Fate had never been kind to Ji Ning. Wracked by illnesses and infirm his entire life on Earth, Ning knew early on that he would die as a teenager. What he didn’t know was that there really was such a thing as life after death, and that the universe was a far larger place than he thought.
A lucky twist of fate (one of the few in Ning’s life) meant that Ning was reborn into a world of Immortals and monsters, of Ki Refiners and powerful Fiendgods, a world where Dynasties lasted for millions of years. A world which is both greater…and yet also smaller…than he ever could imagine. He would have the opportunity to join them, and in this life, Ning swore to himself, he would never let himself be weak again!
The Era he was born into was a Desolate one, but Ning would make it his era.
- Quote: As the saying goes, a wall falls when many hands push on it. - Thoughts: Good continuation of the story. With a plausible motive for the big bad guys not showing up and killing Ji Ning as he starts to get in their way. ▶◀ These are my personal opinions, you may discord, my final rating of the book is not necessarily linked to this system and may diverge from it. Book Storyline - Originality: 4/5 stars - Development: 5/5 stars - Enjoyment: 5/5 stars - Writing stile: 3/5 stars - Funnyness: 1/5 stars - Epicness: 3/5 stars - Scaryness: 2/5 stars - Smartness: 4/5 stars - Addictiveness: 5/5 stars - Plot twists: 4/5 stars - Pace: 5/5 stars - Storyline planning: 4/5 stars OR /5 negative stars - Ending: 3/5 stars OR /5 negative stars - Holes: 2/5 negative stars - Self contained (Y/N): × - Cliffhanger (Y/N): ✓ - Adult (Y/N): × - Mystery (Y/N): × - Treasure Hunting (Y/N): × - Violence level: The Sin Flames Descend - Tech level: Irrelevant - Religion level: fictional daoism - Main genre: Xianxia - Subgenre: Asian, ki fighting, shounen - Point of view: main character with interludes - Aftertaste: Lets get the next one World - Originality: 3/5 stars - Variety: 2/5 stars - Consistency: 4/5 stars - Impact on the story: 2/5 stars - Maps: -/5 stars - Real world (Y/N): × - Fantasy based on real world (Y/N): × - Journey (Y/N): × - Main scenario: World of Grand Xia Characters - Total amount: Lots - Points of view: Ji Ning - Main characters: Ji Nint - Secondary: Uncle White, Mu Northson, Diancai, Youngflame Celestial Immortals Gang, some others - Ordinary: millions - Overall quality: 4/5 stars - Main: 4/5 stars - Secondary: 5/5 stars - Consistency: 3/5 stars - Connection: 3/5 stars - Dialogs: 3/5 Stars - Interactions: 4/5 Stars - Romance ( Y/ N): × - Underworld Crew (Y/N): × - Training (Y/N): ✓ - Notable best characters: Old Demon Windraiser - Notable worse characters: The Xia Emperor Setting - Historical importance: 3/5 Stars - Historical deep: 1/5 Stars - Historical score: 2/5 Stars - Geopolitical importance: 3/5 Stars - Geopolitical variety: 2/5 Stars - Geopolitical score: 3/5 Stars - Setting overall score: 3/5 Stars - Tension: 3/5 Stars - Atmosphere: 3/5 Stars - Supernatural (Vampires, werewolves) (Y/N): × - Superpowers (√/○): ✓ - Non-human races (Y/N): ✓ - Virtual Reality (Y/N): × - Monsters (Y/N): ✓ - Historical relevant period: Millions of years Rules - Devised system: 3/5 stars - System complexity: 3/5 stars - System explanation: 3/5 stars - Impact on storyline: 5/5 stars - Rulebreaker (Y/N): ✓ - Type of Rule: Xianxia Xianxia - Battle phase: 4/5 stars - Skill innovation: 4/5 stars - Treasure hunting phase: 1/5 stars - Cultivation phase: 1/5 stars Series Storyline These are scored based on the series up to the end of this book: - Impact of this book in storyline: 4/5 stars - Originality: 3/5 stars - Development: 4/5 stars - Enjoyment: 4/5 stars - Writing stile: 3/5 stars - Funnyness: 1/5 stars - Epicness: 3/5 stars - Scaryness: 2/5 stars - Smartness: 3/5 stars - Addictiveness: 5/5 stars - Plot twists: 4/5 stars - Pace: 4/5 stars - Storyline: 4/5 stars OR /5 negative stars - Holes: 4/5 negative stars - Can be read as a standalone (√/×): ×
Whole series seems to have devolved into being exclusively about a feud between Ji Ning and a petty clan which I found interminably dull. This feud has lasted around 7books now and I lost my interest in it a long time ago.
The fact that much more interesting stuff seems to be happening in the wider universe makes it all the more galling to have to put up with.
There were a few more twists and turns in this book. Ji Ning has become overpowered but there is a power creep that is built into these books. He has to face a lot more adversity in this book. Not much resolves unfortunately.