Teens can be superheros too!
'What if I were to tell you that some people aren’t quite who they seem to be; that there are those among us with special powers? Most likely you’d dismiss the claim without giving it much thought, maybe even look at me as if I’m some kind of crazy.'
Ethan Myers is a pretty regular teen until he has a car accident that leaves him with a piece of metal lodged in his brain. Then he finds he has developed telepathy and other superpowers. Ethan enters the secret world of superhero (and villain) teens, goes to (two) superhero schools and makes new friends and enemies - and often struggles to tell them apart.
'The Rising' is a YA superhero book in which teens rule the roost and any adult superheroes are thrust well into the background along with parents and all other grown-ups. This is teen v teen with a supporting cast of teens and one or two male, mentor figure, adults. It is a wonderful wish-fulfilment fantasy for boys that age, full of the sweet romance of first love and the struggle to define morality and choose friends wisely. It finishes with a number of unanswered questions and so is well set up for the next adventures in books to come.
“We have to fight back. We can’t just sit here,” Blake shouted. “Start firing. Ethan, Ella, Nova, line up over there. Niko, Murphy, Kari, take the opposite side. Paul and Brian, I want you throwing any cars not being used as barriers. Turn them into weapons. Yoki, if you have it in you, bring down whatever weather you can to slow them down."
The strength of the book is in its chatty main character who is very engaging and often breaks the fourth wall, making the reader feel as if this is someone they know well, who is sharing their life, loves, highs and lows with a good friend. The relationships the character has are well presented, such as the long arc of how Ethan tries to woo and win his Chloe. Characters are mostly defined by their superpowers rather than their personalities, but then there are a lot of them. A few stand out as real people, but often more in their role as regards to Ethan rather than as solid individuals pursuing their own lives.
The writing style is easy, flows smoothly and avoids the perils of purple prose or awkward sentence structures, thus allowing the reader to keep immersion. Pace is patchy, with some good sense of tension in the action scenes at times - but at others, the extended descriptions of not much happening for page after page, weigh the story down. Worldbuilding is inconsistent, which does create some issues as the story progresses.
“All right everyone, gather up the crowd, we best get this done quickly.” Blake ordered. Within minutes the crowd of onlookers had returned.
Overall, this is a great story about an engaging character with a fascinating tale to tell. So what went wrong? Firstly, it is about three times longer than it should be. The events are over-told and it is not until nearly a quarter of the way through the book we actually really get into the story itself. There is too much time spent on 'then we did this, then we did that' kind of events which have no real bearing on the plot or character development. Then there is the high number of other superhero teens Ethan meets - in two separate schools (we also get long details of classes in both too). Instead of introducing them in context, what we get given is effectively a list of names and abilities thinly written as narrative, and the superpower ability is pretty much all we ever learn about almost all those individuals.
The plot holes became troublesome. At the beginning of the book, Ethan lives in a world where he is being awestruck by any show of superpowers and can't believe they exist. In fact, throughout the book, each new ability he encounters produces this awestruck reaction. Then, a bit over half-way through, we are told that the world knows all about superpower individuals and persecutes them so they have to keep hidden. Another good example would be the lack of explanation for the suddenly appearing deus ex machina device which removes memory from entire (oddly co-operative) crowds and the equally unexplained super-technologies which can be created when the situation demands.
This is a story that teens may well love and I would suggest that fans of YA superhero genre books check it out and make the call for themselves.