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Herringford and Watts Mysteries #3

The White Feather Murders

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Uncommon Heroes...or Unsuspecting Victims?

Toronto, 1914. Merinda Herringford and Jem Watts never could have imagined their crime-solving skills would set them up as emblems of female empowerment in a city preparing to enter World War I at the behest of Great Britain. Yet, despite their popularity, the lady detectives can't avoid the unrest infiltrating every level of society.

A war measure adopted by Mayor Montague puts a target on Jem and her Italian husband, Ray DeLuca. Meanwhile, deep-rooted corruption in the police force causes their friend, Constable Jasper Forth, to wonder if his thirst for upholding the law would be best quenched elsewhere.

In spite of these distractions, Merinda, Ray, and Jasper join with other honorable and courageous city leaders in the Cartier Club, which exists to provide newly arrived residents of Toronto with a seamless integration in the city.

When a club member turns up dead, bearing a slanderous white feather, will Merinda, Jem, and those they hold dear be able to solve the high-stakes mystery before they're all picked off, one by one?

224 pages, Paperback

First published April 1, 2017

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Rachel McMillan

26 books1,170 followers
Rachel McMillan is the author of over 20 novels including the bestselling The London Restoration and The Mozart Code and the upcoming Operation Scarlet. She has also co-written The Liberty Scarf and The Castle Keepers with Aimie K Runyan and J'nell Ciesielski. Her works of non-fiction include Dream, Plan and Go: A Travel Guide for Independent Adventure and the upcoming: An Aim at Eternity: The Life of Christopher Wren. Rachel lives in Toronto where she works as a literary agent and is always planning her next trip to Vienna.

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Author 20 books4,412 followers
April 6, 2024
3- stars to Rachel McMillan's The White Feather Murders, her third historical cozy in the "Herringford and Watts" mystery series. This book was a tough one for me to review as I had a hard time staying focused, but I did like the story-line. Something about it said "keep trying" but ultimately, in the end, I wasn't too keen on it.



Why This Book?
After joining NetGalley last month, I looked for books I could read immediately through automatic requests, as I needed to increase my review % and receive newer releases I wanted to read. When I saw the description of this book, and the cover, I thought it would be a good new series to read, even though I usually start with Book 1. It landed in my queue and I read it over the last few days.

Story
The book (and I assume the series) takes place in the early 20th century in Toronto, Canada, just prior to England entering World War 1. There is a lot of tension in the air over whether immigrants from Germany and Italy are truly becoming Canadian citizens, or if they are secretly helping their home countries back in Europe. (Sounds familiar, eh?) Everyone was suspected of being an alien enemy!



Merinda Herringford and Jem Watts DeLuca are "lady detectives" who have become popular for solving crimes in the last few years, and they are called in by Miss Mueller, a German-Canadian woman, who fears for her brother's life. He's being beaten and harassed because he is German, even though he supports England and Canada in the war. The local police and the Mayor tolerate Merinda and Jem's investigations, probably more than expected for the time period when women were foolishly not allowed to do much except mind the home and children; however, the corrupt Mayor really thinks both are frustrating and troublesome.

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Suddenly, several men they know are found dead with a white feather strewn across their bodies. And then the German boy they were investigating is found dead with the same type of feather. But it's when a car rams into Merinda and Jem that they realize someone is after them. Their families try to get the ladies to stop investigating, but the women are determined to solve the crime. And in the end, they do. But the path along the way is dangerous and misleading, especially when corruption lurks behind every stone they turn over.



Strengths
The story feels real and the setting is clear. You feel a connection because this happened, even if you don't hail from Canada.

It's good to see two female leads, especially in historical fiction. Their actions feel accurately depicted.



The book has several small story arcs supporting the main investigation, which helps create a more robust world to read about.

Why I Struggled
There were too many characters who weren't properly described or given enough distinction. I often felt confused as to who was on which side, finding myself skimming a few pages now and again to get to the end.

I never connected with the characters. The book felt too plot-driven with little focus on likability for the plight other than knowing it was unfair. I wanted the underdogs to win because that's just who I am, but it wasn't the writing that drove me to that conclusions.

I had high hopes but it felt too flat. I would have liked to see more drawn out scenes to help me understand why certain things happened. It was as if in the matter of one page, a body was found, they decided who did it and moved on.



I still don't understand the end and how the killer just gave up. I won't give away spoilers, but it must have been an old-fashioned villain's way of doing things. Not what I expected!



Final Thoughts
Overall, the book had some good parts, and I wanted to like it more. I don't think I'll go back and read the rest of the books, but I might check out reviews on each of them, and this one, to see what I am missing. I admit I read more quickly than usual, and didn't stay invested in it like I normally do. It may have been my fault that I didn't like it that much.



