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Rayne Trilogy #1
Luminescence
In the dawn of The Rebirth Period, a new species of humans dominates the Earth. Abhorring the languages of the Ancients—the Homo sapiens—they establish a universal tongue and call it The Standard.
In this coming of age story, Rayne isn’t the average 17 year old. To everyone in her colony, she’s less. In the early hours of their second birthday, the Homo praestans experience the Luminescence and awaken to a mystical ability. But the Luminescence never came to Rayne that night.
Her peers mock her, most of her colony shuns her, her adoptive father is embarrassed by her existence, and her adoptive mother is apathetic towards her at best.
On her 17th birthday, she awakens from a night which she never should have experienced. She is convinced it will change her life for the better. When she confides in her parents, they force her to keep the thing which finally makes her normal a secret in fear of how the governing Board members will react. And when the Luminescence comes to her a second time, her longing to be normal is now a shattered dream.
Desperate to learn why this is happening to her 15 years late, she soon realizes the answers lie beyond her colony, in the capitol. If anyone has the answers, the Board will. But before her chance ever comes, she’s involved in a deadly incident which threatens the life of another. As her world unravels, she becomes even more of an outcast.
Once longing for purpose and belonging in her colony, she’s now desperate to leave the only life she’s ever known in hopes of uncovering the reason for it all, and to discover if there are others out there who are just like her.
In this coming of age story, Rayne isn’t the average 17 year old. To everyone in her colony, she’s less. In the early hours of their second birthday, the Homo praestans experience the Luminescence and awaken to a mystical ability. But the Luminescence never came to Rayne that night.
Her peers mock her, most of her colony shuns her, her adoptive father is embarrassed by her existence, and her adoptive mother is apathetic towards her at best.
On her 17th birthday, she awakens from a night which she never should have experienced. She is convinced it will change her life for the better. When she confides in her parents, they force her to keep the thing which finally makes her normal a secret in fear of how the governing Board members will react. And when the Luminescence comes to her a second time, her longing to be normal is now a shattered dream.
Desperate to learn why this is happening to her 15 years late, she soon realizes the answers lie beyond her colony, in the capitol. If anyone has the answers, the Board will. But before her chance ever comes, she’s involved in a deadly incident which threatens the life of another. As her world unravels, she becomes even more of an outcast.
Once longing for purpose and belonging in her colony, she’s now desperate to leave the only life she’s ever known in hopes of uncovering the reason for it all, and to discover if there are others out there who are just like her.
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First published February 29, 2016
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June 12, 2017
This is the first book in a series and ends in an interesting cliffhanger that I want to read more about in the next installment.
The main character Rayne, is a high school senior who is badly treated by almost everyone for being different. Growing up without feeling loved and supported by her parents, she feels ashamed, unwanted, and later betrayed. So many times during this story I wanted to hug and comfort her. I'm glad Rayne had a few people who believed in her and truly cared about her for who she really is. She deserved far better, if they only gave her a chance.
Despite this cruelty and adversity, Rayne proved to be strong and determined to make her way in this world. I greatly admire her for that. I hope she finds the answers she is looking for, but I have a feeling she will gain so much more.
The main character Rayne, is a high school senior who is badly treated by almost everyone for being different. Growing up without feeling loved and supported by her parents, she feels ashamed, unwanted, and later betrayed. So many times during this story I wanted to hug and comfort her. I'm glad Rayne had a few people who believed in her and truly cared about her for who she really is. She deserved far better, if they only gave her a chance.
Despite this cruelty and adversity, Rayne proved to be strong and determined to make her way in this world. I greatly admire her for that. I hope she finds the answers she is looking for, but I have a feeling she will gain so much more.
September 13, 2020
2.5 stars
I got a free pdf by the author in exchange for an honest review! Thank you!
This was a strange book, there's no other way to put it. It was so unlike anything I've ever read! I'm also still unsure of the genre, it's like a mix of sci-fi and fantasy with some elements of its own. I loved the premise. Unfortunately, I didn't love the book.
It was a bit hard for me to get into the story. The author clearly had a fully developed world in mind, but it was hard for me to understand. Also, the very formal language took some getting used to. A few chapters into the book I felt more comfortable and got excited about where the story might go.
Rayne, our main character (love her name btw!) is not like the other teens in her world and is therefore being bullied by them. I felt with her and her emotions were well portrayed and relatable. The other kids were so cruel at times! I found it hard to establish a connection with any other character than Rayne though...
Luminescence is a pretty slow paced book, and I think that's where the problem I had with it lies. In the beginning, it was interesting, I liked learning about all the abilities. But then the whole thing started to get repetitive - a new morning, a new ability, and Rayne is being bullied some more... not even 200 pages into it I found myself losing interest. That's also why it took me so awfully long to read this! Also I had issues with the language. At first it was a cool touch, but then I found myself annoyed by it.
After a while I was just reading on because I waited for something to happen. Something BIG, like a revelation or whatever. But it wasn't until the last chapters that I got this and even then, things stayed mysterious. Sure, there was some stuff going on in between, but it just wasn't enough. I also failed to see the point of some chapters entirely.
The ending itself was well done and should leave the reader excited for the sequel. Unfortunately, I at this point was already so bored that I just didn't care.
So I'm not saying I hated the book, but it just wasn't for me. I like the premise and that it offered some new and interesting ideas, and also I can see how much thought the author has given it.
I got a free pdf by the author in exchange for an honest review! Thank you!
