Rating: minus 5 on a scale of minus 5 to plus five.
This book is now up for a rewrite and as usual it is doubtful that anyone else will read this. This is probably the first writer that I ever "hate" read. I came to despise his writing and have seen the same limited imagination in Kindle Unlimited repeated in title after title over more than a 1000 books.
Before I continue I must visit the YouTube to fortify the spirit. This was made possible by the channels Doctor Who/They Break My Heart - RecklessGirl100, NCMI, Heather Cox Richardson, Maggie Mae Fish, Red Glasgow, Ukraine Calling, LuckyBlackCat, Fit 2B Read, Truth to Power, Aid Thompsin, Top Ten Sci-Fi Web Series, Reese Waters, Broken Peach, Postmodern Jukebox, Mia Mulder, The Ritual Kitchen with Laura May, Guard the Leaf, Bobbing Along, Real Time History, Lady Knight the Brave, Authors Behaving badly, Jean's Thoughts, Vlad Vexler, Squire, Outlaw Bookseller, Vizyon Baba, Viva La Dirt League, Terrible Writing Advice, Just in Time Worldbuilding, ThePrimeChronus, Cruising Alba, The Discriminating Wargamer, Belle of the Ranch, Dungeons and Discourse, Players Aid, Ukraine Matters, Octopus Lady, Twinshangout, The Historian's Craft, Brandon Fisichella, Matriarchetype, SandRhoman History, Keffals, Gutsick Gibbon, Ben G Thomas, Planarwalker, Biz, Dr Fatima, Kazachka, Art Deco, DUST, Broken Peach, KernowDamo, Cruising Crafts, Caelan Conrad, Leeja Miller, Well Deck Diaries, Tabithaspeakspolitics, The Alt-Right in Table Top Games, Horses, Narrowboat Pirate, Kiko1006, It's Black Friday, NerdForge, Mynameismarines, With Cindy, The Shades of Orange, Sci-fi Odyssey, Tod Maffin, Cruising Alba, ReligionForBreakfast, Jay Exci, Skip Intro, Lady of the Library, Texas Paul, Eugenia from Ukraine, Radio Retrofuture, SciencePhile the AI, Art Deco, Apostolic Majesty, ScaredKetchup, Kent, Turn Left, The Scottish Clans, Hoots, Wily Films, Think That Through, Brian Keating, Lily Simpson, The Map Reading Company, The Juice Media, Rebecca Watson, Ask a Mortician, Nora's Guide to the Galaxy, HaleysTusk, Bookpilled, Eurasia Naval Insight, The Bands of HM Royal Marines, SK Media, Vidar Solaas - Wyrd Sisters, Mercado Media, Owen Jones, Jessie Gender, RevolutionarythOt, Vidya Mitra, JohnTheDuncan.
One idiot whilst insulting a trans female creators complained to her that I list trans female channel creators. I do not understand how these US males manage to survive with so little self-awareness. To him and his be aware that my list of channels include boater, archaeologist, bi, military historian, socialist, Irish, intersex, anthropologist, physicist, trans, redhead, cis, Indian, hobbyist, asexual, tall, WOC, communist and other female creators known as Women. Almost as harmful to self-indulgent ignorance are the Kenyan, other LGBTQ+, anarchist, economist, ginger, other BIPOC, naval historian, Danish, military board gamer, modeller, fashion historian, Canadian, ethnocynologist, chemist, and other creators known as Human Beings. If the voices still urge you to expose yourself to reality, immediately consume 12 to 18 hours of GB, develop a hobby (not to include abusing a suspected immigrant, which is mental illness (Georges flag notwithstanding) or seek an emergency exorcism. The tedium of these revisions is sometimes overwhelming. At that point, I am reminded of the early days interview with the middle age teacher who organised and led her civilian anti-tank team hunting Russian armour North of Kyiv. With that example, I cannot but continue. Glory to Ukraine. Glory to the Heroes. Crimea is Ukraine.
Anderle books never rest on a sane, plausible or consistent background universe. His books always feature a plot which is indecipherable. His characters can never manage to finish a story with a logical arc, neither does he develop depth for them. The dialogue mimics the same poorly thought out character interactions. The style and word usage are not worthy of analysis. Suffice it to say that story structure, storytelling worldbuilding and prose are a disjointed mess, even in books listing him as secondary author.
