Lindsay Buroker's "Last Command (Fallen Empire, #0.5)" is, like her "Starfall Station" written from Leonidas' point of view instead of Alisa's. And, just like that other short story, this one fleshes out Leonidas a bit more. On the plus side, since Alisa isn't present in this story (it happens before they meet), the sexual comments and innuendo are not present here. On the negative side, almost every person in the story has Alisa's personality and spews forth a constant stream of irreverent patter. And, since this story revolves around the military and near-constant fear of physical death, that patter is entirely out of place. Buroker's portrayal of a Major's behavior towards a Colonel are also ridiculously wrong. So, I'm rating this story at a Pretty Bad 2 stars out of 5.