BA Torguga- Real World Review
I received this book by it's publisher in exchange for an honest review.
I was soooo excited for this story! I absolutely adored Audie and Dixon’s story. I am such a sucker for hot guys who are good daddy’s. We meet Dan in this one; he’s Dixon’s brother who was overseas in their book; he’s back stateside now and retiring, spending time with his brother and visiting his parents. That’s where he meets Weldon…
Weldon is a bisexual widower with 5 kids !!!! Yep, 5, one of which is blind, which is how he met Dixon. He works for The School of the Blind; he and Dixon are good friends and all of their kids get along.
Dan meets Weldon at a jazz club where Dixon is playing on New Years. They have instant chemistry and they get along really well; then Dan goes and puts his foot in his mouth and says that kids aren’t for him… Now, they just met, he doesn’t need to see himself as Daddy material right then; but as a once single parent myself, dating someone who didn’t want kids or couldn’t see themselves with kids was a waste of time. So logically, Weldon knows that he has no future with Dan but they can’t help but fall into bed together with this one free night that they both have. It’s been too long for both of them and they’re both consenting adults, why not, right? It was hot too, they both enjoyed themselves and their attraction was even more noticeable.
I kind of didn’t like Dan for the majority of the book… he only came around when he wanted to get him some and then in the mornings he was like… sorry, you have too many kids, this isn’t gonna work for me. And Weldon was like, yeah, he didn’t lie or lead me on, I knew the score but he keeps letting it happen even though he’s a relationship kinda guy. He doesn’t want a friend with benefits situation and to tell ya the truth; they aren’t even friends in the months between times they bone. I wanted to like Dan because I loved Dix and I liked him in the first book when he’d talk to Dix on the phone and stuff, but in this one he was just selfish and I didn’t like the way he treated Weldon or the fact that he had kids…. Just, sigh…. I didn’t like it at all. THEN when they work everything else and Dan has a change of heart; the things he says to his friend on the phone?? I’d be like, see ya later dude…. You’re totally not worth all that. Then Weldon was just like… what’s wrong honey? Are you not happy?..... What gave you the first clue? The overhearing him talk smack about you or that your kids heard it too…..
What I also didn’t like…. The dialogue was blah at times…. The overuse of metaphors and “sayings”, if I heard “God willin’ and the creek don’t rise” or “Fine as frogs hair”…. It’s like we get it, you’re country… you don’t have to keep sayin terms your grandma taught ya, it’s annoying. Like….reeeeeally annoying. I found my eyes rollin’ at least a dozen times with it’s repetitiveness. Blah. And they say things like “That sucks big hairy rocks, honey.” Or something equally as immature, like, “donkey balls”….it’s like… how old are you guys again? And why does everybody “hoot”? They don’t laugh, they hoot. I keep picturing them laughing like that… “hoot, hoot, hoot”… It’s so ridiculous it’s kind of funny. I’ve never heard anyone hoot instead of laugh; especially as often as they do it.
I will say, now that I’ve gotten that little rant overwith; that I didn’t see that last bit coming; it completely surprised me, the climax of the whole book with Jakob and his bio-dad. I knew when he’d yelled at Dan something about his “real dad” that the bio-dad would make an appearance; but that whole thing was not what I thought would happen and I liked that I was surprised. I also liked how Dan’s relationship with the kids improved and I finally felt a little bit of the love between he and Weldon….Well from his side anyway, Weldon never hid his feelings nor did he go back and forth so it was nice for Dan at least to see that reciprocated. Overall, it wasn’t what I thought it was going to be, but I liked how it ended. Really looking forward to the next one!
3.5 for me