This book was so painful at times. The action and intrigue and everything is really great. But the premise is TERRIBLE. SO SO SO SO SO BAD. I cannot emphasize enough how absolutely unbelievable this whole book is because the basic driver of the action is the dumbest thing ever. A number of times I almost put it down, because it was so stupid. The fact this book gets any stars is because it is otherwise fun, has some crazy international manipulation, and some great twists and turns.
The first and very annoying thing, is that in the first two Neal Carey books, it starts with him reflecting on how he wishes he had never answered the door when "Dad" came calling. Neal finds people for the less than legal and reputable side of a bank that holds many very powerful people's money. So when his handler comes by, he always knows he should just get lost and not answer, but he always does what they say. This is stupid and Winslow should cut it out. Just have him do the job, even if begrudgingly, and not talk about how he knows he shouldn't. Just say he hates the jobs, but knows he has to do it. But that part is just annoying.
So here is what happens. Neal is forced to go to SF and track down some scientist who has left his company to run away with some beautiful Chinese woman, Li Lan. So he goes, finds them, asks him to come back. The couple runs, Neal almost gets killed by what he assumes to be Li Lan, and his people tell him to just go home. This is where Winslow blows the entire story.
Neal falls in love with Li Lan over the course of one evening. An evening which he spent with her and her boyfriend, and in which he thinks she tried to kill him. She basically almost gets him killed, and it usually looks like she is trying to kill him, and shows no interest in him throughout the story, but Neal is sooooo in love with her that he just keeps following. This is the dumbest thing ever. This is like a terrible terrible plot construction that might work with 8 year old girls. It completely ruins the book. He just keeps following her and thinking he loves her even after a shot at him while in her hot tub, a group of her hired goons tries to kill him, she leaves him to rot as a prisoner in a horrible slum, and in the end he risks his life for her twin, because he loves her. THIS IS SO STUPID. SERIOUSLY THE MOST PATHETIC PLOT DRIVING MECHANISM IN THE HISTORY OF WRITING. AT NO POINT DOES IT MAKE ANY SENSE OR IS EVEN REMOTELY BELIEVABLE.
This book seriously deserves 0 stars. But I find Winslow so entertaining and I love the master plan of the Chinese secretary of something and the general CIA vs China plot lines.