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Unknown Horizons
The moment Lieutenant Alison Ash steps aboard the Persephone, she knows her life will never be the same. She will never again watch the sun rise over the asteroid belt, never again see Earth from a handheld telescope, and never again see her family.
In less than three weeks, the ship will dock at the Posterus and begin the most important journey humankind has ever undertaken. More important than discovering fire, creating language, or even abandoning Earth to live confined in biospheres among the asteroid belt over 100 years ago.
What Ash doesn’t expect is that by keeping her recent memory loss a secret she is jeopardizing not only the Persephone’s mission but humankind’s launch of the first ever generational ship. Nor does she anticipate her attraction to Captain Jordan Kellow, but both will change her life forever.
Words: 52,000
Cover Artist: W.E. Percival
Editor: Katia Noyes
Genre: Speculative Fiction
In less than three weeks, the ship will dock at the Posterus and begin the most important journey humankind has ever undertaken. More important than discovering fire, creating language, or even abandoning Earth to live confined in biospheres among the asteroid belt over 100 years ago.
What Ash doesn’t expect is that by keeping her recent memory loss a secret she is jeopardizing not only the Persephone’s mission but humankind’s launch of the first ever generational ship. Nor does she anticipate her attraction to Captain Jordan Kellow, but both will change her life forever.
Words: 52,000
Cover Artist: W.E. Percival
Editor: Katia Noyes
Genre: Speculative Fiction
240 pages, Paperback
Published April 18, 2017
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C.J. Birch
9 books40 followersCJ Birch is an author, photographer and digital artist based in Toronto. When not writing or devouring books, CJ works as a video editor for television.
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March 17, 2017
2 1/2 Stars. Have you ever finished a book and thought "what the hell did I just read?" It has only happened to me once or twice, but it absolutely happened after reading this book. I'm struggling to process what I just read, how to review it, and even how to rate it.
I love lesfic sci-fi, and will happily read any new books in that category that come out. I was really looking forward to this. I'm just so torn. I thought the setting and world building really worked. The book is very fast paced, and I got into it quickly. It isn't overloaded with made up or real scientific terms; I understood everything that was going on.
The characters were so so. The main character absolutely drove me nuts, contrary to her her rank, she wasn't always the sharpest tool in the shed. And when it came to the Captain, she wasn't as captain-ish, as she needed to be. The romance is almost nonexistent, which I felt was a real missed opportunity.
However, my biggest issue is with the ending, if you can call it that. What the heck was that? Can I even call it a cliffhanger? I don't know. Was that the end of the story, or will there be a book 2. The book just ends, like it is missing the last 1/3 of it. The book is short, almost a novella, so it really seemed like the book was just cut off. I absolutely hate this kind of ending, and I came away actually feeling angry about it. I really wish the author would have written Fin, End, The End, or let us know the adventure will continue in book 2. Something, anything, but how this book "ended".
I just can't recommend this. I would have rated this 3 or 3 1/2 stars without the ending, it just ruined it too much for me. I think people that read this will get into this book and enjoy the fast paced story. But there is going to be plenty of people that say, "what the hell did I just read?"
An ARC was given to me by BSB, for a honest review.
I love lesfic sci-fi, and will happily read any new books in that category that come out. I was really looking forward to this. I'm just so torn. I thought the setting and world building really worked. The book is very fast paced, and I got into it quickly. It isn't overloaded with made up or real scientific terms; I understood everything that was going on.
The characters were so so. The main character absolutely drove me nuts, contrary to her her rank, she wasn't always the sharpest tool in the shed. And when it came to the Captain, she wasn't as captain-ish, as she needed to be. The romance is almost nonexistent, which I felt was a real missed opportunity.
However, my biggest issue is with the ending, if you can call it that. What the heck was that? Can I even call it a cliffhanger? I don't know. Was that the end of the story, or will there be a book 2. The book just ends, like it is missing the last 1/3 of it. The book is short, almost a novella, so it really seemed like the book was just cut off. I absolutely hate this kind of ending, and I came away actually feeling angry about it. I really wish the author would have written Fin, End, The End, or let us know the adventure will continue in book 2. Something, anything, but how this book "ended".
I just can't recommend this. I would have rated this 3 or 3 1/2 stars without the ending, it just ruined it too much for me. I think people that read this will get into this book and enjoy the fast paced story. But there is going to be plenty of people that say, "what the hell did I just read?"
An ARC was given to me by BSB, for a honest review.
March 26, 2017
Well...that was one fast read. Couldn't tear myself away from the book, not even to post updates here. :) A page-turner indeed. That said, I did find the book too short (50k+ words only), the world-building inadequate, the lead character not very smart (acts too YA--impulsive and not thinking things through), and it ends on a As for the romance...what romance? There is so much going on, this book needed to be 20% longer to tackle the romance properly, as it's really...inappropriate. Missed opportunity there. There's plotholes. And oh, it's written in the hated 1st person POV. :( But damn, that plot had me completely hooked!
3.8 stars
ARC from Netgalley
P.S. The book is short but had a very interesting sci-fi plot and exciting action I tore through it in a day, and I'm a notoriously slow reader. But it doesn't have an ending. Definitely part 1 of a series but isn't advertised as one. (Why not???) And now that its up on Amazon, the price is a shocker: $8.99! This feels more like a $4.99 book.
3.8 stars
ARC from Netgalley
P.S. The book is short but had a very interesting sci-fi plot and exciting action I tore through it in a day, and I'm a notoriously slow reader. But it doesn't have an ending. Definitely part 1 of a series but isn't advertised as one. (Why not???) And now that its up on Amazon, the price is a shocker: $8.99! This feels more like a $4.99 book.
July 14, 2017
Have you ever read a book that left you thinking wtf? Well this one did to me. There is no explanation to why what or where. You jump straight in. Now that can be a good thing admittedly getting straight to the story but I needed just a little more information.
Now, I liked what I read but I'm still feeling a little dazed. Let me see if I get this right. Earth is no longer populated due to it being unable to support human life. They now live amongst the stars. Ash the first officer was held hostage in the past and a module put in her body which made her forget her internment. But with the on board doctors help she starts to remember. The Burrs are some kind of human x cyborg beings who feel the mission that Ash is on is wrong and are using Ash to stop it. Am I confusing you? Good. Now the Captain Jordan has a twist at the end that I honestly did not see coming. As you can guess there is some kind of romance between Ash and Jordan.
Then, Birch decides not to finish the dam book. COME ON? Cliffhanger maybe, tormenting me definitely. Now I am praying to anyone who will listen... there had better be a sequel or I'm jumping out or my window. Don't worry I live in a bungalow drop is about 4 feet.
