I often hear BattleTech fans malign this book as one of the worst BattleTech novels ever written, so I was leery of ever reading it, but I'm glad that I finally did. I don't understand the hate leveled toward this book. The combat scenes in it—and there's a good many of them—are smartly written and compelling, and we get to see several different factions represented, in addition to a main antagonist who, although not a deeply developed character, is at least an interesting concept rooted in BattleTech history.
If I had to find any faults in this book, it would be that (1) the main antagonist was a little one-note, and (2) the final two big battles ended up being summarized rather than playing out "on camera," but given the strength of the combat scenes elsewhere in the book, this is only a personal gripe.
Other than that, I had a lot of fun with this book.