What a letdown :-(
I dunno about this one
I was so ready to write an excited positive review of this story. Its a really great real world, sweet but actually plausible RH. Getting immersed in this story - the characters, the world, the passion...It's easy.
Until it's suddenly...NOT.
Something happens about midway through this story. (Spoilers to follow)
Randomly, Faith demands her parents adopt two (unknown to them) kids. Just...out of nowhere. And they agree. Just like that. This complete shift in the story left me so confused that I frowned at the story for the next few pages while I tried to reconcile it. I was so confused.
But wait - there's more.
The author threw in an even MORE random, shady, "wtf" plot banana peel. Basically no reason, Faith gets...re-adopted?... by a family she's not even close to. And it happens fast. LIke, SO fast. A single paragraph. So at that point, the dots are no longer connecting for me, and I read everything up until the epilogue...The SECOND epilogue, that is, since the first one is at the beginning of the book...because I kinda just don't believe in these ppl, OR the writer, anymore.
Why did she do it? I guess it was a quick, "oops" fix to a plot development? What did I just spend my money on?
Not to mention that, after all the steamy-ish passionate scenes tearing us up for an explosive actual ultimate act, the writer completely omits it. That p*sses me off, because up until the actual act, which she skipped over, the passionate scenes were very descriptive and engaging.
What a letdown.