NOTE TO AUTHOR.... WE NEED A SEQUEL AND MAYBE A PREQUEL
I gave it 3.5 stars because what I read I liked. My other complaint was that it was way too short. You got to the juicy bit and it stops and everything go's white. Frustrated? you bet!
I would recommend it but please do not read it anywhere you could do yourself damage. You need to be safe and secure because the urge will hit you. Enjoy!
*ARC provided by publisher via NetGalley*
Now, I liked what I read but I'm still feeling a little dazed. Let me see if I get this right. Earth is no longer populated due to it being unable to support human life. They now live amongst the stars. Ash the first officer was held hostage in the past and a module put in her body which made her forget her internment. But with the on board doctors help she starts to remember. The Burrs are some kind of human x cyborg beings who feel the mission that Ash is on is wrong and are using Ash to stop it. Am I confusing you? Good. Now the Captain Jordan has a twist at the end that I honestly did not see coming. As you can guess there is some kind of romance between Ash and Jordan.
Then, Birch decides not to finish the dam book. COME ON? Cliffhanger maybe, tormenting me definitely. Now I am praying to anyone who will listen... there had better be a sequel or I'm jumping out or my window. Don't worry I live in a bungalow drop is about 4 feet.
NOTE TO AUTHOR.... WE NEED A SEQUEL AND MAYBE A PREQUEL
I gave it 3.5 stars because what I read I liked. My other complaint was that it was way too short. You got to the juicy bit and it stops and everything go's white. Frustrated? you bet!
I would recommend it but please do not read it anywhere you could do yourself damage. You need to be safe and secure because the urge will hit you. Enjoy!
*ARC provided by publisher via NetGalley*
April 9, 2017
Ash is the new first officer of a generation ship about to set off into space, for a century long trip to a new home that she herself will never see. She has memory gaps from a previous event. Concealing those gaps makes life difficult at first and then quickly leads to the main storyline.
I am not quite sure what to make of this book. Told in first person, present tense. That took some getting used to. The writing is a little uneven and could have done with more editing. Some details are glanced over and not explained enough, others are explained too much. Some plot holes. And what's up with the tofu obsession? Would that be such a big deal, needing to get mentioned every single time, considering the setting?
One moment Ash is this insecure girl, in the next chapter she is assertive and a wanna-be kick-as heroine. The captain is not much more convincing. I really can't see those two as the commanding officers tasked with bringing 45 thousand people to a new home. Especially Ash doesn't come across as mature enough for her position.
My favourite characters were the engineer (Hello, Scotty!) and the doctor, but their roles were largely in the sidelines.
The plot idea was good and not what I expected. I am not sold on the writing though. I would have liked a stronger sci-fi element and less sappy romance.
And the ending - WTF? Massive cliffhanger and no sequel in sight. Now that sucks. I wasn't planning on getting a potential sequel, but now I will have no choice. Smart move, Ms Birch! Hurry the heck up!
The book blurb could probably do with a hint, that there will be a sequel, so people can consider the possibility of getting left dangling at the end of the book.
I received this free e-copy from the publisher/author via NetGalley, in exchange for an honest review, thank you!
I am not quite sure what to make of this book. Told in first person, present tense. That took some getting used to. The writing is a little uneven and could have done with more editing. Some details are glanced over and not explained enough, others are explained too much. Some plot holes. And what's up with the tofu obsession? Would that be such a big deal, needing to get mentioned every single time, considering the setting?
One moment Ash is this insecure girl, in the next chapter she is assertive and a wanna-be kick-as heroine. The captain is not much more convincing. I really can't see those two as the commanding officers tasked with bringing 45 thousand people to a new home. Especially Ash doesn't come across as mature enough for her position.
My favourite characters were the engineer (Hello, Scotty!) and the doctor, but their roles were largely in the sidelines.
The plot idea was good and not what I expected. I am not sold on the writing though. I would have liked a stronger sci-fi element and less sappy romance.
And the ending - WTF? Massive cliffhanger and no sequel in sight. Now that sucks. I wasn't planning on getting a potential sequel, but now I will have no choice. Smart move, Ms Birch! Hurry the heck up!
The book blurb could probably do with a hint, that there will be a sequel, so people can consider the possibility of getting left dangling at the end of the book.
I received this free e-copy from the publisher/author via NetGalley, in exchange for an honest review, thank you!
March 30, 2017
*ARC provided by Netgalley and the Publisher for an honest review*
I absolutely enjoyed this storyline and couldn't put the book down which means that I sat up all night until I finished it. The premise of this book was unique and interesting and there was so much more potential for it but then I got I the end...
And that is exactly what happened. I feel like this is a book which could have just been about the sci-fi plot without the romance but their was a relationship in it so I think the author should have invested a bit more time in that if they were going to add that storyline in.
The only reason that I am giving this book 4 stars is because of how interesting the storyline was a how well written the book was until the end...
But if there is no sequel to this book then that rating will definitely drop.
I absolutely enjoyed this storyline and couldn't put the book down which means that I sat up all night until I finished it. The premise of this book was unique and interesting and there was so much more potential for it but then I got I the end...
And that is exactly what happened. I feel like this is a book which could have just been about the sci-fi plot without the romance but their was a relationship in it so I think the author should have invested a bit more time in that if they were going to add that storyline in.
The only reason that I am giving this book 4 stars is because of how interesting the storyline was a how well written the book was until the end...
But if there is no sequel to this book then that rating will definitely drop.
November 18, 2017
What....... Is this the first book of a series or is this just a really crappy way to end the book?????? I can't really tell!
This was an okay read. It was very short and fast-paced so you could read this super fast which was cool. The story had an interesting premise and was quite good, it could have used a bit more world building in my opinion.
There was a f/f romance which could have been really good, however, I didn't really connect with the characters and I REALLY didn't understand how the romance between the two of them developed. It was just kind of there????
Anyway, I'm giving this 3 stars maybe 2.5 I can't decide.
After some consideration, I'm giving this book 2 stars because I don't think I would recommend it to anyone.
*I received an ARC from the publisher via Netgalley in exchange for an honest review*
This was an okay read. It was very short and fast-paced so you could read this super fast which was cool. The story had an interesting premise and was quite good, it could have used a bit more world building in my opinion.
There was a f/f romance which could have been really good, however, I didn't really connect with the characters and I REALLY didn't understand how the romance between the two of them developed. It was just kind of there????
