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Darcy and Elizabeth: Fair Trade
They were of a respectable family in the north of England; a circumstance more deeply impressed on their memories than that their brother's fortune and their own had been acquired by trade.
~ Jane Austen, Pride and Prejudice
The morning after the Netherfield ball, Elizabeth Bennet refuses an offer of marriage, setting off a row in the Bennet household that ends tragically.
Faced with homelessness and untenable poverty, Elizabeth receives a different sort of offer--from quite an unexpected quarter--and finds herself considering the once-inconceivable prospect of going into trade.
When Elizabeth and her sisters open a tea shop in Meryton, she must deal with Mary's penchant for entertaining the customers, Mama's enthusiasm for the officers, Kitty's fear of French spies, Caroline Bingley's relentless attempts to degrade her and her family ~ and Mr. Darcy's irritating refusal to get out of her life.
~ Jane Austen, Pride and Prejudice
The morning after the Netherfield ball, Elizabeth Bennet refuses an offer of marriage, setting off a row in the Bennet household that ends tragically.
Faced with homelessness and untenable poverty, Elizabeth receives a different sort of offer--from quite an unexpected quarter--and finds herself considering the once-inconceivable prospect of going into trade.
When Elizabeth and her sisters open a tea shop in Meryton, she must deal with Mary's penchant for entertaining the customers, Mama's enthusiasm for the officers, Kitty's fear of French spies, Caroline Bingley's relentless attempts to degrade her and her family ~ and Mr. Darcy's irritating refusal to get out of her life.
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July 28, 2016
It's bad enough to have relatives in trade, but how far the Bennets have fallen! Now THEY're in trade! That's the way fate thrusts them in this departure from the norm.
Things start off in fairly traditional manner, with the Netherfield ball, Mrs. Bennet crowing about Jane and Mr. Bingley, and Mr. Collins' spurned proposal the next morning. The only anomaly is that Mr. Gardiner has recently died. But things quickly take a turn to the completely unexpected, and the result is that Jane goes to London to live with her Aunt Gardiner while Lizzy leads her younger sisters in managing a coffee shop in the middle of Meryton. As it happens, Caroline Bingley's claws are in the pie as a silent partner in the business. She sniffed out Darcy's interest in Elizabeth and set her rival's family up in trade, knowing this would destroy any desire he might have to pursue her. She assumes that the business will fail, of course.
Darcy becomes aware of Elizabeth's reduced circumstances courtesy of Miss Bingley, who just can't resist doing some crowing of her own and unwisely keeps trying to turn the knife, believing this will thoroughly kill his infatuation for Elizabeth and her brother's infatuation for Jane. The author shows how tormented Darcy and Bingley both are about what's happening to their respective ladies. Darcy determines to help Elizabeth as much as he can but that he will not pursue her. And poor Bingley acts like a beaten puppy.
As it happens, Colonel Fitzwilliam and a de Bourgh cousin, Major Carleton Quartermaine ("Carley") find Netherfield is a convenient place to stay, bringing Darcy back into the vicinity when they're all on the way to Rosings, and then later, when the officers are investigating some criminal activity in Meryton. This puts Darcy back in direct contact with Elizabeth.
It is so interesting to read how the Bennet sisters respond and bond in their shared determination to succeed. They receive financial assistance from Mrs. Gardiner to help redecorate and buy everything needed for the business, and all the girls enthusiastically help. Lizzy is the glue, coordinating everyone's efforts and managing inventory and finances with Mary's help. I was particularly pleased to see Mary given more of a storyline than usual, and she shines in her new position. Lydia's role here really surprised me with her story taking a sharp turn from the expected when she disappears.
The relationship between Darcy and Elizabeth develops nicely, too, starting with the day after the Netherfield ball, when they have a fateful encounter that affects her opinion of him. During their time apart, each continues to think about the other. Naturally, when Darcy returns to Hertfordshire, every look and slight touch between them has added significance, since he continues to consider her forbidden fruit and she is certain he would never stoop to pursue her, despite the observations of Charlotte and Mrs. Gardiner that Darcy is in love with her. His terrible marriage proposal is absolutely an impulse of the moment, NOT premeditated and, as in canon, occurs when Elizabeth is furious with him.
I was so impressed with how the plot veers so far from the original story and yet still maintains echoes of the original, and there are no far-fetched story elements. The evolution of the characters are believable; all start with the same traits as in Pride and Prejudice and are given credible motivation for the changes they undergo throughout the story. As a result, this is a very satisfying book in every respect.
Things start off in fairly traditional manner, with the Netherfield ball, Mrs. Bennet crowing about Jane and Mr. Bingley, and Mr. Collins' spurned proposal the next morning. The only anomaly is that Mr. Gardiner has recently died. But things quickly take a turn to the completely unexpected, and the result is that Jane goes to London to live with her Aunt Gardiner while Lizzy leads her younger sisters in managing a coffee shop in the middle of Meryton. As it happens, Caroline Bingley's claws are in the pie as a silent partner in the business. She sniffed out Darcy's interest in Elizabeth and set her rival's family up in trade, knowing this would destroy any desire he might have to pursue her. She assumes that the business will fail, of course.