This was a strange book, there's no other way to put it. It was so unlike anything I've ever read! I'm also still unsure of the genre, it's like a mix of sci-fi and fantasy with some elements of its own. I loved the premise. Unfortunately, I didn't love the book.
It was a bit hard for me to get into the story. The author clearly had a fully developed world in mind, but it was hard for me to understand. Also, the very formal language took some getting used to. A few chapters into the book I felt more comfortable and got excited about where the story might go.
Rayne, our main character (love her name btw!) is not like the other teens in her world and is therefore being bullied by them. I felt with her and her emotions were well portrayed and relatable. The other kids were so cruel at times! I found it hard to establish a connection with any other character than Rayne though...
Luminescence is a pretty slow paced book, and I think that's where the problem I had with it lies. In the beginning, it was interesting, I liked learning about all the abilities. But then the whole thing started to get repetitive - a new morning, a new ability, and Rayne is being bullied some more... not even 200 pages into it I found myself losing interest. That's also why it took me so awfully long to read this! Also I had issues with the language. At first it was a cool touch, but then I found myself annoyed by it.
After a while I was just reading on because I waited for something to happen. Something BIG, like a revelation or whatever. But it wasn't until the last chapters that I got this and even then, things stayed mysterious. Sure, there was some stuff going on in between, but it just wasn't enough. I also failed to see the point of some chapters entirely.
The ending itself was well done and should leave the reader excited for the sequel. Unfortunately, I at this point was already so bored that I just didn't care.
So I'm not saying I hated the book, but it just wasn't for me. I like the premise and that it offered some new and interesting ideas, and also I can see how much thought the author has given it.
February 6, 2016
*I received a copy of the eBook from the author in exchange for an honest review.*
My review is the first one here and it's little terrifying I must admit…
English isn’t my first language, so please excuse any mistakes.
Well, let's see....
In the future, late 22nd century, we have destroyed civilization.
There were World War X and I think that meaning of X isn't a roman number.
I think X stand for -we don't know anymore-
All the natural resources were depleted and the largest animals are extinct.
The surviving people have evolved in new species of humans -Homo praestans-
They have a universal language -The Standard- (previously known as Latin).
They changed physically
Longer arms, bulkier calf muscles, narrower chests because of efficient lungs,…but, ….
mentally changed is more interesting
“In the first hours of their second year of life, Homo praestans experience the Luminescence and awaken to a mystical ability.”
Well, all Homo praestans except our main character.
Some things do not seem to have changed in the future. If you are different you got bully...
She has only one friend. He is three years older than her and artist.
Everybody else ignores or mock her.
Even her (adoptive) parents look her with disappointing.
But do not worry; it seems that our heroine is just a very, very late bloomer.
You know what they say “Better late than never” (In her case 15 years later but, who's counting?)
There are ten abilities:
-Susurrator (animal whispers),
-Floresca (controlling plants),
-Aerisma (controlling air), Aquamarist (water), Terracustos (earth), Ignitor (fire),
-Emovis (read emotions),
-Medicum (heal),
-Providior (harvest and provide food),
-Magnos (have some sort of magic)
….she was only one Unregistered (no abilities) and it seems now she got all of them, improved even. Again, only one with more than one abilities so, she must hide that.
When you're special you're special!!!
She finds out some shocking discovery about people in her life, herself and about the world they live in and then the book ends….
---------------------------THE END------------------------
I wasn't exactly sure what to expect but the story was creative and well told with a pretty good idea.
Although the pacing was a bit slow for my taste its was still an enjoyable read.
There is also a lot of information about everything so you not be confused.
The main character is a seventeen-year-old girl and your see that teenager is a teenager even in the very far future.
Ther is a hint of romance and I think there will be some more in next one.
This book has some lovely elements and there are parts that aren’t as smooth. All in all its a good flowing read and I definitely will read the second book.
…………………………………Especially because this one ends with……………………………..
December 6, 2016
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Publisher: Dreams LLC
Publishing Date: February 2016
ISBN: 9780998010717
Genre: YA Fantasy
Rating: 1.0/5
Publishers Description: In their second year of life, they experience the Luminescence and awaken to a mystical ability. Except one. Her name is Rayne. In a society whose values and manners are as refined as the language they speak, her peers mock her because she has no higher ability. In the early hours of her 17th birthday, she experiences a night which will change this.
Review: “Gosh, I am so fookin’ speshul I shjt diamonds and piss Riesling. I really want to be part of society but they shun and bully me, but now that I am SUPER SPESHUL they can no longer hurt me with words and stuff and things…anywaaay, I not only have one talent like everyone else I have ALL THE TALENTS cuz like I said before, speshulness is a dish best served with hotdogs while at band camp. I like to sniff the only person who likes me and his breath smells like minty farts and he has bulgy muscles and tight pants. Everyone still picks on me, even my adoptive parents cuz see there is no way I am this speshul without a reason and they don’t fit the model, so I must find the truth by flying on giant eagles and shjt while being tormented by kids that should not really give a fuk about me. They must sense my speshully-ness.” The End.
Publisher: Dreams LLC
Publishing Date: February 2016
ISBN: 9780998010717
Genre: YA Fantasy
Rating: 1.0/5
Publishers Description: In their second year of life, they experience the Luminescence and awaken to a mystical ability. Except one. Her name is Rayne. In a society whose values and manners are as refined as the language they speak, her peers mock her because she has no higher ability. In the early hours of her 17th birthday, she experiences a night which will change this.