After some consideration, I'm giving this book 2 stars because I don't think I would recommend it to anyone.
*I received an ARC from the publisher via Netgalley in exchange for an honest review*
April 29, 2018
I don't know what it is, but there's something comforting about cruising through space wrapped in the certainty that you're sometimes only inches from the utter stillness of space
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3 / 5
Unknown Horizons absolutely nails some good sci-fi staples: an officer aboard a starship, a mission to help save humanity, a sort-of savage mech race, some religious aspects, and a nice romance. Lieutenant Alison "Ali" Ash has memory loss, a fact she conceal from Captain Jordan Kellow when she boards her vessel Persephone, en route to the Posterus, the first multigenerational ship setting sail for new habitable planets. As Ash alienates almost all of the crew, stranger things keep happening to her.
First off, this is a lesbian sci-fi romance. It's actually the second one I've read recently (In Ageless Sleep was the other) and both have suffered from the same problem: the romance isn't developed enough! In Unknown Horizons the chemistry between Ali and her Captain Jordan feels very real, but because this is a mere slim volume of a book, clocking in at about 240 pages, and not an epic sci-fi escapade, the romance is always competing for page time with the big plot that's going on. What we get is sweet and lovely and there's a rather explicit sex scene, but it really could have done with a bit more focus.
Part of me has been lost forever. I am one of the monsters who haunt our night time.
Then there's Ali herself. She's a bit standoffish, alienates the crew, is apparently a hard taskworker, and argues with her dad a lot. A few months beforehand, Ali was stationed on a station when the Burr attacked. The Burr are a type of semi-automated soldier, humans with mechanical parts, built for wars when people still lived on Earth. They have all sorts of weird ideas about human purity, but most worryingly, Ali can't actually remember much about the attack. Ali goes through some good character development.
I did really quite like the plot and Birch is good at doling out information when it becomes important and relevant. I was surprised, however, that the plot is so small and self-contained, as it were. The Persephone barely reaches the Posterus, to begin the "most important journey humankind has ever undertaken". When I picked up Unknown Horizons that's what I expected it to be about: exploration, science, journeys. But it kinda ... isn't. Whilst I still really enjoyed the plot, it was not what I expected.
I'm seeing the captain, not Jordan. And it's not just that she's about to give me a direct order, it's everything about her.
Jordan is a much more interesting character with a delicious backstory that comes into play. She does seem like a bit of a weak Captain, however; she's got a first officer whose mattress has been sliced open by a crew member in a non-friendly manner, and there's all sorts of mutiny going on, but she never really does much about it. We also never really get to see Ali at her day to day job, which is a shame.
Unknown Horizons is quite a short but enjoyable sci-fi & romance novel. I particularly enjoyed the whole memory loss aspect and the beginning development of Ali and Jordan's relationship.
My thanks to Netgalley, the publisher, and the author for an ARC of this book.
Read this review and more on my blog: https://atlasrisingbooks.wordpress.co...
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3 / 5
Unknown Horizons absolutely nails some good sci-fi staples: an officer aboard a starship, a mission to help save humanity, a sort-of savage mech race, some religious aspects, and a nice romance. Lieutenant Alison "Ali" Ash has memory loss, a fact she conceal from Captain Jordan Kellow when she boards her vessel Persephone, en route to the Posterus, the first multigenerational ship setting sail for new habitable planets. As Ash alienates almost all of the crew, stranger things keep happening to her.
First off, this is a lesbian sci-fi romance. It's actually the second one I've read recently (In Ageless Sleep was the other) and both have suffered from the same problem: the romance isn't developed enough! In Unknown Horizons the chemistry between Ali and her Captain Jordan feels very real, but because this is a mere slim volume of a book, clocking in at about 240 pages, and not an epic sci-fi escapade, the romance is always competing for page time with the big plot that's going on. What we get is sweet and lovely and there's a rather explicit sex scene, but it really could have done with a bit more focus.
Part of me has been lost forever. I am one of the monsters who haunt our night time.
Then there's Ali herself. She's a bit standoffish, alienates the crew, is apparently a hard taskworker, and argues with her dad a lot. A few months beforehand, Ali was stationed on a station when the Burr attacked. The Burr are a type of semi-automated soldier, humans with mechanical parts, built for wars when people still lived on Earth. They have all sorts of weird ideas about human purity, but most worryingly, Ali can't actually remember much about the attack. Ali goes through some good character development.
I did really quite like the plot and Birch is good at doling out information when it becomes important and relevant. I was surprised, however, that the plot is so small and self-contained, as it were. The Persephone barely reaches the Posterus, to begin the "most important journey humankind has ever undertaken". When I picked up Unknown Horizons that's what I expected it to be about: exploration, science, journeys. But it kinda ... isn't. Whilst I still really enjoyed the plot, it was not what I expected.
I'm seeing the captain, not Jordan. And it's not just that she's about to give me a direct order, it's everything about her.
Jordan is a much more interesting character with a delicious backstory that comes into play. She does seem like a bit of a weak Captain, however; she's got a first officer whose mattress has been sliced open by a crew member in a non-friendly manner, and there's all sorts of mutiny going on, but she never really does much about it. We also never really get to see Ali at her day to day job, which is a shame.
Unknown Horizons is quite a short but enjoyable sci-fi & romance novel. I particularly enjoyed the whole memory loss aspect and the beginning development of Ali and Jordan's relationship.
My thanks to Netgalley, the publisher, and the author for an ARC of this book.
Read this review and more on my blog: https://atlasrisingbooks.wordpress.co...
March 30, 2017
This was a very quick read. Firstly, because the book isn’t too long (I’m not complaining) and secondly, I couldn’t put it down. From the first chapter the author throws you into this fast-paced story that doesn’t feel rushed.
Although I appreciate a short story, I think an extra 100 pages on this one wouldn’t have hurt. By the time it ended I really wanted more. I hope this is just the first part of a series, at least it felt that way. But it doesn’t say it’s a first part of a series so that worries me a bit. I NEED to know more!
My wishlist for a sequel (or sequels?) is more world building because the setting was interesting enough that I want to know more. More background on the characters, while we got some back story on Alison and Jordan I think there is room for more.
Either way, this was a fantastic read for me. It is always a nice surprise when I can’t put a book down. I will be keeping an eye out for this author.
Although I appreciate a short story, I think an extra 100 pages on this one wouldn’t have hurt. By the time it ended I really wanted more. I hope this is just the first part of a series, at least it felt that way. But it doesn’t say it’s a first part of a series so that worries me a bit. I NEED to know more!
