I began with warm anticipation this novel loosely ‘based’ on what little is known about Einstein’s first wife, Mileva Einstein, and her relationship with one of the greatest scientists in history. There are a number of novels published in this popular ‘genre’ about the woman behind the famous man, some very good. Marie Benedict’s take on the Einstein story began with promise as the two students, Albert and Mileva, began their friendship, their sharing of a passion for science and mathematics (Mileva’s field), and the blossoming of their love. Einstein came across as delightful and eccentric, and unlike many men of his time, not a man who discriminated against intelligent women; quite the reverse in fact. However, in the novel their apparently equal relationship quickly deteriorated when Albert did not include Mileva’s name on his first important papers, in spite of the ‘fact’ that he and Mileva had worked on them together, and indeed that Mileva had contributed more than Albert. The real facts are that although there has been speculation that she might have contributed something to these papers, the resounding and most parsimonious conclusion is that she did not and could not contribute in any significant way, in the sense that there is little evidence that she had the mind and training to think through concepts as unique as these. This is not to say she wasn’t a highly intelligent woman and mathematician, and that her gifts weren’t put on hold by Einstein’s rise to the top, and the beliefs of the day that a woman’s place is in the home, especially once children are born. That is almost certainly true. However there are few people of either sex who could hold a candle to Einstein’s intellectual achievements. So even although this is a novel, I think it strays too far in this respect. The innocemt reader will definitely get the impression that Mileva was robbed of her right as an author on these papers (and of the Novbel prize later). Albert Einstein is far too giant a figure to sacrifice in this way, even in fiction.
However, this is not as serious a speculation as the depiction of Einstein’s treatment of Mileva, as the years went by and he became more famous and she withdrew into the world of motherhood and looking after the home and Einstein. Albert’s increasingly humiliating treatment of Mileva is shocking, and a reader who forgets that this is fiction would be hard put not to revise any positive or even neutral views they previously had of the man who, along with Darwin, is probably the best known scientist the world has ever known. As far as I know there is no evidence for this dark change in Einstein’s personality and treatment of his wife. Indeed it doesn’t fit with what we do know of Einstein from writings of his friends and so on. Of course it could be true, or partly true; we will never know. Certainly there are plenty of instances of powerful men treating their wives badly in private and yet outside the marriage everyone thinks he is wonderful. It is a fact that Einstein had an affair with his cousin and later married her. It is also a fact that he signed a divorce agreement giving all of the prize money of his forthcoming Nobel Prize to Mileva to support her and their two sons (whom he continued to love and spend time with). Neither of these facts suggest the extreme behaviour he displayed towards Mileva in this fictional portrayal. Again my issue is that Einstein is not a fictional character, and to denigrate him like this, even in fiction, is going too far.
The author in her notes at the back does make clear that the facts at her disposal are largely the places the couple lived and Einstein worked, and when, rather than anything more personal. Perhaps the author’s notes should be at the beginning and not the end, so the reader goes into the story knowing this really is Fiction with a very large ‘F’.
The writing was straight forward enough, but did little to make the characters, especially the older Mileva (and certainly not the older Albert!), likeable. Not once did I feel the sting of unshed rears, even in scenes made for an emotional response from the reader. Intellectual responses—anger at Einstein’s behaviour for example, or annoyance at Mileva’s strange decisions, yes, but not empathy for the characters. Although as a fictional story it began with promise, it dragged in the middle and the ending was simply a fizzling out. This was a story that cried out for skillful writing about science, given that Mileva was apparently a woman who was passionate about it. Benedict’s theme was clearly first about Mileva’s disastrous relationship with a powerful man, but no woman with her apparent knowledge of science (a woman who in this novel believed she should be a co-author of Nobel-prize-winning ideas!) would think (or not thnk) about science in the way portrayed here. Benedict made an attemot to bring Einstein’s ideas into the story here and there, but it was clumsy, and clearly the writer had little understanding of the concepts she was attempting to summarize. (She admits her lack of science background in her author’s notes, but this perhaps suggests that either she should have co-written the novel with (or have it edited by) a science writer with a good knowledge of Einstein’s work, or that she should have chosen another subject). The novels “Loving Frank” by Nancy Horan, ‘The Aviator’s Wife” by Melanie Benjamin and “The Paris Wife” by Paula McLain seem to me to be excellent examples of novels based on difficult relationships of women with famous men, where each author’s research or knowledge of the intellectual skills or artistry of the male (and the involvement of the partner with ther work) is written in a believable way.
This is not a positive review, and I’m sorry for that. I wouldn’t have written one at all given that I didn’t find it especially engaging, except for the fact that it is as much about Albert Einstein, and indeed who wrote his papers, as about the little known Mileva. I think other readers should be alert to the extensive speculation behind this novel, and understand that there is little if no evidence to support the other side of Albert Einstein as he is portrayed here.
Thank you to Netgalley who provided an advance readers' copy of this novel.