On a side note, I watched the "Julie Bowen" episode of "Who Do You Think You Are" this week... as I love my genealogy. And she was researching two ancestors; one from Civil War days and one for WW1 where her great grandfather ran the national office of the American Protective League where they registered "alien enemies." Reading about it in a book (in Canada) and watching it on TV (in America) happening at the same time nearly a century ago... made me think... we never learn our lessons, do we?

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Author 26 books1,170 followers
March 29, 2017
There is not enough Ray DeLuca in this book. (is there ever enough Ray DeLuca in a book?) There is a TON of Jasper Forth but really not enough Ray DeLuca. Two stars docked for lack of Ray.
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746 reviews95 followers
April 6, 2017
Hang onto your bowler hat, the intrepid pair of Herringford and Watts (Deluca) are at it again! Toronto in 1914 at the brink of war adds an extra layer of tension to the continuing corruption in the city, ramping up fear and prejudice against anyone with a foreign accent. Add a few murders on top, and the team of detectives, along with their favorite policeman and journalist, find themselves in the thick of it all, sometimes as targets.

Another fast and furious adventure in this fun series, which has been a delight to follow! An added addition of a new little Deluca made for more conflict between Jemima and Ray, who are trying to find a balance between career and responsibilities at home, a relevant struggle for many today too. The theme of reconciliation was prevalent between many characters, some set up for tender moments, and others ending bittersweet. The prejudice issues hit a spot sadly true still today. There is a glimpse of hope though through some coming together in the cosmopolitan community and compassion shown in key moments. A few points of faith added a little inspiration too. The author adds that a verse from Proverbs 31 is a basis for her stories: "Speak up for those who cannot speak for themselves, for the rights of all who are destitute."

Recommend reading this series in order, or at least the first one, A Bachelor Girl's Guide to Murder, to get a better feel for the duo's dynamics. You will be hooked and want to read them all after that, including the novellas, to not miss any of their adventures. Hoping there will be more! 4.5 stars

(Book provided by NetGalley and the publisher. All opinions are my own.)
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405 reviews86 followers
September 19, 2017
Merinda Herringford and Jemima Watts have stumbled upon another mystery in their beloved Toronto, this time involving a murderer who leaves behind a white feather at the scene of each crime. Things take a dangerous turn for Jem and Merinda when they become the next target in the search for the culprit.

It wasn't quite as witty as the first book, but it had the same charm and suspense. It felt really authentic to the time and the author gave proper attention to some of the city’s issues, including corruption in politics, racial prejudice, etc., (which sadly mirrors today).

This was a great conclusion to a wonderful series! So sad that this is the last Herringford and Watts mystery!
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Author 67 books1,901 followers
June 4, 2017
This book is another multi-layered mystery with fun overtones of Sherlock Holmes. It's fascinating to see what Toronto was like as World War I was starting. The racial issues unfortunately parallel so much of what we see in our world today. I love Jem and Merinda and am sad this is their last adventure, but what an adventure. One worth enjoying every last word.
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2,321 reviews675 followers
September 2, 2017
This series has gotten lighter on humor since book one. While I loved the humor in book one, there were still a few laughs in the second two novels of the series.

In book three, Canada is about to enter WWI and there is not much sentiment for Germans or Italians. Jem and Merinda work to solve a string of murders.

This is an enjoyable series and a rare historical mystery.
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5,171 reviews3,156 followers
September 1, 2020
Bravo to McMillan for creating such real, well-defined characters, and for staying true to their depiction throughout. In this third and final Herringford and Watts mystery, Merinda and Jem are back, and both have emotional struggles and decisions to make in the midst of mystery solving. Some readers may be disappointed with the ending, but those who have been with the series from the beginning will applaud the author for her unconventional yet satisfying conclusion. Although this story is set in 1914, the events so closely mirror situations occurring today that readers will have their eyes opened to the timelessness of many issues.
On the brink of World War I, Toronto is in upheaval. Merinda Herringford and Jemima DeLuca (nee Watts) are now considered role models to women rather than vilified as in the past. Corruption is rampant, and a series of murders featuring a white feather have Jem and Merinda right in the middle of the action. Immigration struggles and distrust of foreigners have put everyone on edge. Jem is debating with herself and with her husband Ray whether she should continue to be involved in such dangerous pursuits now that she is a wife and mother. Merinda is trying to balance her friendship with Jasper with the indication that he is looking for something deeper. When the danger gets closer and closer, can they uncover the identity of the culprit before too many more people are killed
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Author 13 books148 followers
April 8, 2017
Merinda Herringford and Jemima Watts are no longer in the sights of the morality squad. In fact, their success as female detectives has become a symbol of the changing times in Toronto. But a world on the brink of war brings out the worst in some residents.