Review: “Gosh, I am so fookin’ speshul I shjt diamonds and piss Riesling. I really want to be part of society but they shun and bully me, but now that I am SUPER SPESHUL they can no longer hurt me with words and stuff and things…anywaaay, I not only have one talent like everyone else I have ALL THE TALENTS cuz like I said before, speshulness is a dish best served with hotdogs while at band camp. I like to sniff the only person who likes me and his breath smells like minty farts and he has bulgy muscles and tight pants. Everyone still picks on me, even my adoptive parents cuz see there is no way I am this speshul without a reason and they don’t fit the model, so I must find the truth by flying on giant eagles and shjt while being tormented by kids that should not really give a fuk about me. They must sense my speshully-ness.” The End.
January 3, 2017
It is easy to uphold standards of propriety when everyone is the same. It is another thing to prove it when diversity challanges the norm.
There's a new species on Earth, the Homo Praestens. These humans receive abilities in their second year of live. This gifting is called 'Luminescence'. It happens to everyone.
Well, everyone except Rayne. Her Luminescence is late. When she turns 17, she finally experiences it after years of bullying and being frowned upon because she's different. But now, she's still different. She can't share the news of her abilities, not without people once again frowning upon her. To make matters worse, her abilities are not like those of the others...
I don't know about you, but after reading the summary, I was sold. This book is many things at once. It's scifi, fantasy and even some dystopian (three of my favorite genres) and it deals with an issue we still encounter in society: being different.
This book portrayed the struggles of being different in a great way. I really loved the character of Rayne and the way she dealt with life. Rayne is strong, but still struggles to live her everyday life in a society that looks down on her. Needless to say, this was very realistic.
The writing style took some getting used to. Most character in this book speak a form of Latin, which is shown in the way of writing. Some simple words from Latin are used by the characters, but more importantly, the English 'translations' show that Latin is a very proper language. If you've ever read any translations of Latin, then you might understand what I mean. I loved the way the author managed to show this.
Also, the descriptions in this book really pulled me into the world. I could not only see the character's surroundings, but I could feel what she felt and that is a form of art on its own.
As for the plot, it kept me reading. Seriously, I had trouble putting the book down. There were so many questions and by the time I finished the book, I wanted to move on to the sequel.
The story was often unpredictable, which is great because I often find books to be way to predictable (at least, for me. Lol)
So trust me when I say you should pick this up. There was nothing I didn't like about this book, which is rare. I honestly think people could learn from this story as it contains things like being different, bullying etc. Also, the main character is POC, which I highly appreciated.
Thus I recommend this to anyone who likes scifi, fantasy and/or dystopian, is looking for a diverse read and agrees that the summary is awsome :)
There's a new species on Earth, the Homo Praestens. These humans receive abilities in their second year of live. This gifting is called 'Luminescence'. It happens to everyone.
Well, everyone except Rayne. Her Luminescence is late. When she turns 17, she finally experiences it after years of bullying and being frowned upon because she's different. But now, she's still different. She can't share the news of her abilities, not without people once again frowning upon her. To make matters worse, her abilities are not like those of the others...
I don't know about you, but after reading the summary, I was sold. This book is many things at once. It's scifi, fantasy and even some dystopian (three of my favorite genres) and it deals with an issue we still encounter in society: being different.
This book portrayed the struggles of being different in a great way. I really loved the character of Rayne and the way she dealt with life. Rayne is strong, but still struggles to live her everyday life in a society that looks down on her. Needless to say, this was very realistic.
The writing style took some getting used to. Most character in this book speak a form of Latin, which is shown in the way of writing. Some simple words from Latin are used by the characters, but more importantly, the English 'translations' show that Latin is a very proper language. If you've ever read any translations of Latin, then you might understand what I mean. I loved the way the author managed to show this.
Also, the descriptions in this book really pulled me into the world. I could not only see the character's surroundings, but I could feel what she felt and that is a form of art on its own.
As for the plot, it kept me reading. Seriously, I had trouble putting the book down. There were so many questions and by the time I finished the book, I wanted to move on to the sequel.
The story was often unpredictable, which is great because I often find books to be way to predictable (at least, for me. Lol)
So trust me when I say you should pick this up. There was nothing I didn't like about this book, which is rare. I honestly think people could learn from this story as it contains things like being different, bullying etc. Also, the main character is POC, which I highly appreciated.
Thus I recommend this to anyone who likes scifi, fantasy and/or dystopian, is looking for a diverse read and agrees that the summary is awsome :)
June 18, 2018
In a society of advanced beings, Rayne is an oddity, no better than human because her gift didn't materialise as a toddler. What she doesn't realise is, rather than unevolved, she is the next step in evolution.
I received a free copy in exchange for an honest review.
I've been mulling over how to write this review, and how to tip-toe around a certain aspect of the book. But you know what, I'm just going to come straight out with the issue; you know it's been a divisive part of feedback when the author offers her own insight.
Language.
This book will be marmite, you will either love the immersive feeling that is created by a completely structured language for this advance race; or you will struggle with it.
I fell into the latter category.
I'm all for exploring different languages, and it is a pet peeve of mine when Fantasy characters come off sounding like modern-day-American-teenage-girls. In that respect, it was refreshing to read Luminescence.
Their language is based on Latin. I liked where words were completely replaced with Latin variants, or the days of the week replaced with famous scientists etc.
My problem came from the Latin-based syntax that was used to form English sentences. It came off as stilted, and hard work to read. I would have preferred full-on Latin than something that was not quite English.
