Maia Graystone has been living in the pit for years, hiding and dreading the day the emperor discovers her. Her brother Max, who was left behind when she got arrested, is constantly on her mind, as she struggles to survive so that she can see him again. Unfortunately one day two of the inmates in the pit come to get her and she is subsequently dragged out and into the hands of a women who has been searching for Maia for years. Meanwhile the world is coming to an end as the an asteroid is set to collide with the planet and make it inhabitable for years to come. The emperor and his court, are up on the space station, safe and sound, while the rest of the population is left to suffer whatever happens. A few lucky winners will get to go and join the emperor in the space station, after competing in the trials. Maia caught up in a situation that assuredly ends in her death is offered a deal by a rich benefactor, compete in the trials with another boy from the pit and when they win, kill the emperor. In return he offers Maia safety for her brother Max.
Spoilers from this point on. I was really generous with rating this book three stars because boy where there so many things about it that need improvement. Most of it has to do with the the fantasy because there were so many things that were kind of left vague or dropped and never referenced again. Like in the beginning Victoria mentions that Maia can manipulate the sensors and it seems as if this is something pertinent or at least it isn't common to other people and then they never freaking mention that again in the book. Also the science behind so many things that are in the book seem iffy at best, like what makes the chosen genetically superior, it never even explains that, or those holograms that show up in the room where there are people, how the fuck. I feel like so many of these type of books put like futuristic scifi things but do nothing to try and make it believable.
That said fine, I can go ahead and try and suspend my disbelief, even though it was really hard doing so anytime her and Caspian' DNA matching was brought up because why would they automatically feel strong attractive just because they have compatible DNA, whatever though. There was also zero explanation for why Nicolai knows half the shit he does, and I can understand it's meant to be ambiguous and mysterious but some of it was just unbelievably convenient. Especially when the emperor is such a tyrant, who is Nicolai getting away with bribing guards. How did he freaking find Max. Same thing with the Emperor, like how convenient that the emperor knew about their plan the whole time, like come on, how?
The book also felt really derivative of a lot of other YA books I've read (in particular Red Rising/Red Queen) which isn't necessarily bad in of itself, it just made me roll my eyes a lot because most of the plot points seemed similar. Like the whole thing with Caspian and Riser, half brothers and love triangle, with one of the brothers losing his trust in her at the end. The monarch pulling the strings of the plan all along for his own gain. The red color being banned because of the Fienain Rebels. The Fienian rebels being made to look like terrorists. The trials in general with the elite competing against one another. The gold/silver/bronze dichotomy. The reconstruction of the protagonist so that they'll fit in at the competition. I probably could keep going but I think you see what I'm saying.
Also the whole thing with Riser, it really fucking incenses me that Maia only started being some what decent to him when he's revealed to be the emperor's bastard and that the whole time she holds him tying her up when she first gets to the pit against him. Like he was just trying to survive too goddamn. And it felt even more dumb that this whole time Riser had feelings for her, that he purposely made her knots loose when she first gets to the pit, that he fed her rat sometimes so she wouldn't starve, that he fucking died on the boat to help save her from drowning, all of it was ridiculous. Why would he have feelings for her like that, he didn't know shit about her, and he was born in a prison, wouldn't it make much more sense for him to be more self interested. Also I still don't understand why Maia was being so mean because he killed people, again he grew up in a prison, what do you expect?
I'm pretty sure there were other things that irritated me about the book but I can't remember now. Also even though I really spent this whole review complaining I want to admit that I read this book in one go, and stayed up until 4 am reading because I couldn't put it down. I got really engrossed in it even though at times the melodramatic writing made me want to roll my eyes. I'm not sure whether that's a signal of the book being good, or just proof that no matter how lacking your fantasy YA novel is, you probably can get me into it because I can't help myself, it's my weakness. Also special mention of all the Fienain rebel jokes because even though it's pretty fucked up a lot of them actually made me laugh and it felt like a really smart genuine touch to add to the book, which made it feel more real.