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Secret Baby
He’s sexy, rich, distracting, and he broke her bed! What he doesn’t know is that she’s carrying his secret baby…
Mel, a dance teacher has had her share of heartbreaks and jerks. She’s not interested in jealous ex-girlfriends or having a billionaire’s baby. She meets charming billionaire, Will, at a karaoke bar and before long, her life is totally changed. Will is perfect and he’s all she’s ever wanted in a man, except he comes with a baggage bigger than she was willing to handle. Between his crazy ex-girlfriend, his daughter, and his fear of commitment, she’s got her hands full.
She’s all he’s ever wanted, if only she’d give in to his advances.
Will isn’t interested in serious relationships, not since he lost his spouse a several years ago. He had devoted his life to making millions and raising his child. The closest he’d come to relationship was with his crazy ex-girlfriend who is a little obsessed with him. He’s since decided that women are too much trouble, especially the pretty ones, and Mel is no exception. If anything, she is more trouble than he needs, but for some reason, he can’t leave her alone, not even when he discovers her close connection to him. She’s hot and damn sexy, and all he wants and needs is her.
This is a standalone romance book with a HEA and no cliffhangers! For a limited time, this edition of SECRET BABY contains TWO bonus bad boy romance books!
Mel, a dance teacher has had her share of heartbreaks and jerks. She’s not interested in jealous ex-girlfriends or having a billionaire’s baby. She meets charming billionaire, Will, at a karaoke bar and before long, her life is totally changed. Will is perfect and he’s all she’s ever wanted in a man, except he comes with a baggage bigger than she was willing to handle. Between his crazy ex-girlfriend, his daughter, and his fear of commitment, she’s got her hands full.
She’s all he’s ever wanted, if only she’d give in to his advances.
Will isn’t interested in serious relationships, not since he lost his spouse a several years ago. He had devoted his life to making millions and raising his child. The closest he’d come to relationship was with his crazy ex-girlfriend who is a little obsessed with him. He’s since decided that women are too much trouble, especially the pretty ones, and Mel is no exception. If anything, she is more trouble than he needs, but for some reason, he can’t leave her alone, not even when he discovers her close connection to him. She’s hot and damn sexy, and all he wants and needs is her.
This is a standalone romance book with a HEA and no cliffhangers! For a limited time, this edition of SECRET BABY contains TWO bonus bad boy romance books!
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534 pages, Kindle Edition
Published May 24, 2016
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October 14, 2016
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This book is horrible. The story telling is awful. I think many people can be writers but just a few have the gift of make you feel their story. The only thing I felt here was the need to contact someone responsible for the publishing of this book and give them some editing advice. And I don't consider myself editor material AT ALL. So imagine my dislikes for the mediocre book here. The title and blurb are so misleading I thought it was misplaced. That maybe it was suppose to be in another book. But the characters names checked. Anyhow, this is a short book. And really, where in a short book, instead of trying to build the characters, make us know them and connect with them the author spends paragraphs and more paragraphs with useless descriptions. Why would I care if a restaurant was also a bar and had live music and doors in the back, front, sides and hardwood floors that didn't look new but it seems they were there forever, probably since the restaurant was open?(I summarized the description here. Lol). And also why would I care about all the horses who were wandering around and the way they walk or if they're going to like his ranch or not?(summarized description again). And why do I care how all the pastures are so green and never ending, and how the house looks like with his wraparound porch made of stones and the inside were beautiful and rustic and it has chairs that you could sleep on them and that he uses a spare room as an office and that was "so him"?!(summarized again). Besides, again, dor a short book, hero and heroine spent most of the book apart, socializing with other people and working. Talking about nonsense things and the heroine even gossiping with her bff. And I didn't buy their romance. They didn't have that need to spend time together. They wouldn't change their plans to be with each other. They would set a day to meet and they stuck to the plan. Weird and cold. I didn't feel their attraction. There was none. He was a widow. But that wasn't even a issue here. It was like the woman never really lived. I didn't feel his love for the deceased either. So this plot that I really try to avoid wasn't a problem at all. And the sex scenes. What a bummer. Think about reading the phone book. It was like reading a list they needed to accomplish. "He took off my clothes. I took of his pants." "He sucked on my nipple. I sucked his dick". Something like that. Mechanical. And the secret baby plot?? THERE WAS NO SECRET BABY. She found out she was pregnant in the last chapter and she told him right the way. And they lived HEA. Note: She was 6 weeks late but they were together about a month.