Darcy becomes aware of Elizabeth's reduced circumstances courtesy of Miss Bingley, who just can't resist doing some crowing of her own and unwisely keeps trying to turn the knife, believing this will thoroughly kill his infatuation for Elizabeth and her brother's infatuation for Jane. The author shows how tormented Darcy and Bingley both are about what's happening to their respective ladies. Darcy determines to help Elizabeth as much as he can but that he will not pursue her. And poor Bingley acts like a beaten puppy.
As it happens, Colonel Fitzwilliam and a de Bourgh cousin, Major Carleton Quartermaine ("Carley") find Netherfield is a convenient place to stay, bringing Darcy back into the vicinity when they're all on the way to Rosings, and then later, when the officers are investigating some criminal activity in Meryton. This puts Darcy back in direct contact with Elizabeth.
It is so interesting to read how the Bennet sisters respond and bond in their shared determination to succeed. They receive financial assistance from Mrs. Gardiner to help redecorate and buy everything needed for the business, and all the girls enthusiastically help. Lizzy is the glue, coordinating everyone's efforts and managing inventory and finances with Mary's help. I was particularly pleased to see Mary given more of a storyline than usual, and she shines in her new position. Lydia's role here really surprised me with her story taking a sharp turn from the expected when she disappears.
The relationship between Darcy and Elizabeth develops nicely, too, starting with the day after the Netherfield ball, when they have a fateful encounter that affects her opinion of him. During their time apart, each continues to think about the other. Naturally, when Darcy returns to Hertfordshire, every look and slight touch between them has added significance, since he continues to consider her forbidden fruit and she is certain he would never stoop to pursue her, despite the observations of Charlotte and Mrs. Gardiner that Darcy is in love with her. His terrible marriage proposal is absolutely an impulse of the moment, NOT premeditated and, as in canon, occurs when Elizabeth is furious with him.
I was so impressed with how the plot veers so far from the original story and yet still maintains echoes of the original, and there are no far-fetched story elements. The evolution of the characters are believable; all start with the same traits as in Pride and Prejudice and are given credible motivation for the changes they undergo throughout the story. As a result, this is a very satisfying book in every respect.
September 9, 2016
I loved, loved, loved this variation of P&P. It had me with a lump in my throat and blurry eyes more than once. And it also gave me smiles and laughter. All in all it was very satisfying.
The beginning is very melancholy but in such a manner as to draw you in immediately. Six months ago Mr. Gardiner dies after visiting the Netherlands but he has left his widow and family situated securely. Subsequently, soon after the Netherfield Ball a second tragedy hits the family; one with much more devastating consequences – Mr. Bennet is also lost. And as Elizabeth leaves the funeral she insists she must attend (The family now has no men.) she takes a grip on herself, apologizes and humbly offers herself to the man she ridiculed just several days ago when he offered for her. Too late!
So it is that Jane departs for London to become a governess for the Gardiner children. After all, her hopes and aspirations were dashed when the Bingley party left Netherfield with intentions of probably never returning. Elizabeth is also invited to Gracechurch Street but can’t see leaving the family under Mrs. Bennet’s regulations. You will be astonished, as is Elizabeth, when she is offered the secret partnership of Caroline Bingley in re-opening the local coffee shop. I so loved how she didn’t hesitate to inform Caroline that she knows why she is offering this but she does accept the chance to help support her family.
One of the themes in this novel has to do with the fact of the dependence of women on men in that day and age. You first hear it when Elizabeth wants to attend her father’s funeral, “We have no men now.” Only men could attend funerals. And then as you read “Charlotte Collins was a sensible, paradoxically independent young woman. Where marriage bound some, it had made her free, with her own…and so many lovely things. It did not matter if they came to her through a man. They were hers. Then Caroline states, “Men and women must all have something to live on. And it is best if that something is their own. Not a father’s kindness or a husband’s tractability, but one’s own money in the bank, safe as houses. My sister’s fortune did as my father intended. It caught her a fine husband— a husband who took possession of her fortune and her person— and she has not had a happy day since.”
So it is with pleasure despite the sad reasons that I read of the Bennet sisters, with their mother’s support, opening and maintaining quite successfully the Beau Bon Bon, a tea and coffee shop with fresh baked treats and others foods. I was happy to read about each sister finding her forte. And even of having the ability to hire others to help and thus giving those some way to support themselves.
But events bring into the shop not only local citizenry, the tradesmen and their wives but also the militia. Lydia seems to be in her glory as she is the primary one serving beverages and food. Colonel Fitzwilliam and a new character in our variations, a Major (later, Lt. Colonel) Carleton Quartermaine, cousin and military man, also find the need to stop in and, it is curious that one friend of Wickham’s seems to garner special attention. “Carley” sets an example for Darcy with his disdain of society’s rules about wealth and connections when his eye is caught by a local young lady, one who reads The Monk to her audiences skillfully.
Darcy and Bingley have their share of the story. But the author’s cleverness is such that I won’t even hint at it in how the happy endings are achieved. There is something about a half-naked man, on his knees, a lei, etc…. but you must read that for yourself. As others hint: Lydia, Wickham, Caroline, Colonel Fitzwilliam have new stories to relate here. Even pious Mary becomes a charming part of the set managing the tea shop. Such fun!
I have read one other story by this author but plan to read all of her stories.
The beginning is very melancholy but in such a manner as to draw you in immediately. Six months ago Mr. Gardiner dies after visiting the Netherlands but he has left his widow and family situated securely. Subsequently, soon after the Netherfield Ball a second tragedy hits the family; one with much more devastating consequences – Mr. Bennet is also lost. And as Elizabeth leaves the funeral she insists she must attend (The family now has no men.) she takes a grip on herself, apologizes and humbly offers herself to the man she ridiculed just several days ago when he offered for her. Too late!