The scene between Rayne and her peers reminded me of a scene out of Star Trek, where Spock is also harassed by bullies.
The story is written in first person. This meant there was no reprieve from the language. It features heavily in Rayne's narration, as well as the dialogue.
Away from the language, I wasn't really a fan of the main character.
Rayne starts off quite promising. She's considered a dud in her society, because she didn't get her Luminescence (gift) as a child (think squib), so something of an embarrassment. But Rayne doesn't let it get her down. She has come to terms with being lacking; ignores the bullies; and has made peace with the fact her adoptive father has all but rejected her.
As the story progresses, Rayne becomes Special, because she gets her luminescence at fifteen years old. Then she becomes Very Special, because she gets more than one gift, and her gifts are the most powerful anyone has ever seen, ever.
The first two-thirds of the book follow Rayne discovering her powers, and the extent of her powers. Oh, and that she has to keep their sudden manifestation secret, because of Reasons.
There aren't any subplots at this point, or other character arcs, because it's all about Rayne. So I found the pace quite slow.
I also found Rayne quite hypocritical. Now that she has her powers, she doesn't have to lower herself to squabble with her bullies. She is above them, and above the primal drive they have to pull her down. She rises above it all with grace and patience (well, almost completely, if one can forgive a little elemental outburst). But she can't be cool and forgiving with her parents and best friend, Rafe - the people that love her most.
This series isn't for me. A lot of this is down to personal taste, so I'd recommend checking it out and finding out for yourself.
I received a free copy in exchange for an honest review.
I've been mulling over how to write this review, and how to tip-toe around a certain aspect of the book. But you know what, I'm just going to come straight out with the issue; you know it's been a divisive part of feedback when the author offers her own insight.
Language.
This book will be marmite, you will either love the immersive feeling that is created by a completely structured language for this advance race; or you will struggle with it.
I fell into the latter category.
I'm all for exploring different languages, and it is a pet peeve of mine when Fantasy characters come off sounding like modern-day-American-teenage-girls. In that respect, it was refreshing to read Luminescence.
Their language is based on Latin. I liked where words were completely replaced with Latin variants, or the days of the week replaced with famous scientists etc.
My problem came from the Latin-based syntax that was used to form English sentences. It came off as stilted, and hard work to read. I would have preferred full-on Latin than something that was not quite English.
The scene between Rayne and her peers reminded me of a scene out of Star Trek, where Spock is also harassed by bullies.
The story is written in first person. This meant there was no reprieve from the language. It features heavily in Rayne's narration, as well as the dialogue.
Away from the language, I wasn't really a fan of the main character.
Rayne starts off quite promising. She's considered a dud in her society, because she didn't get her Luminescence (gift) as a child (think squib), so something of an embarrassment. But Rayne doesn't let it get her down. She has come to terms with being lacking; ignores the bullies; and has made peace with the fact her adoptive father has all but rejected her.
As the story progresses, Rayne becomes Special, because she gets her luminescence at fifteen years old. Then she becomes Very Special, because she gets more than one gift, and her gifts are the most powerful anyone has ever seen, ever.
The first two-thirds of the book follow Rayne discovering her powers, and the extent of her powers. Oh, and that she has to keep their sudden manifestation secret, because of Reasons.
There aren't any subplots at this point, or other character arcs, because it's all about Rayne. So I found the pace quite slow.
I also found Rayne quite hypocritical. Now that she has her powers, she doesn't have to lower herself to squabble with her bullies. She is above them, and above the primal drive they have to pull her down. She rises above it all with grace and patience (well, almost completely, if one can forgive a little elemental outburst). But she can't be cool and forgiving with her parents and best friend, Rafe - the people that love her most.
This series isn't for me. A lot of this is down to personal taste, so I'd recommend checking it out and finding out for yourself.
May 10, 2018
I received this book from the author in exchange for my honest review
Ok so, omg. I don’t even know where to begin. I absolutely loved this book. The way the characters talked I had to get used to at first but there’s nothing wrong with it. It just sounds so sophisticated like lol. Anyway, the story is about Rayne who up until her 17th birthday had not acquired the luminescence as everyone else had previously. The luminescence is kinda like your own little super power that helps to determine how you’ll contribute to society. Well, on her birthday she acquired her own luminescence and then slowly received all 10, when she should have only gotten one.
I felt for Rayne when she was being bullied and chastised by her own people. I kept hoping her and Rafe would just kiss already cause they both flirted like crazy lol. I also loved how Rayne had an unlikely ally in someone she believed hated her as much as everyone else. This book was just awesome all around. There’s always something going on and it kept me pulled in and wanting more. The author has a fantastic writing style and really makes you feel like you are there. I am starting book 2 tonight as well and can’t wait to find out what happens next. I’m sad that the last book in the trilogy isn’t out yet because that means I’m going to obsess over it until I can read the last and see how it all ends lol.
Seriously people, read this!!!
Ok so, omg. I don’t even know where to begin. I absolutely loved this book. The way the characters talked I had to get used to at first but there’s nothing wrong with it. It just sounds so sophisticated like lol. Anyway, the story is about Rayne who up until her 17th birthday had not acquired the luminescence as everyone else had previously. The luminescence is kinda like your own little super power that helps to determine how you’ll contribute to society. Well, on her birthday she acquired her own luminescence and then slowly received all 10, when she should have only gotten one.