Combat in these boom-boom spacey-space books in Unlimited are particularly offensive, since I have seen almost none demonstrate the least understanding of combat, current naval usage, military organisation or plausible political aims.
There was one exception in which a writer wrote an actual novel based on what seems to be the Anderle shared universe. That book was almost enjoyable and as I remember it, she hinted at a world of far more depth than I thought was possible given the hot mess she was handed. I am not hopeful that she will be given another opportunity to further contribute to that universe. I suspect that the publisher, not the writer will veto that possibility.
I found ridiculous prose, no plot, contrivance as plot device, dialogue befitting an eight year old of no particular talent writing under the influence of too much sugar, to be van odd choice for publication.
This book might be the model for for S J Maas fantasy and is written for that audience. This appeals to those women readers probably, so is a disjointed girl boss mess. It seems to be exciting to a reader in the mood but science fiction it is not.
The Spaceships are easily replaced by dragons, the vampire by elf, the angels by gods and do not look for recognisable logic, context and definitely not character.
I truly hated this writer until I realised that publishers promoted him and his pretence of story specifically by attaching the Anderle name to other poor first time writers. He is such an awful writer that I suspect he is one of the "trust fund baby become a writer" club. I forced myself to read eight of this series if such it can be called. I had not heard or thought the term "hate read" before this.
The writer paints an all white middle age white male group as solely representative of US adults. Women involved in changing the world stop midstream for shoe shopping and what he imagined is girl talk. Women writers churn out the same drivel.
I had one commenter on my last book, who might have explained the nature of the fiction. Instead she was a condescending idiot. Imagine Philomena Cunk minus the charming earnestness. That reader is symptomatic of the membership which lack media literacy, their poor socialisation, their parochial worldview. She was a Karen, not a fellow reader and Goodreads would normalise that condition.
US publishers have apparently decided that average reading level for Romance must be that for eleven years old, which I discovered from a quick internet search. That of science fiction is probably that for the ten year old based on my 1000+ attempts at Kindle Unlimited fare. Neither is a particular problem for either genre. However neither level demands nor excuses poor writing, lack of editing even to misspelling, uneven style, absence of worldbuilding, no character development and the rest.
Continuing required another visit to the YouTube and some TV. This next was made possible by Doctor Who/Be Kind -Reality Genre Studios, Red Glasgow, The Kavernacle, AllShorts, Royal Institution, Jay Exci, ScaredKetchup. Quinn's Ideas, The Templin Institute, LuckyBlackCat, Verilybitchie, Natasha's Adventures, Princess Weekes, The Book Leo, Weirdo Book Club, Shitty Book Club, Depressed Russian, Julie Nolke, Don't F@ck with Ukraine, Squire, Think That Through, The Researcher, The Caspian Report, Postmodern Jukebox, Thread Bare Inc, Belle of the Ranch, Paul Warburg, Red Wrench Films, Oceanliner Designs, Living Anachronism, Stories of Futures Past, Told in Stone, Dan Davis History, Mercado Media, Truth to Power, Supertanskiii, Amie's Literary Empire, Reedsy, Omeleto, Times Radio, Perun, Bobbing Along, Dark Brandon, Cruising Crafts, Fit 2B Read, History with Kayleigh, Kyiv Post, Planarwalker, Geo Girl, Up and Atom, Military Aviation History, The Present Past, Dr Fatima, Cruising Alba, Ship Happens, The Gaze, The Bitchuation Room, The Juice Media, Kelly Loves Physics and History, Physics Girl, With Cindy, Jess Owens, FAFO, The Sword and the Pen, The New Enlightenment with Ashley, The Narrowboat that James Built, Camper Vibe, Cruising the Cut, Sailing Melody, Hypohystericalhistory, NFKRZ, Think Ukraine, Capitalist Realism, Miranda Mills, HBomberGuy, Crecganford, Venom Geek Media, Queen Penguin, Female Warriors - Teresatessa, Emma Watson, Harbo Wholmes, Democratic Penguins Republic, ThePrimeChronus, The Dadvocate, Kiko1006 - Sariel, Real Time History, Times Radio, The Great War, Lily Simpson, Brandon F, Russian Dude, Authors Behaving Badly, Biz, The Outlaw Bookseller, Chris and Shell, Book Furnace, OrangeRiver, Autumn's Boutique, A Cup of Nicole, Evie Lupine, Alizee, Lady of the Library, Scholars Shelf, Library Ladder, CoachD, Science Fiction with Damien Walter, Double Down News, Northern Narrowboaters, Lizzie and Clara, Book Leo, DUST, Owen Jones, Agro Squirrel Narrates, Emma Thorne, The Interesting Times, ATP Geopolitics, Liz Webster, Dark Docs, Dark Seas, Military History Visualised, Novara Media, Gingers are Black, Ben and Emily.
