I could not get past chapter 2. Rating: minus 4
The setup is simple and straightforward and the background made no sense to me. I have always wondered why most romances seem to denigrate women. Perhaps being a man, I am missing some vital aspect of the storytelling.
Before I continue, I will visit YouTube for a bit. This was made possible by Rebecca Watson, May Moon Narrowboat, Cinzia Dubois, Malinda, Engineering Knits, Lisa Walton, A Day of Small Things, Ukraine Matters, Autumn's Boutique, Verilybitchie, Owen Jones, J Draper, Break N Remake, Shannon Makes, Xiran Jay Zhao, Library Ladder, Oliviareadsalatte, Sound of Music Flashmob, History with Kayleigh, Geo Girl, Planarwalker, No Justice MTG, ThePrimeChronus, Philosophy Tube, The Book Leo, Kazachka, Sailing Melody, Books and Lala, Jessica Kellgren Fozard, Lily Simpson, Lady Knight the Brave.
For this I would have liked to have seen other reviews but I am only Allowed to see one out of the near one thousand. Goodreads have been playing this and other games with me for more than a year now. I will need proceed with just my own reaction.
The three wives are all infantilized and the given is their lack of agency. The book would have held my attention if there were any possibility of personal growth and a rejection of the worldview which made them accepting rather than questioning.
The dead husband is the most vital character in the pages which I managed to read. The second most vital character was the detective without a name. The husband with no income is allowed to disappear for three weeks a month, every month over fourteen+ years. He does so with no contact, no explanation and no question. I can not even comprehend what satisfaction he derived from any of these marriages. They were technically relationships but in reality were only serial sex partners who made no effort to know who or what he was.
I wondered what conversations he could have had with any of them. Three wives and none are curious about his business or work. He apparently arrives every month for a week of hard sexing and disappears again until their next rotation. He could not have been particularly fond of any of them. One of my questions was what he did on his week off. Based on the pages I managed to read, I picture him using that time for bar hopping and waitress chasing. Then there is the question of how he paid for this years long sex party with three very unappealing women.
The detective is not a policeman but a stalker. I could not place the type of morality that would even allow him to care about this criminal's death. To boldly announce that he chose to withhold information regarding the dead man's crimes from all three victims, was stunning to me. With each paragraph, I realized that the book's American Hollywood Southern reality was probably the only piece of world building the writer would deliver.
This Southern woman's romance was dated, had it been written forty years ago. There is a market for it obviously but I can not understand the appeal which allows such bad writing to be rewarded. I commit more thought to my reviews now, than this writer seems to have in any of her books, if this one is representative of her body of work.
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Every woman introduced is an unattractive stereotype. This is not "Steel Magnolias" and I had certain issues with the diabetic insisting on carrying a child and a husband who agreed to it. There are techniques labelled "Artificial Insemination", "Surrogate Pregnancy", Adoption, and more. That one fact broke me despite a number of good actresses delivering good performances.
I will start with the first wife introduced. The family controls an oil corporation or owns an oil company and the daughter is allowed to marry a stranger without a pre-nuptial agreement. No reader can believe that is possible. She can sleep with a carpenter, truck driver, school teacher or construction worker with nothing said but marriage without a pre-nuptial agreement automatically means marriage without an inheritance or maintenance payments. A marriage without a fully vetted suitor is another ridiculous story foundation. The fans must realise that and this weird character is part of a guilty pleasure. Five star reviews for a guilty pleasure does not make for a useful reader's forum.
I have never lived in the Southern USA but from American film and my occasional scans of American news articles, I can not believe that any reader is pretending that some civil servant can threaten a wealthy family. The detective would find himself seeking new employment within hours. This setting is America, I thought. As for the murder, rural American police forces are notoriously corrupt and that is taken from my occasional skimming of news stories not movies. A more likely story start would involve the dead husband having a conveniently fatal encounter with police during a traffic stop. Irritant is removed with no fuss, no investigation and another useful connection cultivated.
That would actually make a more interesting start for me. Of course the conman husband, etc would need be rewritten. Class separation does exist in america, especially in the Southern USA unless everything I have read is incorrect. This book is a splendid case of lazy writing which meets some emotional need for an undemanding audience. It is not a novel as much as a "We are all girlfriends" fantasy.
I realized the probable direction of the book, within very few pages. The snapshot of the other wives and the dialogue was insulting to lower class women. The equivalency along gender lines without any class distinctions just does not work. I will not bother to think on this book any further.
I have noticed that most of Amazon/Goodreads recommendations are just awful. That some are supposedly best sellers disturbed me several years ago and now just disappoints without surprise. Nadine Norries does historical romances which are much better than this book. She is a former MP with a reputation for a certain eccentricity (more than one commenter, refer to her as "Mad Nad"). I do not feel that my judgement of this book is too harsh.