My wishlist for a sequel (or sequels?) is more world building because the setting was interesting enough that I want to know more. More background on the characters, while we got some back story on Alison and Jordan I think there is room for more.
Either way, this was a fantastic read for me. It is always a nice surprise when I can’t put a book down. I will be keeping an eye out for this author.
April 10, 2017
this book falls in the awkward gray area between novel and novella, and whereas some books can make that work, i'd have vastly preferred a few more thousand words to bring this firmly in the novel category.
the seed for a good story was there, but it was limited in its growth by the short amount of words. there was little worldbuilding, which is pretty crucial for the space opera genre, and none of the storylines were really pursued to their full potential. the romance, for example, was not all that developed at all. (and ash runs away from her after their kiss like i did from my crush one time when i was twelve. i mean, it wasn't after a kiss because i didn't have that much charisma when i was twelve (or currently... haha... ha) but my point still stands, grown-ups don't run away when things go awry.)
In Ageless Sleep is a really good example of a space opera that manages to fit a compelling and well-built world and narrative in the short framework of a novella (and it's also f-f), but unknown horizons didn't quite manage it, i'm afraid.
i will fittingly end this review with a comment on the ending: whereas i'm not against cliffhangers as a general concept, i am against them when there are no other real threads tied up and the whole plot is just left suspended in midair. cliffhangers only work when all other plotlines are resolved and there is one (maybe two) specific threads that are left, so to speak, hanging over a cliff. but when there is little-to-no resolution, i'm afraid it just does not work, and that is what happened here.
the seed for a good story was there, but it was limited in its growth by the short amount of words. there was little worldbuilding, which is pretty crucial for the space opera genre, and none of the storylines were really pursued to their full potential. the romance, for example, was not all that developed at all. (and ash runs away from her after their kiss like i did from my crush one time when i was twelve. i mean, it wasn't after a kiss because i didn't have that much charisma when i was twelve (or currently... haha... ha) but my point still stands, grown-ups don't run away when things go awry.)
In Ageless Sleep is a really good example of a space opera that manages to fit a compelling and well-built world and narrative in the short framework of a novella (and it's also f-f), but unknown horizons didn't quite manage it, i'm afraid.
i will fittingly end this review with a comment on the ending: whereas i'm not against cliffhangers as a general concept, i am against them when there are no other real threads tied up and the whole plot is just left suspended in midair. cliffhangers only work when all other plotlines are resolved and there is one (maybe two) specific threads that are left, so to speak, hanging over a cliff. but when there is little-to-no resolution, i'm afraid it just does not work, and that is what happened here.
July 14, 2017
I enjoyed reading the book and will keep an eye out for hopefully, the sequel to this book. The story was quite engaging and the action was not lacking. Characterization was a little uneven at points but it did not drag the story down at all. The tension between both characters and the love scenes were done well.
November 12, 2017
Couldn't even finish this book. The plot was all over the place .
I tried to give it a chance but it just got worst as it went on and on ...
I tried to give it a chance but it just got worst as it went on and on ...
May 7, 2017
Good points: The basic through-line of the plot and the grammar. Birch thanked her editor, because she did not know about the proper uses of commas.
Bad points: Everything else. This is probably one of the worst books I have read in years. The author is good at telling, but horrible at showing action. The main characters are absolutely unbelievable. Birch shows she has never read a proper space opera or knows anything about how the military operates.. The first give away was the fact that Lieutenant Alison Ash is met by a corporal. She is on a ship. SHe would have been met by an ensign or a midshipman. She says the crew is small, but how small? She gives no number, which might not seem important, but is due to the fact 1). neither she nor security can figure out who breaks into her quarters and vandalizes everything (this happens before the end of Ash's first week), 2). the same "corporal" who welcomed Ash when she came on board and who Ash apparently assaults is the only one able to bring her meals, which he spits into while she watches, when she is confined to the brig and later her quarters, and 3). Vasa, who is assigned to keep track of Ash, must also cover the communications station at the same time. The ship has security. Why isn't security having one of it's members following Ash? This Vasa apparently also stinks for lack of bathing. Would the crew that serves with him complain. Why doesn't Ash, who is the exec, order him to shower before his smell kills everyone and they have to fumigate the ship?
Apparently Ash upsets the crew the first day of her arrival, because she orders them to run. We never see the scene. Yet, are they not part of the Union fleet and should be exercising. The only scenes we ever have are of Captain Jordan Kellow reprimanding Ash or of Ash's internal musings. No captain would ever have his or her office in a bedroom. It would be a room situated off the bridge. Apparently, an entire society exists out in the asteroid belt, but the first person to arrive did so only two generations ago. Birch says the asteroid settlements do not have a central government, yet Ash's father served in the Commons, the legislature. Well, that is the central government. May I suggest Ben Bova's Grand Tour series, including the Asteroid Wars trilogy.
Ash does not show at any point that she has the ability or the qualifications to be second in command. She is petulant and should have been relieved immediately and sent back to headquarters. She shows no understanding of her job or how and exec acts or behaves. She totally unbelievable. If you are looking for a novel with a proper second may I suggest the first in David Weber's Honor Harrington series, Balasik Station. Here is a strong woman exec. Weber is also a damn good writer. Captain Kellow is also unfit for her job. She does not act like a captain. Part of the reason is that Birch never writes any scenes that show her being a captain.
If you are looking for a book with a lesbian sex scene, yep it is here. If you are looking for a good space opera or science fiction novel, this is not it. I wanted to believe. I love space operas and hard core science fiction, but male authors of the heterosexual persuasion dominate the field. I want to see more women authors. I also want to see a universe that is not 100% heterosexual. This story had potential, but poor storytelling gives this a D.
Bad points: Everything else. This is probably one of the worst books I have read in years. The author is good at telling, but horrible at showing action. The main characters are absolutely unbelievable. Birch shows she has never read a proper space opera or knows anything about how the military operates.. The first give away was the fact that Lieutenant Alison Ash is met by a corporal. She is on a ship. SHe would have been met by an ensign or a midshipman. She says the crew is small, but how small? She gives no number, which might not seem important, but is due to the fact 1). neither she nor security can figure out who breaks into her quarters and vandalizes everything (this happens before the end of Ash's first week), 2). the same "corporal" who welcomed Ash when she came on board and who Ash apparently assaults is the only one able to bring her meals, which he spits into while she watches, when she is confined to the brig and later her quarters, and 3). Vasa, who is assigned to keep track of Ash, must also cover the communications station at the same time. The ship has security. Why isn't security having one of it's members following Ash? This Vasa apparently also stinks for lack of bathing. Would the crew that serves with him complain. Why doesn't Ash, who is the exec, order him to shower before his smell kills everyone and they have to fumigate the ship?