I felt for Rayne when she was being bullied and chastised by her own people. I kept hoping her and Rafe would just kiss already cause they both flirted like crazy lol. I also loved how Rayne had an unlikely ally in someone she believed hated her as much as everyone else. This book was just awesome all around. There’s always something going on and it kept me pulled in and wanting more. The author has a fantastic writing style and really makes you feel like you are there. I am starting book 2 tonight as well and can’t wait to find out what happens next. I’m sad that the last book in the trilogy isn’t out yet because that means I’m going to obsess over it until I can read the last and see how it all ends lol.
Seriously people, read this!!!
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
March 26, 2017
Unexpected amazing read!!!
The title caught my attention. Within minutes of reading I am hooked. The unique language has me transfixed. I love the dialog of genteel speech. The language is beautiful and Nayak and I soon found myself thinking and speaking in similar manner.
The story is engaging and the main character relatable. It only took me two days from start to finish because I could not put it down. I am excited to begin the next in the series, I cannot wait to discover why Rayne has so much happen to her and what of the crazy discovery she makes at the very end of this book.
Screaming applause for this one!
The title caught my attention. Within minutes of reading I am hooked. The unique language has me transfixed. I love the dialog of genteel speech. The language is beautiful and Nayak and I soon found myself thinking and speaking in similar manner.
The story is engaging and the main character relatable. It only took me two days from start to finish because I could not put it down. I am excited to begin the next in the series, I cannot wait to discover why Rayne has so much happen to her and what of the crazy discovery she makes at the very end of this book.
Screaming applause for this one!
February 19, 2016
Enthralling! 4 stars
Luminescence by Quoleena Sbrocca was a great read. She immerses the reader in a unique and creative world that makes the reader curious for more. She has created a really strong cast of characters but I especially loved the lead, Rayne. As she struggles with her supposed shortcomings and rejection by her society, she becomes a character that is both tough and vulnerable, making her a heroine the reader both respects and connects with. The author has created a culture that is formal and reserved and this is reflected in the unique and original dialogue she uses consistently throughout. This, however, is the only draw back for me in a wonderful novel. The formality of the dialogue did at times present itself as stiff and a bit forced. Which made it a little harder to get into the story from the get go. That said, the consistency of the author’s style choice and her wonderful characters quickly overcomes that and after the first couple chapters I couldn’t put it down. The author successfully closes a fascinating story arc while leaving enough unanswered that you can’t wait for the sequel. This story will not disappoint; I definitely recommend it!
Luminescence by Quoleena Sbrocca was a great read. She immerses the reader in a unique and creative world that makes the reader curious for more. She has created a really strong cast of characters but I especially loved the lead, Rayne. As she struggles with her supposed shortcomings and rejection by her society, she becomes a character that is both tough and vulnerable, making her a heroine the reader both respects and connects with. The author has created a culture that is formal and reserved and this is reflected in the unique and original dialogue she uses consistently throughout. This, however, is the only draw back for me in a wonderful novel. The formality of the dialogue did at times present itself as stiff and a bit forced. Which made it a little harder to get into the story from the get go. That said, the consistency of the author’s style choice and her wonderful characters quickly overcomes that and after the first couple chapters I couldn’t put it down. The author successfully closes a fascinating story arc while leaving enough unanswered that you can’t wait for the sequel. This story will not disappoint; I definitely recommend it!
February 8, 2017
Well, this one was a surprise. I have to confess, it started off slow and the way the characters spoke in their latin-based language irritated me a little.
However, irritation quickly became endearing and other-worldly and I became immersed in an interesting and exciting world; I felt that I was right there with Rayne as she discovered the results of receiving the Luminescence so late in life. As the book continued, it got better and better and I found myself caring more. By the end, I was eager to read more and have added the next book to my wishlist.
I have only marked it 4 stars because it took almost a third of the book for me to start to love it; I do wish that the first part made for easier reading but I get that this is hard when you are throwing your readers into a world that is so different from our own.
However, irritation quickly became endearing and other-worldly and I became immersed in an interesting and exciting world; I felt that I was right there with Rayne as she discovered the results of receiving the Luminescence so late in life. As the book continued, it got better and better and I found myself caring more. By the end, I was eager to read more and have added the next book to my wishlist.
I have only marked it 4 stars because it took almost a third of the book for me to start to love it; I do wish that the first part made for easier reading but I get that this is hard when you are throwing your readers into a world that is so different from our own.
February 6, 2021
Reviewed by Sherri Fulmer Moorer for Readers' Favorite 5-Star Review
Rayne: Luminescence (Book One of The Rayne Trilogy) by Quoleena Sbrocca is a wonderful coming-of-age sci fi novel. The future finds mankind has evolved to a higher level of existence, more in tune with the earth that homo sapiens had destroyed through war. The new species, Homo praestans, possesses Luminescence, a mystical ability that tunes them into one of ten heightened senses that define who they are and their place in society. The gift of Luminescence usually happens on a child’s second birthday, but for some reason, Rayne is an anomaly that never experienced it – at least until it was fifteen years too late. As she wakes on the verge of independence from her family, she discovers that Luminescence struck her late and hard, as her gifts explode from her in instances that are astounding and shocking - not just to her, but to all of those around her that have become comfortable with her status as an unregistered “sape.” Rayne experiences both the thrill and alignment that comes with being a late bloomer in a society that values courtesy, structure, and identity through the gifts of Luminescence that have been strictly categorized and defined in their society.
