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Dash of Darcy and Companions Collection #1
Finally Mrs. Darcy: A Pride and Prejudice Novella
Separated for Years ~ Reunited at Last After Lydia's elopement, Mr. Bingley returns to Netherfield, but sadly he is alone. His connections to Mr. Darcy are severed, crushing any hope Elizabeth Bennet had of finding happiness with the man to whom she has lost her heart. As the years pass, grief turns into acceptance and Elizabeth marries. She is content to settle into her new life, but it is not to last. A fever claims the life of her husband and father, leaving her in the care of her new uncle, Gareth Amberly, who is determined to see her happy. As this Pride and Prejudice Variation Novella opens, Elizabeth's uncle introduces her to the man he suspects will make her happy ─ Fitzwilliam Darcy. It takes very little time for Darcy and Elizabeth to come to an understanding and for Elizabeth to discover the true reason for their separation. Is a complete restoration of relationships possible, or will their happily ever after always be tainted by separation? Finally Mrs. Darcy is the first book in Leenie Brown's Dash of Darcy and Companions Collection of Pride and Prejudice inspired stories. If you like well-written sweet romances featuring couples who are given a second chance to find their happily ever after, then you'll enjoy this book about lovers reuniting and facing the truth of the past together. Pick up your copy of Finally Mrs. Darcy today and slip into a world where love and forgiveness unite to create a bright new future for Darcy and Elizabeth.
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This book can also be found in A Dash of Darcy and Companions Cottage Collection 1 .
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This book can also be found in A Dash of Darcy and Companions Cottage Collection 1 .
109 pages, Paperback
First published July 20, 2016
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Leenie Brown
95 books112 followersLeenie Brown has always been a girl with an active imagination, which, while growing up, was both an asset, providing many hours of fun as she played out stories, and a liability, when her older sister and aunt would tell her frightening tales. At one time, they had her convinced Dracula lived in the trunk at the end of the bed she slept in when visiting her grandparents!
Although it has been years since she cowered in her bed in her grandparents’ basement, she still has an imagination which occasionally runs away with her, and she feeds it now as she did then ─ by reading!
Her heroes, when growing up, were authors, and the worlds they painted with words were (and still are) her favourite playgrounds! Now, as an adult, she spends much of her time in the Regency world, playing with the characters from her favourite Jane Austen novels and those of her own creation.
When she is not traipsing down a trail in an attempt to keep up with her imagination, Leenie resides in the beautiful province of Nova Scotia with her two sons and her very own Mr. Brown (a wonderful mix of all the best of Darcy, Bingley, and Edmund with a healthy dose of the teasing Mr. Tilney and just a dash of the scolding Mr. Knightley).
Although it has been years since she cowered in her bed in her grandparents’ basement, she still has an imagination which occasionally runs away with her, and she feeds it now as she did then ─ by reading!
Her heroes, when growing up, were authors, and the worlds they painted with words were (and still are) her favourite playgrounds! Now, as an adult, she spends much of her time in the Regency world, playing with the characters from her favourite Jane Austen novels and those of her own creation.
When she is not traipsing down a trail in an attempt to keep up with her imagination, Leenie resides in the beautiful province of Nova Scotia with her two sons and her very own Mr. Brown (a wonderful mix of all the best of Darcy, Bingley, and Edmund with a healthy dose of the teasing Mr. Tilney and just a dash of the scolding Mr. Knightley).
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July 24, 2016
The story starts five years after Lydia's elopement, with a widowed Elizabeth coming out of mourning. No, she did not marry Mr. Darcy since he did not join Mr. Bingley when he returned to Netherfield. Instead, she marries a Mr. Jack Amberly, a kind man who was similar in temperament with Jane.
Now that Elizabeth was no longer in mourning, her uncle from marriage, Mr. Gareth Amberly, insisted she join a Season to find a husband despite Elizabeth's wish to never marry again. Unbeknownst to anyone, Elizabeth has been nursing a broken heart for the last five years. When Mr. Darcy never returned, she presumed it was because he did not wish to connect himself to a family connected to Lydia and Wickham. She saw his absence as a rejection, and thus she tried to move on. She admired her husband, but she was never able to give him her heart. It belonged to Mr. Darcy and continued to belong to him. She knew in her heart that she could not marry anyone but Mr. Darcy because she would never be able to give her heart to anyone else
Mr. Gareth is a sly but well-meaning man, and when he brought Elizabeth to one of the balls during the season, he introduced her to a man a few years older than Elizabeth; eligible, to be sure, but unmarried. Lo and behold, the man was none other than Mr. Darcy. It was apparent that five years apart have not lessened the strength of their feelings for each other.
In the span of a dance, the two have rekindled the past and confirmed that their feelings were returned. Mr. Darcy then proposed, and it was decided that the wedding was set a week later.
Some of the original characters appear in this story, but we are introduced to Mr. and Mrs. Amberly, Jack's uncle and aunt. They are a lot like the Gardiners, but of genteel background and a family with more prominent connections.
This clean novella is a quick and light read with little conflict. We see Mr. Darcy and Elizabeth catch up after spending the last five years apart. The main conflict was surprisingly Mr. Bingley. It was a bit surprising to see him as an antagonist of some sort, and I felt miffed that he did not seem to see the irony in separating two people who loved each other.
Nonetheless, I had a pleasant time reading this novella and would recommend it to anyone in the mood for a quick, light Pride and Prejudice variation.