Apparently Ash upsets the crew the first day of her arrival, because she orders them to run. We never see the scene. Yet, are they not part of the Union fleet and should be exercising. The only scenes we ever have are of Captain Jordan Kellow reprimanding Ash or of Ash's internal musings. No captain would ever have his or her office in a bedroom. It would be a room situated off the bridge. Apparently, an entire society exists out in the asteroid belt, but the first person to arrive did so only two generations ago. Birch says the asteroid settlements do not have a central government, yet Ash's father served in the Commons, the legislature. Well, that is the central government. May I suggest Ben Bova's Grand Tour series, including the Asteroid Wars trilogy.
Ash does not show at any point that she has the ability or the qualifications to be second in command. She is petulant and should have been relieved immediately and sent back to headquarters. She shows no understanding of her job or how and exec acts or behaves. She totally unbelievable. If you are looking for a novel with a proper second may I suggest the first in David Weber's Honor Harrington series, Balasik Station. Here is a strong woman exec. Weber is also a damn good writer. Captain Kellow is also unfit for her job. She does not act like a captain. Part of the reason is that Birch never writes any scenes that show her being a captain.
If you are looking for a book with a lesbian sex scene, yep it is here. If you are looking for a good space opera or science fiction novel, this is not it. I wanted to believe. I love space operas and hard core science fiction, but male authors of the heterosexual persuasion dominate the field. I want to see more women authors. I also want to see a universe that is not 100% heterosexual. This story had potential, but poor storytelling gives this a D.
October 17, 2017
I received a free copy via Netgalley in exchange for a honest review.
I really did not like this.
The book is poorly written and the characters were more like children than adults.
The only good thing was it is fairly short.
Just not for me.
I really did not like this.
The book is poorly written and the characters were more like children than adults.
The only good thing was it is fairly short.
Just not for me.
November 12, 2017
Hard to get into and not a good story line
April 3, 2020
The only reason this got three stars is because I know there is a book 2 and a book 3. They probably should have been published together as a sci fi saga because the ending of book one is just... no. You don't do that to a reader. It's worse than a cliffhanger because at the time of publication it looks like that is all you get. I liked the scenario, I liked the writing style. The characters annoyed me, they couldn't seem to settle into their personalities or roles probably because it was so short. The ending made me fee like a kid who'd been promised an icecream cone, had it bought for them, held out so they can almost touch it, and then had it purposefully dropped onto the floor...the dirty, grime ridden floor next door's dog just happened to pee on. So basically this book read like it had been chopped off before it got a chance to start. If you want to read it, make sure you get all of the series before starting so you can immediately start on book 2. In fact, I recommend stapling book 2 to the back of book 1 - even though I don't know what's in it because I haven't bought it yet.
October 26, 2017
“Unknown Horizons” eBook was published in 2017 and was written by C. J. Birch. This is Birch’s first novel.
I received an ARC of this novel through https://www.netgalley.com in return for a fair and honest review. I categorize this novel as ‘R’ because it contains scenes of Violence, Mature Language and Mature Situations. The story is set in the future as humanity is about to launch its first colony ship to the stars. The primary character is Lieutenant Alison Ash.
Ash is newly assigned to the Persephone as the Executive Officer. While on their short journey to the colony ship Posterus, things begin to happen to Ash. The memory loss she experienced after the attack on Europa Science Station still bothers her and she is reluctant to let anyone know.
The Burrs (bio-technically enhanced throwbacks from the resource wars on Earth before humanity spread through the Solar System more than 100 years ago) want to stop the colony ship and are willing to do anything to prevent what they see as the abandonment of the human race. Complicating matters is the increasing attraction between Ash and the Peresephone’s Captain, Jordan Kellow. Ash is not well liked by the crew for many reasons, but she is driven by honor, duty and loyalty to those she loves.
I thought that this was a very interesting 4 hour read of this 240 page science fiction novel. I liked the character of Ash and the plot. Some may not like the LBGTQ romance aspect of the novel, but that was not an overwhelming thread in the overall story. The cover art is OK. I give this novel a 4.2 (rounded down to a 4) out of 5.
Further book reviews I have written can be accessed at https://johnpurvis.wordpress.com/blog/.
I received an ARC of this novel through https://www.netgalley.com in return for a fair and honest review. I categorize this novel as ‘R’ because it contains scenes of Violence, Mature Language and Mature Situations. The story is set in the future as humanity is about to launch its first colony ship to the stars. The primary character is Lieutenant Alison Ash.
Ash is newly assigned to the Persephone as the Executive Officer. While on their short journey to the colony ship Posterus, things begin to happen to Ash. The memory loss she experienced after the attack on Europa Science Station still bothers her and she is reluctant to let anyone know.
The Burrs (bio-technically enhanced throwbacks from the resource wars on Earth before humanity spread through the Solar System more than 100 years ago) want to stop the colony ship and are willing to do anything to prevent what they see as the abandonment of the human race. Complicating matters is the increasing attraction between Ash and the Peresephone’s Captain, Jordan Kellow. Ash is not well liked by the crew for many reasons, but she is driven by honor, duty and loyalty to those she loves.
I thought that this was a very interesting 4 hour read of this 240 page science fiction novel. I liked the character of Ash and the plot. Some may not like the LBGTQ romance aspect of the novel, but that was not an overwhelming thread in the overall story. The cover art is OK. I give this novel a 4.2 (rounded down to a 4) out of 5.
Further book reviews I have written can be accessed at https://johnpurvis.wordpress.com/blog/.
July 1, 2017
It took me a little while to get around to reading this book and checking a couple of reviews beforehand gave me some nervous jitters about how much I would enjoy it. Those concerns quickly dissipated though as I quickly became immersed and really enjoyed the characters and the environment.
The attraction between Ash and Jordan is a little surprising and quickly reached an understandable passion. The feelings between the characters complimented rather than overshadowed the rest of the story, which in itself was engaging.
To be honest, everything about this book grabbed me ... even that ending.
The attraction between Ash and Jordan is a little surprising and quickly reached an understandable passion. The feelings between the characters complimented rather than overshadowed the rest of the story, which in itself was engaging.
To be honest, everything about this book grabbed me ... even that ending.
December 23, 2017
I received this book for free through Goodreads Giveaways and have chosen to give my honest opinion about it.
