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Detective William Hursel has worked countless murder cases, staring down the cruelest deeds humanity has to offer. But nothing prepares him for what he’ll uncover while pursuing 14-year-old Christopher Pesner, a suspect in the brutal rage-killing of his own mother. While news reports focus on Chris’s odd obsession with the violent, blasphemous heavy metal band, Rehoboam, Hursel suspects a deeper motive — a hunch that is confirmed when Chris’s second victim is discovered. Racing to piece together the identity of Chris’s next target, Hursel unearths the shocking link between an embattled politician, a controversial evangelist and a shadowy underworld where human traffickers ply the wealthy and powerful with unseemly indulgences.

[This is an alternate cover edition of 978-0-9911066-0-8]

376 pages, Paperback

First published March 22, 2014

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May 16, 2014
Hickmon really hits a homerun with the novel, 13:24. It has every ioata of suspense and emotion expected of a forensic thriller. Many times in the story, I was literally grimacing as I read or holding my mouth as it splayed open in shock. I was thrusted into the story of Chris, a boy who is smart enough to unearth a major criminal pornography ring and search for his own personal level of peace by caring out revenge on the people who needed it most. Josh, a man suffering from childhood psychological, physical and emotional wounds, finds his peace on the stage, reliving his horrors for his fans. These two character's lives are parallel in many ways but being ages apart does not separate them from a dark bond that they must both endure to the very end.

I really enjoyed this book so much. It brought up so many talking points for me to have with pastors, friends and my spouse. 13:24 makes you think about what you would do and question childhood innocence and obedience. It is definitely a thrill ride from beginning to end with a twist of an unknown odd fetish.

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February 21, 2014
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This novel was indeed very well written. I found the manner in which the story was told so very captivating. The story switches from character to character and past and present and seems to have a lot of characters in total.

I did however find the subject manner of religion and child abuse uncomfortable (go figure that the murder wasn't included in my issues) and those are my reasons for not completing this story.

I would however read this author again if the subject manner were different.

*Copy provided by Net Galley for review*
238 reviews2 followers
June 15, 2014
If it was Mr. Hickman's intent to get the word out about child abuse and abuse by church leaders and church-going parents, I say mission accomplished. He has created a story with contemporary appeal by using the rock music world and has blown the cover off of PTSD in the the victims of abuse. The words are graphic and brutal. The plot is cleverly conceived and has great potential for a TV or movie screenplay. It is time we all get back to non-violent love, isn't it? My thanks to LibraryThing and the author for a complimentary copy.
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February 7, 2014
I was sent an advance proof in exchange for a candid review and surprised myself by actually reading the whole thing! Here is my take:

A forensic thriller with heart and soul—and a brain.

In 13:24, it’s always clear who done it. The question is why. 13:24 weaves together the stories of two anti-heroes, one a tattooed and muscled singer who specializes in Satanic heavy metal with violent lyrics; the other a teen fan on a murder spree. But just beneath the surface, both are achingly vulnerable. As they struggle to claim some modicum of sanity, dignity, and love from a dark web that has consumed their lives, the reader is dragged into a sordid subculture made all the more disturbing because we suspect it may be real.

13:24 reads like a Hollywood blockbuster; I finished it in a single trans-continental flight. But like its layered protagonists, the story challenges some time-honored assumptions about authority and spirituality. Where is the line between bdsm and abuse? Where is the line between childrearing and subjugation? What happens when the four become one in the broken body and mind of a wounded child? In scene after unflinching scene, these questions play out against the backdrop of an edgy music subculture and page-turning race against the clock that will determine who is the final victim.

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1,656 reviews178 followers
March 23, 2014
13:24 A Story of Faith and Obsession by M. Dolon Hickmon was provided to me free through Goodreads Giveaways in exchange for a fair and honest review.

This book is definitely not for the faint of heart. It is about a child (actually a couple children) who experience physical abuse at the hands of their fathers or parental figures.

It starts out with a murder and you would think that you would identify and sympathize with the victim. However, it quickly becomes apparent that the 15 year old murderer is the real victim.