Now that Elizabeth was no longer in mourning, her uncle from marriage, Mr. Gareth Amberly, insisted she join a Season to find a husband despite Elizabeth's wish to never marry again. Unbeknownst to anyone, Elizabeth has been nursing a broken heart for the last five years. When Mr. Darcy never returned, she presumed it was because he did not wish to connect himself to a family connected to Lydia and Wickham. She saw his absence as a rejection, and thus she tried to move on. She admired her husband, but she was never able to give him her heart. It belonged to Mr. Darcy and continued to belong to him. She knew in her heart that she could not marry anyone but Mr. Darcy because she would never be able to give her heart to anyone else
Mr. Gareth is a sly but well-meaning man, and when he brought Elizabeth to one of the balls during the season, he introduced her to a man a few years older than Elizabeth; eligible, to be sure, but unmarried. Lo and behold, the man was none other than Mr. Darcy. It was apparent that five years apart have not lessened the strength of their feelings for each other.
In the span of a dance, the two have rekindled the past and confirmed that their feelings were returned. Mr. Darcy then proposed, and it was decided that the wedding was set a week later.
Some of the original characters appear in this story, but we are introduced to Mr. and Mrs. Amberly, Jack's uncle and aunt. They are a lot like the Gardiners, but of genteel background and a family with more prominent connections.
This clean novella is a quick and light read with little conflict. We see Mr. Darcy and Elizabeth catch up after spending the last five years apart. The main conflict was surprisingly Mr. Bingley. It was a bit surprising to see him as an antagonist of some sort, and I felt miffed that he did not seem to see the irony in separating two people who loved each other.
Nonetheless, I had a pleasant time reading this novella and would recommend it to anyone in the mood for a quick, light Pride and Prejudice variation.
March 3, 2019
This is book 1 in Leenie Brown’s ‘Dash of Darcy and Companions Collection.’ According to her author’s notes, each book is numbered in order of publication and a standalone with a HEA for the couple featured.
Finally, a HEA after five years of grief, angst, despair, and guilt. This was a clean, quick read, less than two hours if you are in a hurry. There are 7-chapters plus an epilogue.
Everything clips along at warp speed and conditions, problems, delays are handled quickly. For some that may be a problem, as it gives it a rushed feeling. There does need to be some foundation knowledge of the P&P story as things are referenced but not fully explained. In the prologue, Elizabeth Amberley, née Bennet, is coming out of mourning for husband Jack. Jack’s uncle invited her to London for the Season. He had promised his nephew that he would look after her.
“Ever has it been that love knows not its own depth until the hour of separation.” –Kahlil Gibran
Chapter 1 is a VERY busy chapter. Uncle and Aunt Amberley have taken Elizabeth with them to a dance/soiree as her first outing since leaving mourning. Uncle then drags her across the room to introduce her to a gentleman he just knows she will like. He had also told the gentleman that he had a widow he wanted him to meet and just knew that he would like her. We readers of JAFF know what is about to happen, and it does. It reunites Elizabeth with her lost love Mr. Darcy. Mr. Darcy has loved none but Elizabeth since they were separated five years earlier. It rings of Persuasion and the lost time with Anne and Captain Wentworth. That same tone of loss and bitter regret is strong between them. As ODC [our dear couple] have a conversation in the garden, no punches are pulled as they are upfront and personal with their feelings and emotions. That pushes our story along at an even faster pace. Again, this could irritate some readers.
From this point on we have them settling the misunderstanding of what actually happened between them. They heal old hurts and wounds and make plans for a new life together, never to be parted again. They know what is against them and gird themselves against all scorn or lack of approbation from Darcy’s family as well as her own. I love Georgiana in this selection. She is adorable.
“When you loved someone and had to let them go, there will always be that small part of yourself that whispers, ‘What was it that you wanted and why didn’t you fight for it?’” –Shannon L. Alder
There is a healing process in dealing with the affronts garnered against our dear couple. Old wounds and misunderstandings have to be addressed. Old grievances have to be aired, guilty parties forgiven and allowed a chance to understand how their meddling caused others pain and suffering. It is quite revealing as to how each person acknowledged their culpability in the separation of our lovers. I enjoyed this quick read and if you have to wait in a line of any kind, or if you have a few hours to idle away, this is a good book to have on hand.
The story ended at 80% on my device and was followed by an excerpt on book 2 ‘Waking to Mr. Darcy.’
1st read 7-25-16
2nd read 3-2-19
Finally, a HEA after five years of grief, angst, despair, and guilt. This was a clean, quick read, less than two hours if you are in a hurry. There are 7-chapters plus an epilogue.
Everything clips along at warp speed and conditions, problems, delays are handled quickly. For some that may be a problem, as it gives it a rushed feeling. There does need to be some foundation knowledge of the P&P story as things are referenced but not fully explained. In the prologue, Elizabeth Amberley, née Bennet, is coming out of mourning for husband Jack. Jack’s uncle invited her to London for the Season. He had promised his nephew that he would look after her.
