I loved seeing things from Victor's POV!
I loved Victor's entrance in Introductions. It was so hilarious, and this short story had some funny scenes, too. He was also a lot more analytical than I thought he'd be, and I enjoyed reading his thoughts. His connection with Kota and their ability to converse just by giving each other looks is something I'll always admire, and I think Victor is just a really interesting character in general. He's so sweet, but he's always super funny and playful, which I adore. I also liked how this showed his vulnerable side. He really wants people to see him for who he really is, and he wants Sang to do that. His tripping over his words in an attempt to let Sang warm up to him was also really funny and adorable.
I feel like they didn't have much of Victor, though. Like, this short was supposed to be about him, but they didn't reveal too much of his character. I want more. He's one of my favorites of the boys, and I still don't know as much about him. His chapter in Introductions didn't have much going on, so his POV is super short. What a bummer.
I only noticed a few writing errors. Nothing much. I was really happy to be able to read this and see things from his perspective. I only thought it was much too short and was left wanting for more. 😉 Can't wait to continue on!