I know that when I say I should just drop a series, but the reality is unless I get so pissed off by it, I’m probably going to stick it out until the bitter end. There are things about Kiss of the Rose Princess that I do really like—I like the idea of the plot, it’s a reverse harem (and I love me reverse harems), and I think although the character designs are super-busy, I still think that they’re cute. And the plot has actually began to show up, starting with the last volume’s introduction of the false Roses and Mutsuki’s locked memories and the Seal of the Demon Lord and how it relates to the Rose Princess (although that still hasn’t been answered.)
The problem is that instead of getting into or explaining any of the plotlines, Shouto Aya is more interested in the comedic elements rather than advancing the plot.
This starts off really strong. I really liked the fight between the Knights and Haruto in order to save Seiran, I really loved that end of the Yellow Rose arc is Haruto choosing to sacrifice himself to save Anise from getting pulled into the seal (although I don’t like the fact that we get a fairly emotional scene followed up “Oh, he’s okay! He’s in Hong Kong!”). I had kinda guessed what the purpose of the Rose Knights and the Rose Princess was going to be, given out what we found out about the Yellow Rose’s history in volume 2. I really liked the scene when Anise summons Kaede because she’s lonely and she wants someone to talk to. I liked that there’s a new threat that the group has to face as Anise’s father appears at the school and two new Roses.
And all of this would be great on its own, except that the majority of these plot points revolve around a chapter about wacky sports day hijinx that manages to throw in a bit of plot at the end. It’s made even more frustrating with the fact that one of the big reasons why this happens is that Schwartz does want to find out what the Roses’ abilities are, so Anise has to make sure that they act completely and utterly normal! (Except I’m going “But…he knows about the Roses already and who they are and ow my brain.”) This is volume 3. Yes, there’s been some development in the plot and getting into the history of the Rose Knights and their relationship with the Rose Princess but we still don’t know enough to figure out what’s going on. I don’t feel a threat coming from Schwartz (and to be honest, he doesn’t seem that threatening, especially when he answers “Why, I just want to see my cute daughter.” Skeevy, yes; threatening, no.), and I don’t like that Anise’s reaction to him showing up is “GUYS YOU CAN’T BE SUPER SPECIAL” and not, “Crap, what is he doing here we’re so screwed.”
This feels like a lot of padding, especially this early on (and I know, serialized storytelling), and it feels like Shouto doesn’t have a focus on whether or not she wants an action romance or magical romantic comedy. (Plus added in the factor of “We have to catch all the Clow Arcana Cards!”) It is bumpy, and although I do like that we are seeing elements of an actual plot line appearing, I still don’t think there’s enough to entirely work so far in this series.