Rachel McMillan doesn't shy away from difficult subject matter such as unfounded prejudices. In "The White Feather Murders," Jem and Merinda deal with life outside of crime solving as they learn that friends have falling outs, marriages have rough patches, those we love sometimes get hurt, and sometimes, love remains unrequited.

With McMillan's trademark wit, flashes of humor, and a whole lot of mystery, "The White Feather Murders" offers a fitting farewell. The final installment of the Herringford and Watts mysteries is a combination of satisfaction (for the success of these two friends and amateur sleuths) and sadness (for the goodbyes that must be said.)

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I receive complimentary books for review from publishers, publicists, and/or authors, including Netgalley. I am not required to write positive reviews. The opinions I have expressed are my own. I am disclosing this in accordance with the Federal Trade Commission's 16 CFR, Part 255.
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2,380 reviews166 followers
July 25, 2017
"Wonder marvelously; for I will work a work in your days which ye will not believe, though it be told to you." - the prophet Habakkuk in the Old Testament

The two notorious women detectives, Merrinda Herringford and Jemima Watts DeLuca, are having a difficult time believing that Toronto will ever be purged of its illusive "wolves in sheep's clothing"; those in high places who are constantly hunting, preying on unsuspecting innocents, using the cloak of impending war to their full advantage. When a series of murders occur across the city, the villain's "calling card" is a white feather, a symbol of the worst kind of cowardice; a refusal to fight for one's country when it matters the most.

On the home front, Jem is having a terrible time juggling her roles as a wife, mother, and professional sleuth. When her husband's journalism career is jeopardized and Jem's safety is severly compromised, the not-so-newly-weds struggle to rediscover their "center", while Merinda maintains her stubborn reputation as an act-first and think-later kind of business partner.

In her brilliant way of putting together a nearly unsolvable case, while at the same time entertaining her readers with wit and wiles, Rachel McMillan manages to uncover more than a murderer, she virtually solves the mystery of love.
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Author 4 books51 followers
July 3, 2017
I've read all the preceding stories in the series so I came to this with a degree of trepidation and sadness figuring it was the end. Why trepidation? Well, this is the 6th story and it is a challenge for an author to keep their characters vibrant and the storylines sufficiently varied to keep their readers attention as enthusiastic as it was when they first started out on the series. However, it didn't take long for McMillan to ease any concerns I had.

This is the best of the lot and yes, McMillan ends the series with a bang. And if you can only read one of the series then read this one. It reveals an author who has the experience to allow their characters licence to reveal the multiple layers of their personalities. Merinda Herringford, in particular, shines so brightly and frankly dominates this story. For most of the series I was more interested in Jem Watts for her innocence, naivety and playfulness, however, Merinda is a tour de force here.

We see the depth of her 'love' for Jasper. Certainly, it's not of the romantic kind that Jasper so desperately wants but we see a wonderful friendship between a man and woman that has been carved out of mutual respect and admiration for the other. And the care she has for Mouse and of course Jem is revealing of a woman who loves both desperately.

But perhaps it's Merinda's love for her city, Toronto, that affected me the most. Its spirit, heart and soul affect her deeply. It is what drives her to be the best detective she can be. To protect her great city and its residents from the brutes like Montague who seek to control it to his selfish betterment at a time of much change (the commencement of WWI) and development.

Her two male stars Ray DeLuca and Jasper Forth play prominent roles and we see different aspects of their characters. But both men are driven by love and to be the best men they can be. Plus we see some excellent secondary characters including Russell St Clair, Lady Adelaide Pelham and Ethan Talbot.

Oh, yes there is a murder case that too captures the multi-layered essence of McMillan's writing.

Once again McMillan's unique voice had me laughing frequently and my family were fed up with me walking around the house repeating Merinda's oft-spoken encouragement "Cracker Jacks!"

