Wow. How did we go from En Garde to this? Being the second book in the Warrior Trilogy, my expectations were realistically high as Stackpole established in his first entry characters and plot threads that had me genuinely interested. As I stated in my review of En Garde, Justin Xiang/Allard was definitely the most interesting character in the first book. Yes, there were other characters that we dipped into other chapters that had a "cool" factor to them, but Justin, to me, makes the book. The biggest cardinal sin of Riposte is that Justin takes a seat on the bench, in an analyst role for the House Liao. I get that in the Battletech Universe there needs to be some spying here, some battle tactics there, etc. But the role Justin played in the first book was far more interesting than anything he did here. His character arch felt halted in ways. The pacing of the book itself didn't lend well to this character either. There were some intense moments that I nod my appreciation for that moved Justin's character further, but for much of the book, Justin plays as a coach, calling plays for troop movements that just didn't appease me and what I loved with the character to begin with.
The next big problem I had with this book was the pacing. And boy oh boy, is this a slog. I'd say this has to be the most boring Battletech book that I've read thus far. 3/4 of this thing is a stupid wedding. (A wedding, important to Battletech lore yes, but nevertheless still boring). I don't need to have things blasting the entire time in order for me to have a good time, but my word, I haven't felt so annoyed since I read The Lord Of The Rings: The Fellowship Of The Ring and looked at how much I read and said aloud, "I can't believe we are still in the Shire." This is the exact feeling I had with this book. The wedding was a huge vessel for a lot of the conflicts to intersect and mingle with one another. (Which I did appreciate). But the wedding moments, most of which were uninteresting to me, really just went on too long. There was only one quick action diversion, but even that couldn't resuscitate my interest. While yes, I hated how long it took for Melissa freaking Steiner to get hitched, I did admire some dialogue discussions that were had outside of my favorite character, Justin. Morgen Kell is proving to be an interesting character, and there's still much mystery between him and Yorinaga that we still have yet to have seen play out. I was excited to see previous characters grow and develop, but Stackpole suddenly introduces another handful of new characters that I'm not as interested in as the previously established ones. Characters that I wasn't interested in before are getting more time and that fascinated me, but adding more wood to the fire is just making it too hot for me at this point. I want to see and experience the growth that has already been plentifully established.
The last 1/4 of the book is basically straight action. Is it great, no, not really. Directly after the wedding, (no joke the next chapter) We are thrust into a Davion invasion of a Liao world. There was one battle that was fun to read, but the rest felt rushed, and it didn't add much for me in terms of what makes these battles special. Stackpole performed much better in his Mech' battles in his previous entry.
The book is sprinkled with its fun moments. The positives that I have for this book are in those sprinkles. It's a sprawling "TV Show-like' experience where you get to be immersed in the Battletech universe, which is cool to an extent. At times, it felt like I was just reading a lore book entry on Battletech that hints at future conflicts outside of the trilogy. This book definitely feels more of a set-up piece versus a great addition to the trilogy, and I feel that the wedding is evidence of that. Stackpole was able to put the universe on pause while everyone attended this thing and while things were happening, it felt like nothing was moving forward in the plot at the same time.
I'm interested to see where the third book takes this trilogy. Again, I hate comparing to other authors, but I felt William H. Keith Jr.'s books progressively improved, whereas I enjoyed Stackpole's first book, but his second didn't lend well to moving the plot. Sometimes there are some stumbling blocks we need to get through in order to really enjoy the final product. I'm hoping that's the case with this series and that this book will guide me into a satisfying conclusion.