After trying Amazon recommendations for a bit more than four years, I have begun watching my fiction for the first time. It makes sense that the bulk of any fiction genre will drift towards lower quality but Amazon seem to have made that a policy. Fortunately the streaming services and YouTube short film channels (DUST, Omeleto among others) deliver better writing and more entertaining fare.
I am relatively new to YouTube and It has been a rewarding experience. I began with science fiction fan film and commentary, then moved to lifestyle, hobbyist, educational and essayist channels. I accidentally discovered book channels last. 😍 These host some fantastic communities of readers with varied tastes and demands but all of whom are enamoured of all things bookish. From sponsor spots on educational channels, I was introduced to the dedicated educational video sites. Nebula, SkillShare, Brilliant and others are all to my mind worth a visit.
About Goodreads as a forum. About eighteen months ago, I wrote a short negative review of Powers of the Earth, an unreadable, badly written salute to the January 6, 2021 hero by Travis Corcoran. He is a self-described libertarian and vocal advocate for the return of chattel slavery - of course, an employee of an unnamed US agency, a US veteran and supporter of Putin's Russia. There followed an almost year long stream of angry comments including the writer's fantasy of a socialist "takeover" resulting in all black Americans being sent to Jamaican plantations and that "rich blacks" should be deported to Brazil (?). This was in support of the quality of his libertarian rant (it was in no way a novel).
To my revised review, Claes Rees Jr/cgr710 (an avid fanboy of my reviews) wrote a last comment declaring that They had "won" (?). I discovered that They had unleashed a veritable flood of vile sexual and racist comments against channels which I mentioned. They failed to impress the Oxford astrophysicist, the German particle physicist, the lovely couple restoring an historical boat, the French essayist or the many other female creators. They did however broadcast a splendid self-portrait of the twisted American man-child to a broad multinational audience, in addition to increasing the world's overabundance of unpleasantness. Goodreads discourse is quite a wonder. USA, Yay ???
My YouTube picks of the moment.
Liz Barclay, Linguoer Mechanic, Crow Caller, The Shades of Orange, Female Warrior - Teresatessa, The Clockwork Reader, The British Museum, Celtic Woman, Elina Charatsidou, Abney Park, Alizee, Gemma Dyer, The Closet Historian, Squire, Snappy Dragon.
About Amazon/Kindle/Goodreads. I ask that you consider treating this as a potentially hostile site. 😐
Ominous music begins. 🙂 The science fiction and related genre readership on this site are represented by or give silent acquiescence to the vocal minority (hopefully) of nutcases described above. Their little comment clouds are to be found on many negative reviews in that corner of Goodreads. They do not appreciate thoughtfully negative judgements of some very nasty work (writer and book alike). After my review of Powers of the Earth, Goodreads began their various small acts of harassment. It has now apparently with management approval achieved new levels of nastiness. It seems that They do not approve of a socialist perspective. 🤗 For details, see my review of Marine by Dalzelle, The Awakening by Jasper T Scott or "Dark Horse", a good novel by Diener.
Kindle/Goodreads have interrupted my Kindle services access for days at a time with no explanation and no response to queries. The automatic end of book transition to the Rating and Review page has been disabled in addition to other strange changes to my pages. The only limits seem to concern the system log trail of actions, permissions and authorities. That is a necessary feature of all networks.
It might be that Amazon's Kindle readers are not fit for purpose and the failure to respond to or acknowledge a query or complaint may be a result of terrible network maintenance. Oddly these and other Goodreads problems occur in irritating spurts, which a corporation whose most profitable division might be their corporate web hosting (AWS) would address as a priority issue.
It might be my imagination but it does feel as if they would rather that I were not a customer and that my reviews were not posted. Amazon also released my limited message history to nutcases, who managed to enlist Australian Intelligence in interrogation of my friend for my personal information. It seems They were performing a favour through Pine Gap Centre for some US secret clearance holder. My friend was very concerned for my safety and while I could feel flattered by the governmental attention, am for some reason angry. I am of the opinion that perhaps Amazon need to revamp their customer service protocols. 🤗
I hope that you are not targeted and never are but this corporation's antics are dangerous. If you find my experience unsettling, some simple precautions should make your exposure to Amazon/Kindle/Goodreads somewhat safer. Basic first steps include minimizing profile information, removing lurkers (those friends who monitor but never post), maintaining caution if using Goodreads messaging, screenshotting the odd and the ugly and even using a single use email for Goodreads, Kindle and Amazon. It costs nothing to implement these small steps but should your status change, to not might well do.
It is important to remember that your immunity rests on the whims of damaged anti-socialist, misogynistic, racist man-children who are lacking in both restraint and morality. More importantly, they are American. Ominous music ends. 🙂
May we all enjoy Good Reading! 😊
I am no judge of the best of YouTube channels, though these did entertain or inspire me. Some of my favourite channels.
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I wish you a glorious morning, a wonderful afternoon, a pleasant night, a fantastic night and may we all continue learning.
A bird does not sing because it has an answer. It sings because it has a song.
Taiwanese Proverb