Rayne: Luminescence is a fantastic science fiction novel that gives a glimpse of the future that is more balanced than the popular dystopian views in current best selling novels. I like the hopeful message that mankind can evolve to something higher, if they are willing to tune in to the world around them, and to be true to the essence of who they are and what they can contribute to the world. I also appreciate how well Quoleena Sbrocca handles Rayne’s late maturity in society. She captures the range of Rayne’s emotions perfectly, from the joy of finally being an equal to her peers, to the shock that comes with the realization that late bloomers usually confound those who criticize their slow development when their gifts finally emerge in a manner that is bigger and more powerful than the norm. It’s a wonderful, unique science fiction novel with a surprise ending that demonstrates how people can be better than they are if they are willing to embrace the world as it truly is.
Rayne: Luminescence (Book One of The Rayne Trilogy) by Quoleena Sbrocca is a wonderful coming-of-age sci fi novel. The future finds mankind has evolved to a higher level of existence, more in tune with the earth that homo sapiens had destroyed through war. The new species, Homo praestans, possesses Luminescence, a mystical ability that tunes them into one of ten heightened senses that define who they are and their place in society. The gift of Luminescence usually happens on a child’s second birthday, but for some reason, Rayne is an anomaly that never experienced it – at least until it was fifteen years too late. As she wakes on the verge of independence from her family, she discovers that Luminescence struck her late and hard, as her gifts explode from her in instances that are astounding and shocking - not just to her, but to all of those around her that have become comfortable with her status as an unregistered “sape.” Rayne experiences both the thrill and alignment that comes with being a late bloomer in a society that values courtesy, structure, and identity through the gifts of Luminescence that have been strictly categorized and defined in their society.
Rayne: Luminescence is a fantastic science fiction novel that gives a glimpse of the future that is more balanced than the popular dystopian views in current best selling novels. I like the hopeful message that mankind can evolve to something higher, if they are willing to tune in to the world around them, and to be true to the essence of who they are and what they can contribute to the world. I also appreciate how well Quoleena Sbrocca handles Rayne’s late maturity in society. She captures the range of Rayne’s emotions perfectly, from the joy of finally being an equal to her peers, to the shock that comes with the realization that late bloomers usually confound those who criticize their slow development when their gifts finally emerge in a manner that is bigger and more powerful than the norm. It’s a wonderful, unique science fiction novel with a surprise ending that demonstrates how people can be better than they are if they are willing to embrace the world as it truly is.
March 23, 2017
Even in the future a seemingly "perfect" society makes fun of those who are different.
Rayne, at 17, hasn't experienced her "Luminescence" an event that would give her an extra ability like her mother who helps grow plants or like Sir Theo who is able to move metal magnetically. As result she is ignored or verbally torn down by peers who feel superior.
When Rayne inexplicably comes into her powers three weeks before she reaches adulthood her parents ask her to keep it a secret, leading Rayne to question everything she's known while feeling even more lost within the society she has grown up in.
Latin is blended into the story very well. Explanations and descriptions flow smoothly without breaking the readers concentration. The only thing that popped out to bug me was the constant use of the descriptive term "bunched lips", does no one simply purse their lips in the future?
Rayne, at 17, hasn't experienced her "Luminescence" an event that would give her an extra ability like her mother who helps grow plants or like Sir Theo who is able to move metal magnetically. As result she is ignored or verbally torn down by peers who feel superior.
When Rayne inexplicably comes into her powers three weeks before she reaches adulthood her parents ask her to keep it a secret, leading Rayne to question everything she's known while feeling even more lost within the society she has grown up in.
Latin is blended into the story very well. Explanations and descriptions flow smoothly without breaking the readers concentration. The only thing that popped out to bug me was the constant use of the descriptive term "bunched lips", does no one simply purse their lips in the future?
November 6, 2018
Awful awful awful. I rarely write bad reviews, but reading this made me think the author hasn't even got a basic grasp on what is required to write an essay, let alone a novel. I strongly urge you to look elsewhere.
July 8, 2017
3.5 stars
June 8, 2016
I received a copy of this book in exchange for review.
I'm just thrilled with this book! I waffled between 4 or 5 stars, but ultimately decided 4 stars was too few to properly express how much I enjoyed this book--so 5 stars, it is! I'd say the only thing I wasn't IN LOVE with was the cover; I felt it a bit too amateur-ish for such a great book. Also, it did nothing to show what the book would ultimately be about.
That said, the book itself was great. The writing style (dialogue, specifically) took a bit of adjusting for me, but once I was used to it, I was fine with it and completely understood the necessity of such rigid dialogue. It fit with the fact that these people were a different--more advanced--species. Homo praestans, not homo sapiens.
I really enjoyed the plot. Although, I had hoped we would learn a bit more about what's going on with Rayne and how it would be "used" by others. We didn't really learn anything about what will happen in the future until the last 5% of the book, and even then, it wasn't much. I had hoped to learn more about the Capitolium. Although, the bit with the imaginary surface in the sky definitely has me intrigued! Without getting too much into it and having to tag my sentence as a spoiler, I had wondered a bit about "ancient" Earth (our current time). I'm glad we got a little teaser there.
I liked Rayne a lot. She was strong, but not unbelievably so. She was vulnerable, but not pathetic. She was special, but still ostracized. The author wrote her in a way that didn't make us want to kill her or roll our eyes every other page. I found Rafe to be quite boring, so that was a bit of a disappointment. I was actually most interested in Jhonis and had hoped to see a bit of character growth there.