So it is that Jane departs for London to become a governess for the Gardiner children. After all, her hopes and aspirations were dashed when the Bingley party left Netherfield with intentions of probably never returning. Elizabeth is also invited to Gracechurch Street but can’t see leaving the family under Mrs. Bennet’s regulations. You will be astonished, as is Elizabeth, when she is offered the secret partnership of Caroline Bingley in re-opening the local coffee shop. I so loved how she didn’t hesitate to inform Caroline that she knows why she is offering this but she does accept the chance to help support her family.
One of the themes in this novel has to do with the fact of the dependence of women on men in that day and age. You first hear it when Elizabeth wants to attend her father’s funeral, “We have no men now.” Only men could attend funerals. And then as you read “Charlotte Collins was a sensible, paradoxically independent young woman. Where marriage bound some, it had made her free, with her own…and so many lovely things. It did not matter if they came to her through a man. They were hers. Then Caroline states, “Men and women must all have something to live on. And it is best if that something is their own. Not a father’s kindness or a husband’s tractability, but one’s own money in the bank, safe as houses. My sister’s fortune did as my father intended. It caught her a fine husband— a husband who took possession of her fortune and her person— and she has not had a happy day since.”
So it is with pleasure despite the sad reasons that I read of the Bennet sisters, with their mother’s support, opening and maintaining quite successfully the Beau Bon Bon, a tea and coffee shop with fresh baked treats and others foods. I was happy to read about each sister finding her forte. And even of having the ability to hire others to help and thus giving those some way to support themselves.
But events bring into the shop not only local citizenry, the tradesmen and their wives but also the militia. Lydia seems to be in her glory as she is the primary one serving beverages and food. Colonel Fitzwilliam and a new character in our variations, a Major (later, Lt. Colonel) Carleton Quartermaine, cousin and military man, also find the need to stop in and, it is curious that one friend of Wickham’s seems to garner special attention. “Carley” sets an example for Darcy with his disdain of society’s rules about wealth and connections when his eye is caught by a local young lady, one who reads The Monk to her audiences skillfully.
Darcy and Bingley have their share of the story. But the author’s cleverness is such that I won’t even hint at it in how the happy endings are achieved. There is something about a half-naked man, on his knees, a lei, etc…. but you must read that for yourself. As others hint: Lydia, Wickham, Caroline, Colonel Fitzwilliam have new stories to relate here. Even pious Mary becomes a charming part of the set managing the tea shop. Such fun!
I have read one other story by this author but plan to read all of her stories.
August 27, 2017
Loved Beau Bon-Bon's Christmas so how did I not know about this one. Loved it!
December 4, 2016
All’s Fair in love and… Trade war
Most of the P&P story has transpired. We have the Bingley party at Netherfield Park with Mr. and Mrs. Hurst and Mr. Darcy. Jane recovered from her cold, Bingley had his ball, Lizzy refused Mr. Collins and Charlotte took him to Lucas Lodge. Mrs. B was furious with Lizzy and Mr. B went for a walk. While this was going on, the Bingley party departed Netherfield and Mr. Darcy encountered Mr. Bennet injured on the lane. Elizabeth worried, when her father did not return home, went looking for him and encountered him in the ditch injured, just as Mr. Darcy pulled up with a dogcart to take him home.
The apothecary arrived at Longbourn, set the broken leg and administered laudanum for the pain. After Mr. Darcy saw that Mr. Bennet was on the mend, left for London. Caroline’s letter arrived for Jane and we are set for the remainder of the story. As the book blurb described, Mr. Bennet did not survive and Collins inherited. Elizabeth realized the danger in having refused Mr. Collins and tried to repent her actions. She swallowed her pride and attempted to talk to him. I have never disliked Mr. Collins more than I did with his words to her. “I would have borne it all—your mama’s constant fawning, Lydia’s ridicule, Jane’s sad and serene pity at the thought of your accepting me… I think not many would not condemn me if I now find it hard to pity you.…” He then told her he was no longer free to accept her request. We know why, but it is sometime before she finds out he has offered for Charlotte and that she had accepted him.
There was so much in this book. I don’t know why I took so long in reading it. I’m glad I did as the second book is out now and I plan to read it next. My thoughts on this…WOW!!! This book blew me away with the creativity, the surprises and the wordplay that the author used to convey the many moods of our characters. The story line was 'what if' something happens to Mr. Bennet, what would become of his family?
There was the addition of a new character Major Carleton Quartermaine, son of Sir Lewis de Bourgh’s sister (nephew to Lady Catherine and cousin through marriage to the Darcy, Gerogiana, Richard, and Anne). The cousins Darcy, Colonel Richard Fitzwilliam, Major Quartermaine are three of a kind. These guys are breathtaking. Quartermaine is the best of both worlds. He has the sensibility, humor and gregarious demeanor of our dear Colonel, but the wealth, financial sense and good looks of Darcy. Yeah, these three cut a swath through the female populous of Meryton. Be still my heart.
The story was creative in how the author used POV to let the reader in on what characters were thinking. I loved the interplay when someone was listening to a conversation and we could hear their thoughts as that conversation was going on. I really like that. It was hilarious.