What I found so scary and disturbing about this book is that the events in it could easily be taking place in the "real" world. It makes you think about whether religious freedoms should be allowed or whether they should be policed. It is an extremely complicated topic and one that has many compelling arguments.
I think the author has done a terrific job of showing how dangerous it can be to put religious rights above the rights of an individual and especially above the rights of a child.

As the book goes on Chris continues his killing spree which to me looked a lot like justice.

We also meet Josh. A preacher's son who was brought up to be instantly obedient. In fact, his father travelled around to various churches teaching other parents how to beat their children into submission and saying that it was God's will. This is obviously a sick and twisted take on a biblical quote, but poor Josh was beaten for even the smallest disobedience.

In the book Josh is now an adult and the lead singer of a heavy metal band called Rehoboam. His music is basically a cry for help and the pain in the songs comes from the abuse he received as a child at the hands of his father.

Chris was abused by his mother's boyfriend, who insidiously wormed his way into Chris's life with the express purpose of getting Chris to want him as a father. Once he achieved that goal, the abuse began and each episode was videotaped and sold to other sick, perverted people.

Chris's murder victims are all part of the child abuse ring that his hoped for Step Dad was a part of.

The book takes many twists and turns and skips between past and present as well as between the lives of Chris and Josh. What could easily be jumbled and confusing was instead a seamless and steady march toward the climax of the story.

The author has achieved what eludes so many other authors. He has written a compelling and gripping crime drama that also makes the reader think. This is such a rare commodity these days that I feel I have to give this book 5 out of 5 stars.

This is a great read and it will stay with you long after after you finish reading the book.

I will definitely be watching for more books by M. Dolon Hickmon.
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29 reviews18 followers
July 20, 2016
I was hesitant to begin this book because some of the reviews made me think it was going to be overly graphic. However, this book is fantastic and it never goes into inappropriate detail. At the same time, it never belittles the seriousness of the crimes that take place. I was also nervous that it would slander the Christian faith, but I never felt that the story was meant to promote or repel religion. It was perfectly balanced.

This story does a great job of taking something taboo (religion) and showing what can happen when someone manipulates scripture for their own gain. Too often society takes 1 verse from the Bible and declares it as law without reading the rest of the story. It is also allows the reader to understand that it is never a good idea to blindly follow the word of any human being, including religious figureheads.

Aside from having many good life lessons, this is an wonderfully written book. I thoroughly enjoyed the writing style of M. Dolon Hickmon. It was a fun and fast-paced read. I will admit that I was a little confused in the beginning when trying to learn the names of everyone because there are several men and all of them have very common names. I never had to scoff or roll my eyes at any cheesiness throughout the story. I will absolutely keep a look out for other books by M. Dolon Hickmon.
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13 reviews2 followers
June 30, 2014
For starters I would like to thank the author M. Dolon Hickmon for choosing me to receive a signed copy of his book. I was selected through one of his giveaways back in February. Sorry it took so long to do a review I change companies and as an overseas contractor that can make getting mail a bit difficult.

13:24 is an amazingly well written book in my opinion. M. Dolon Hickmon does a phenomenal job of giving his characters believable and genuine depth. The history behind the main characters Chris a teenage boy and rocker Joshua Sebala is heart wrenching and at times even nauseating. I don't mean that as a negative either. Child abuse is an ugly dark thing it's to the author's credit that his writing can elicit such powerful sympathetic feelings.

The religious theme may be hard for some of the devout to swallow but see it for what it is. The author clearly is not speaking from a position of ignorance. He is knowledgeable about the subject and my perception of his point was that the bible contains good and bad examples of how to be a good person. People will exploit the bad examples when it suits their own agenda then use their faith as a shield from reprisal. In their minds like the mind of Allen Garnfield from the book its perfectly acceptable to pick and choose from the Bible then call it God's word simply because it came from the Bible. Its a terrible misuse of the Bible that becomes exponentially worse when religious leader proliferate this aberration of faith to their flocks. I hate to rant during a review so I will just say that this book got to me. It reminded me of why I chose not to have blind faith and why I didn't just inherit my faith either. I believe in God and Jesus and I am weary of any man who would try and spread any message other than peace, tolerance, compassion, or any of the other things that are inherently good.