Well done, Rachel McMillan on a tremendous finale and a really excellent unique series. I'm excited to see what she delivers us next.
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713 reviews8 followers
May 25, 2017
This can't be the end of the Herringford and Watts Mysteries. If it is I will be so sad. I completely enjoyed this book. I love Merinda's personality and how she says “Cracker Jacks!” She is a bit more than quirky. Jem is more refined and quiet. Jem is now a wife and mother, yet she still has to be part of the mystery solving team. Her husband Ray, thinks being a wife and mother should be enough for her and they have many arguments about it. In the end he knows she can't give up that part of herself, it is what made him fall in love with her.
The lady detectives have taken a on a job to find out who is roughing up a young man of German descent. The case becomes more difficult when the young man is murdered. The mystery only deepens when more notable men are murdered, all with a white feather left behind. Could the murder of the young man be connected. Corruption regarding munitions for the war is another mystery to be solved.
I couldn't read fast enough to find out how it all turned out. I was very surprised.
These characters are very real to me, their relationships are very real. Problems and all.
There is even a peacock with personality in this story.
The author does a wonderful job of showcasing the city of Toronto as an extra character in the book. A city and it's people on the brink of war.
I highly recommend this book and the entire series.
*I received a copy of this book from the publishers through NetGalley. A review was not required. The opinion expressed is entirely my own.
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May 5, 2019
The world is on the brink of a war. The emotions run high, driven by fear, passions and antagonisms. A young boy is killed. Then several other men, too. Who is the white feather murderer?
On the more domestic front, Ray and Jem are on brink of the serious conflict, too. What is the role of a woman in the changing world? Should Jem be "just" wife and mom, or is her independent strike important, too?

3.5 stars.
The best from the series, yet!

While not a fan of the cozy mysteries, I am a huge fan of the raw emotions and the real conflict. And here we have it at spades: of what is a role of female. How can she stay herself, when the society demands a certain behaviour, a certain mindset? Is she too lax with her duties, when she wants more, when she is made of more than a housewife? Can she allow herself to be more and ask for more, even if her beloved people are afraid of her bravery/lack of fear?
Ah, yes. This is a brave manifesto than God can use different women for the different needs of the world. And than she can be loved for being who she is. Very important and still needed message!

I also like how well are the main characters portrayed here. They are much more realistic compared to the previous installments in this series - they are their own people with their own mindset, emotions, their share of troubles and their strengths. While Merinda stays my favourite character and while the boys need to grow some more true leadership characteristics, I like this foursome.


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843 reviews
September 10, 2017
An enjoyable book and a good conclusion to the series, with a theme of reconciliation. I'm almost glad the culprit was not the person initially suspected. The sense of place was very strong, and one can really see the author's love for her home city and its history, which is great.
Why the lower rating? It was a matter of taste, really because of two things that tend to get on my nerves in historical fiction. The first being protagonists that come over as too modern in attitudes or outlook. This was not always the case with Merinda Herringford and Jemima Watts but is often. I understand that this is meant to be part of the point of the female detective protagonists, but sometimes they don't seem historical at all.

Second, in the author's note, it was mentioned that some of the main events and themes in this story were meant to have modern parallels, and I appreciate that, but at times I felt this was laid on rather thick, to the point that I felt I was being preached at. There was no subtlety or nuance in this aspect, just the assumption that because the hated mayor and authorities are involved, and they are always in the wrong, it must be wrong as well. I don't appreciate that in any book, or movie, so its nothing personal.

Overall, I did like the book, which was well worth the money, and Hamish, Jemima's little son was so adorable. He's going to be getting his own series, which is amazing.
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Author 3 books17 followers
April 16, 2017
The final Herringford & Watts mystery is as humorous as the others as Merinda and Jem once more work to keep Toronto safe.

The author does a good job of making Ray and Jem's marriage realistic--just because they're married with a child doesn't mean they have everything figured out. I don't like to see conflict in marriage, which dimmed my enjoyment a trifle, but to give credit where it's due, their struggle to balance careers and family is portrayed realistically and is still plenty relevant today.

For all the fear-mongering over the impending war, the story is light and entertaining. I don't think it's a shining example of the ladies' detective work, as they have a tendency to jump to conclusions with little support for their theories. I was enjoyed learning who the villain was, but disappointed with the ladies for running after the person without a plan or backup. Not that either was really necessary--once again, the villain gives up the upper hand to run their mouth and Reveal All. Truly clever villains are so few and far between.

Thank you Harvest House and NetGalley for providing a free e-book to review. I was not required to write a positive review, and all opinions are my own.
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322 reviews72 followers
April 13, 2017
I can no longer remember my life before Herringford & Watts! Rachel McMillan continues to deliver stories that are both engaging and exciting. Set at the beginning of The Great War, residents of Toronto see their city turned upside down and inside out in this, the third full length novel of the series.

Cracker Jacks! I adore this series. Full of unique characters, creative words, a beautiful setting, and an original storyline. Herringford & Watts will drag you off of your feet and into their world of mystery, murder, and adventure.

Jasper Forth takes on a much more prominent role in The White Feather Murders and I am so SO glad! Move over Ray there is a new dream boat in town. I have always loved Jasper, but this book just sealed the deal for me. As Jem and Merinda whisk us away on yet another daring adventure, things have definitely changed. Both in their beloved city and in the dynamics of their partnership. It was so good to see all four of our characters work through things together and individually.