“Ever has it been that love knows not its own depth until the hour of separation.” –Kahlil Gibran
Chapter 1 is a VERY busy chapter. Uncle and Aunt Amberley have taken Elizabeth with them to a dance/soiree as her first outing since leaving mourning. Uncle then drags her across the room to introduce her to a gentleman he just knows she will like. He had also told the gentleman that he had a widow he wanted him to meet and just knew that he would like her. We readers of JAFF know what is about to happen, and it does. It reunites Elizabeth with her lost love Mr. Darcy. Mr. Darcy has loved none but Elizabeth since they were separated five years earlier. It rings of Persuasion and the lost time with Anne and Captain Wentworth. That same tone of loss and bitter regret is strong between them. As ODC [our dear couple] have a conversation in the garden, no punches are pulled as they are upfront and personal with their feelings and emotions. That pushes our story along at an even faster pace. Again, this could irritate some readers.
From this point on we have them settling the misunderstanding of what actually happened between them. They heal old hurts and wounds and make plans for a new life together, never to be parted again. They know what is against them and gird themselves against all scorn or lack of approbation from Darcy’s family as well as her own. I love Georgiana in this selection. She is adorable.
“When you loved someone and had to let them go, there will always be that small part of yourself that whispers, ‘What was it that you wanted and why didn’t you fight for it?’” –Shannon L. Alder
There is a healing process in dealing with the affronts garnered against our dear couple. Old wounds and misunderstandings have to be addressed. Old grievances have to be aired, guilty parties forgiven and allowed a chance to understand how their meddling caused others pain and suffering. It is quite revealing as to how each person acknowledged their culpability in the separation of our lovers. I enjoyed this quick read and if you have to wait in a line of any kind, or if you have a few hours to idle away, this is a good book to have on hand.
The story ended at 80% on my device and was followed by an excerpt on book 2 ‘Waking to Mr. Darcy.’
1st read 7-25-16
2nd read 3-2-19
July 12, 2019
This is, as said by others, a very quick read. I think it took me about an hour and a half to read it. I did love it but due to it only being 74 pages long in paperback I, as usual, do not give that extra star for short stories as it is much less work than that of authors who write 200 or more pages.
This is a book about second chances again. Elizabeth is widowed after a marriage in which she describes that she was contented in that she did in fact love her husband, Jack, but she knew going in that her heart was not in the marriage...her heart continued to be the property of a man she met years ago. And she did wait, and wonder and anticipate that man’s return to Hertfordshire...but it never happened. So she settled for marriage with a suitable man rather than staying on the shelf.
When he dies and her mourning period is over, Jack's aunt and uncle (especially the latter) are determined to help Elizabeth find happiness in marriage with a season in London. Now here I am in the dark. Uncle Amberly seems to know about how this gentleman had a love five years ago but lost her. Now Uncle Amberly wants to introduce Elizabeth and this man to each other as he is confident that they would make a fine match. So, my question here is, “How did Uncle Amberly know this?” Did Jane tell him? Was there gossip in Meryton?
The story does bring forth the facts surrounding the past relationship and why it never came to fruition. The family’s opinions, Darcy’s role in society and his role with Jane and Bingley are points of discussion. Bingley’s past reaction to Darcy’s admission of playing a part in separating Jane and Bingley comes to be revealed and we read of a strong reaction by Jane. Hooray for Jane. She finally displays a opinion about not all being right and about reasons not being OK in someone’s actions. I think you might like the gutsy Jane here.
Yes, they are perfect for each other and there are no holds barred in the rush to the altar. This was a delight to read…short and sweet and a page-turner.
This is a book about second chances again. Elizabeth is widowed after a marriage in which she describes that she was contented in that she did in fact love her husband, Jack, but she knew going in that her heart was not in the marriage...her heart continued to be the property of a man she met years ago. And she did wait, and wonder and anticipate that man’s return to Hertfordshire...but it never happened. So she settled for marriage with a suitable man rather than staying on the shelf.
When he dies and her mourning period is over, Jack's aunt and uncle (especially the latter) are determined to help Elizabeth find happiness in marriage with a season in London. Now here I am in the dark. Uncle Amberly seems to know about how this gentleman had a love five years ago but lost her. Now Uncle Amberly wants to introduce Elizabeth and this man to each other as he is confident that they would make a fine match. So, my question here is, “How did Uncle Amberly know this?” Did Jane tell him? Was there gossip in Meryton?
The story does bring forth the facts surrounding the past relationship and why it never came to fruition. The family’s opinions, Darcy’s role in society and his role with Jane and Bingley are points of discussion. Bingley’s past reaction to Darcy’s admission of playing a part in separating Jane and Bingley comes to be revealed and we read of a strong reaction by Jane. Hooray for Jane. She finally displays a opinion about not all being right and about reasons not being OK in someone’s actions. I think you might like the gutsy Jane here.
Yes, they are perfect for each other and there are no holds barred in the rush to the altar. This was a delight to read…short and sweet and a page-turner.
July 3, 2021
I've read 100s of P&P variations and this one is pretty unique. One of my favorite parts of a variation are the last 10-20% of the book describing the Happily Ever After, the HEA. Some of my least favorite variations are those with very little HEA shown. So this book is unique in that its almost totally the HEA part of ODC story. Lizzy and Darcy find their true love, after 5 years, together immediately and we, the readers, get see them loving each other, no miscommunications and the rest of the world will just have to deal with our favorite couple being totally and blissfully in love.
I love this novella. I think most of you will also
I love this novella. I think most of you will also
November 15, 2023
A sweet story that is almost all resolvement. The angst having happened pre-story.
Very sweet, all the way through to the HEA.
