Parini has written an arresting and intriguing fictional account of the life of Herman Melville. That he uses the novel format is perhaps surprising, yet the voyages and troubled relationships of Melville’s life provide suitable material for Parini’s writing. He uses the voice of Melville’s wife, Lizzie, and a third-person narrative, to alternate chapters. This also allows him to shift from different times in Melville’s life, giving the reader a textured approach to Melville and his eccentricities.
The novel opens with Lizzie’s account of the anger, drunkenness, and questionable sanity of Melville in the later years of their marriage. This leaves Melville’s character more open to a reader’s imagination when the next chapter begins with a young Melville looking for work on a whaler and embarking on his first sea voyage.
Lizzie’s narrative deftly portrays an alternative view of Melville than the one we get from the third-person narration. From her point of view we can see how Melville’s preoccupations and internal conflict become a detached husband and father and a difficult man to live with.
When the chapters move to that of the third-person narration, Parini’s accounts of Melville’s private life and his voyages are beautifully written, with lush descriptions and a skilful creation of Melville’s inner turmoil and infrequent peace. Most of the characters he comes across are also well-written, with few short cuts or stock depictions.
One major problem with Parini’s novel is the frequent anachronism present in the dialogue, vocabulary, and mindsets of the characters he is depicting. The characters, Lizzie in particular, could be lifted in parts from a novel set in contemporary America. Her view of her relationship with Herman, and her manner of conversing with him, are jarringly modern in places.
Another issue with Parini’s prose lies in his propensity to tell a lot of detail, rather than show it. This is particularly notable at the beginning of the novel, as he tries to portray Melville initially through Lizzie’s narrative. While this is perhaps an aspect of the genre of biography, in a fictional account I would have expected less exposition.
There is a similar lack of subtlety in the manner in which Parini highlights the relationship between Melville’s works and their real-life inspiration. The incidences and characters which Parini’s Melville encounters are sometimes little more than caricatures or vague reworkings of the fictional versions, designed to propel this Melville on his writing journey.
Parini’s account of the life of Herman Melville is an unapologetically fictional one. He acknowledges his almost total creation of Lizzie, Melville’s wife, and his chronological shifting of details to suit his own narrative. Parini, however, may take too much free rein with the subject of Melville’s homosexuality. He takes various homosocial aspects of Melville’s texts, and extrapolates from them a lifetime of supposed yearning for handsome young men. This facet of Melville’s character nearly takes over the entire text.
In short, this novel is not perfect, neither as an account of Melville’s life, nor as a novel in its own right. It is, however, an intriguing read and a good insight into Melville’s life for those with no prior knowledge on the subject.