An interesting read. I have often read of the evacuation from the POV of adults who took children in, or who heard the horror stories of children mistreated by host families or abandoned by their London parents to the care of the host family or anyone else who would take them on, but this is the first that presents the children's point of view. The story is told "inside out" as if it were a TV drama--moving back and forth in time. We start with their mother being taken to hospital in about 1941, skip back to the the phoney war of 1939, forward to 1942, then back to 1940...sigh.
The author is the son of one of the Jarman sisters, and there is an after note explaining that he has written other books. This made me wonder what happened in the proofreading process, as he also acknowledges how "wonderful" his editor is. Wonderful they may be, but the proofreaders certainly dropped the ball, particularly in the second half of the book. We are treated to some very odd turns of phrase, mostly deformations of standard English idioms; it's almost like he took dictation and didn't catch what was said. Here's a sampling:
--Something "plays on Pierce's mind" instead of preying on his mind as in correct English
--The girls' Communion dresses are stored "away from harm's reach" instead of the standard out of harm's way
--The older girls "pressurize" their father for something instead of pressuring or pressing him...was he vaccuum packed, then?
--They fear the "forboding presence of their aunts" who don't love them, instead of "forbidding". "Forboding" means fearful of some future event. The girls don't fear them, they just find them cold, selfish and rude--certainly "forbidding", which means "unfriendly, hostile, unwelcoming."
Then we are treated to verbal anachronisms such as a Canadian soldier "hanging out" with a local girl. This sort of linguistic hiccup made the reading judder along in spots and took the fifth star for me. Perhaps it's because I teach English, but I've noticed that many authors today couldn't pass their First Certificate exam for the life of them.