Very sweet, all the way through to the HEA.
August 29, 2016
3.5 rounded up to 4 stars
This is a very sweet, extended-happily-ever-after, angst-free story. While that makes it very pleasant reading, unfortunately it also means it isn't particularly gripping.
We have Elizabeth and Mr. Darcy meeting at a ball 5 years after last seeing each other at the Lambton Inn when she had just read Jane's letter. Darcy never returned to Longbourn with Mr. Bingley, and Elizabeth never really got over it.
She eventually did marry Mr. Jack Amberly, and they lived in a small country estate near Longbourn. Elizabeth and Jack had a comfortable relationship but didn't truly love each other. However, now she is already a widow just out of mourning and in London for a Season at the insistence of her deceased husband's uncle, Gareth Amberly.
Sparks fly the moment Darcy and Elizabeth see each other. They're engaged and planning to wed in one week by the end of the first chapter.
The rest of the book deals primarily with covering the real reason Darcy didn't seek out Elizabeth after he managed to get Wickham to marry Lydia, and all the heartache both have experienced as a result.
Once Jane finds that Elizabeth is engaged and learns the truth of what happened in the past, there are consequences, but this works parallel to the whole happily-ever-after scenario, especially since we're told there will be a positive outcome in five days.
Essentially, what we have here is a story that begins with the climax and resolution, then rehashes the problem and rising action. Presenting the tale this way just doesn't allow any dramatic tension to build. I really like the premise, but I believe it could have been executed better.
This is a very sweet, extended-happily-ever-after, angst-free story. While that makes it very pleasant reading, unfortunately it also means it isn't particularly gripping.
We have Elizabeth and Mr. Darcy meeting at a ball 5 years after last seeing each other at the Lambton Inn when she had just read Jane's letter. Darcy never returned to Longbourn with Mr. Bingley, and Elizabeth never really got over it.
She eventually did marry Mr. Jack Amberly, and they lived in a small country estate near Longbourn. Elizabeth and Jack had a comfortable relationship but didn't truly love each other. However, now she is already a widow just out of mourning and in London for a Season at the insistence of her deceased husband's uncle, Gareth Amberly.
Sparks fly the moment Darcy and Elizabeth see each other. They're engaged and planning to wed in one week by the end of the first chapter.
The rest of the book deals primarily with covering the real reason Darcy didn't seek out Elizabeth after he managed to get Wickham to marry Lydia, and all the heartache both have experienced as a result.
Once Jane finds that Elizabeth is engaged and learns the truth of what happened in the past, there are consequences, but this works parallel to the whole happily-ever-after scenario, especially since we're told there will be a positive outcome in five days.
Essentially, what we have here is a story that begins with the climax and resolution, then rehashes the problem and rising action. Presenting the tale this way just doesn't allow any dramatic tension to build. I really like the premise, but I believe it could have been executed better.
November 8, 2019
Kindle clean out read
This is a short fast paced story that imagines that Darcy didn't return to Meryton with Bingley, eventually Lizzy married another and is now widowed and eight and twenty? (Kitty is 24 but it has been 5 years)
At her first ball in London she and Darcy dance, get engaged, share some passionate kisses and all's forgiven. It turns out that Darcy stayed away because Bingley told him to.
When Jane learns of Bingley's interference she gets pissy, which I also found very OOC. But eventually we all live HEA.
This is a short fast paced story that imagines that Darcy didn't return to Meryton with Bingley, eventually Lizzy married another and is now widowed and eight and twenty? (Kitty is 24 but it has been 5 years)
At her first ball in London she and Darcy dance, get engaged, share some passionate kisses and all's forgiven. It turns out that Darcy stayed away because Bingley told him to.
When Jane learns of Bingley's interference she gets pissy, which I also found very OOC. But eventually we all live HEA.
August 4, 2019
This novella starts 5 years since Elizabeth last saw Darcy. He did not return to Netherfield with Bingley as Bingley did not forgive his interference in his relationship with Jane. In the mean time Elizabeth had married and is now a widow.
I liked this book but didn't love it. Even for a novella a lot has to happen in relatively few pages. It also finishes at 86%. Elizabeth is very forward with Darcy about her feelings which I thought was a bit risky having no knowledge of his or his circumstances. Also, I thought Janes response to finding out Bingley had cut all ties with Darcy was as unrealistic as it was stupid. Bingley somehow really ended up as the bad guy and yet Darcy could have made different choices of his own.
This is a quick, easy read that is relatively light and angst free.
I liked this book but didn't love it. Even for a novella a lot has to happen in relatively few pages. It also finishes at 86%. Elizabeth is very forward with Darcy about her feelings which I thought was a bit risky having no knowledge of his or his circumstances. Also, I thought Janes response to finding out Bingley had cut all ties with Darcy was as unrealistic as it was stupid. Bingley somehow really ended up as the bad guy and yet Darcy could have made different choices of his own.
This is a quick, easy read that is relatively light and angst free.