In any case, I enjoyed this book quite a lot and am glad I got the chance to read it. I'll definitely be checking out book 2!
I'm just thrilled with this book! I waffled between 4 or 5 stars, but ultimately decided 4 stars was too few to properly express how much I enjoyed this book--so 5 stars, it is! I'd say the only thing I wasn't IN LOVE with was the cover; I felt it a bit too amateur-ish for such a great book. Also, it did nothing to show what the book would ultimately be about.
That said, the book itself was great. The writing style (dialogue, specifically) took a bit of adjusting for me, but once I was used to it, I was fine with it and completely understood the necessity of such rigid dialogue. It fit with the fact that these people were a different--more advanced--species. Homo praestans, not homo sapiens.
I really enjoyed the plot. Although, I had hoped we would learn a bit more about what's going on with Rayne and how it would be "used" by others. We didn't really learn anything about what will happen in the future until the last 5% of the book, and even then, it wasn't much. I had hoped to learn more about the Capitolium. Although, the bit with the imaginary surface in the sky definitely has me intrigued! Without getting too much into it and having to tag my sentence as a spoiler, I had wondered a bit about "ancient" Earth (our current time). I'm glad we got a little teaser there.
I liked Rayne a lot. She was strong, but not unbelievably so. She was vulnerable, but not pathetic. She was special, but still ostracized. The author wrote her in a way that didn't make us want to kill her or roll our eyes every other page. I found Rafe to be quite boring, so that was a bit of a disappointment. I was actually most interested in Jhonis and had hoped to see a bit of character growth there.
In any case, I enjoyed this book quite a lot and am glad I got the chance to read it. I'll definitely be checking out book 2!
February 25, 2016
I received a copy of the book from Quoleena for an honest review.
I must add, that the 'honest' part was needless as I simply loved this book. :)
The book is about a week of Rayne and her struggles with the problem she faces:
Coming of age: She's just a few days from becoming officially an adult and this transition tends to have problems that do not need too much explanation. Still connection and dependence on parents. Yet getting independent and about to bear all responsibilities.
Cast out: Because of the lack of an ability she is a cast out in her settlement and daily mocked. Considered a lower level of existence.
Abilities: She suddenly receives an ability. Something that has never happened before. Yet she is forced to keep it in secret and bear humiliating, degrading remarks. Then she gets a new one and a new one...
She also faces the insecurities women tend to have and sometimes makes mistakes by them. Bear in silence or lash out without ascertaining.
The book has an unusual first person view style and language that at first may seem peculiar, but soon it becomes one of its main strengths. The language means a lot and not just a stylistic choice. It describes the society Rayne lives in.
I don't intend to write more about the story. Not just to avoid spoilers, but because the main point is living the moments within.
This was unquestionably a five star experience for me. Quoleena did a great job and earned herself a place on my bookshelf.
I would mostly recommend this book to:
- Young women and those who remember how it felt.
- To men who can or want to understand what goes on inside those heads :)
I must add, that the 'honest' part was needless as I simply loved this book. :)
The book is about a week of Rayne and her struggles with the problem she faces:
Coming of age: She's just a few days from becoming officially an adult and this transition tends to have problems that do not need too much explanation. Still connection and dependence on parents. Yet getting independent and about to bear all responsibilities.
Cast out: Because of the lack of an ability she is a cast out in her settlement and daily mocked. Considered a lower level of existence.
Abilities: She suddenly receives an ability. Something that has never happened before. Yet she is forced to keep it in secret and bear humiliating, degrading remarks. Then she gets a new one and a new one...
She also faces the insecurities women tend to have and sometimes makes mistakes by them. Bear in silence or lash out without ascertaining.
The book has an unusual first person view style and language that at first may seem peculiar, but soon it becomes one of its main strengths. The language means a lot and not just a stylistic choice. It describes the society Rayne lives in.
I don't intend to write more about the story. Not just to avoid spoilers, but because the main point is living the moments within.
This was unquestionably a five star experience for me. Quoleena did a great job and earned herself a place on my bookshelf.
I would mostly recommend this book to:
- Young women and those who remember how it felt.
- To men who can or want to understand what goes on inside those heads :)
March 20, 2016
Rayne is adopted, worse than that she is a disappointment to her parents and mocked by her peers. Living as she does in the dawn of The Rebirth Period, she should have gained a talent in the first hours of her second year. But she didn’t. She can’t talk to animals or strengthen the growth of plants or heal other humans like everyone else. She has only one friend, Rafe, who is three years her senior.
Then, in the early hours of her 17th birthday, she gains her talent. Something unheard of. Rafe and her parents both counsel her against telling anyone. Then the next day she gains another talent, something else that has never happened, and her world spirals out of control.
Quoleena Sbrocca is an excellent world builder. The reborn planet she describes is vivid and beautiful. The plot has some great twists and develops well and the characters feel authentic. I really liked the authors use of formality in the way they spoke but it did slow the flow a little and some might find it a little annoying.
I read this just after I read The Red Queen by Victoria Aveyard, a book with a huge amount of publicity that seems like it’s the next big thing in the YA market. This book is definitely it’s equal, sadly, as it’s by an independent author it might easily sink without a trace.
But you can help, order it (it’s only 99p on kindle) read it, and if you like it share it with other people.
NB This review appeared first on The BookEaters Blog -http://www.thebookeaters.co.uk/rayne-...
Then, in the early hours of her 17th birthday, she gains her talent. Something unheard of. Rafe and her parents both counsel her against telling anyone. Then the next day she gains another talent, something else that has never happened, and her world spirals out of control.