This book is horrible. The story telling is awful. I think many people can be writers but just a few have the gift of make you feel their story. The only thing I felt here was the need to contact someone responsible for the publishing of this book and give them some editing advice. And I don't consider myself editor material AT ALL. So imagine my dislikes for the mediocre book here. The title and blurb are so misleading I thought it was misplaced. That maybe it was suppose to be in another book. But the characters names checked. Anyhow, this is a short book. And really, where in a short book, instead of trying to build the characters, make us know them and connect with them the author spends paragraphs and more paragraphs with useless descriptions. Why would I care if a restaurant was also a bar and had live music and doors in the back, front, sides and hardwood floors that didn't look new but it seems they were there forever, probably since the restaurant was open?(I summarized the description here. Lol). And also why would I care about all the horses who were wandering around and the way they walk or if they're going to like his ranch or not?(summarized description again). And why do I care how all the pastures are so green and never ending, and how the house looks like with his wraparound porch made of stones and the inside were beautiful and rustic and it has chairs that you could sleep on them and that he uses a spare room as an office and that was "so him"?!(summarized again). Besides, again, dor a short book, hero and heroine spent most of the book apart, socializing with other people and working. Talking about nonsense things and the heroine even gossiping with her bff. And I didn't buy their romance. They didn't have that need to spend time together. They wouldn't change their plans to be with each other. They would set a day to meet and they stuck to the plan. Weird and cold. I didn't feel their attraction. There was none. He was a widow. But that wasn't even a issue here. It was like the woman never really lived. I didn't feel his love for the deceased either. So this plot that I really try to avoid wasn't a problem at all. And the sex scenes. What a bummer. Think about reading the phone book. It was like reading a list they needed to accomplish. "He took off my clothes. I took of his pants." "He sucked on my nipple. I sucked his dick". Something like that. Mechanical. And the secret baby plot?? THERE WAS NO SECRET BABY. She found out she was pregnant in the last chapter and she told him right the way. And they lived HEA. Note: She was 6 weeks late but they were together about a month.
July 3, 2016
Title makes no sense --spoilers
The book was fine at first, a pretty standard love story. Then she finds out she's pregnant. The same day she arranges to meet him and his crazy ex is there. At this point I thought the story was about to take a turn especially based on the title. Crazy ex says all sorts of things to make her doubt him. He pleads his innocence. She thinks for a minute and accepts that as the truth and tell him she's pregnant. He's excited and wants to get married. End of story. Where's the secret baby??
The book was fine at first, a pretty standard love story. Then she finds out she's pregnant. The same day she arranges to meet him and his crazy ex is there. At this point I thought the story was about to take a turn especially based on the title. Crazy ex says all sorts of things to make her doubt him. He pleads his innocence. She thinks for a minute and accepts that as the truth and tell him she's pregnant. He's excited and wants to get married. End of story. Where's the secret baby??
June 20, 2016
Where's the rest of the book??
Did it just actually end like that wow...WTF is going on.WHERE IS THE REST OF THE BOOK???
I totally agree with reviews about being ripped off.But thanks to kindle unlimited.. thank you..I guess.
So...again.Where the rest of the Book?
Why is the title of book "Secret Baby"...what was a secret about it.. none.. their was none.
The story progression was just developing...and was then abruptly prematurely concluded.WTF.Readers they're alot of potential progression in the story and I felt that as the nature of their story is all butterflies and unicorns and come on..give me more on the ex..Where's an epilogue. Do they marry... how does cara feel about ms Ulrich news.Whaaaaat... I need to know?