July 23, 2016
Finally Mrs. Darcy: A Pride and Prejudice Novella
Uncle Gareth Amberly, persuaded Elizabeth to come with him and her Aunt Maria to a ball. Elizabeth married their nephew, Jack Amberly. Her Uncle Gareth knew she was content with her marriage to Jack, but also knew he wasn't the man for her. There was no passion in their relationship, because her heart belonged to Darcy. Elizabeth was now a widow completing her mourning period for her husband. Five years have passed since Bingley returned and married Jane, but Darcy was not with him. She waited three years for his return, but at age twenty- four decided to marry Jack. Oh, her Uncle Gareth was a sly man bent and determined she would remarry. Based on hearsay he knew exactly the man he wanted to introduce her to at this ball. Surveying the room, he spotted his target and hustled Elizabeth towards his prey. He tells her he's older and never been marry nursing a lost love five years ago. Yes, the man was none other than Fitzwilliam Darcy. Both are extremely happy to be reunited and came to an understanding rather quickly that they would marry in a week's time. The story that unfolds why they were separated was difficult to read, but none the less sadness was quickly overcome by happiness. Surprises occur throughout this story that made me angry at those that caused the split. HEA ending.
Uncle Gareth Amberly, persuaded Elizabeth to come with him and her Aunt Maria to a ball. Elizabeth married their nephew, Jack Amberly. Her Uncle Gareth knew she was content with her marriage to Jack, but also knew he wasn't the man for her. There was no passion in their relationship, because her heart belonged to Darcy. Elizabeth was now a widow completing her mourning period for her husband. Five years have passed since Bingley returned and married Jane, but Darcy was not with him. She waited three years for his return, but at age twenty- four decided to marry Jack. Oh, her Uncle Gareth was a sly man bent and determined she would remarry. Based on hearsay he knew exactly the man he wanted to introduce her to at this ball. Surveying the room, he spotted his target and hustled Elizabeth towards his prey. He tells her he's older and never been marry nursing a lost love five years ago. Yes, the man was none other than Fitzwilliam Darcy. Both are extremely happy to be reunited and came to an understanding rather quickly that they would marry in a week's time. The story that unfolds why they were separated was difficult to read, but none the less sadness was quickly overcome by happiness. Surprises occur throughout this story that made me angry at those that caused the split. HEA ending.
August 31, 2019
This story takes place 5 years after Lydia’s elopement in an alternate ending to P&P where Darcy did not return to Netherfield with Bingley. Elizabeth is a widow when she is reunited with Mr. Darcy who has never stopped loving her. Of course a happy ending is well in hand (just look at the title). It’s relatively angst free, though the cause of their initial separation is examined for the rest of the story. I enjoyed seeing other familiar characters like Jane and a spunky Georgiana. The new characters were delightful too. This is a novella length story so the action happens right away. Still a fun way to spend an hour or two with my favorite characters. ⭐️⭐️⭐️💫
January 8, 2017
After been separated for five years because of Charles Bingley, Darcy and Elizabeth Amberly finally meet. Can there be a happy ending.
A sweet tale.
A sweet tale.
January 24, 2018
A lovely fast read, romantic and warm.
It might feel a bit rushed at times but I can't fault it as it leads to the happy moments faster...
Darcy never follows Bingley to Netherfield after Pemberley as Bingley holds him responsible for his separation from Jane.
Elizabeth is a widow with a meddling new uncle that are pressing her to reenter into society after her mourning period is finished.
Meeting at a ball, ODC sort out their misunderstanding and come to an understanding rapidly. I felt the forward speaking between the two to be refreshing and preferable to endless delays...
Not all of their family are overjoyed though.
There is a wedding and a short and sweet epilogue.
I loved the story but would have liked to see it fleshed out more. Will definitely read a sequel should there be one.
Recommend!
It might feel a bit rushed at times but I can't fault it as it leads to the happy moments faster...
Darcy never follows Bingley to Netherfield after Pemberley as Bingley holds him responsible for his separation from Jane.
Elizabeth is a widow with a meddling new uncle that are pressing her to reenter into society after her mourning period is finished.
Meeting at a ball, ODC sort out their misunderstanding and come to an understanding rapidly. I felt the forward speaking between the two to be refreshing and preferable to endless delays...
Not all of their family are overjoyed though.
There is a wedding and a short and sweet epilogue.
I loved the story but would have liked to see it fleshed out more. Will definitely read a sequel should there be one.
Recommend!
July 28, 2016
This was a quick read but there wasn't much conflict at all. It's a great little read if you're short on time.
August 26, 2023
Great Book
Just the kind of feel good love story. No villains to vanquish and a head. Loved Jane in this story. Vague mentions of the Bennett's. Good story. Darcy was wonderful.
Just the kind of feel good love story. No villains to vanquish and a head. Loved Jane in this story. Vague mentions of the Bennett's. Good story. Darcy was wonderful.
April 22, 2022
When Darcy confessed to Bingley his part in separating Jane and Bingley, he returned to marry Jane and forbid Darcy to contact any member of his family, which included Elizabeth. When Darcy failed to return, Elizabeth married another.
Five years later, Elizabeth is now a widow recently out of mourning. Her uncle arranged for her to encounter Darcy at a ball. They are still in love and intend to marry, but Bingley will not forgive Darcy and refused to countenance the match.
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Five years later, Elizabeth is now a widow recently out of mourning. Her uncle arranged for her to encounter Darcy at a ball. They are still in love and intend to marry, but Bingley will not forgive Darcy and refused to countenance the match.
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August 17, 2019
In this Pride and Prejudice novella, Darcy never comes back to Longbourn after confessing to Bingley of his interference. As a result, a depressed Elizabeth has to make some life decisions. Fast forward years later, and two people with deepest love in their heart meet again at a ball. The snowball from there makes for a fun story. Jane was especially great!