The staff at the Beau Bon-Bon was so cute. Our author gave us clues along the way and I caught a few and was pleased then those clues were important later. Then other clues, I missed completely.
I LOVED the cover. It was the most beautiful cover I’ve seen in a while. Most excellent. I gave an extra point for the most creative Lydia scenario EVER in the history of JAFF. I have never been so surprised in all my life. I am still bowled over by the creative twist I encountered in this story. An extra point for the most romantic scene in the history of JAFF. I have never read anything like it [the king and queen scene]. It was TOTALLY inappropriate for the time period and so awesome, I couldn't help myself. Propriety, rules, comportment, etiquette, etc., thrown out the window. Cool!
I also gave an extra point for the most excellent exit line at the end of the story. Hilarious. Another point was awarded for making me like Caroline. OMG!! The dialogue was hilarious. I’m sorry, it was too good. A point for the creative dialogue throughout the book. Another for Quartermaine and his eye for one of our dear girls. You have to give him credit, he was most excellent. The author simply made me love him. How many extra points is that? As you can tell I have gone way over 5 points. Yep, this work deserved extra points.
Read the other reviews as I am not going to reveal anything else…I would spoil it. I don’t want to do that. I finished this in record time. I could not put it down. I didn’t want to put it down until I read that shocker at 86%. When I got to that point…I simply threw down my NOOK and put my hands to my face in total shock. I had to catch my breath in order to finish. Yeah, it was that AWESOME!!! The author really pulled a good one. I loved it. I’ve never seen it used and it was so clever. The story ended at 91% with excerpts of other works for the remainder of the book.
Most of the P&P story has transpired. We have the Bingley party at Netherfield Park with Mr. and Mrs. Hurst and Mr. Darcy. Jane recovered from her cold, Bingley had his ball, Lizzy refused Mr. Collins and Charlotte took him to Lucas Lodge. Mrs. B was furious with Lizzy and Mr. B went for a walk. While this was going on, the Bingley party departed Netherfield and Mr. Darcy encountered Mr. Bennet injured on the lane. Elizabeth worried, when her father did not return home, went looking for him and encountered him in the ditch injured, just as Mr. Darcy pulled up with a dogcart to take him home.
The apothecary arrived at Longbourn, set the broken leg and administered laudanum for the pain. After Mr. Darcy saw that Mr. Bennet was on the mend, left for London. Caroline’s letter arrived for Jane and we are set for the remainder of the story. As the book blurb described, Mr. Bennet did not survive and Collins inherited. Elizabeth realized the danger in having refused Mr. Collins and tried to repent her actions. She swallowed her pride and attempted to talk to him. I have never disliked Mr. Collins more than I did with his words to her. “I would have borne it all—your mama’s constant fawning, Lydia’s ridicule, Jane’s sad and serene pity at the thought of your accepting me… I think not many would not condemn me if I now find it hard to pity you.…” He then told her he was no longer free to accept her request. We know why, but it is sometime before she finds out he has offered for Charlotte and that she had accepted him.
There was so much in this book. I don’t know why I took so long in reading it. I’m glad I did as the second book is out now and I plan to read it next. My thoughts on this…WOW!!! This book blew me away with the creativity, the surprises and the wordplay that the author used to convey the many moods of our characters. The story line was 'what if' something happens to Mr. Bennet, what would become of his family?
There was the addition of a new character Major Carleton Quartermaine, son of Sir Lewis de Bourgh’s sister (nephew to Lady Catherine and cousin through marriage to the Darcy, Gerogiana, Richard, and Anne). The cousins Darcy, Colonel Richard Fitzwilliam, Major Quartermaine are three of a kind. These guys are breathtaking. Quartermaine is the best of both worlds. He has the sensibility, humor and gregarious demeanor of our dear Colonel, but the wealth, financial sense and good looks of Darcy. Yeah, these three cut a swath through the female populous of Meryton. Be still my heart.
The story was creative in how the author used POV to let the reader in on what characters were thinking. I loved the interplay when someone was listening to a conversation and we could hear their thoughts as that conversation was going on. I really like that. It was hilarious.
The staff at the Beau Bon-Bon was so cute. Our author gave us clues along the way and I caught a few and was pleased then those clues were important later. Then other clues, I missed completely.
I LOVED the cover. It was the most beautiful cover I’ve seen in a while. Most excellent. I gave an extra point for the most creative Lydia scenario EVER in the history of JAFF. I have never been so surprised in all my life. I am still bowled over by the creative twist I encountered in this story. An extra point for the most romantic scene in the history of JAFF. I have never read anything like it [the king and queen scene]. It was TOTALLY inappropriate for the time period and so awesome, I couldn't help myself. Propriety, rules, comportment, etiquette, etc., thrown out the window. Cool!
I also gave an extra point for the most excellent exit line at the end of the story. Hilarious. Another point was awarded for making me like Caroline. OMG!! The dialogue was hilarious. I’m sorry, it was too good. A point for the creative dialogue throughout the book. Another for Quartermaine and his eye for one of our dear girls. You have to give him credit, he was most excellent. The author simply made me love him. How many extra points is that? As you can tell I have gone way over 5 points. Yep, this work deserved extra points.