This short read is decent, with your typical space fantasy drama novel elements and a base idea that perhaps is not the most original. Still, I found it a relatively enjoyable read, although I did have a hard time relating with the characters, and perhaps the length or writing style attributed to this confusion/rushed-feeling I had. Still, a pretty okay read.
This short read is decent, with your typical space fantasy drama novel elements and a base idea that perhaps is not the most original. Still, I found it a relatively enjoyable read, although I did have a hard time relating with the characters, and perhaps the length or writing style attributed to this confusion/rushed-feeling I had. Still, a pretty okay read.
March 20, 2019
A mission to save the human race, a forbidden relationship and a dark secret lead to tension aboard a space fleet vehicle. The Captain and the First Officer are attracted to each other the first day they meet. The crew has a wide range of quirky characters and plot twists. A fun and worthwhile effort for a first time Author.
September 29, 2019
Really really good book
I’m glad I took a chance on an author I hadn’t read before. It’s a sci-fi thriller with bad guys, crazy science and a little romance thrown in. Gotta go read the second book now.
I’m glad I took a chance on an author I hadn’t read before. It’s a sci-fi thriller with bad guys, crazy science and a little romance thrown in. Gotta go read the second book now.
July 4, 2020
Very fun Read. Always enjoy girls playing in Space! Unknown Horizons
April 23, 2017
This book was kindly provided to me for honest review by the Publisher via Netgalley. This has not impacted on the content of this review, which it my own honest opinion.
I went into Unknown Horizons feeling hopeful. From the synopsis, I knew that there were two aspects to this book that I typically enjoy and want to read more of. Firstly space travel, I love books about traveling through space, it’s one of my favourite elements of science fiction. Secondly, a romance between two women, something that needs to happen more across all genres. Unfortunately this book left me feeling somewhat underwhelmed.
At the very beginning I almost gave up, the main character/narrator seemed to be all over the place. But I hate quitting on books, so I decided to keep reading, and things did improve a bit. Unfortunately I felt life there was an awful lot of telling and not enough showing. There were several time jumps between chapters, and as a reader I was just told of changes and developments. It kept me out of the story, and made connecting to the characters difficult.
The plot of the book, while rushed, was interesting with plenty of twists and turns. There was some good world building in this book, I just with there was some more of it. It was clear that everything about the world and the plot had been really well planned out. But at times it felt like the story was moving from one dramatic plot point to the next with little to connect the two events. There was a lot of action, which was fairly well written, but there was very little time taken to show the development between characters. This is why I had trouble caring about the romance. I was looking forward to it, but it felt rushed and underdeveloped. The main character was instantly struck speechless by how beautiful Captain Jordan is, and cannot keep her cool around her. This clashes a bit with Ash’s previously established confident, tough character, which is a little bit jarring. I feel like I needed to see more development, things just felt really inconsistent.
This review was difficult to write. Not because I had nothing to say, but because this story had potential, but it felt rushed, and ultimately fell flat for me. Towards the end things definitely picked up, and what I learn about the world was really interesting, there just wasn’t enough. Also, I would add a trigger warning for sexual assault and torture, be wary of this before choosing to read this book. I had high hopes, but ultimately, I can’t give this book more than 2 stars.
I went into Unknown Horizons feeling hopeful. From the synopsis, I knew that there were two aspects to this book that I typically enjoy and want to read more of. Firstly space travel, I love books about traveling through space, it’s one of my favourite elements of science fiction. Secondly, a romance between two women, something that needs to happen more across all genres. Unfortunately this book left me feeling somewhat underwhelmed.
At the very beginning I almost gave up, the main character/narrator seemed to be all over the place. But I hate quitting on books, so I decided to keep reading, and things did improve a bit. Unfortunately I felt life there was an awful lot of telling and not enough showing. There were several time jumps between chapters, and as a reader I was just told of changes and developments. It kept me out of the story, and made connecting to the characters difficult.
The plot of the book, while rushed, was interesting with plenty of twists and turns. There was some good world building in this book, I just with there was some more of it. It was clear that everything about the world and the plot had been really well planned out. But at times it felt like the story was moving from one dramatic plot point to the next with little to connect the two events. There was a lot of action, which was fairly well written, but there was very little time taken to show the development between characters. This is why I had trouble caring about the romance. I was looking forward to it, but it felt rushed and underdeveloped. The main character was instantly struck speechless by how beautiful Captain Jordan is, and cannot keep her cool around her. This clashes a bit with Ash’s previously established confident, tough character, which is a little bit jarring. I feel like I needed to see more development, things just felt really inconsistent.
This review was difficult to write. Not because I had nothing to say, but because this story had potential, but it felt rushed, and ultimately fell flat for me. Towards the end things definitely picked up, and what I learn about the world was really interesting, there just wasn’t enough. Also, I would add a trigger warning for sexual assault and torture, be wary of this before choosing to read this book. I had high hopes, but ultimately, I can’t give this book more than 2 stars.
July 2, 2017
I received an ARC free from NetGalley and the publisher for an honest review.
I love the storyline, the plot was good, hated the fact that it was a cliffhanger. And what a cliffhanger. What I really didn't like is the romance. Captains do get involved with their first officers. It was even stated in the story that it is a court-martial offence. And it happened to quickly. If this is a series, and I hope it is, because I have to know what happened next, then it could have been stretched out. So other than that good read.
I love the storyline, the plot was good, hated the fact that it was a cliffhanger. And what a cliffhanger. What I really didn't like is the romance. Captains do get involved with their first officers. It was even stated in the story that it is a court-martial offence. And it happened to quickly. If this is a series, and I hope it is, because I have to know what happened next, then it could have been stretched out. So other than that good read.
April 12, 2017
Gnah! What the hell was that? I don’t like to start with the ending but in this case I can’t help it. Unknown Horizons was so damn good. Space, asteroids, genetically and technically enhanced soldiers, a generation ship and an uninhabitable earth. A really interesting space adventure with an enigmatic worldbuilding and then THIS F *** ING ENDING??? - There, I'm so stunned I have to use multiple punctuation marks - so serious a situation!
I don’t even know where I should start to sort my thoughts about Unknown Horizons. The book has split me so much that I just don’t know how to judge it. I read this to short book in one go and could not put it down. The setting was grabbed me from the first sentence and I liked the often criticized 1st person narrator. While it limits the story to Ashs point of view it also intensifies her personality.
There were minor plotholes here and there. But that is whining at a high level. Up to the last two sentences of the book I would have given it four stars, but then the book stopped. IN THE MIDDLE OF IT ALL. Or maybe not in the middle. Maybe the end was meant to be just as frustrating and as unfinished as it is. Unfortunately it spoiled the whole book for me and reduced my rating to 3 stars. The ending was just so frustrating and a massive cliffhanger.
