Well composed, for most part.
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One wonders, reading of this man, why he wasn't worshipped. Alexander is, after all, in all but name of a formal ceremony.
Is it because Rome was guilty of murdering him?
Is that why story of another, king of not Rome, being murdered by Rome before being worshipped, was made up?
Cleopatra is hardly mentioned, is that due to misogyny, chiefly, so women who were independent queens were abhorred and continue to be so by church?
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"He aligned himself with the powerful military general Pompey in order to ensure his military might; he also maintained his old alliance with Crassus, seeking his financial favor as well as powerful political connections. This alliance would be further sealed with General Pompey’s marriage to Caesar’s only daughter, Julia. Becoming known as the first “Triumvirate,” this political alliance would last until 54 BCE.
"With this political power structure in place, one of Caesar’s first actions as consul was to order the redistribution of lands to the poor. Although this managed to skyrocket Caesar’s popularity with the common people of Rome, it sparked animosity among many of the wealthy, land owning Senators who had the most to lose in the motion. As a result, the Senate attempted to block Caesar’s legislation, but with the help of his triumvirate and the general support of the Romans, Caesar was able to thwart their will and for the most part ignore the wishes of the Senate."
This, then, was the real cause for his assassination, no matter what pretense maintained.
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"Due to his refusal to conform to Sulla’s will Caesar, was forced to flee Rome in order to seek sanctuary in Sabine Territory in northeast Italy. Here Caesar’s fate would take a turn for the worse as he became sickened with, malaria and was forced to flee from one safe house to the next while his condition continued to deteriorate. In this desperate state, he was eventually captured by a contingent of Sulla’s troops, who he ended up bribing with 12,000 silver denarii to let him go."
That ought to read
"Due to his refusal to conform to Sulla’s will, Caesar was forced to flee Rome in order to seek sanctuary in Sabine Territory in northeast Italy. Here Caesar’s fate would take a turn for the worse, as he became sickened with malaria, and was forced to flee from one safe house to the next, while his condition continued to deteriorate. In this desperate state, he was eventually captured by a contingent of Sulla’s troops, who he ended up bribing with 12,000 silver denarii to let him go."
This author seems incapable of comprehending punctuation.
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