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Once Upon A Nightmare: The Undead Tale of Sleeping Beauty

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She was cursed as a baby, lived her life locked away in her tower, waiting for the one to free her from the bonds of the curse that imprisoned her.

He was a peasant boy, orphaned at a very young age, told to reclaim what was his.

A quest, one hundred years in the making, finally coming to light. But only to go through darkness.

76 pages, Kindle Edition

Published May 8, 2016

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March 30, 2023
While free of grammatical errors, this alternate version of Sleeping Beauty was told rather than shown. Very little sensory description was given and not much character development to make the reader experience the characters' feelings. The biggest drawback, however, I found to be the naive and unrealistic characteristic of the main male protagonist. Based on the numbers presented, he should have been twenty years-old for most of the story, but spoke and acted as a child. He's even referred to as a "young boy" at one point. With deeper character development (and an age shift that prevents a twenty year-old from falling in love with a sixteen year-old), and descriptions that show rather than tell, the story had the bones to be quite good. It just didn't quite get there
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