This is an OK Western romance novella, with a mostly likable couple -- but there was way too much repetition of Pete and Josephine's concerns that they were too old to marry and adopt four children. They both went over that in their heads so many times, and it got really old.
I liked both Pete and Josephine, and liked that they were an older couple -- but they just took too long to get their heads on straight and realize that they weren't too old to marry and adopt children.
The drama with the Chance children at the end seemed a little contrived. How likely is it that the only place that was willing to take in the kids just happened to be a place that sold kids into slavery? And how likely is it that the sheriff would have had no idea that was going on in his town? Saving the kids also seemed a little too easy to believe.
There was one other issue, and this is minor, but it is a pet peeve of mine – the cover of a book should match the description of the characters in the book. Josephine is supposed to be 40, with some gray in her hair and a few facial wrinkles. But the woman on the cover looks to be in her early twenties, with no gray in her hair and no wrinkles at all. This may not be the author’s fault, but it still bugs me.
My rating system is below.
1 star -- Hated it, or did not finish. I usually only give this rating if some of the content is truly objectionable to me, like if one of the main characters does something really awful, and gets away with it.
2 stars -- Didn't like it. This rating usually means that I thought the writing wasn't very good, the editing was terrible, I didn't like the characters, or it had other major flaws.
3 stars -- I liked it, but had some minor issues with it. This rating means that there were minor editing issues, the story needed more character development, it was just too unrealistic, or had some other fairly minor issue. The majority of books I read get this rating – I do not consider it a bad rating.
4 stars -- I liked it a lot. This is a high rating for me, and I rarely give a higher one.
5 stars -- I loved it, and will probably read it again. Very few books are good enough to get this rating from me. The ones that do are usually classics.