face it, she might not have free will any longer, but come on, a super-sexy alien was giving her massive orgasms every day. Who needs free will when you have that? But that wasn't even really my problem, that's definitely not something unique to this particular story. Most heroines nowadays seem to forget all thought so long as they have a hot man with a big cock. My problem is how the narrator is trying to make the women that want to escape their kidnappers into some kind of villains. Apparently the fact that they came to different planets looking to see if they could find a safe place to live for the remaining inhabitants of Earth is not that different from what her beloved has done to her.
"We haven't done the despicable things they have"
"Yet. To what lengths will we go when we run out of time, especially if faced with extinction?" (Eva)
So let me get this straight, these women should accept being kidnapped, fucked, punished, controlled and bred by aliens? Because, hey you never know, someday humans could do the same. And our heroine had only just found out that her beloved alien and his people had just kidnapped the rest of her 300 strong crew, and it's the humans that are in the wrong? But at the end of the day, the real reason why she decides to leave with the other women, is because she saw Kerr talking (talking!) to another woman. And she was jealous.
She's also a bit selfish, because she doesn't really want to go back to the pain and destruction from Earth, whereas here she is basically a queen. But hey, he talked to that other girl, so what can you do! I'm not going to judge her for this selfishness - I'm sure a vast majority of people would have the same thoughts as her: Stay in a nice place with no wars, little crime, etc. or go back to your people, who are suffering and quickly dying?
At the last moment she decides she wants to stay because she loves Kerr, and hey, it's not that bad since spankings turn her on, and plus, so long as she doesn't say anything wrong, or curses, or wears anything other than dresses, or speaks without being addressed by a male first, or doesn't immediately follow her mate's orders, she has a pretty good life. But, alas, there had to be a conflict, so she's injected or shot with something, can't remember what, but she gets on the ship. And there, again, the humans are somehow made to look like the villains again for daring to save her, because how the fuck would they know that she loved her kidnappers so much??
That scene where she excuses the way that women are treated disgusted me. Here's some snippets of what she tells her fellow humans:
"They also commit to one woman for life"
"(...) to care for her, in loving ways as well as with punishments, if need be. They have a fairly non-violent society - spankings and floggings notwithstanding (...) In many ways, it beats Earth's with our broken homes, fatherless children, violent crime through the roof, and countries constantly at war."
So the fuck what? Does she think that the fact that women have no say-so whatsoever the reason why Earth is dying and these guys are doing better?
"I didn't see a single piece of trash on the street, or a mark of graffiti. There were no tenements, and no homeless on the street either. Of course, that was just the capital city."
If you're so affected by trash and graffitis, then move to Singapore!
After hearing this, one of the other girls concludes:
"It doesn't sound as bad as Eryn lets on. And the men, they were all tall and unbelievably gorgeous. They made my six foot frame seem dainty and feminine. And, is it true that they want sex 2 or 3 times a day?"
"I had a boyfriend a few years back who liked to spank me during sex. It was hot. I think I could adapt."
This is just SO wrong. I'm all for the fantasy. I'm all for the spankings, and the discipline and stuff. But don't try to make it sound like these women have any choice. Don't turn these women into doormats who want this just because their men are super hot and can give them great orgasms.
Back to the story though..
The ship is captured by the aliens again, very quickly. Eva is taken by her man's general, or something of the sort, and he is incredibly angry with her.
"Do you hate him so much that you'd risk both your lives to flee his arms and bed?"
At this point, we find out that Kerr is in critical condition. Apparently mates can't be separated or they wither and die. How fucking convenient that among pages and pages of long ass explanations between the 2 characters about how his world works, how mates work, he forgot to tell her probably THE most important detail. Apparently they can't even be apart for half a day or something and he might die. It was just way too convenient. And the excuse of "we were fucking too much to talk" is really not cutting it. Because I tell ya, they spent a lot of time talking about stuff like this, and we got to read a looooot of it.
That, I could've gotten over, and the ridiculousness of that scene where she's riding his face to get him back to life. But what really annoyed me is how apologetic she was about this! She's considered very much at fault for trying to leave her kidnappers to go back to her people (not that she was actually doing that, because she was too much of a doormat), which I'm okay with, because obviously most captors will be angry if their captive tries to run away. But she is actually in tears, begging to be punished, flogged in the town square, whatever it takes, because what she did was just so horrible. It was disgusting to read. Like women whose husbands cheat on them, and it's somehow their fault that their men couldn't keep it in their pants, and they're the ones who have to fight to get them back at the urgings of family, friends, etc. The way she begged to be punished...uuuugh.
And then Kerr regains his strength, and he's portrayed here as some kind of a hero, apparently, for coming in to save her from the evil council by delivering those lashes himself, and in front of only 4 people. She apologizes profusely, tells him how much she loves him, how she realised how amazing he is, how she really deserves this punishment bla bla bla.
I went back and forth a lot on whether I should hit save on this review or not. I can't help feeling a little bad. But then I realised, this is what this site is for. This is what I felt while reading this book and I think I needed to write this just to get it off my chest, even if no one else reads my review.
I guess my point is this: surely there must be another way to write a science fiction erotica book with this kink without making a mockery of women's struggles and all of the abused women of Earth.
I read the synopsis and I should have stopped there. I wish I did.
A group of all female scientists are on a mission to discover a habitable planet for humankind because the earth has been ravaged by war and humans are on the brink of extinction. They land on a new planet and are immediately captured by an alien race, the Primarians. So the Primarians have been searching for a new specie to breed with after a meteor crashed into their planet and rendered their females infertile. Imagine their good fortune when they find the perfect specie had landed on their planet and was theirs for the taking.
The BDSM did not bother me. It was how spineless the heroine (Eva) was and how easily she accepted being kidnapped by an alien race. Not even the Daemon Black kind of aliens, but the archaic, barbaric and domineering type who happened to have advanced technology. I mean, how do you fall for someone who kidnaps you, ties you up and inserts a stupid "fertility" rod inside your vagina within minutes of your capture?
I remember being particularly enraged when Kerr tried to explain their ownership and lordship over the females and compared it with receiving orders in the military. And what does the heroine do? Nothing. Except realize how right he was and how the earth was in chaos and self destructing because women were equal to men.
As in, gender equality results to chaos, war, disease and eventual destruction of the entire planet. Make it make sense please!!
The way Kerr and Eva tried to justify this every other page had me screaming bloody murder. "At least they mate for life here... Our women are not slaves, we protect, cherish and love them... We have big dicks so it's natural that we own you (no one said this, I'm just really pissed)... I'm going to spank you a little when you step out of line, but don't worry, it's not going to bruise and i'll end up fucking you into another galaxy anyway, you won't notice..."
Another thing that bothered me was how quick they were to badmouth the group of scientists that tried to escape. Eva evidently discovers she's in love with Kerr and tries to return but is unable to. They're ship is inevitably recaptured and Eva is rushed off to Kerr's because he's dying. Apparently, fated mates can't be apart for long and he conveniently forgot to mention it to her because you know, they've been screwing like rabbits.
This book will anger you and make you want to hit something. If you don't mind women being described as nothing more than glorified pets with pretty dresses that are subservient to sexist barbarians with huge dicks, this book is perfect for you.