May 27, 2018
Finally!
After failing to get a pardon from Bingley, our dear couple lose sight of each other for years and their getting back together makes a super interesting tale.
After failing to get a pardon from Bingley, our dear couple lose sight of each other for years and their getting back together makes a super interesting tale.
December 30, 2020
5 years
They found each other again.
I love how Georgiana is :)
Bingley, not my favourite, but there's improvement.
Jane is strong!
They found each other again.
I love how Georgiana is :)
Bingley, not my favourite, but there's improvement.
Jane is strong!
July 9, 2020
Cute little story
July, 2020:
I have recently been made aware that this author is part of the Austen Authors Facebook group. That group removed a post by one of its authors about including a diversity of characters in JAFF. The group claims that a discussion of inclusion violates its commitment to “neutrality” in social issues. My contention is that if they aren’t even willing to post this as a topic for discussion, they are making white supremacy their neutral position. I’m deeply saddened that this author has made the decision to stay in the group, and feel that readers have a right to know before they spend their money.
Don’t worry your pretty little head about any angst. This saccharine little tale is over almost as soon as it starts with your happy ending all tied up in a bow.
I have read the authors work before and knew what to expect. In fairness, I probably shouldn’t even be reviewing it. If cute little stories are your favorite part of JAFF, then go to it.
July, 2020:
I have recently been made aware that this author is part of the Austen Authors Facebook group. That group removed a post by one of its authors about including a diversity of characters in JAFF. The group claims that a discussion of inclusion violates its commitment to “neutrality” in social issues. My contention is that if they aren’t even willing to post this as a topic for discussion, they are making white supremacy their neutral position. I’m deeply saddened that this author has made the decision to stay in the group, and feel that readers have a right to know before they spend their money.
Don’t worry your pretty little head about any angst. This saccharine little tale is over almost as soon as it starts with your happy ending all tied up in a bow.
I have read the authors work before and knew what to expect. In fairness, I probably shouldn’t even be reviewing it. If cute little stories are your favorite part of JAFF, then go to it.
September 8, 2016
Bingley forbade Darcy to return to Netherfield and demanded he stay away from his family, which included Elizabeth. Elizabeth married another thinking Darcy did not return due to Lydia's elopement. It is now 5 years later, Elizabeth is a widow, and Darcy never married. Can they forgive? Can they find their happiness?
A sweet novella length story that is just a bit unrealistic. But, a nice little read.
A sweet novella length story that is just a bit unrealistic. But, a nice little read.
June 30, 2025
3.5* rounded up to 4*. A gentle quick read.
January 19, 2021
With a simple premise virtually devoid of conflict and high on the romance scale, this novella, my first Leenie Brown read, turned out to be everything I expected based on the author's reputation. She's known for her short, sweet books. It wasn't nearly as saccharine as reputed and was quite well-written, and the author was knowledgeable in the Regency era concepts that were key to its excellent plot line.
I wish that authors such as Leenie Brown would let go of head-hopping, a pet peeve of mine. It's not necessary and it's distracting for the reader.
After practically a village of beta readers, including some authors (I think, based on the names) the book still had a few instances of Regency and British incorrect words (normally, staff, modiste; "write you" instead of "write to you;" "I will" for "I shall" and "he shall" for "he will"), but this is minimal compared to the average self-published JAFF book. I found one typo: "far of places."
At first I thought the author got through the story arc rather quickly, but then realized the book is shorter than promised. Book stuffing is found at 85%, so you're not getting as long a story as you think. Minus half a star.
One aspect of Leenie Brown's books that always turned me off is the covers that said nothing about the book, as they were always just a flower. The reason I purchased this particular book is because I noticed the cover was of a happy couple near a house. Now, this is a small improvement, since those blow-dried men are as ubiquitous in JAFF as the flowers. This type of cover is not necessarily going to set Ms. Brown's books apart, but at least the body language of the couple is showing the story inside a little more.
I recommend this book to anyone who wants a short, light, romantic read with virtually no angst.
Disclaimer: I'm a JAFF author and some might say my writing this review is a conflict of interest, however, I was a reader first and my reviews are impartial and honest.
I wish that authors such as Leenie Brown would let go of head-hopping, a pet peeve of mine. It's not necessary and it's distracting for the reader.
After practically a village of beta readers, including some authors (I think, based on the names) the book still had a few instances of Regency and British incorrect words (normally, staff, modiste; "write you" instead of "write to you;" "I will" for "I shall" and "he shall" for "he will"), but this is minimal compared to the average self-published JAFF book. I found one typo: "far of places."
At first I thought the author got through the story arc rather quickly, but then realized the book is shorter than promised. Book stuffing is found at 85%, so you're not getting as long a story as you think. Minus half a star.
One aspect of Leenie Brown's books that always turned me off is the covers that said nothing about the book, as they were always just a flower. The reason I purchased this particular book is because I noticed the cover was of a happy couple near a house. Now, this is a small improvement, since those blow-dried men are as ubiquitous in JAFF as the flowers. This type of cover is not necessarily going to set Ms. Brown's books apart, but at least the body language of the couple is showing the story inside a little more.
I recommend this book to anyone who wants a short, light, romantic read with virtually no angst.