Quoleena Sbrocca is an excellent world builder. The reborn planet she describes is vivid and beautiful. The plot has some great twists and develops well and the characters feel authentic. I really liked the authors use of formality in the way they spoke but it did slow the flow a little and some might find it a little annoying.
I read this just after I read The Red Queen by Victoria Aveyard, a book with a huge amount of publicity that seems like it’s the next big thing in the YA market. This book is definitely it’s equal, sadly, as it’s by an independent author it might easily sink without a trace.
But you can help, order it (it’s only 99p on kindle) read it, and if you like it share it with other people.
NB This review appeared first on The BookEaters Blog -http://www.thebookeaters.co.uk/rayne-...
February 29, 2016
Even in an advanced society where humanity has evolved, misfits are still viewed with animosity. Although Rayne is born into what seems a more sophisticated age, she is still an outcast because she is unlike her peers. Never having received the Luminescence, a childhood exerience that leaves each person with a unique talent, like the ability to talk to animals or flourish plants, Rayne seems more like humanity's less evolved predecessors. While the society seems to have found more gentle ways to survive on Earth, their relations with one another are far from perfect.
It's a good start to a promising series. I enjoyed the vivid imagery and the unique setting. Rayne is a strong character and readers will watch her grow as a person, becoming more comfortable with who she is and finding friends in unlikely places.
The plot was interesting as well. Rayne's life is an uphill climb. In this book, she seems to be taking things as they come. First, the abuse of others and then the flow of unique gifts. She tolerates her position, rarely taking action to change it. However, as the novel comes to a close, Rayne finally seems to work up the courage to change her situation, leading to an action that changes her life. I look forward to reading the next book!
It's a good start to a promising series. I enjoyed the vivid imagery and the unique setting. Rayne is a strong character and readers will watch her grow as a person, becoming more comfortable with who she is and finding friends in unlikely places.
The plot was interesting as well. Rayne's life is an uphill climb. In this book, she seems to be taking things as they come. First, the abuse of others and then the flow of unique gifts. She tolerates her position, rarely taking action to change it. However, as the novel comes to a close, Rayne finally seems to work up the courage to change her situation, leading to an action that changes her life. I look forward to reading the next book!
January 10, 2017
I got this book through NetGalley for my honest review. Thanks!
I have to say, for the first 10% or so of this book I wasn't sure I would be able to finish it. The overly formal writing style, Latin words strewn in to be more 'civilized,' and strange pacing were ruining it for me. But as the book moved on, I became more drawn into the world. Although some plot twists were predictable, Rayne is a compelling heroine who just wants to roll around on the forest floor with wolves, and how can you not love that? Add the cliffhanger at the end and I just can't wait to read the next one.
I have to say, for the first 10% or so of this book I wasn't sure I would be able to finish it. The overly formal writing style, Latin words strewn in to be more 'civilized,' and strange pacing were ruining it for me. But as the book moved on, I became more drawn into the world. Although some plot twists were predictable, Rayne is a compelling heroine who just wants to roll around on the forest floor with wolves, and how can you not love that? Add the cliffhanger at the end and I just can't wait to read the next one.
March 27, 2016
What a unique and interesting world this author has created in this book. I was captured from the beginning. The characters were engaging and strong. I felt a connection with Rayne. I think this would be a great book for a teen as well. * I received this book from the author in exchange for an honest review*
December 30, 2016
I won this as a good reads giveaway
I really enjoyed the world built by this book and the main character - fierce but also kind of a bratty teenager. The world concept is intriguing.
My only complaint is that this book felt like an intro. Rayne discovers all her powers, sets her mind on a mission and them TBC.
I have added book two to my list. I'm really curious about what Rayne does next.
I really enjoyed the world built by this book and the main character - fierce but also kind of a bratty teenager. The world concept is intriguing.
My only complaint is that this book felt like an intro. Rayne discovers all her powers, sets her mind on a mission and them TBC.
I have added book two to my list. I'm really curious about what Rayne does next.
June 25, 2016
We are proud to announce that RAYNE: LUMINESCENE by Quoleena Sbrocca is a B.R.A.G. Medallion Honoree. This tells a reader that this book is well worth their time and money!
June 22, 2016
I really like reading erotica and I must translate this book to enter what it says it all
June 12, 2018
I recieved this book for free in exchange for an honest review. The book is a mix of sci-fi/ fantasy /dystopian novel. Its rather slow paced, and the author obviously wanted to build a new deep and interesting world. The language used is deep elaborate and helps to build the idea of a different more advanced world, however this leads to a weird formal narrative that requires a little getting used to.
The main protagonist is your typical dystopian underdog who just so happens to be super special despite everyone bringing them down. Rayne is very relatable especially to young adults.
The books is obviously part of something bigger in the authors eyes however i felt like not enough happened in this book to keep all readers interested. Alot felt like filler and altho it left with a cliff hanger i don't feel like i have to pick up the rest of the series. It has real potential.
The main protagonist is your typical dystopian underdog who just so happens to be super special despite everyone bringing them down. Rayne is very relatable especially to young adults.
The books is obviously part of something bigger in the authors eyes however i felt like not enough happened in this book to keep all readers interested. Alot felt like filler and altho it left with a cliff hanger i don't feel like i have to pick up the rest of the series. It has real potential.
July 15, 2018
this was a great read, well thought out. I enjoyed it very much
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