Oh, man. This one...
Nalini Singh (as I've mentioned is one of my favorite RN writers) wrote this one years ago for a Harlequin series. I would never have bought this one (it came as a twofer with Lord of the Abyss from Netgalley), because, honestly, I don't really trust really old work from authors that I love (see: Lisa Kleypas. see: Jill Shalvis). It's bound to be disappointing.
Jasmine and Tariq were head-over-heels-falling-in-love until Jasmine's emotionally abusive family made her choose between Tariq the Sheik and her family. Insecure Jasmine doesn't want to cut all ties with her family (they threatened to disown her), so she chooses them and leaves Tariq in his desert kingdom.
Four years later, Jasmine has grown a backbone, has seen her family for what it is (a bunch of people who don't like her), and has learned the secret of her illegitimacy (aha! That's why they don't like her!). She flies back to the Middle East and to Tariq, who, I guess in some messed up way, is sort of happy to see her. He is still extremely pissed that she left him all those years ago and cut herself off from him, but now that she is back in his clutches, she's never going to leave. Is that okay with her? Sort of. She made the choice, but she didn't expect this semi-scary Tariq. But she's here, and she's going to make this work, so no hostage situation!
There's lots of problems they need to work out, starting with trust and ending with Tariq believing that Jasmine does, indeed, love him.
And while Desert Warrior didn't make me want to throw it across the room, I had a lot of problems with it.
1.) Uberstrong, autocratic alpha males are Singh's forte. That's great. I appreciate the alpha male. Unfortunately, one that is over the top possessive, to the point where he always wants her attention on him, dislikes when she smiles at other people, and won't let her leave the city? Well. No, thanks.
2.) His actions. I guess they were supposed to make me go all swoony, but...
Tariq threatens to and pretty much carries out the threat of kidnapping and forcibly detaining the heroine. Singh makes this action okay, because Jasmine sort of agrees with it and goes along with it (Stockholm Syndrome, anyone?)
Tariq tries to trick Jasmine into marrying him, like, the day she comes back after four years apart. Again, the possessive-y-ness is supposed to make my knees turn to water, and it's supposed to be okay because Jasmine is hip to his scheme and says yes knowing full well what she's saying yes to, but still. Made me a mite uncomfortable.
Tariq forbids Jasmine to leave his kingdom because he's afraid she's going to run away again.
Won't let her leave even though he refuses to love her (thinks it makes him weak, won't open himself up for hurt again, etc, etc.)
3.) Tariq treats Jasmine horribly. Sure there are a lot of scenes where he's all nuzzly and compassionate, but there are just as many scenes where he's a total jackass and is making her cry by being cutting and snide.
4.) The pacing of this novel drove me insane. It's so slow. Things don't happen. They're traveling across the desert on camels and I felt it. This story could have been 190 shorter. A literal novella. I just felt like they weren't ever making any progress relationship-wise. They were constantly stuck in that rut of "I loved him then, but do I love him now?" "Can't tell Jasmine I feel anything for her except as a possession because then she'll throw it back in my face and leave me!", spinning their wheels. I get stories of characters miscommunication and throwing out mixed signals and missing each other, but honestly. You've got to give me something besides whining about the same stuff for 100 pages.
5.) Too much possessiveness. Seriously. Just stop, Tariq. When he starts to call her an actual "possession," that's when I started tuning out. Yuck. If I knew someone who was actually like Tariq, I think I wouldn't stop hitting him.
You can see Singh's writing style has changed a lot, but her mark is still here. Some of the lines I expect to see in her next book. A few scenes in which Jasmine is trying so hard to worm her way into Tariq's heart and failing are actually upsetting. Singh can write a good story, but this one... Oh, this one, I just couldn't get behind the characters.