Disclaimer: I'm a JAFF author and some might say my writing this review is a conflict of interest, however, I was a reader first and my reviews are impartial and honest.
June 21, 2019
Sorry, not my favorite Mrs. Brown
Generally, I like this author's works. This was not my favorite. I don't usually like the stories where ODC have been apart for years and one or the other, or both, have been married. This was a novella length book so things moved along quickly but I was sad throughout. Maybe that is the mark of a good read, that a reader is moved to feel strong emotions. I just don't choose to read to be saddened.
The book did convey the love of ODC well enough but, for me it was tainted by the overarching theme of sadness. In fact, why did there have to be a lengthy separation at all? Yes, I believe that a shorter separation would have been just the thing for this reader! I understand the premise of a Bingley betrayal but it did not have to include a marriage to someone else and a separation of five years. IMHO.
In addition, I felt as though there we holes in the storyline, such as where Elizabeth lived. I was never really clear on that. Perhaps I am being to harsh and critical of what is meant to be a "dash" of the characters.
I gave a three star rating due to the holes and for what I perceive as negative emotions that were evoked in me.
As mentioned earlier, I do like this author's works so I will read more from her!!
Generally, I like this author's works. This was not my favorite. I don't usually like the stories where ODC have been apart for years and one or the other, or both, have been married. This was a novella length book so things moved along quickly but I was sad throughout. Maybe that is the mark of a good read, that a reader is moved to feel strong emotions. I just don't choose to read to be saddened.
The book did convey the love of ODC well enough but, for me it was tainted by the overarching theme of sadness. In fact, why did there have to be a lengthy separation at all? Yes, I believe that a shorter separation would have been just the thing for this reader! I understand the premise of a Bingley betrayal but it did not have to include a marriage to someone else and a separation of five years. IMHO.
In addition, I felt as though there we holes in the storyline, such as where Elizabeth lived. I was never really clear on that. Perhaps I am being to harsh and critical of what is meant to be a "dash" of the characters.
I gave a three star rating due to the holes and for what I perceive as negative emotions that were evoked in me.
As mentioned earlier, I do like this author's works so I will read more from her!!
September 16, 2020
Interesting P&P Variation...
This was a refreshing P&P variation that focuses more on Elizabeth and Darcy with little interaction/interference from each of their families, and this is a good thing. I loved that both of them were strong characters who weren't held back by the usual conventions of the time period, and spoke their minds, but still in a kind way. Georgiana's role was strong and more independent. Jane was entirely out of character, as was Bingley.
It's a variation so you have to expect your favorite characters to be out of character. Jane would never think or act maliciously, especially toward her husband, as she does in this story; however, it is the focal point of this story so we need to just go with it. Even Elizabeth states, "You will be proper and caring. You always are."
We know the HEA ending right from the very start of the story, but I enjoyed the ride with the original and the newly introduced characters. I only wished it were longer so I could stay immersed in the P&P world.
There are several proofreading typos, and who vs whom errors that interrupt a good read.
This was a refreshing P&P variation that focuses more on Elizabeth and Darcy with little interaction/interference from each of their families, and this is a good thing. I loved that both of them were strong characters who weren't held back by the usual conventions of the time period, and spoke their minds, but still in a kind way. Georgiana's role was strong and more independent. Jane was entirely out of character, as was Bingley.
It's a variation so you have to expect your favorite characters to be out of character. Jane would never think or act maliciously, especially toward her husband, as she does in this story; however, it is the focal point of this story so we need to just go with it. Even Elizabeth states, "You will be proper and caring. You always are."
We know the HEA ending right from the very start of the story, but I enjoyed the ride with the original and the newly introduced characters. I only wished it were longer so I could stay immersed in the P&P world.
There are several proofreading typos, and who vs whom errors that interrupt a good read.
September 8, 2017
Although a bit unconventional, I enjoyed this twist to the Pride and Prejudice story. (In reality, I would give the book a 3.75. A 4 reflects the story's quality, but there were points that confused me as a reader.
For example, who is Mr. Campbell? Early in the book the butler was named Mr. Palmer.
The author also periodically switches points of view between paragraphs.
Even though modern times speak of women wearing white bridal gowns, the Regency was not so particular. A pale shade of blue or green or yellow might pass. Having Elizabeth wear white felt too modern to me. I understand that it might not bother another.
The author has Colonel Fitzwilliam sitting in Parliament? A younger son could sit in the House of Commons, but not the House of Lords. When did the good colonel run for a seat?
Then there is my old favorite of lots of split infinitives — to be completely won, to truly enjoy, to seriously contemplate, to ever let, to not be obvious, to not prick her to never give, ETC,
For example, who is Mr. Campbell? Early in the book the butler was named Mr. Palmer.
The author also periodically switches points of view between paragraphs.
Even though modern times speak of women wearing white bridal gowns, the Regency was not so particular. A pale shade of blue or green or yellow might pass. Having Elizabeth wear white felt too modern to me. I understand that it might not bother another.
The author has Colonel Fitzwilliam sitting in Parliament? A younger son could sit in the House of Commons, but not the House of Lords. When did the good colonel run for a seat?
Then there is my old favorite of lots of split infinitives — to be completely won, to truly enjoy, to seriously contemplate, to ever let, to not be obvious, to not prick her to never give, ETC,
June 3, 2021
Still can’t get over...
