Together

by Rhianne Aile, Madeleine Urban

Soccer star Geoff Carey is suffering through yet another celebration when best friend and teammate Abe Dillard arrives. Intent on spending time with Geoff while he can, in fleeing the party Abe finds the opportunity he’s been yearning for: a chance to make Geoff see how good they can be together.

Genres: M M Romance, Short Stories, Contemporary, Sports

14 pages, Kindle Edition

Published June 12, 2016

About the author

Rhianne Aile has an unhealthy relationship with her computer, iced tea, and chocolate. Growing up, she split her time between Oklahoma and Chicago, making her equally fond of horses, skyscrapers, cowboys, and men in well-tailored suits. Facilitating retreats for women and authors keeps her traveling enough to stay happy.

Reviews

[Agla]

No rating because this is so short (200 kindle locations or around 10 pages) but it was nice. It is a couple of friends transitioning to more one night. It's sweet and hot but not much plot.

[Ami · Rating 3 out of 5]

A so-so short story with a theme of two best friends falling in love. Why so-so? BECAUSE IT'S SO DARN SHORT :(. It's not fulfilling enough for me.

[Dolorianne · Rating 4 out of 5]

Roughly the size of a chapter, this short has a complete beginning, middle, and end, with enough background to transform a sex scene into a romance. And while I would welcome an expansion of their story, I didn't feel like the authors left anything out. It highlights the exact moment when 1 friend acts on impulse and the other finds the words to finally say what he's always wanted.

A nice read for those who love the anticipation and follow through of that very first kiss.

[Stephanie · Rating 2 out of 5]

Honestly? Not good. It was an ok read.