Man this book was incredibly good. Like I said it was well written and thoughtful. It will get under your skin and it is for that reason that I will include this warning. If you find vivid descriptions of physical abuse and its psychological impact to much to bare for any reason maybe pass on this book. Keep in mind that this book would not work with out the descriptions. The scenes of violence against kids are pivotal in defining the motives of the characters. It is in there to help the reader truly gain some level of understanding. If you can stomach what this story contains and appreciate what the author was intending to share with us you would not regret reading 13:24.

I would definitely recommended this book with the aforementioned warning I have included. Personally I'd say this book has earned itself a spot on my top 10 favorite novels list.

Again thank you to the author M. Dolon Hickmon for not only writing an amazing book but selecting me to receive a copy and Rehoboam Press for mailing and publishing it.
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833 reviews46 followers
March 31, 2014
Thank you to LibraryThing and the publishers, Rehoboam Press, for providing this book in exchange for an honest review. This did not influence my review in any way.

13:24 - A Story of Faith and Obsession is not for the faint of heart. It is gritty, presenting images to the reader that they will never want to see for themselves. It points fingers unashamedly. And reading it, you feel like it speaks a truth that has been covered up for some time, despite the fact that this particular story is fiction.

Chris is fourteen years old. He has just murdered his mother and her fiance. He's on the run, but he's not finished yet. He has a goal in mind. What seems like a tragic murder possibly caused by Chris' obsession with the dark heavy metal band Rehoboam (coincidentally shares the name with the publisher?) soon turns into something much more sinister, involving the band's frontman Josh, who is dealing with the ghosts of his fundamentalist upbringing.

This book involves a lot of heavy content and devastating, descriptive scenes that may be too much for some readers. But, as the author states in the 'Note on Accuracy and Inspirations' found in the front of the book, while these particular events are fiction, the abuse suffered by some children at the hands of their parents and encouraged by the church is real.

The book was fast-paced, a real page turner and mostly well written but did involve some clumsy or out-of-place phrasing, such as when a man who had been married for a number of years 'looked at his bride' - a phrase I would associate more with a couple just married. There were a few other examples that stood out as I was reading but nothing that really made me angry, as poor writing and editing will do. The characters of Chris and Josh were well developed and I sympathised with them and what they went through, all the while with this feeling in my gut that it couldn't end well for either of them. In my mind the book as a whole came across to me like a really good episode of Criminal Minds (which I adore) with the cases being more complex than just right-and-wrong and with the same 'can't-look-away' feeling, which translated to 'can't-put-it-down'.

Great storytelling, but not quite flawless. Still, 4 stars from me.
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101 reviews2 followers
July 22, 2016
This was a compelling book. It does, however, center on some very dark material. Much of the plot is built around religion-inspired child abuse that is supposedly based on "biblical" discipline principles, especially as found in the conservative evangelical christian subculture. Anyone who has heard of Michael and Debi Pearl and their book To Train Up a Child, will find one of the characters, Allen Garnfield, to be very familiar (along with his fictional child "training" book, lol).

The story itself weaves back and forth through time, with special focus on two boys/young men, Chris and Josh. Josh, the son of Allen, is the lead singer of a metal band in the present. Most of his story is presented in flashbacks to his years as the son and victim of "Pastor" Garnfield. There are a few scenes of graphic abuse, things that any normal parent would consider beyond the pale. On the other hand, Chris is first shown near the beginning of his murder spree; his story involves unravelling the mystery of what Andrew, who was acting as a pseudo-father figure to Chris, was really involved with (child abuse pronography). There are also flashbacks to his past, fleshing out the relationship between Chris and Andrew, also with some minor abuse scenes.