I am not certain but It seems there are only four major US publishing houses, which makes a consensus of quality standards almost guaranteed. This does not benefit the reader and has fostered repeated ugly themes, characterisation and have normalised writers such as Dalzelle, Chaney, Anderle and Ringo. I lost interest in US science fiction written after 2010 and Kindle Unlimited do not promote even Weber, McCaffrey, Drake, Silverberg, Cherryh and others.
I watched rather than read fiction as a result. YouTube is host to DUST, Omeleto, and other entertaining and thoughtful short film channels, as well as Reddit amateur science fiction fantasy narration channels. These despite their flaws are superior stories to most of the 1000+ Kindle titles on my Goodreads shelves. I doubt that the quality of print speculative fiction will improve without a reader rejection of the current standard.
Consider treating this as a potentially hostile site. 🤔
Goodreads discourse is not encouraged. As example, a bit more than four years ago I wrote a short negative review of Powers of the Earth, a poorly written, juvenile salute to what would now be called the sociopathic January 6, 2021 hero. The plot if such it can be called, revolves around a rich twit enlisting the military to overthrow the US government in order that he not pay inheritance taxes.
The writer, a Travis Corcoran self-identified as libertarian (now anarcho capitalist minus the multi-millions wealth) and advocate for a return of chattel slavery (now a popular US stance), supporter of Putin (another popular US stance), veteran and employee of an unnamed US agency. He was a MAGA hero before the label was coined.
He and six fellow patriots, were incensed by my description of the book as dangerous and unhealthy. In 2025 here we are. Those earning 40,000 or less call for protection of the multi-billionaire, even at the cost of ending governmental services, ending the thin social safety net, allowing unsafe water, air and soil in support of corporate profits from which they do not benefit, direct militarization of police and shredding of their constitution.
They spent a year demanding my response to comments praising slavery, hating the notion of social good (mislabelling that as socialism), decrying civil rights for all citizens and other madness.
With the exception of the Corcoran himself, none included the book on their shelves.🤔
The final comment was delivered by a Claes Rees Jr aka cgr710 now ka Clayton R Jesse Jr in which he proclaims that They had "won" (?), after referencing the contents of my last message to a Goodreads friend.
I discovered that these demented souls had launched a tsunami of truly sick misogynistic, anti-LGBTQ and racist comments against every female creator of channels mentioned for more than a year (it continues still). The physicist, book reviewer, boater, architect and other female creators were neither silenced nor impressed. The world's overabundance of unpleasantness was certainly increased and a chilling self-portrait of the Snowflake (aggrieved, arrogant, mental US man-child) was delivered to a multinational audience. That must count as Victory. USA, Yay ?? Goodreads, Yay ??
That a communist with the opinion that such a common theme in Kindle selections is dangerous and unhealthy could cause a meltdown among US patriots was quite the surprise. It did for me rehabilitate the term "irony". 😊
A final stepaway to the YouTube. This last was made possible by Doctor Who/Never Cruel or Cowardly -Ozar, NCMI, Imperial War Museums, Dark Docs, Dark Seas, Vlad Vexler, Zoe Bee, Think Ukraine, Ember Green, Lynn Saga, Caspian Report, Atun Shei Films, Mandy, J Draper, Bernadette Banner, Dylan Burns, Contrapoint, Keffals, Ben and Emily, Ukraine Calling, SandRhoman History, Military Aviation History, Leena Norms, Petticoats and Prose.
