The story premise was lovely, touching. If only the author had injected a little more emotion and pathos into it. It would have been a memorable saga of enduring love :)
The girl is a sweet little 20 year old innocent. Recently orphaned, lives alone in the house left behind by mummy.
She has just been informed by her doctor that she is dying. A brain tumor. She has about 4 months to live. Utterly devastated, no clue what to do next, she asks the doctor for advice. He suggests taking a world cruise to forget her misery and live the remaining months in style! What a pragmatic doctor !
The hero is on the cruise of course, the smartest guy on board. A sort of a mystery man, nobody knows what's his real profession. But the ladies on board the ship are already drooling over him, right on Day 1 !!!
Our poor little miss notices him too, fancies him too. But senses that the fellow is kind of aloof towards her. She wonders why.
Turns out the hero mistakes her for a small time actress in disguise, who is hiding out on the ship after a scandal. In spite of that, he is drawn towards our simpleton sweetie. Whether dying or not, no hot blooded woman can resist the heroes of HP land you see ;)))))))) So our girl loves the attention he starts paying her, albeit reluctantly. He soon confesses to being stupid about the mistaken identity.
All is well between them, or so he thinks. He kisses, flirts, takes her on tours of various tourist landmarks every time the ship makes a stop over. So there is lot of touristy information about these places. She is loving it, but also heart broken that this bliss wont last beyond a few more weeks.
Suddenly, the fellow becomes serious, proposes marriage. The girl is bewildered, doesn't know how to react. She wants to save him from lasting agony. So pretends to be interested only in a frivolous affair, not in anything serious.
He is upset, but not devastated, as I would have expected him to be. In fact, he quite immediately starts moving around with another girl. More out of pique may be, but that didn't gel with the poignant declaration of his love.
Its almost time to finish the voyage. Our girl is seeing increased symptoms of failing health. So she decides to leave the ship without informing anybody. That's when her health collapses and she slumps into unconsciousness in front of the baffled hero.
But this is HP land folks, so Ta da !!! The author pulls out the magic rabbit from her hat. The hero is a celebrated neuro surgeon you see. He simply gets the girl admitted to the nearest hospital, breaks open her skull and fixes the damn thing in her head ! Just like that, no medical terms, no serious surgery scenes, nothing. Just a "Darling, I've patched it all up, and you are going to live long!"
Another shy smile, another sweet kiss, another confession of love. Should have been deeply emotional, "returned from the depths of despair" sort of scene. But it was lightweight.
6 moths of courtship, shaved head grows into short curls, bride in white, church wedding, ecstatic family looking on . HEA.