The third thread of the story involves a homicide detective attempting to find and arrest Chris and a federal investigator following the case of the child pornography revealed through following Chris' movements. This is the thread that ties everything together and helps give the book a somewhat satisfactory ending.

I did have some problems following all the back and forth between various times and POVs, but the book was well worth the effort.
144 reviews9 followers
March 5, 2014
I was provided a copy of an ARC in exchange for an honest review.

I have no idea where to begin with this book. When I finished it, I knew immediately that this was going to be a book that would stay with me for the rest of my life.

The details and research of this book blew me out of the water. This is a courageous look at at the world. But the way all the characters weave together shows true devotion to the dark webs of the story.

Some of the scenes were quite intense, but none over the top. I wish I could right a review that would do this book justice.

Both Josh and Chris as the main characters stand out so well in my mind. It is hard to describe the events of the book without spoiling anything, but I think this is a must read if nothing else to open the eyes of the public that people will use almost anything to justify child abuse. And the lingering effects are truly devastating.
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1,778 reviews7 followers
April 1, 2014
Thank you to NetGalley and Rehoboam Press for a free advance download of 13:24.
This novel by M. Dolon Hickmon has everything: suspense, bad guys, music, scripture, and history. Josh Sebala is a rock star who shocks his audiences with the profane subject matter of his lyrics. When a multimillion dollar child pornography business is threatened, Josh finds himself a person of interest. He must choose between advocating for the health and safety of children and protecting his estranged father. Josh was abused by his father, a religious zealot who emphasized Biblical obedience. This one is not for the faint of heart, but the Biblical exegesis is worth the read. Recommended.
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235 reviews
September 12, 2016
"He used to say that Satan's greatest trick wasn't making people think he didn't exist - it was convincing Christians that he couldn't speak from the pulpit." (chapter 38, page 1)

This book is smart and thoughtful and it stays with you. I fear for the future of America (thank God I'm not) because this book describes the people that are breeding out of control and doing everything they can to fill the highest levels of your government. I'd like to force every trashy fundamentalist bible beater to read it but like the quote above suggests, evil is incredibly tricky and at the moment it seems to go by the name of "Pastor" far too often.
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98 reviews1 follower
February 12, 2014
A great forensic thriller. One is a satanic singer and the other is a teen fan on a murder spree. There is abuse, BDSM, and violence. This is a page turner and will leave a impression on your mind. I hope to read more from this author. He has done a wonderful job with this book.
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115 reviews14 followers
April 2, 2014
I got an ARC from Netgalley in exchange for an honest review.

I just finished reading this book and I keep saying 'wow' over and over again to myself. I'm not sure what to say about the book without giving too much away. This is a thriller about abuse and deep spiritual symbolism. I love how the symbolism is woven into the story. It is actually the essence of the story.
The story begins with Chris, the teenage son of a drug addict who lives in a trailer home, killing his mother's boyfriend and leading the police on a merry chase round town, leaving more bodies in his wake. Chris is in contact with Josh, the lead singer of a heavy metal band who has his demons of large proportions to deal with.

Josh is the son of Allen Garnfield, a highly regarded minister, whose guide to raising a "godly child" is simple: whip them until their will is subdued. His book and teachings are a manual for several misguided parents and dealers in child pornography, one of whom has Chris under his thumb and makes videos of himself whipping the kid.

Josh and Chris have a lot more in common than they think, and you, dear reader are about to find out with them.
The book is very detailed, well researched, and very well written. The author switches points of view and time frames without leaving one confused.Each character was alive and I felt their different stories.

I think this book tells how human beings can always find a way to justify their indulgences. Also, that there are beastly people roaming this earth. Disturbing as it is, I enjoyed reading this book, and I'd like to specially thank the author for the chance to finish reading it.
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2,310 reviews501 followers
October 26, 2017
After reading this book I have nothing but the upmost respect and admiration for the author, M. Dolon Hickmon. Himself a survivor of religiously motivated child abuse and punishment (read torture) he has thrown himself tirelessly into the cause of bringing this issue and the terrible effects of PTSD on survivors into the public eye.