Ominous music begins. 😊 The running history of my experience on Goodreads can be found on my review of Powers of the Earth. The comment gangs are in my opinion unhinged and Their displeasure runs to doxxing, stalking (online and IRL), threats and in future perhaps the Swatting. The employees are petty little men, who enable the madness. Amazon do not move to protect the customer from other members or mad employees.
Goodreads shared my very limited message history with these madlads. That made possible a request from Pine Gap Centre of Australian Intelligence attempt to uncover my personal history through interrogation of the one friend whom I occasionally messaged. My friend contacted me and was seriously concerned for my life. Amazon only became concerned as we began sharing our experience.
That concern extended only to returning my page options to normal, disappearing Lurkers I had not been Allowed to remove, masking comments and the rest. Recently I had my review list altered several times in an attempt to break my queuing process, I imagine. 😁
I suggest precautions when using Goodreads. Remove all personal information from profile and avoid messaging. Remove the Lurker, those who never post. They are monitors for comment gangs, not admirers. Given the Goodreads penchant for Altering customer pages, the screenshot of the odd, ugly and threatening are invaluable. These may make you safer.
Kindle use is more perilous. Do Not Use Kindle Files, Calendar, Contacts or Email. Kindle read customer emails without permission or notice. Do Not "purchase" Amazon ebooks. You own only the device, not the download. Your download may be Altered or Deleted at Amazon's whim. That was a mistake which I myself made. All Silk searches should of course be non-critical and innocuous.
Amazon employees and members do not do introspection. They will never ask "Are we the Baddies?" They possess no recognisable morality but more importantly are patriotic Snowflakes (outraged white US man-children) or fascistic thugs more like. Ominous music ends. 😊
Be well my friend and may we all find Good Reading. 🤗
Some favourite YouTube channels.
NCMI, Bobbing Along, Leeja Miller, Munecat. Owen Jones, KernowDamo. Fantasy and World Music by the Fletchers. Welcome to Ukraine, Abby Cox, Karolina Zebrowska, Belle of the Ranch, Tara Mooknee, What Vivi did next, Ben and Emily, Kings and Generals, Evie Lupine, Alina Gingertail, Silicon Curtain, Belinda Carr, Answer in Progress, No Justice, Yanis Varoufakis, AllShorts, GK Reads, Reads with Rachel, Hardy's Books, The Gwynne Brothers, The Bands of HM Royal Marines, Sabine Hossenfelder, The Royal Institution, The Bands of HM Royal Marines, Anna from Ukraine, Hey Sokoly, Bella Ciao -Nikolay Kutuzov, Kiko1006 - Empire of Angels, Real Time History, GhostTime History, The Shades of Orange, Valhalla Drums, Cold Fusion, The Great War, Then & Now, Philosophy Tube, Abbie Emmons, A Life of Lit, Steve Shives, Adult Wednesday Addams - 2 seasons, Ben G Thomas, Lady Knight the Brave, Gutsick Gibbon, Cecilia Blomdahl, Cruising Crafts, Lily's Expat Life, Hildegard von Blingin, ReligionForBreakfast, Xiran Jay Zhao, Skip Intro, Rowan J Coleman, Prime of Midlife, Kat Blacque, Verilybitchie, Lily Alexandre, History with Kayleigh, The Megalith Hunter, Planarwalker, Guard the Leaf, Emperor Tigerstar, Dr Becky, Smack the Pony, Oliver Lugg, Apostolic Majesty, Some More News, Kyiv Independent, Zoe Bee, Northern Narrowboaters, Professor Gerdes Explains, Lady of the Library, Renegade Cut, Anark, Keffals, Mrs Betty Bowers, Puddles Pity Party, Broken Peach, Bookpilled, Femi, Sideprojects, Crow Caller, OliviaReadsaLatte, Delamer, Book Furnace, Jean's Thoughts, Invicta, Fall of Civilisations, Leftist Cooks, Zoe Baker, Claus Kellerman POV, Kaz Rowe.
I wish you a glorious morning, a pleasant afternoon, a cosy evening, a wonderful night and may we all continue learning.
Allow Another to speak in your name, adopt Another's sins.
My grandmother