As much as I enjoy short variations, this is one of those that I cannot completely love. The character seemed very altered from what Jane Austen intended them to be. I can deal with an angry and unforgiving Mr. Bingley and Jane. I can deal with a weaker Fitzwilliam Darcy. But what I cannot wrap my mind around is an Elizabeth Bennet, who claims to only want marriage out of mutual respect and affection, yet marrying someone else other than Darcy for security or fear of being a burden to her family. Even after I find Darcy’s and Eizabeth’s reunion and renewal of their love affair satisfactory, I cannot get over that Elizabeth Bennet marries someone else before Darcy. However, I do appreciate Elizabeth being more open and direct with her feelings probably because of the separation. Being ripped away from her greatest love must have been altering. Still it does not explain the former issue.
As much as I enjoy short variations, this is one of those that I cannot completely love. The character seemed very altered from what Jane Austen intended them to be. I can deal with an angry and unforgiving Mr. Bingley and Jane. I can deal with a weaker Fitzwilliam Darcy. But what I cannot wrap my mind around is an Elizabeth Bennet, who claims to only want marriage out of mutual respect and affection, yet marrying someone else other than Darcy for security or fear of being a burden to her family. Even after I find Darcy’s and Eizabeth’s reunion and renewal of their love affair satisfactory, I cannot get over that Elizabeth Bennet marries someone else before Darcy. However, I do appreciate Elizabeth being more open and direct with her feelings probably because of the separation. Being ripped away from her greatest love must have been altering. Still it does not explain the former issue.
August 10, 2020
The backstory is that Mr. Darcy never came back in Meryton because Mr. Bingley got super mad at him and forbid any contact with his family, now including Elizabeth. Elizabeth married someone else, got widowed shortly, and is out of mourning at the start of the novella. She meets Mr. Darcy at a ball, and they become engaged almost as soon as their gazes meet. The rest of the story deals with the reactions of his family and the Bingleys.
This was quite enjoyable and nicely written but I think it could be more engaging if it took more time to flesh things out. Everything happens very fast and all the angst was already over and done with before the story even started. The happiness might have been worth more if the reader had seen them pining in a couple of chapters first.
Darcy's butler was Palmer in some scenes and Campbell in others.
This was quite enjoyable and nicely written but I think it could be more engaging if it took more time to flesh things out. Everything happens very fast and all the angst was already over and done with before the story even started. The happiness might have been worth more if the reader had seen them pining in a couple of chapters first.
Darcy's butler was Palmer in some scenes and Campbell in others.
October 13, 2020
Kind of corny
While I usually like this author's work, this one is not quite to my liking. It's not necessarily bad, just a bit ridiculous.
After five years Dizzy & Darcy meet at a ball, and then within minutes they're engaged to be married in a week.
I get they were suppose to still be in love, but, get engaged mere minutes after five years?! They know nothing of what changes the other may have. Liszt has been married! Then, Jane leaves Bingley?! Nope this is not the Jane we expect, she's too heartless.
I wouldn't recommend buying it, for free you might get a laugh. Or, not..
While I usually like this author's work, this one is not quite to my liking. It's not necessarily bad, just a bit ridiculous.
After five years Dizzy & Darcy meet at a ball, and then within minutes they're engaged to be married in a week.
I get they were suppose to still be in love, but, get engaged mere minutes after five years?! They know nothing of what changes the other may have. Liszt has been married! Then, Jane leaves Bingley?! Nope this is not the Jane we expect, she's too heartless.
I wouldn't recommend buying it, for free you might get a laugh. Or, not..
August 15, 2021
Sweet Story
Leonie Brown is one of my favorite authors and I enjoy all of her books. This story, like all her others, was well written and thoughtfully composed. An alternative to Bingley's reaction to Darcy's confession of interference in helping to separate Bingley from Jane leads to 5 agonizing years of heartache for Darcy and a marriage of contentment for Elizabeth.
I like how Leenie showed the consequences of the actions taken by all the character's. One of my favorite parts is when Bingley asks Darcy how a man can walk away from the woman he loves because of another man's words. One has to appreciate the irony.
Leonie Brown is one of my favorite authors and I enjoy all of her books. This story, like all her others, was well written and thoughtfully composed. An alternative to Bingley's reaction to Darcy's confession of interference in helping to separate Bingley from Jane leads to 5 agonizing years of heartache for Darcy and a marriage of contentment for Elizabeth.
I like how Leenie showed the consequences of the actions taken by all the character's. One of my favorite parts is when Bingley asks Darcy how a man can walk away from the woman he loves because of another man's words. One has to appreciate the irony.
May 12, 2023
Seriously my favorite part of this book is Georgiana watching carriages out the window, among other things, to allow Darcy and Elizabeth to have a private kiss. Seriously delightful Georgiana in this story.
I can't say I loved this novella but but I can say it was unique from most of the others I've read. It moves really fast making it pretty low angst. The biggest angst is really Bingley's relationships with Jane and with Darcy.
It was a pleasant read and short, which I was looking for since I didn't have much time to read. But it was long enough to get my Darcy fix for the evening.
No sex, language or violence
I can't say I loved this novella but but I can say it was unique from most of the others I've read. It moves really fast making it pretty low angst. The biggest angst is really Bingley's relationships with Jane and with Darcy.
It was a pleasant read and short, which I was looking for since I didn't have much time to read. But it was long enough to get my Darcy fix for the evening.
No sex, language or violence
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