Hidden Motives
I have had this book in my bulging TBR folder for over a year and I came across it when I was looking for something that wouldn’t take too long to read. A couple of pages in and I was chuckling; “Seriously. Her life was so boring…..she’d resorted to nearly salivating over a handsome man…..”. Oh my, keep your mind on cataloguing books, Katie. The book blurb says that Ace Calhoun isn’t the man she believed him to be, and my first reaction was ”with a name like that I’m not surprised”. I mean, who is called “Ace”?, but as it turns out, it IS his real name. The book is written in the third person, switching between Katie’s POV and Ace’s, so the reader learns some background information as well as what is happening in the present. We are also privy to their thoughts, thereby gaining more insight into each character. This story is fast-paced, but not rushed, and develops as organically as a novella can, given the length constraints.
Katie’s older sister, Molly, is obviously beautiful, but while Ace talks with her, it is when he meets Katie that he is smitten. It is not “insta love”, but he notes her attractiveness, her flaming red hair and her green eyes, and the more time he spends with Katie, the more he is drawn to her. Ace is in a dilemma, and eventually decides to be honest about his motives for being in Hemlock Creek, and together, he and Katie look for the hidden money, without success. I thought I knew where the stash was hidden, but I was wrong. The McClure family is a nice one and I am pleased that the author wrote Molly as a nice character, a loving sister, as so often in books the beauty of the family is not a nice person.
The novella is well-written and I didn’t spot any major errors in grammar or typos. The story is a good blend of romance and mystery/suspense, but is easy reading, rather than nail-biting suspense.
There is a thread of the Christian faith running through the story that was in no way intrusive. I often wonder why people blame God when things go wrong, but never give Him credit when their lives are cruisy and going the way they want.