Read the other reviews as I am not going to reveal anything else…I would spoil it. I don’t want to do that. I finished this in record time. I could not put it down. I didn’t want to put it down until I read that shocker at 86%. When I got to that point…I simply threw down my NOOK and put my hands to my face in total shock. I had to catch my breath in order to finish. Yeah, it was that AWESOME!!! The author really pulled a good one. I loved it. I’ve never seen it used and it was so clever. The story ended at 91% with excerpts of other works for the remainder of the book.
January 5, 2018
Enjoyed this audiobook. The story does start off with the intentions that the reader is familiar with Pride and Prejudice as it begins around the Netherfield ball.
Love the different twists in this novel as it differs from cannon, especially the Lydia/Wickham storyline.
Love the different twists in this novel as it differs from cannon, especially the Lydia/Wickham storyline.
February 13, 2022
Good story and excellent performance by Jannie Meisberger. I read the book before but didn’t leave a review.
July 23, 2016
Uniquely humorous
Kate Bedlow takes us on a wild and woolly ride to HEA. She blends her character's comical antics with the more traditional storyline. A must read for all who enjoy their love stories with a laugh.
Kate Bedlow takes us on a wild and woolly ride to HEA. She blends her character's comical antics with the more traditional storyline. A must read for all who enjoy their love stories with a laugh.
December 29, 2018
I adored the humorous tone in this book, it was well written although not a stickler for regency propriety. I find I can easily overlook that as it was a highly entertaining and engaging read. What I found difficult to stomach was the reduced circumstances that fell upon the Bennet's after the patriarch demise, shortly after the Netherfield ball.
The Bennet sisters opened a coffee shop in Meryton with the "aid" of none other than Caroline Bingley...
If I were to nit pick though, some of the re-use from canon did not fit the new events. As an example, after Darcy's proposal, Elizabeth accused him of being the only means to separate Bingley and Jane while she knew very well Caroline and her own role in the separation. The vehemence in her refusal also seemed out of place due to ODC's earlier interactions.
It was all forgotten by the end though as the out-of-this-world reconciliation blew my mind. Absolutely and utterly fabulous!!! Very creative, I must say...
Would have loved some more interaction between ODC, hopefully my E&D addiction will be satisfied in the next book in this serie.
Heartily recommend this book!
The Bennet sisters opened a coffee shop in Meryton with the "aid" of none other than Caroline Bingley...
If I were to nit pick though, some of the re-use from canon did not fit the new events. As an example, after Darcy's proposal, Elizabeth accused him of being the only means to separate Bingley and Jane while she knew very well Caroline and her own role in the separation. The vehemence in her refusal also seemed out of place due to ODC's earlier interactions.
It was all forgotten by the end though as the out-of-this-world reconciliation blew my mind. Absolutely and utterly fabulous!!! Very creative, I must say...
Would have loved some more interaction between ODC, hopefully my E&D addiction will be satisfied in the next book in this serie.
Heartily recommend this book!
July 17, 2021
Not a lot of character development that was shown, instead we are told the change happened and asked to accept the shift. Examples: Mary starts publicly reading Fordyce's sermons, people are not receptive, so she whips out a gothic novel and turns into a weekly main attraction. Lydia is barely mentioned in the story, but then all of a sudden she is a national hero. It felt like the author was trying to make the reader like every character, including Caroline, Lady C, and even Wickham. Even with all that I might considered it just a lighthearted read, but then the ending went completely off the rails.
January 16, 2019
I don’t even know where to begin.
About 80% of this book was a light retelling that branched off from the happenings of Pride and Prejudice but mostly carried on in a parallel direction. Mr. Bennet suffers an accident and passes away early in the story, not long after Mr. Gardiner falls ill and dies while abroad, leaving the Bennet ladies in rather dire straights. An offer comes from an unexpected source, which leads to Elizabeth and her sisters taking over the running of the local tea shop in order to survive.
I enjoyed the trade storyline, and the mostly improbable level of independence shown by nearly every woman in the story. I was willing to ignore the vague creepiness of Mr. Bingley following Jane around London, I was willing to accept Caroline Bingley’s practical desire to invest wisely, I was even willing to overlook Mary ceasing her moralizing to embrace performing dramatic readings in the tea shop.
But the author lost me at the very end, with Darcy’s dramatic and very showy second proposal in which he was half naked (????) in front of all the principle characters (??), and crawled to Elizabeth (????) to present her with flowers (???) to apologize for his first proposal (???) in a recreation of a ceremony from the Sandwich Islands as told by Captain Cook (????). (I physically cringed.)
And then, in the little epilogue where Caroline Bingley bemoans the fact that everyone has someone to dance with except her, Colonel Fitzwiliam appears. So the tale ends on one of the most genial characters in the original novel grinning and informing one of the worst that his brother died like a week and a half ago, so he’s rich now. Yay! Happy endings for everyone! (?????????)
I mean. Yikes.
About 80% of this book was a light retelling that branched off from the happenings of Pride and Prejudice but mostly carried on in a parallel direction. Mr. Bennet suffers an accident and passes away early in the story, not long after Mr. Gardiner falls ill and dies while abroad, leaving the Bennet ladies in rather dire straights. An offer comes from an unexpected source, which leads to Elizabeth and her sisters taking over the running of the local tea shop in order to survive.
I enjoyed the trade storyline, and the mostly improbable level of independence shown by nearly every woman in the story. I was willing to ignore the vague creepiness of Mr. Bingley following Jane around London, I was willing to accept Caroline Bingley’s practical desire to invest wisely, I was even willing to overlook Mary ceasing her moralizing to embrace performing dramatic readings in the tea shop.