I can (and will given the opportunity) go on for an extended length of time about all of the reasons I find this book and series utterly delightful. However, you don't have time for such things, for you must purchase a book (the novellas are FREE) and begin reading IMMEDIATELY! Your heart and your brain will thank you for it. The books themselves are gorgeous! Beautiful silhouettes depicting parts of the story on the cover. Footnotes for the reader. Quotes from books that McMillan has created herself. But above all, LADY DETECTIVES in Toronto, 1914. Until our next adventure from Rachel McMillan comes out, enjoy discovering the five other books/novellas in the series! Jem and Merinda are sure to become some of your closest friends, as they have become to me.

I received a complimentary copy of The White Feather Murders from the publishers (Harvest House) through NetGalley. I was not required to write a positive review. All opinions expressed are mine alone.
467 reviews19 followers
April 19, 2017
L.O.V.E. I just don't have the words to say how much I love this book!! Changes in life are inevitable, but it's how we respond to those changes that reveal exactly who we are. Yes, it can be very scary, but it's all about taking one step at a time. Especially when things don't make any sense at all, that's true strength. But in the end everything will make sense one day, no matter how long the waiting process may take.
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Author 8 books337 followers
June 17, 2017
I'm truly sorry to say goodbye to feisty lady detectives and best friends Merinda Herringford and Jem Watts (DeLuca). Not to mention their dashing fellows, Ray DeLuca and Jasper Forth.

The White Feather Murders follows Merinda and Jem at the start of World War I, amidst the bustling, diverse city of Toronto. The population is on edge about the war and the new government measures targeting certain citizens, one of whom is Jem's charismatic Italian husband, Ray*.

(*Jasper gave Ray a run for his money in this third book. Go Jasper!)

Just like the previous stories in the series, The White Feather Murders focuses on the women as they battle corruption and crime in their beloved city. Genuine emotion and delightful camaraderie is a hallmark of these entertaining historicals.

White Feathers amps up the stakes and mystery (though I had an idea who the murderer was partway through). And the ending tweaks the heart in its authenticity and emotion (particularly with Merinda and Jasper. Sigh.)

The Herringford and Watts Mysteries are witty, fun reads with strong female leads and touches of faith and fascinating history interwoven. The author's love for her characters and this city shines through in the lively dialogue and colorful descriptions.

Bravo to the author for a heart-tugging ending to a wonderfully unique series.
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Author 10 books1,011 followers
April 24, 2017
The Herringford and Watts Mystery series is in my top 5 all time favorite Christian fiction series ever (and that's saying a lot when one realizes how many series there are in the realm of Christian fiction!).

McMillan is talented, hilarious, and has a whole lot of heart. That's evident in her writing of this series (which I could not recommend more). This particular installment is my favorite of the collection. It's refreshing for a series to close on such a lovely and well thought-out novel.

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Author 12 books47 followers
September 10, 2017
In 1914, Great Britain is on the brink of declaring war on Germany. Just like many other citizens of Toronto, Merinda Herringford is sure that Canada will join Great Britain in war. Though she’s usually one to be excited for change, she fears what war will do to her friends and to her city. Tensions run high as Merinda, Jasper, and Ray join the Cartier Club, who’s goal is to help immigrants in Toronto begin their new lives. As Canada awaits their fate, a string of murders occur throughout Toronto. The victims are found with white feathers, a sign of cowardice. Merinda and Jem’s investigations lead them all over the city, from St. John’s Ward for immigrants, to the homes of the city’s elite. As they search for clues, it seems as though they find corruption within the law at every turn. Jasper also sees this corruption from his coworkers at the police station. When a member of the Cartier Club is murdered and Jem and Ray’s town house is vandalized, things become far too personal. Merinda is determined to solve the mystery, even if it costs her life.

This book was tinged in sadness, not only because I have really enjoyed the Herringford and Watts Mysteries and am sad to see it end for now, but also because of the fear and uncertainty that Merinda feels as the war approaches. It was quite emotional at times. Even though it had sad moments, we still got that fast pace that we’re used to, which is one of my favorite things about this series. And, of course, there was humor sprinkled throughout, just like in the other books. One such instance was a scene in which the crew attended a dinner at Pelham Park and one of their peacocks followed Merinda around, which I loved. I can only imagine the feisty detective facing off with a prideful pheasant.

One of my favorite parts of this book was the theme of turning toward a higher power. When things seemed so uncertain and the world was spinning out of control, characters were reminded to look toward the Lord for His help. Throughout this series, I’d been expecting Merinda to eventually give her heart to the Lord. This didn’t officially happen, though her friends reminded her that she needed God. Even so, I have hope that perhaps beyond the Herringford and Watts Mysteries, Merinda came to know how much God loved her.

