So.
I really wanted to like this one, but it fell very flat for me.
I didn't find the main character, Carrie Anne, to be anything but shrill and full of herself. There are things she does in the story for which she should apologize or at least try to see the other's point of view, but instead she shrieks and stomps and slams doors. I do not like this.
And every good looking male that comes along is immediately attracted to her and tells her how beautiful she is. She even tells us early on that she is naturally pretty with no makeup. Well, congratulations you! How nice.
Carrie is a know-it-all. She immediately can advise someone because she googled some info. Come on. She barges into people's lives uninvited and if I were them, I'd wonder why this person feels the need to come along and tell me what I should be thinking or doing. Again, I found it difficult to like the main character, which is never a good sign.
As others have stated, I think if you're going to write books about London and Kensington Palace and the royals, some research should be done. This never gave me the feeling that the author actually knew anything about any of this and it might have worked better with an imaginary royal family or maybe an imaginary country. I don't know.
The mystery isn't very involving and Carrie Anne's involvement in it made little sense to me. A man she barely knows is murdered and another man she barely knows is accused of the crime and against all evidence to the contrary, she is the only one who knows the truth. No. Just no.
If the story and the mystery were involving I could put up with her, I suppose, but there are no red herrings, no false leads and so the mystery is a bit flat.
The language is rough. I don't think that's intentional, but the sentence structure is juvenile. About two or three chapters in, I became aware of the "I". What is meant by that is I became aware that every other sentence started with I. Now, you might say, well, it's told in first person so of course there is a lot of that. But with complex sentences and a little more skill and polish, that can be avoided. I've read lots of books in first person in which I am not so aware of the I.
And then there is the over description of rooms and floors and windows and simply too much. And one woman Carrie Anne describes as average looking. Why? Oh, I remember, everyone thinks you're beautiful so it's okay for you to judge other women's looks to yourself. Okay then.
And the names of some of the characters are plain silly. Chef Butterbottom. Detective Garotte. I don't know if the author is trying to make this light-hearted or what, but silly names don't work in this instance.
This is the start of a series. It's a great premise and maybe, hopefully, the author will improve her writing and her editors will improve the editing. Even though I found some of the characters interesting, I don't think I'd sign up for more.