But the author lost me at the very end, with Darcy’s dramatic and very showy second proposal in which he was half naked (????) in front of all the principle characters (??), and crawled to Elizabeth (????) to present her with flowers (???) to apologize for his first proposal (???) in a recreation of a ceremony from the Sandwich Islands as told by Captain Cook (????). (I physically cringed.)
And then, in the little epilogue where Caroline Bingley bemoans the fact that everyone has someone to dance with except her, Colonel Fitzwiliam appears. So the tale ends on one of the most genial characters in the original novel grinning and informing one of the worst that his brother died like a week and a half ago, so he’s rich now. Yay! Happy endings for everyone! (?????????)
I mean. Yikes.
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
September 28, 2016
3.5 Stars. I really liked the first 90% of the book. It was a new and unique look at a Pride & Prejudice possibility. Where Mr. Bennet meets his demise shortly after the Netherfield Ball and Mr. Collins' rejection by Lizzy. Most of the Bennets end up living with the Phillips and they salvation comes from an unusual source; with a partner they will open a Tea Room in Meryton and each daughter's hidden talents emerge.
The author gives us a good look of Darcy & Bingley struggling to overcome their attachment to the eldest Bennets and an idea of what they did while away from Meryton. There are even new and interesting characters introduced and some intriguing plot twists. So when the ending is almost a violent farce of Lydia's escapade with Wickham and absurdity abounds you are almost shocked.
The author gives us a good look of Darcy & Bingley struggling to overcome their attachment to the eldest Bennets and an idea of what they did while away from Meryton. There are even new and interesting characters introduced and some intriguing plot twists. So when the ending is almost a violent farce of Lydia's escapade with Wickham and absurdity abounds you are almost shocked.
July 16, 2019
The Bennet sisters as you never imagined them before...
A fun, different and entertaining story!
Kate Bedlow kept the traits of the characters while taking them all in a completely original direction. I loved the narrative, which she kept entertaining and light taking this variation to a very different but fun ending.
I really liked the way the sisters went from helpless to resourceful, each one bringing her special talents into the mix to create a wonderful an successful business.
A fun, different and entertaining story!
Kate Bedlow kept the traits of the characters while taking them all in a completely original direction. I loved the narrative, which she kept entertaining and light taking this variation to a very different but fun ending.
I really liked the way the sisters went from helpless to resourceful, each one bringing her special talents into the mix to create a wonderful an successful business.
September 24, 2017
What a treat!
This Pride and Prejudice variation is a true gem. It stays true to the tone and humor of the original while adding so much more. I'm not an Austen purist, but if you are, this variation treats the original characters and plot with care.
Our story begins true to canon with Elizabeth right after the Netherfield ball. The only difference is that Mr. Gardiner has recently passed, leaving his estate to Mrs. Gardiner with small sums to his nieces. Mr. Collins makes his disastrous offer to Elizabeth, and she rejects him with gusto. That day, Mr. Bennet is caught in a rainstorm and becomes very ill, sparking the events of the rest of the story.
With Longbourn entailed to an angry Mr. Collins, Mrs. Bennet and the girls are left homeless and nearly penniless. The Bennet family splits between the Gardiner and the Phillips' households, but the prospect of living on the charity of relatives is difficult for Elizabeth. She's approached by a very unlikely person and offered a business partnership running a little tea shop in Meryton. She accepts, and she and her sisters become tradeswomen.
Most of the events up to the Netherfield ball are quickly summarized without being rehashed, so the story isn't bogged down with events we're very familiar with. Instead, we jump right into Mr. Bennet's accident and then the story introduces all new scenes. The story is alternately told from Elizabeth and Darcy's point of view with very surprising fun additions by Caroline Bingley.
In the original P&P, the only characters that experience any development are Darcy and Elizabeth. All the other characters stay as silly, sweet, arrogant, obsequious or mercenary as they were in the beginning. In this variation, most of the characters experience realistic and welcome character arcs. I loved the new relationship between the sisters and the different strengths they each showed running the shop. Caroline Bingley was a joy and a surprise, most authors depict her as an over the top villainess, this variation made her chapters fun.
The narration was well done, each character had their own recognizable speaking voice. I really enjoyed it, and I'd listen to this narrator again.
With the interesting plot twists, character development, and one of the most outrageous Darcy proposals I've ever read, I'd definitely recommend this book to anyone looking for more D&E.
This Pride and Prejudice variation is a true gem. It stays true to the tone and humor of the original while adding so much more. I'm not an Austen purist, but if you are, this variation treats the original characters and plot with care.
Our story begins true to canon with Elizabeth right after the Netherfield ball. The only difference is that Mr. Gardiner has recently passed, leaving his estate to Mrs. Gardiner with small sums to his nieces. Mr. Collins makes his disastrous offer to Elizabeth, and she rejects him with gusto. That day, Mr. Bennet is caught in a rainstorm and becomes very ill, sparking the events of the rest of the story.
With Longbourn entailed to an angry Mr. Collins, Mrs. Bennet and the girls are left homeless and nearly penniless. The Bennet family splits between the Gardiner and the Phillips' households, but the prospect of living on the charity of relatives is difficult for Elizabeth. She's approached by a very unlikely person and offered a business partnership running a little tea shop in Meryton. She accepts, and she and her sisters become tradeswomen.
