Where to start with this incredible novel? A few years ago I started tinkering with an idea for a series of books called the Thursday Night League about a bunch of resolutely second division crime writers based in Manchester of the 1930s who solve mysteries. Partly this was because the majority of the so called Golden Age of crime fiction is very, very southern and middle class and rarely wanders to the north unless it’s either wildly bucolic or as a contrast to a rural retreat nearby. I spent a good deal of time trying to see if there was any precedent for crime fiction from round these parts (I’m just over the border at the end of West Yorkshire) and struggled to find any. Obviously I was not aware of The Bleston Murder by J C Hamilton
Of course that book doesn’t exist, except as a fictional conceit in this book. In many ways it’s the infernal engine that propels our narrator into his madness, and as such is the second book I’ve read lately with heavy allusions to Theseus and the labyrinth and a narrator going slowly mad trying to fathom out a work of probable fiction that completely overwhelms him. The plot of the book is simple: young Frenchman spends a year in very-clearly-but-not-quite-Manchester, is bitterly lonely, hates the city, gets obsessed with a crime novel and starts to slowly lose himself trying to see that novel and the author and the friends he does make as somehow connected. The narrator obsessively looks for connections where there are none, whilst also worrying whether a series of mysterious fires might also be connected
The closest precedent in crime fiction terms is the extraordinary sequence in Kitchin’s Death of My Aunt, where the narrator suspects his uncle is the murderer and is now shut up in a house with them and slowly begins to unravel. Butor is simply using crime fiction as the centre for him to weave his dizzying web, but he’s not alone in gravitating to the genre for this as part of the appeal of crime fiction for many (especially me), is that it is a palimpsest where we can overlay obsessions of the time over the simple narrative structure. Again, you wonder if Paul Auster was aware of this novel when writing the New York Trilogy, another sort of crime fiction with a lot of psychogeographical meandering around city spaces
The real genius of the book - and it is a masterpiece- is how Butor writes. He writes these dense paragraphs of prose which are somehow both crystal clear in meaning but also full of repetition and obsessive terminology. The rhythm is a sort of growing crescendo of unease, and seeing that Butor deliberately structured it like music makes a lot of sense because themes and moments repeat maddeningly in paragraphs, as Revel slowly gets lost within his thoughts (it’s interesting that when he is most lucid he is nameless but when at his most confused he uses his name, like it’s a sort of beacon to find his way with). Again, there are similarities with House of Leaves in how the prose mirrors our narrator’s descent into madness, long and baroque and beautiful, but suddenly repetitive and disturbing. The constant repetitions make it feel incredibly oppressive, like something (fires maybe?) is about to break out at any moment
Living near Manchester of the 21st century (and first visiting there in 1998), it’s a wildly different place to Bleston, in the same way that a 1950s Hebden Bridge is different to how it is now. What was full of urban decay and misery and poverty is now almost absurdly cosmopolitan (to the point of losing some of the flavour of the place, although there are always a maze of back roads to lose yourself down as our narrator knows to his cost). So the Manchester being written here does not resonate with me, but the narrator’s disgust with his temporary home (autobiographical by all accounts) does very much feel familiar. I had a horrible time at university, in a town I didn’t like and horribly disconnected from everyone else there for a good two years. I obsessively misunderstood social cues and adopted crushes on unobtainable girls as a way to get me out of my misery but instead pulled me further into depression because i didn’t really have the mental capacity to cope with anything. I wandered the town obsessively, especially at night, torturing myself with seeing how others had a connection I so sorely felt an absence of. So I felt every word of this. I felt every angry, confused, hurt, horribly lost word. It’s an extraordinary book on so many levels and one that will probably forever haunt me