Still, I loved this book and I very much hope there will be a sequel soon. Ash is an interesting character with her amnesia. You get a very good picture of her and her suddenly occurring blackouts, in which she seems to behave strangely while remembering none of it. She even finds herself in an arrest cell without knowing how she ended up there. Since Ash understandably worries and fears her blackouts I was caught up in excitement wondering what it is all about. Ash was well-drafted, only her professional competency seemed off. For someone in her position she behaved a bit too reckless. Worldbuilding on the other hand has a lot in store and makes just so much fun. Up to the few last sentences anyway.
Can I recommend the book now? I don’t know. The story is really good but the ending reads like an unfinished story and totally crushed me. It’s like a manuscript which lost half of its pages. I really want to know more about Ash, Jordan, the generation ship and even the enemy cyborgs. There is still so much more potential in this scenario and it would have deserved a real ending - one that does not leave the reader completely frustrated.
I don’t even know where I should start to sort my thoughts about Unknown Horizons. The book has split me so much that I just don’t know how to judge it. I read this to short book in one go and could not put it down. The setting was grabbed me from the first sentence and I liked the often criticized 1st person narrator. While it limits the story to Ashs point of view it also intensifies her personality.
There were minor plotholes here and there. But that is whining at a high level. Up to the last two sentences of the book I would have given it four stars, but then the book stopped. IN THE MIDDLE OF IT ALL. Or maybe not in the middle. Maybe the end was meant to be just as frustrating and as unfinished as it is. Unfortunately it spoiled the whole book for me and reduced my rating to 3 stars. The ending was just so frustrating and a massive cliffhanger.
Still, I loved this book and I very much hope there will be a sequel soon. Ash is an interesting character with her amnesia. You get a very good picture of her and her suddenly occurring blackouts, in which she seems to behave strangely while remembering none of it. She even finds herself in an arrest cell without knowing how she ended up there. Since Ash understandably worries and fears her blackouts I was caught up in excitement wondering what it is all about. Ash was well-drafted, only her professional competency seemed off. For someone in her position she behaved a bit too reckless. Worldbuilding on the other hand has a lot in store and makes just so much fun. Up to the few last sentences anyway.
Can I recommend the book now? I don’t know. The story is really good but the ending reads like an unfinished story and totally crushed me. It’s like a manuscript which lost half of its pages. I really want to know more about Ash, Jordan, the generation ship and even the enemy cyborgs. There is still so much more potential in this scenario and it would have deserved a real ending - one that does not leave the reader completely frustrated.
April 14, 2017
This is a science fiction story. It is written in the first person which some people find difficult to read.
The storyline of this book could have been a good one, but somewhere it got confusing with all the events taking place. Most science fiction stories grab me from the very beginning. This story, however, did not. The writing was a little choppy. I just could not achieve a good flow while reading this book.
The two main characters in the book are Lieutenant Ash and Captain Kellow. I found it hard to grasp Ash’s character because one moment she was shy and withdrawn and the next she was aggressive. The Captain’s character was not much better. This book was short. Perhaps if it were longer, the characters would have been developed better.
I did NOT like the ending at all. Supposedly, this is the beginning of a series entitled “New Horizons”. The ending seemed to be just cut off, leaving the reader with a questionable cliffhanger. It certainly left me feeling agitated. Hopefully, there will be a sequel written to help provide closure on some aspects of this storyline.
I rate this book 2-1/2 stars out of 5.
I was given this ARC from NetGalley and Bold Stroke Books in return for a fair and honest review.
The storyline of this book could have been a good one, but somewhere it got confusing with all the events taking place. Most science fiction stories grab me from the very beginning. This story, however, did not. The writing was a little choppy. I just could not achieve a good flow while reading this book.
The two main characters in the book are Lieutenant Ash and Captain Kellow. I found it hard to grasp Ash’s character because one moment she was shy and withdrawn and the next she was aggressive. The Captain’s character was not much better. This book was short. Perhaps if it were longer, the characters would have been developed better.
I did NOT like the ending at all. Supposedly, this is the beginning of a series entitled “New Horizons”. The ending seemed to be just cut off, leaving the reader with a questionable cliffhanger. It certainly left me feeling agitated. Hopefully, there will be a sequel written to help provide closure on some aspects of this storyline.
I rate this book 2-1/2 stars out of 5.
I was given this ARC from NetGalley and Bold Stroke Books in return for a fair and honest review.
April 18, 2017
Note: Received an ARC from NetGalley in exchange for honest review.
First-time author CJ Birch has crafted a fascinating world in Unknown Horizons, full of secrets, intrigue, and thrills. In this world, Earth is a distant memory for some, and just a dream for others. Lieutenant Alison Ash, who as a child dreamed of living on Earth, has been assigned Executive Officer aboard the first generational ship of the Union Fleet. Years in the making, the Posterus will lead some of the human race to a new, inhabitable planet, but it’s going to take 100 years. For Ash, this is the opportunity of a lifetime. She wants to leave her family's legacy (and her recent memory loss) behind. She finds herself immediately drawn to the beautiful and guarded Captain Jordan Kellow, but fraternization between ranks is forbidden. That doesn’t stop Ash’s heart from beating a little faster every time Jordan is around. When her memories start to return, however, she finds that the Posterus (and all 45,000 on its inhabitants) might be in serious danger, and she may be the cause.
I was pretty much hooked on this story from the get-go. I’m a sucker for Sci-Fi and powerful lady characters in said genre. Be forewarned, however, as I was not, that this is the first in a series. Without giving away too much, this journey of the characters is quite satisfying, but it has definitely been set up for a series. I can’t say I wasn’t disappointed with the ending, but it left me eager for the next book.
Birch builds the romantic tension between Ash and Jordan without sacrificing the plot or suspense of the overarching story. Both characters certainly have enough reasons outside the potential doom of the ship to keep their emotions in check, but that doesn’t stop their inevitable attraction. Ash’s tendency to run herself ragged, make enemies of the crew, and constantly sacrifice her well-being for others is the source of much frustration for the Captain, a compassionate leader who wants to share the burdens to protect her ship and its crew, especially Ash.