Because of the abrupt ending to the story.. I give it just 2 stars.Gahhh talk about super insta...
Did it just actually end like that wow...WTF is going on.WHERE IS THE REST OF THE BOOK???
I totally agree with reviews about being ripped off.But thanks to kindle unlimited.. thank you..I guess.
So...again.Where the rest of the Book?
Why is the title of book "Secret Baby"...what was a secret about it.. none.. their was none.
The story progression was just developing...and was then abruptly prematurely concluded.WTF.Readers they're alot of potential progression in the story and I felt that as the nature of their story is all butterflies and unicorns and come on..give me more on the ex..Where's an epilogue. Do they marry... how does cara feel about ms Ulrich news.Whaaaaat... I need to know?
Because of the abrupt ending to the story.. I give it just 2 stars.Gahhh talk about super insta...
September 3, 2016
It was good however when its advertised secret baby, I was expecting more to do about the baby
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May 5, 2017
A very good and exciting read with a misleading title. I really enjoyed reading this book. I loved the romance between Mel and Will (spicy). Makes you want to read more of them. No secret baby though just a baby.
March 16, 2018
This book was incomplete to me. I would have liked to know what happen after the announcement of the baby! Telling his daughter , proposing, the jealous ex founding out, and an epilogue after the baby was born. It was a good read i just felt like was unfinished.
September 24, 2017
Secret Baby
Not my kind of books, too much dirty language and too much detail on the sex,didn't read the second stories, didn't fancy it.
Not my kind of books, too much dirty language and too much detail on the sex,didn't read the second stories, didn't fancy it.
November 6, 2017
Is it an open ending or what ?
May 1, 2022
Dnf
Dnf. Writing was fine, characters were ok, but just the overall language, conversation, etc., felt really young/childish and I couldn't get into it.
Dnf. Writing was fine, characters were ok, but just the overall language, conversation, etc., felt really young/childish and I couldn't get into it.
June 22, 2016
A K/U book.
I liked these books, the characters and the stories had a even flow
to them. With that being said, I did however have a couple of issues
with the books. Number one being that these aren't "Secret Baby" books.
(If you find out that you are pregnant and tell the father immediately or
within a couple of days, that does not a "Secret Baby" make.)
My second issue is that "Secret Baby" and bonus book #2 "Chance" both
ended too soon. They needed a couple more chapters or at the very least
an epilogue. Don't get me wrong, I like all 3 stories included in this book,
it just that 2 of them seemed rushed.
"Secret Baby"
Mel is a dance teacher at the local high school and a total knock out.
While out celebrating one of her good friends and fellow teachers birthday,
Mel has an invitation to join her ex-love interest Richard and his friends for
Karaoke. She meets on of Richard's friends Will and things progress pretty
quickly for the two of them. Mel finds herself breaking rules that she has set
in place and loving every minute of it.
Will is a single parent whose daughter just happens to be in the beautiful dance
teacher's Mel's class. He doesn't think twice about asking her out on a date and
when things progress, he finds himself wondering if he is really falling for her of if
he is confusing his feelings of loneliness for something more.
I liked these books, the characters and the stories had a even flow
to them. With that being said, I did however have a couple of issues
with the books. Number one being that these aren't "Secret Baby" books.
(If you find out that you are pregnant and tell the father immediately or
within a couple of days, that does not a "Secret Baby" make.)
My second issue is that "Secret Baby" and bonus book #2 "Chance" both
ended too soon. They needed a couple more chapters or at the very least
an epilogue. Don't get me wrong, I like all 3 stories included in this book,
it just that 2 of them seemed rushed.
"Secret Baby"
Mel is a dance teacher at the local high school and a total knock out.
While out celebrating one of her good friends and fellow teachers birthday,
Mel has an invitation to join her ex-love interest Richard and his friends for
Karaoke. She meets on of Richard's friends Will and things progress pretty
quickly for the two of them. Mel finds herself breaking rules that she has set
in place and loving every minute of it.