Amidst the changes that are taking place within this book, there’s a mystery to be solved. I would never have guessed who the white feather murderer was. Having read all the other books in the series, it totally took me by surprise. That’s all I’m going to say about that, because I don’t want to spoil it for anyone.

All in all, while emotional, The White Feather Murders was still a fast paced mystery and offered a good conclusion to a wonderful series.

I give this book 5 out of 5 stars.
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100 reviews1 follower
July 19, 2017
I won this novel from Goodreads Giveaways.

Not having read the first two entries in this series, take any criticisms that follow with a grain of salt as I may have missed something that would have cleared things up for me had I read them. With that out of the way, I have to say, I had a ton of fun reading this. From the great setting of a Toronto on the brink of entering WWI (and all the racism and gender discrimination that that entails), to the Sherlock Holmesian vibe throughout, this was just a fun, comfortable read. Even though I occasionally had the feeling that I'd missed out on some key elements of the characters not having read the earlier installments, I felt right at home most of the time. I think the wonderful little footnotes really helped in that regard and highlighted the little twinkle of humor that's sprinkled throughout the novel as well.

One of the more striking things I found about The White Feather Murders was how much author Rachel McMillan loves her characters and how hard to she works to make you love them, too. From our leads, the lady detective duo of Jem and Merinda, all the way down to our Baker Street Irregulars stand-ins, Kat and Mouse, each character is given a chance to shine.

I think my only real criticism lies with the ratio of plot given over to the domestic issues Jem faces compared to that given to the actual mystery of the white feather murders. Although I don't think any of Jem and Ray's relationship should have been excised as I think it worked well, maybe a couple more chapters with Merinda doing some sleuthing and a chapter here-and-there focusing on Kat's and Mouse's activities would have balanced things out a bit more for me. As this is the concluding entry in the series, I can understand why McMillan made the choices she did to get the characters to a satisfying place when the novel, and series, wrap up.

All-in-all, I found this to be an enjoyable read with a lot of heart and just enough humor. Recommended for anyone who enjoys a good mystery and for Sherlock Holmes fans in particular. Four stars.
Author 32 books657 followers
May 12, 2017
McMillan brings her Herringford and Watts series to a satisfying conclusion with The White Feather Murders. A steady stream of delightful author intrusions brings "the careful reader" back to previous titles, reinforcing the relationships between the characters and their adventures, both crime-centric and relationally riddled. With a firm hand on her characters, McMillan strikes a balance between consistency and growth. We see Jem grow into her role as a wife and a mother, without watching her abandon her talents for sleuthing. Merinda (my personal favorite) is as spunky as ever, true to herself, fiercely loyal to her friendship and the agency she and her best friend built. So, yes, of course there's a mystery, and clues, and pursuits, and danger, and death, and whatnot--but what has always entertained me more in all of the Herringford and Watts titles is the interplay between the pairings in the series. Jem and Merinda, of course, bantering over clues and how best to pursue them; Jem and Ray, searching for the perfect balance trust and sacrifice within their marriage (and, in my only quibble here...not *quite* finding it); Merinda and Jasper--and I can't really talk about that right now. In this title, though, what I found refreshing was the story line that brought Ray (Jem's husband) and Merinda (Jem's best friend) in direct conflict with each other. There's a dynamic not often explored in fiction, and it weaves seamlessly into the story.

Finally, I found this to be my favorite of the series, perhaps because all of the narrative notes throughout, I feel like I came into reading it with some inside information. McMillan doesn't lose an ounce of storytelling steam with this third title. In fact, there's a very real sense of building up to the moments in this story. In the final pages, Jem, Merinda, Ray, and Jasper not only find the culprit, they find themselves. And I sorta find myself wanting the series to go on and on...
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755 reviews108 followers
June 1, 2017
"Cracker Jacks!" - Merinda Herringford (throughout the series)

Who's ready for Herringford & Watts? The dynamic duo of Merinda Herringford and Jem Watts (DeLuca) is at it again in The White Feather Murders, claiming a place for female detectives in early 1900s of Toronto, Canada. As the world decides on the changes due to the eminent of war, our detectives are ready to embrace it with pizzazz and genteel (*cough cough) approach in solving crimes.

Like its predecessors, I really enjoyed this third full installment from Rachel McMillan. The author, with her usual flair of humor and knack for interesting scenarios, gives readers a mystery to solve, romances to love, and a story to feel a part of. I'm especially thrilled with Jasper's prominence in The White Feather Murders. I've been a fan since the debut in The Bachelor Girl's Guide to Murder. His pairing with Merinda is just fun to read about! The banters along with the many "roll our eyes" moment with Merinda's antics are just hilarious! Then there's the "resident" couple, Jem and Ray. Marriage trouble comes into play in this book, giving readers a chance to relate to, as well as a topic that gives depth in this cozy mystery.