The book, which was written to publicise the issue and assist survivors with the proceeds is therefore necessarily horrific, there is no sugar coating here. Although fictional, it details an alarming trend of religiously motivate child abuse, how it is justified and how unscrupulous and greedy criminals use this to rake in the money from paedophiles and sadistic voyeurs.

I don't need to go into the plot which was totally gripping, I think you can imagine what it may entail. I will say it moved me and wrung some very strong emotions out of me. This is a strongly written story with credible characters that you ache for. But this is real, it is happening and it is happening under the aegis of certain religions. If you are interested, at the end of the e-book you can find a link to more about the actor's personal story and, I guess you would call it, crusade. Sorry for the strong words but I abhor cruelty to children under any pretext.
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February 4, 2015
I am generally an avid reader of crime and horror fiction.  All the better if they have firm basis in real life – “could this really happen?”.I first picked up 13:24 as I had heard it being described as disturbing, its cover appealed to me and I was intrigued by the title itself, as I had no idea what it referred to.I like to discover a book as I read it, and let it speak for itself, without it being marred by any preconceptions I might have due to someone else’s account of it.  As such, it took some time and a lot of guessing on my part before I came across the actual significance of 13:24, and as I delved deeper into the story I was slowly able to truly appreciate the full meaning of the tagline “A story of faith and obsession”.
 
I would strongly suggest to any reader to do the same.  The narration will explain everything.Just a word of warning: the book deals graphically with child abuse, but it only touches upon child pornography.  If you are squeamish, or thin skinned… well, get over it!  This is real life – face it. Learn from it (and there is a lot to learn and plenty of food for thought here) and stop burying your head in the sand. Events such as those described in this book are most probably occurring in your neighbourhood (especially if you live in the USA), not that far away from you, and they are only going to stop if people are aware, if people are horrified and take an active stand against it.
 
13:24 is not your usual crime story – we know from the beginning who the killer is (a teenager, Chris).  What we need to figure out is why these murders are happening, and what ties them to a rock band, Rehoboam and to 13:24.
13:24 is an excellent read, sensitively written by a survivor.  The pace of the story is fast and gripping, reminiscent of a blockbuster: we follow three main characters, Chris –the killer, William – the investigator, and Josh – the rockstar, as current events unfold and through flashbacks, which connect more and more of the dots and which will take you to places which are darker than you had ever imagined.  M Dolon Hickmon’s style is clear, gritty and emotionally charged and you cannot help finding yourself fully engaged with the protagonists.
I found that some passages were difficult to swallow as they evoked many personal memories – albeit (and thankfully) not as extreme as the ones described in the book.  Once I had reached the end, having spent the last twenty years in the UK, it all felt rather insular and detached from my own experiences and from those of the ones closest to me.  However, having been raised in Northern Italy by a Southern family, some of the methodology described in the book did ring clear bells, but I had never associated it to the root which is identified in this book.  I believe that these practices are mostly widespread in the United States, however you just need to watch the news to realise that they also happen all around Europe and the rest of the world, behind closed door – people are the same no matter their geographical location, of course the right encouragement from the right pulpit can provide the thin justification required to release dark impulses.
You can find out more on M Dolon Hickmon’s website.  The blog ‘A Survivor’s Conversation with Christianity’ is of particular interest, with its links to Michael and Debi Pearl and their manual “To train up a child”.
 
(ARC received via Netgalley)
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104 reviews18 followers
August 16, 2014
13:24 - a story of faith and obsession, at its' heart is a novel about revenge, a revenge exacted by a victim of physical and mental abuse. This is not a novel written to praise or attack any particular religion, although many anti-religion advocates could so easily find plenty of ammunition.

The cover is a little misleading as whilst two of the major characters are a rock fan and the cult rock star who is the focus of his adulation, and whose lyrics and motivations are examined in some detail, this is not the story of that band.

Our third major character is cop, Detective William Hursel as well as finding his main suspect 14 year old Chris Pesner, he needs to determine exactly what is the motivation behind the murders.