Most of the events up to the Netherfield ball are quickly summarized without being rehashed, so the story isn't bogged down with events we're very familiar with. Instead, we jump right into Mr. Bennet's accident and then the story introduces all new scenes. The story is alternately told from Elizabeth and Darcy's point of view with very surprising fun additions by Caroline Bingley.
In the original P&P, the only characters that experience any development are Darcy and Elizabeth. All the other characters stay as silly, sweet, arrogant, obsequious or mercenary as they were in the beginning. In this variation, most of the characters experience realistic and welcome character arcs. I loved the new relationship between the sisters and the different strengths they each showed running the shop. Caroline Bingley was a joy and a surprise, most authors depict her as an over the top villainess, this variation made her chapters fun.
The narration was well done, each character had their own recognizable speaking voice. I really enjoyed it, and I'd listen to this narrator again.
With the interesting plot twists, character development, and one of the most outrageous Darcy proposals I've ever read, I'd definitely recommend this book to anyone looking for more D&E.
December 11, 2020
This is my review of the audio version as posted on Audible, with 3 stars for the story, 5 for the performance, which makes it 4 stars overall:
I started listening to the series with the second installment (A Beau Bon-Bon Christmas) last year, and I liked the story a lot, especially that it focused on Mrs Bennet of all people:) So I was happy when I got the first and the third parts of the series to listen to and review. And while I generally like all three books a lot, this one turns out to be the one I like the least...
The plot includes all the crucial events from the original while also obviously introducing changes that are starting points for the different paths that things take in this version. And that's exactly what we want from any variation - alternatives, things that may have happened had the events turned out differently for this or that character... And this part is very well done, indeed. But... a good variation needs to build on those elements from the original that make us feel familiar with the characters, their surroundings, their world. And we find them here as well, only the similarities are too similar (I know it sounds strange put like that but I can't explain it better), they feel too literally 'copied' into the new version - and somehow sometimes that made things clash for me... Like an old cracked mirror, a family heirloom, that suddenly doesn't look so good on the newly redecorated wall in your house...
But, with all the above said, it's a good introduction to the series, with all the favourite (and less favourite:)) characters from the original, with some great ideas for the development of events, with surprises on the way which put some of our heroes and heroines in a different light:) and with a wonderful narration by Ms Meisberger. As usual, she's perfection when it comes to bringing the world of the gentry - ladies and gentlemen:) - to life:) You'll just forget it's the 21st century, with all its problems and hustle and bustle of everyday life and immerse yourself in the 19th centry rural England with her wonderful, warm voice:)
DISCLAIMER: I was given this free review copy audiobook at my request and have voluntarily left this review.
I started listening to the series with the second installment (A Beau Bon-Bon Christmas) last year, and I liked the story a lot, especially that it focused on Mrs Bennet of all people:) So I was happy when I got the first and the third parts of the series to listen to and review. And while I generally like all three books a lot, this one turns out to be the one I like the least...
The plot includes all the crucial events from the original while also obviously introducing changes that are starting points for the different paths that things take in this version. And that's exactly what we want from any variation - alternatives, things that may have happened had the events turned out differently for this or that character... And this part is very well done, indeed. But... a good variation needs to build on those elements from the original that make us feel familiar with the characters, their surroundings, their world. And we find them here as well, only the similarities are too similar (I know it sounds strange put like that but I can't explain it better), they feel too literally 'copied' into the new version - and somehow sometimes that made things clash for me... Like an old cracked mirror, a family heirloom, that suddenly doesn't look so good on the newly redecorated wall in your house...
But, with all the above said, it's a good introduction to the series, with all the favourite (and less favourite:)) characters from the original, with some great ideas for the development of events, with surprises on the way which put some of our heroes and heroines in a different light:) and with a wonderful narration by Ms Meisberger. As usual, she's perfection when it comes to bringing the world of the gentry - ladies and gentlemen:) - to life:) You'll just forget it's the 21st century, with all its problems and hustle and bustle of everyday life and immerse yourself in the 19th centry rural England with her wonderful, warm voice:)
DISCLAIMER: I was given this free review copy audiobook at my request and have voluntarily left this review.
October 5, 2019
In this P&P variation the status of the Bennet family has fallen into the realms of trade. After refusing Collins Elizabeth feels that she cannot refuse an unexpected offer from a most improbable source. But she does. After everyone has left Netherfield how can there be a happy ending for anyone. Enter Colonel Fitzwilliam and a de Bourgh cousin, Major Carleton Quartermaine of the Dragoons.
What I loved about this story was that Mary was not lumbered with Collins or any other idiot, (which has been happening too much lately and these stories are unreadable). Though I didn't care much for the Colonels' fate.
But overall a very enjoyable variation.
What I loved about this story was that Mary was not lumbered with Collins or any other idiot, (which has been happening too much lately and these stories are unreadable). Though I didn't care much for the Colonels' fate.
But overall a very enjoyable variation.
March 7, 2021
I loved this! What I liked most about this was not D&E’s relationship, but the evolvement of each of the Bennet sisters and the development of their relationship with each other! It was so touching! It’s so refreshing to read a P&P story wherein none of the Sisters was silly or embarrassing.
