" I was given this 'trilogy' set by a friend - can't remember why - doesn't matter... I have to start this review by saying, I have read other novels by this author and enjoyed them [I think I even gave them 4 stars] so I was looking forward to reading this set. As soon as I began the first one I had to look up where it fit in her chronology of writing...yep...it was her first book. That being said, over the past few years I have read a number of 'first novels' by new authors and loved them. Not so much with this set. Least you wonder why I kept reading, I had to see if they got better and where the story was going to go. Oh well, it's making the book I'm currently reading much more enjoyable.
Things I liked:
1- Clean language and story. It's an LDS author writing an LDS story.
2- Characters were described well [I did get tired of Jean-Marc's "green-brown eyes". Too much
3- The story line made sense, not skipping around. Sometimes things happened a bit too quickly, while others dragged on some.
Things I didn't like:
1- If you're going to set a story in Paris, France make the characters sound French! The story could have occurred in Anytown, Anystate, USA. The only time I remembered that they were in France was the mention of landmarks, the names used and an occasional use of metric measurements.
2- The syntax used was often very elementary in construction. Other uses were soooo out of place. Here is an example of Simone, whose "..way of speaking clearly showed the accent of the small French village where she had been raised" EX: "Why, I ain't seen ya since ya was about two years old...I ain't good enough fer her no more." Small French village...really?!? But we also get the four year old saying, "Oh,..can you believe it? your're going to stay a few nights with us. Finally I won't be the only girl here."...really?!?
3- I have to think that only members of the LDS faith are going to try to continue reading this set, so why all of the explanations? Also, why not just say that someone is standing in the hallway [at the church]? We don't need an explanation of 'because she's the Primary president she has a closet to store her projects' - not necessary.
4- Ariana was a rebellious teen who did drugs and got pregnant out of wedlock. But she falls apart when her son gets a bit of rebellion in him. I would think she'd understand.
Two worst quotes:
"The summer days slipped away like rats scurrying out of sight behind the garbage bins in the basement parking lot." [umm, it's the second week of June in the story] And, "Jean-Marc nearly leaped into the office, filling it to capacity with his presence, though there was still ample physical space in the room."
I am really glad that this was not my first introduction to Rachel Ann Nunes, because if it had been I don't think I would have read anything else. I am mostly frustrated by the fact that such poor proof-reading is done before books get published - and re-published. I guess if you are not as neurotic of a reader as I am, and want a set to fill the time, you may enjoy this set. I won't be reading it again, but I think I'll look up her latest novel to redeem her.(less) "