3★
“‘Is this your first fire victim, Chief Superintendent?’ the pathologist asked him. ‘No,’ he answered.‘But it’s the first one from my family.’”
Mike Prosser has been after Big Dave Tyson ever since. When a couple of opportunistic young car thieves come off badly after their crashing encounter with Tyson, Prosser is fired up yet again to catch this seemingly untouchable crim. But this time, he’s not the boss, no longer the Chief Superintendent.
“The uniformed officer was a fast-track promotion, some ten years younger than Mike Prosser, and had been swept in from another force when Prosser had been convicted of drink-driving. Taking the senior station officer from the uniformed branch was a way of mitigating Prosser’s pain at his demotion but it had not been easy for the new chief facing the silent hostility of the tightly-knit CID squad. Surprisingly, Mike Prosser had shown no resentment towards him, accepting his demotion as due punishment with almost masochistic enthusiasm.”
This is a complicated story that takes place in the UK and involves many characters who turn out to be connected to each other, either through family relations or past dealings. It also involves illegal activities with other countries.
The basic plot is getting Tyson, as the title says, but each time they look like getting close, Tyson foils them. He’s a murderous thug surrounded by equally charming men who do the dirty work while he and his former Playboy-centerfold wife, Francine, run their club. She’s clever and sexy while he’s all conniving and vicious.
But before we meet Francine, we meet a clever, sexy French lawyer named Dominique, who rides a Ducati and turns heads so fast, one guy drove into a post in the parking garage. That kind of head-turner. She joins the police team as a prosecutor. She provided an interesting twist, but I found myself skimming over her internal monologues and self-criticism.
Francine was a more interesting, central character, and she enters the story about the time Dominique mostly leaves it. She’s the brains of the club business and sticks to that, giving him alibis when he needs them.
“She had become an expert at shutting out the repercussions of her husband’s nature, what she didn’t know she didn’t guess.”
She knows how to use her ‘assets’ to her advantage (much as Dominique does), but later, her sister accuses her, and it hurts.
“’You only married him to get that club because you wanted to be the female Hugh Hefner. Now we all have to suffer because of your ego.’ It was a brutal awakening to the unspoken feelings within a family and it left Francine scarred.”
Tyson’s dialogue is written in thick dialect, hard to read. Here he’s talking to Francine.
“‘No. I didn’t notice that. Yeah, you could be right, girl. Ee always said ee didn’t want to know if ee didn’t ‘ave to. I’ll tell you wot, Fran, you find out ‘ow ee feels. Do wot you ‘ave to. Find out wot ee ‘as on us.’”
But I enjoyed some of the descriptive passages.
“The villa was in the hills above Marbella. They motored up the winding country road past other houses, softly pink in the evening light, their heavily tiled roofs blood-red amongst green blankets of foliage, with palms and tall pines rising above them like markers of a recent past.”
And there are plenty of thriller elements.
“The knife blade moved a little across her throat and although she felt no pain she could feel the blood quickly begin to trickle down her front and into her blouse. ‘You’ve got one more chance. I’ll find ‘im wiv or wivout you, dead or alive. It’s your call.’ he told her.”
As the plot became more convoluted and the relationships between the characters became more intertwined, I lost interest and skimmed. I enjoyed the plot and some of the characters and some of the writing.
What I didn’t enjoy were the errors that a good editor would have picked up. “Porterhouse stake” is one. It happens and we all do it. I’ve lost count of the times I’ve typed “won” instead of “one”. Just now I’ve typed “think” instead of “thing” when I was saying it’s a good thing I’m not a novelist!
Thanks to the author for making this available for free a day or so on Amazon so other readers and I could access it. It’s a few years old now, so I’m hopeful he’s got some fresh eyes available to proof his next works.
This could be the basis for a good, gritty mini-series coming out of the UK, I think.