I loved how each of them discover their own unique talents and use them towards helping each other out in overcoming their situation. So inspiring! I find Darcy’s 2nd proposal silly though. For me, he didn’t really grovel enough. I wanted a more serious resolution to D&E’s relationship. I also still find Caroline irritating and strongly objects to her good ending
I loved how each of them discover their own unique talents and use them towards helping each other out in overcoming their situation. So inspiring! I find Darcy’s 2nd proposal silly though. For me, he didn’t really grovel enough. I wanted a more serious resolution to D&E’s relationship. I also still find Caroline irritating and strongly objects to her good ending
October 23, 2016
This particular version of Darcy And Elizabeth is every bit as good as the original. The story is very well written and reads extremely well.
I particularly loved the unique 2nd proposal by Mr Darcy. It was very touching.
I found the characters true to form, all of them and the way Kate Bedlow has told her story left me thirsting for more.
As usual, Jannie Meisberger has done a wonderful job with the narration.
Thank you to both of you for a most entertaining listen.
I was provided this audiobook at no charge by the author, publisher and/or narrator for an unbiased review.
I particularly loved the unique 2nd proposal by Mr Darcy. It was very touching.
I found the characters true to form, all of them and the way Kate Bedlow has told her story left me thirsting for more.
As usual, Jannie Meisberger has done a wonderful job with the narration.
Thank you to both of you for a most entertaining listen.
I was provided this audiobook at no charge by the author, publisher and/or narrator for an unbiased review.
February 5, 2020
This was an interesting read where the Bennet sisters along with their mother enter a partnership to run a coffeehouse in Meryton. It's really interesting to see the author's portrayal of how our favorite five sisters (technically four sisters) respond to and adapt to the change in their social standing as well as how their characters develop with the responsibilities of starting up and running a successful business. Throw in a little romance and a couple villains and it makes a pretty fun read (or listen in my case as I listened to the audiobook!)
March 21, 2018
Moore bad, bad editing
Typos are one thing but How did Caroline Brinkley come up with an elopement? It's like a hint in a crime novel .... can you detect who the criminal is? But maybe i misread. Twice. Don't mind the trade bit but did not find the story to be strong. Too much copying of Austen lines, not enough character development.
Typos are one thing but How did Caroline Brinkley come up with an elopement? It's like a hint in a crime novel .... can you detect who the criminal is? But maybe i misread. Twice. Don't mind the trade bit but did not find the story to be strong. Too much copying of Austen lines, not enough character development.
October 13, 2024
All the sisters have their charming side
Its not just about Jane and Lizzy, eclipsing the other sisters. enjoyed seeing their growth and sister bond. Mary, or Lydia weren't all one sided. After several re-tellings, this one was a favorite one for all the right yet interesting reasons.
Its not just about Jane and Lizzy, eclipsing the other sisters. enjoyed seeing their growth and sister bond. Mary, or Lydia weren't all one sided. After several re-tellings, this one was a favorite one for all the right yet interesting reasons.
October 17, 2018
A bit of fluff. Using the bones of Pride and Prejudice, the author twists the story some and yet comes to the same conclusion. And an even happier ending. Everyone finds someone, most loose ends are tied up. I did not like the trade aspect of the story. But hey that’s my opinion.
October 23, 2018
One of the better ones
I’ve read far too many Austen (& Bronte) variations than ever could be good for me, but this is one of the better ones with just enough innovation (& editing) to make it a fine read.
I’ve read far too many Austen (& Bronte) variations than ever could be good for me, but this is one of the better ones with just enough innovation (& editing) to make it a fine read.
September 21, 2020
I enjoyed this version of Pride and Prejudice. Due to bad luck, the Bennet women are left near penniless. Even though they open a tea shop in their small town, this doesn't lessen Mr. Darcy's interest in Elizabeth. New characters are introduced that fit nicely with the original story.
July 19, 2021
Great P and P variation!
I loved the sisters working together to make the Bon Bon a success. I didn't like the name but I guess it did sound more exotic. I loved Mr Darcy's struggle with his feelings but continuation to help Elizabeth
I loved the sisters working together to make the Bon Bon a success. I didn't like the name but I guess it did sound more exotic. I loved Mr Darcy's struggle with his feelings but continuation to help Elizabeth
October 17, 2021
Elizabeth has business
Wonderful story, Elizabeth’s business is the main draw in this story. Georgie is bolder than canon. Ending was not very believable but doesn’t detract from the story.
Wonderful story, Elizabeth’s business is the main draw in this story. Georgie is bolder than canon. Ending was not very believable but doesn’t detract from the story.
October 18, 2021
Absolutely loved this version
I’ve read hundreds of P and P Sequels. This version was really delightful. I thoroughly enjoyed reading it. I had a few different twists at the end that I really enjoyed.
I’ve read hundreds of P and P Sequels. This version was really delightful. I thoroughly enjoyed reading it. I had a few different twists at the end that I really enjoyed.
May 21, 2019
Interesting Variation
Story was nicely paced. I liked having the sisters run a shop (an idea I have long had). Lydia's role in the story was a great twist.
Story was nicely paced. I liked having the sisters run a shop (an idea I have long had). Lydia's role in the story was a great twist.
August 4, 2020
First listen? Enjoyable. Second listen? Hmmm…
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February 18, 2022
The epilogue was wonderful!
Good story. New characters were interesting. Glad to see a different side to traditional characters. I enjoyed it; worth the read.😊
Good story. New characters were interesting. Glad to see a different side to traditional characters. I enjoyed it; worth the read.😊
September 11, 2022
“At all events…”
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