"I want to be everything . . . I want to be everything you need me to be. But I also want to be myself. I never want to lose that little jump of feeling I get when we are out on a case . . ." (131)

In all, The White Feather Murders have what readers expect from a good story - characters, plot, romance and a bit of suspense in a mystery that'll keep you entertained till the end. Don't miss this one!


This review first appeared on Just Commonly blog.

Disclaimer: I received a copy of this book from the author/publisher. I was not required to write a positive review, and have not been compensated for this. This is my honest opinion.
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1,341 reviews75 followers
May 28, 2017
I had this book in my queue to read from NetGalley so I, being the orderly OCD reader that I am, actually borrowed the first book of the series (Bachelor Girl's Guide to Murder) from the library and read that book first. It was a decent book but I really didn't connect with Merinda and was somewhat hesitant to start this book. But I did feel a sense of duty to read and review the book that was so generously provided for me so I marched ahead. I didn't read the second book (A Lesson in Love and Murder) prior to reading this third book.

The above disclaimer being said, I enjoyed this book, much more than the first book. This book really focused on the main characters and who they are. It was definitely more emotionally charged and less matter-of-fact. Yes, there was a clever plot and delicious mystery to the story but the unexpected raw emotions written into the storyline brought the book up a notch. It gave more details of the main characters' pasts and built a foundation for why they are who they are. It showed Ray in a different light and gave his voice increased strength and credibility. Jem had less of a role emotionally in this book but I was so heavily involved in Ray, Jasper and Merinda that I didn't notice this little detail until the end. It revealed more of Jasper and his long relationship/friendship with Merinda. It actually, and surprisingly, allowed Merinda to be honest and transparent for her emotions to come across loud and clear. After this book, I understood Merinda better. The backdrop of the beginnings of WWI in the city of Toronto was interesting and heartbreaking at the same time.

The encouragement from the priest and the Scripture used were so appropriate and well-placed in the story.

I received ARC of the book from Harvest Publishers via NetGalley. I was not required to give a favorable review. All comments and opinions are solely my own.
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Author 46 books246 followers
August 6, 2017
It’s 1914 in Toronto, and Canada is on the brink of joining Britain in the great conflict overseas. Amid the rumblings of a world war, lady detective duo Herringford and Watts looks into a series of murders at home that may or may not be related. Perhaps a fight for justice here can help make Toronto a place more worthy of the troops’ return in The White Feather Murders, a novel by author Rachel McMillan.

Having now read my sixth mystery in this series, I can say that it isn’t exactly the mysteries that keep me coming back. I’m no expert on detective stories, but in these books, the mysteries themselves often feel like almost secondary aspects of the plot. There’s so much more going on about history, about immigration, about the need for social reform, about love, about friendship, about the tension between the duty to one’s family and the call of one’s professional passion.

It’s the “so much more” that most pulls me into these books.

Now, I did feel that the story here might’ve been stalling in a place or two, and perhaps rehashing the same kind of conflicts from the novels before it, without putting enough of a new spin on them. As in the other novels, the point of view seemed to float around sometimes, making it a bit challenging to follow. And I’ve never been a huge fan of the scenario where the bad guy does something like tie up the good guy in the end while the bad guy gives a big explanation, telling why and how he’s been the bad guy all along.

Still, the tension, the splashes of humor, the four central characters I enjoy watching, and the threads of poignancy woven into the story (and, gracious, this novel’s heartrending finish!) are all quite enough to leave me in anticipation of more from this series, if there will be more.
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92 reviews1 follower
September 25, 2017
If you love historical fiction, and mysteries where you cannot guess the murderer, you will enjoy Rachel McMillan's Herringford and Watts Mystery series. In this third novel in the series, it is 1914 and Toronto is anxiously waiting to hear whether the British Empire is going to war with Germany. In this tense environment, which gets more tense after war is declared, female detectives Merinda Herringford and Jemima Watts (Mrs. DeLucca) must find out who is terrorizing German immigrants and leaving white feathers at the murder scenes of seemingly unconnected individuals.

Neither of McMillan's detectives fits the mold of an early 20th century female. Jemima, married with a baby son, agonizes over her duties to her family, and her commitment to her detective agency and to her friend Miranda. Miranda furiously rejects marriage because she does not want to lose her independence. At the same time, however, she is strongly conflicted on the subject. In many ways, these conflicts are reminiscent of the roiling internal battles fought by Dorothy Sayers' 1930s' character Harriet Vane in her relationship with Lord Peter Wimsey. McMillan makes the battles just as believable.