Will is a single parent whose daughter just happens to be in the beautiful dance
teacher's Mel's class. He doesn't think twice about asking her out on a date and
when things progress, he finds himself wondering if he is really falling for her of if
he is confusing his feelings of loneliness for something more.
June 5, 2016
A knew Chance at love
Claire caught her fiance cheating and was heartbroken. Her friend made her go on the honeymoon along with her mom. As luck would find her love her mom did to. And now Claire is not sure leaving Chance alone is right because her mom married Bryan Chance father.
Claire caught her fiance cheating and was heartbroken. Her friend made her go on the honeymoon along with her mom. As luck would find her love her mom did to. And now Claire is not sure leaving Chance alone is right because her mom married Bryan Chance father.
June 16, 2016
This book was awesome and then I was over... It just ended right when it was getting good. I feel a little ripped off this is more of a novella than a stand alone. I was expecting so much more bc honestly it was great and then it's like she just didn't finish the book! Your left wondering what happens?!?!
May 30, 2016
This was a really cute book. Loved the banter back and forth. These two were great together. Would have gave 5 stars but the end left me wanting more. I just didn't think the ex girlfriend was done.
June 9, 2016
Not that interesting
Blurb made these books sound hot and heavy but they were disappointing. Stories were bland and predictable. Characters were not developed and just seemed to appear out of nowhere. Not a fan.
Blurb made these books sound hot and heavy but they were disappointing. Stories were bland and predictable. Characters were not developed and just seemed to appear out of nowhere. Not a fan.
June 10, 2016
Liked
I liked the book the only thing I didn't like was the ending the book felt unfinished. I loved that there was bonus books but those felt unfinished too. I wanted epilogue something it just felt rushed.
I liked the book the only thing I didn't like was the ending the book felt unfinished. I loved that there was bonus books but those felt unfinished too. I wanted epilogue something it just felt rushed.
June 21, 2016
Just so so
I really wanted to like these stories but I found them to be to simple. Dialog moved along but no depth to the characters. No angst, mild silly drama and some whinny characters. Glad I got on Kindle Unlimited.
I really wanted to like these stories but I found them to be to simple. Dialog moved along but no depth to the characters. No angst, mild silly drama and some whinny characters. Glad I got on Kindle Unlimited.
June 6, 2016
It is a quick little romance
June 12, 2016
Cute book
Cute book but only 30% is the title story. The ending is pretty abrupt, with no real conclusion other than hey, having a baby.
Cute book but only 30% is the title story. The ending is pretty abrupt, with no real conclusion other than hey, having a baby.
June 16, 2016
Great read
I would definitely recommend this book to everyone to read and enjoy as much as I have. This was a very entertaining book to read
I would definitely recommend this book to everyone to read and enjoy as much as I have. This was a very entertaining book to read
June 26, 2016
Ummmm... really?! That's it?! Lame! Where's the rest of the book?!
June 28, 2016
Good.
Liked it, just wasn't enough story line. Didn't need that much sex in it to make a interesting book. That just my observation.
Liked it, just wasn't enough story line. Didn't need that much sex in it to make a interesting book. That just my observation.
July 4, 2016
2.25 not impressed in the least. slow, plodding and feels like a setup for Texas cheerleader moms. skimmed it.
July 6, 2016
Wth!!! It just ends I'm pregnant the end
July 5, 2016
quick read moved fast cute story...needed more character build up
October 8, 2016
Amazing short read. Would love to read more from these characters.
January 20, 2017
an okay book
October 7, 2019
I only edited this book.
Nevertheless, I spent time and read it.
I do not enjoy romance novels anyhow so do not take my opine of it; I was paid to make the prose more readable.
Nevertheless, I spent time and read it.
I do not enjoy romance novels anyhow so do not take my opine of it; I was paid to make the prose more readable.
June 14, 2016
Ok. I enjoyed the book but found it confusing. Where was the secret exactly?
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