This is not so much a whodunnit, the book opens with the killer on his way to commit his second murder, and in fact we find ourselves watching in horrid fascination as he does the deed, instead we are concerned with the why?

The rock fan, Chris and the lead singer of the rock band Rehoboam Josh Sebala have made contact with one another long before 13:24's opening paragraph, and it is obvious to Detective Hursel from the offset that this is not a typical fanboy relationship. Why would the leader of a cult rock band with thousands of fans reply personally to just one fan? It is this connection that Hursel needs to understand and unravel in order to catch his killer before it is too late.

The abuse here is the use of belts and other instruments to beat children, it is not blatant child sexual abuse, although there are hints that the ultimate villain may indeed be so inclined. Certainly he is not opposed to kidnapping, child trafficking and murder to reach his ultimate goal.

Sadly, so many aspects of this novel mirror reality. Why has it been so easy to convince followers of certain religions that the brutal disciplining of very young children is the right thing to do? How does regularly beating a child down until you break them make you a better parent? There is a fairly big jump from spanking a naughty child, to beating a child and leaving them covered in bruises, or worse.

I am fairly conversant with the majority of strange fetishes and possible forms of abuse that human beings can inflict on one another and even knowing that this was a work of fiction, M Dolon Hickmon succeeded in unnerving me with this dark, disturbing tale of serial child abuse and the resultant trauma. Can I say that I was rooting for our killer all the way through this book?

This is M Dolon Hickmon's first novel, and that is somewhat surprising, an incredibly well written and researched book.

There is absolutely no reference in this book to the book penned by Michael and Debi Pearl,'To Train Up a Child', but it does not take a genius to see the correlations. The Pearl book advocates beating children into submission, beating children until you break their will, and then perhaps beating them some more to be certain. It states that you can pull your baby's hair as a disciplinary measure and even advocates that you start beating your child from the age of 4 months old. There are people who have used the Pearl book as their child-rearing bible, a few of these people have beaten their children to death.

To Train Up a Child is widely available, unfortunately.



This copy of 13:24 was received from the publisher for an honest review.

Recommended, it should spark an internal debate, especially for a parent.
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178 reviews11 followers
April 12, 2015
This book was a difficult, yet fascinating read. Therefore how does on review this book without revealing too much of the plot and spoiling it for the next reader? Warning though, this book is not for the faint hearted and is a book that touches of some religious and social taboos and therefore s very emotional and challenging.

There are two main stories in this novel which are told in the current timeline and with flashbacks which at times was a little confusing. Then there is the additional murder mystery time line (although the protagonist was never really hidden from the reader. There are some twists and turns in the story line to keep you interested. This reader found the constant jumping about confusing and it wasn’t until chapter 32 that all the storylines melded into one.

The characters are well developed and this reader felt empathy for the little boy. However, the grammar was questionable in placed but perhaps it is just that the author’s style is different to what this reader is used to.


The novel itself is well paced and well written. IT is powerful enough to make the subject matter sinister but also interesting enough for the reader to keep reading. It is pitches at just the right level for the reader to understand the topic and even empathise with the protagonist. A thoughtful, un easy read that stays with you well beyond the time it takes to read the book.

The book deals with a few taboo subjects, that this reader will not go into as it would ruin the surprise. The author goes into just enough detail without getting too graphic. The seriousness of the crime and the church preachers can twist the good book to make it mean what they want. In this novel the incident is not blasphemous to Christianity in general.

One thing that we can learn from this novel is how a little marshal punishment can become a twisted type of discipline at the hand of religious fanatics. Where does punishment end and sadism begin? This this reader found the novel very level handed in its treatment; and though provoking. I would highly recommend this book to others.

Full Disclosure: I received a free copy from Netgalley for an honest review.
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933 reviews33 followers
July 27, 2015
I do not know how to rate this book. In one hand I really did not like the story, it was creepy and cruel, but at the same time it was interesting and well written. This story made me uncomfortable and anguished, and thats the reason why I would say its not a good story, but that would not be fair. Its a well written story about really horrific problem in our world.