McMillan does an excellent job of bringing 1914 Toronto to life as a multilayered budding metropolis, home to wealthy elites, a growing middle class, and a refuge for immigrants fleeing the tyranny and poverty of the old world. My only concern with the novel is its sense of finality. I hope it is not the last book in the Herringford and Watts Mystery series because I want to know what happens to McMillan's well-crafted protagonists as the trenches and fires of World War I change everything.
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399 reviews8 followers
July 7, 2017
I’ve been a bit conflicted on what to write in this review when it comes to this book, The White Feather Murders by Rachel McMillan. I enjoyed the book, but I wonder if I enjoyed it as much as I could have. If you are unfamiliar with this series, Herringford and Watts, they are similar to taking a Sherlock Holmes novel and placing it in Toronto in the early 1900’s. The premise of the series certainly intrigues me and that leads me to my own error.

While I was reading the book, I had a hard time getting drawn in. I think this series expects you to read the first book and then the second, which I unfortunately did not do. So I never really felt introduced to the characters but rather was just dropped into the middle of the story. It made it hard to enjoy at first—and then add in a number of characters and seemingly complex relationships, and well…I wanted to give up on it a few times. But again, I think it was my own fault.

But despite all the problems, I eventually did start to gain a bit more interest in the book. Enough that I have plans to someday go back to the start and try from the beginning. So, if you are looking for some mystery novels that aren’t as heavy on the suspense, this may be a series to check out. But, learn from my mistakes and start at the first one.


**I received a copy of this book in exchange for my honest review. All opinions expressed are my own.**
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733 reviews1 follower
June 5, 2017
The White Feather Murders are an incredible Historical book taking place in the World War - it brings out one of the touchiest subjects we face even today - racism - isn't it a shame - all these years later and we haven't moved an inch. Anywho you have an awesome adventure for the Deluca's and one of the Deluca's has a surprise for you the readers - if you are a follower of the series - it is precious and you will love it. There are murders, racism, and they are on the brink of a World War - how is that for getting your interest peaked - it is one heck of a ride. The most important and impressive part to me is that the author brought CHRIST into the mix and boy does HE shine wherever HE goes - Amen? You are going to love this book and it is worth your time if your ready for a journey of a lifetime. I received a copy from Harvest House. All the opinions are my own.

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170 reviews4 followers
July 1, 2017
Clever resourceful women detectives prove that in a man’s world they are better at solving the clues and cover-up of senseless murders. Merinda and Jemima are such women. Through their sleuthing they uncover corruption in their fair city of Toronto, at the very seat of those who control and govern. At each scene of the murders, Merinda finds a white feather, a symbol of cowardliness. Does this symbol have anything to do with the victims?

The year 1914 brings a change in the lives of everyone Merinda loves; it is the start of World War I. Greed, power, and corruption she finds are behind the murders. Although Merinda and her friends are threatened she is not put off even though it might mean her own life is at stake. She must find the murder before he strikes again.

I think you will enjoy Merinda and Jemima's adventure in sleuthing as much as I have.

I won this book from Goodreads.com.

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315 reviews3 followers
November 25, 2017
This is the first mystery by Rachel McMillan that I've read. I appreciate the historical setting of Toronto at the opening of World War II, and I wasn't able to discern "whodunit" prior to the great reveal at the end. Both of these elements kept me reading until the end. However, the constant use of footnoting to point me to her prior books was distracting, and although I can appreciate she is trying to imitate Sir Arthur Conan Doyle's style, sometimes there are footnotes which seem like they should have been included in the narration. Indeed, I couldn't discern why the information was footnoted at all. In addition, the pacing of the narration sometimes seemed odd, as if the writer just wanted to get past this part to get to the next, which she wanted to write about more so details weren't developed as fully or realistically. On the whole, it was an entertaining read, but I'm not sure I'll be rushing to the library to get the other books any time soon.
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3,246 reviews492 followers
May 11, 2017
The author has done a wonderful job of capturing the time, as the world is on the cusp of war, the year is 1914, and fear is everywhere. The story is set in Toronto, and we are there as their parent England declares war and now reality has hit.
Our detective teams of Jem and Merinda, our own female Sherlock Holmes, are soon at it again and this time there is a little white feather left on the bodies, coward?
One thing that is really upsetting is what is happening in the minority communities, so sad, but not something that happened in Canada only.
While this book is the third in this series, the author gives us enough information that we can read alone. Although this is the final book in the series, I am looking forward to the next book by this author!
I received this book through Net Galley and the Publisher Harvest House, and was not required to give a positive review.
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