Editor Needed! Please hire an editor. Less is more is a goal that needs to be achieved. For example, in one paragraph, the same word was used four times in just two sentences! If you make a statement, the same statement does not have to be repeated in each sentence before the reader understands the concept. Very difficult to read.
This book was ok. It was a nice read and was a little different from your typical BWWM billionaire story. However I wasn't really a fan of the writing style because there seemed to be a lot if summarizing and rambling instead of the characters speaking for themselves.
I found it very difficult to read this book. There was a constant need of the author to explain what was just written. A lot of the same thing was repeated within the same paragraph. I thought the concept was good, but could never get into the book.