An awful follow-up
I was so in love with the first book. Unfortunately, this one had serious issues. There was no reason that Connor should not have told Sapphire that Damien was alive. She was pregnant with his child and heartbroken from his death. She is already in witness protection. What would have happened if she had met someone else, even if it wasn't the same kind of love? There was just so much wrong with that. Then after Damien finds her he waits for a year saying it's to be sure she was safe????? Yeah, that makes no sense at all. Then we have Connor and Dominic keeping his existence from Damien. Ummm, why? Yes, I read the flimsy excuse they provided, which was complete b.s. They were twins and Damien was carrying around tremendous amounts of pain and guilt over not being able to save his brother. So in what world is it better this way? It's okay to tell the twin all about Damien, but Damien doesn't have the right to know his twin is alive? Urghhhh. All these plots were just done so badly.
My next huge issue is the way she jumps back and forth in the book past to present to different people doing past and present, but only gives you a tiny part of the story at a time. It was completely unnecessary in the first book and after wading through it again in this book, I wanted to scream in frustration. This badly done technique breaks up the flow of the story and can get confusing. I hated it. So I don't reveal any spoilers, let's take the first book for instance. It took most of the book to tell the tale of what happened the night of the party. Why? The two girls had already been on their own for a year. Why not give us that full night story at one time to bring the reader up to date on what happened that night and then let the story flow. Same with his past. The way she just took a tiny incomplete piece of the past and interrupted the current story with it was just maddening and completely unnecessary. She did it here again, but even worse. This author needs to learn to cover background properly and move on. Don't interrupt the flow and chop up the story past or present with only pieces. It doesn't create the suspense she thinks it does. Also needs to insure the plots are realistic with darn good explanations for things that need them; like the choice to keep all those secrets and stay apart a year after he found her. 5 years was just too long to keep them apart. I could see during the time he healed, but she should have been informed the moment Connor knew Damien was alive. The author could have done so much with a more honest storyline and actually gave us some time seeing them grow as a family into deep real love instead of all this lets screw for a day then gotta leave the next day for the bad guys. We weren't given time to fall back in love with them as a couple or family.
Next a subplot is that the Don hasn't lost a game of poker in 20 years! Unless the dude is cheating, that won't happen. Even the best poker players in the world lose hands, quite frequently even. You have no control of the cards you are dealt. There is strategy, but just as much luck is involved. So yeah, that was stupid.
Don't even get me started on the big confrontation that was teased in the beginning. So many issues with that. No FBI agent would ever use a witness protected family as bait, especially to the point of being kidnapped because you lose all control of a situation once they have their hands on them. In real life Damien and Sapphire would have been murdered immediately, not beaten and left for dead. Seriously, you expect ane to buy that? Then S and Richard didn't recognize that Damien was the twin, which again would have been an immediate kill and freak out. And then we find out Damien met S at that party but didn't recognize him because you know the 7 years the guy tortured him he kept his eyes closed! Such b.s. So why not capture the two guys the minute they provided the info to Dominic? Why wait for them to kidnap the girls and confront Damien? Why give the S the chance to tell others that Damien is Sociopath? Why show up so late that the family could have been killed many times over? No FBI would ever have done that.
So, yeah, this was an awful follow-up to such a good first book. I think I'm going to pass on this authors future works. This one was just that bad.