Ash and Jordan find formidable enemy in the Burrs, mechanically altered humans who fought in the final battles for the domination of the desolate planet Earth. Most are over 100 years old, and their leader has a plan for Ash and the the Posterus. The scars between these broken humans and the Union Fleet runs deep, deeper than Ash can imagine, and the surprising plot points come at just the right times that kept me reading past my bedtime. The book keeps and excellent pace, and moves quickly. I finished it in about a day and a half, and I’m already ready for book two. So, CJ Birch, I say this lovingly, get on it!
First-time author CJ Birch has crafted a fascinating world in Unknown Horizons, full of secrets, intrigue, and thrills. In this world, Earth is a distant memory for some, and just a dream for others. Lieutenant Alison Ash, who as a child dreamed of living on Earth, has been assigned Executive Officer aboard the first generational ship of the Union Fleet. Years in the making, the Posterus will lead some of the human race to a new, inhabitable planet, but it’s going to take 100 years. For Ash, this is the opportunity of a lifetime. She wants to leave her family's legacy (and her recent memory loss) behind. She finds herself immediately drawn to the beautiful and guarded Captain Jordan Kellow, but fraternization between ranks is forbidden. That doesn’t stop Ash’s heart from beating a little faster every time Jordan is around. When her memories start to return, however, she finds that the Posterus (and all 45,000 on its inhabitants) might be in serious danger, and she may be the cause.
I was pretty much hooked on this story from the get-go. I’m a sucker for Sci-Fi and powerful lady characters in said genre. Be forewarned, however, as I was not, that this is the first in a series. Without giving away too much, this journey of the characters is quite satisfying, but it has definitely been set up for a series. I can’t say I wasn’t disappointed with the ending, but it left me eager for the next book.
Birch builds the romantic tension between Ash and Jordan without sacrificing the plot or suspense of the overarching story. Both characters certainly have enough reasons outside the potential doom of the ship to keep their emotions in check, but that doesn’t stop their inevitable attraction. Ash’s tendency to run herself ragged, make enemies of the crew, and constantly sacrifice her well-being for others is the source of much frustration for the Captain, a compassionate leader who wants to share the burdens to protect her ship and its crew, especially Ash.
Ash and Jordan find formidable enemy in the Burrs, mechanically altered humans who fought in the final battles for the domination of the desolate planet Earth. Most are over 100 years old, and their leader has a plan for Ash and the the Posterus. The scars between these broken humans and the Union Fleet runs deep, deeper than Ash can imagine, and the surprising plot points come at just the right times that kept me reading past my bedtime. The book keeps and excellent pace, and moves quickly. I finished it in about a day and a half, and I’m already ready for book two. So, CJ Birch, I say this lovingly, get on it!
April 18, 2017
When I saw Unknown Horizons on NetGalley, I figured I’d give it a go. When you start a book with the ending, it has to be epic to pull it off. Unknown Horizons didn’t manage to pull that off. It’s still a fun read, but the ending left me scratching my head. The protagonist wasn’t likeable at all, but I think that was done by the author intentionally. Upon further reflection, many of the characters were unlikable. But, it somehow seemed to work as a story. There’s plenty of conflict to move the story along, and the science fiction tropes are fun. Unknown Horizons is a fast read, and I’d like to check out the sequel. I saw that it’s on Wattpad, but I’m an e-reader kind of guy, so I’ll wait until it’s available in that format.
I waffled between 3.5 stars and 4 stars for Unknown Horizons. The narrative is definitely different, almost fractured. In the end, I’m rating it 3.5 stars. Perhaps after reading the second story, I’ll revise my star rating up. CJ Birch is a talented debut sci-fi author, and I’ll be checking out more of her stuff as it becomes available.
I waffled between 3.5 stars and 4 stars for Unknown Horizons. The narrative is definitely different, almost fractured. In the end, I’m rating it 3.5 stars. Perhaps after reading the second story, I’ll revise my star rating up. CJ Birch is a talented debut sci-fi author, and I’ll be checking out more of her stuff as it becomes available.
April 19, 2017
Great read, interesting characters and well thought out plot. I'm really into lesbo sci fi, so this was up my alley. Looking forward to more from this author.
April 28, 2017
I received this as an ARC so thank you so much to Netgalley.
It pains me to ever review a book so poorly but if you finished the book you can guess why I am upset. I'll start with positives because I want to appreciate those bits most even if I'm let down.
Jordan sounded crazy sexy. Wooooosh. Captain my Captain. The potential for the world was pretty high. Shower times? Yes? Some funny moments. I like the doctor character. And... the running track.
I added a star because lesbian romance is about as rare as a moist doughnut after 3 pm. I just felt starved for details, reasons to care, explanation, or way less info of the world to think "hmmm what's that" and never grasp the answer because it isn't explained. For how short this book is it doesn't provide a reason for me to care about anyone and that seems way more important than any torture scene. Am I crazy? Am I? Sometimes a book leaves you empty in the worst way and it's just a damn shame because I was really excited for the first 30 pages and then it plummeted into confusion. They were in love...? When? I hate mentions of sexual assault. I can't. Why? This was so unnecessary and I just felt it was a cheap ploy to shock us. All in all I gave it a two but if it had been a Het couple it'd be a 1, if I'm totally honest.
I'd give the author another shot but this feels like a second draft of a book than a complete novel. Just... it was missing many things that would have engaged me more. And the end is unforgivable as an ending. Sequel or not, the tone is very much not what I came to this book for.
It pains me to ever review a book so poorly but if you finished the book you can guess why I am upset. I'll start with positives because I want to appreciate those bits most even if I'm let down.
Jordan sounded crazy sexy. Wooooosh. Captain my Captain. The potential for the world was pretty high. Shower times? Yes? Some funny moments. I like the doctor character. And... the running track.
I added a star because lesbian romance is about as rare as a moist doughnut after 3 pm. I just felt starved for details, reasons to care, explanation, or way less info of the world to think "hmmm what's that" and never grasp the answer because it isn't explained. For how short this book is it doesn't provide a reason for me to care about anyone and that seems way more important than any torture scene. Am I crazy? Am I? Sometimes a book leaves you empty in the worst way and it's just a damn shame because I was really excited for the first 30 pages and then it plummeted into confusion. They were in love...? When? I hate mentions of sexual assault. I can't. Why? This was so unnecessary and I just felt it was a cheap ploy to shock us. All in all I gave it a two but if it had been a Het couple it'd be a 1, if I'm totally honest.
I'd give the author another shot but this feels like a second draft of a book than a complete novel. Just... it was missing many things that would have engaged me more. And the end is unforgivable as an ending. Sequel or not, the tone is very much not what I came to this book for.
May 2, 2017
An intriguing end to the first book of this series. I can't wait for the next one!
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