I was shaking my head no, too much. Character motivations did not interest me.
I felt like I was reading about high school girls keeping secrets for silly reasons and then having all kinds of drama and stress because someone might discover the secret.
Katie was “secretly” dating Dean, became pregnant, had a miscarriage, and learned she would not be able to carry a pregnancy in the future. She “assumes” that Dean will want his own biological children, so she breaks up with him and does not tell him why - another “secret.”
Later, a mother abandons her baby girl, giving the baby to Katie with a legal document. Katie does not know who the mother is (a secret). Katie wants to keep the baby, but insists on keeping this secret from her brother and her dad. Her reason is “If Jack finds out about the baby, my dad will get involved. My dad thinks I’m irresponsible. I don’t want to confirm that to him. I don’t want to disappoint him.” Well, she’s being responsible. That didn’t make sense. She also fears her father would do stupid things and get the press involved. That didn’t fit.
Katie wants to keep the baby “secret” from Dean for a couple reasons. 1. Dean might think Katie is bad by keeping the baby away from the birth mother. 2. If Dean were in her life, and the mother showed up to take the baby away, Dean might abandon Katie. Uhhhh.... what?
There are more secrets. I just did not enjoy them. Secrets can make a good story, but I want them reasonable, rational, believable.
On the positive side: The subject matter might appeal to some - an abandoned baby given to an infertile woman who loves the baby and is a wonderful mother. And there’s a happy romantic ending.
DISCLOSURE:
This book was provided to me free of charge through the Amazon Vine Program in return for my writing a review.
DATA:
Narrative mode: 3rd person. Story length: 323 pages. Swearing language: strong including religious swear words, but rarely used. Sexual language: moderate. Number of sex scenes: 3. Setting: current day mostly Los Angeles area, California, with a little Texas and Florida. Copyright: 2013. Genre: contemporary romance, baby.