People have always needed something to believe in and something to worship, what ever name this thing has. And they also always have needed a good reason to do awful things in a name of "good". There are alway those who enjoy hurting others and get aroused by it. There are always victims who just let it happen and end their lives knowing that it all was their fault and then there are those who retaliate with vengeance.

Reading this story makes me seriously think, how do we dear to bring new life into this world, when there are so many people ready to hurt, maim and even kill those innocent children if it suits them, if it pays them well. Those of us, who have not experienced anything like this in our lives are really lucky. And there is nothing we can do, since there are always laws that protect those sick people and they are also very crafty to hide the dreadful things they do. But one thing is for sure, the more comfortable our live is the more sick things people invent to keep themselves entertained.

So it was well written heinous story.
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482 reviews5 followers
July 12, 2018
Sometimes, reviews are hard to write. It doesn't matter how much you like a book, it can be difficult to effectively express how a book made you feel. This is one of those books.

First, this book is well written. The story is told in both the past and present. It required a little more attention to remember what was happening when, but it certainly wasn't a big deal. At first it was a little jarring to jump, rather suddenly, from present to past back to present again. However, the jumps weave together perfectly to tell an intense story. Throughout the story, we meet different characters that really come to life. The characters make this disturbing book even more realistic.

Second, this book isn't for everyone. It's subject matter is disturbing and violent (done well and never over the top). Truthfully, even after reading the blurb and watching the book trailer, I wasn't exactly prepared for some of the things I read. In my case, though, I think that added to my overall enjoyment of the book.

I'm glad I took a chance and read this book. I enjoyed it and I'm sure the story will stick with me for some time.

* This book was received from NetGalley in exchange for an honest review. *
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1,358 reviews23 followers
May 8, 2014
“13:24” was published in 2014 and is the first book by author M. Dolon Hickmon (http://1324book.com).

Chris is an abused and troubled teenager who finally reaches his breaking point. Many attribute his crime spree at first to the dark music he listens to. By chance his favorite band, Rehoboam, is in town for a concert.

William Hursel is the detective that is called in to the resulting crime scene. He sees the result of a teenage boy gone crazy, but believes that there is more to the case. The more he digs, the more he uncovers.

Josh is the lead singer of the popular band Rehoboam. Josh comes from a hidden past where he was abused. Now a teenager who has reached out to him is involved in a crime spree. Because of the abuse they have both lived through he wants to help but it is bringing back the nightmares of the trauma of his own youth.

The novel takes the reader through a world of child punishment and those who are willing to pay to watch it as Chris rebels and Detective Hursel pursues him.

I found the writing and character development excellent. The story was very engaging .
17 reviews
March 2, 2014
13.24 review
I was approached by the writer to read and review this book. I learned about Mr. Hickmon’s background as an abuse survivor and was intrigued to read it.
The book is very well written and the characters are sound and believable. The physical and emotional abuse committed against children in the name of religion is illustrated and is not an easy read. The abuse of power and trust portrayed by the perpetrators seems like total fiction, but however, we sadly know that it is fact.
The story goes back and forward it time flawlessly, with changes in location and pace which keep you reading right to the end. The connections between the players is complex but the conclusion ties up all the ends. This book is very emotive and shows fear, damage, and revenge in the lives of those abused and coping strategies used by children.
Although this story is not for the faint hearted, it is a thoughtful and well put together book.
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120 reviews16 followers
March 17, 2014
i received this book for free through Librarything.com early reviews giveaways
This book is really raw in its contents. You really need a strong stomach to read this book.
It touches really delicate topics.
I really don't have many words to review this book cause it really touched me how the author have been able to blend past and present of the characters so well. nothing it's coincidental and the author showed that he did a lot of research in the field of PTSD, BDSM, child abuse, religion and cults. I'm still shocked but at the same time i started to love Chris and Josh and their bravery and courage.
I don't have words anymore, just hope that there are more cops like Williams that will put the pieces together and find the truth instead of just following the appearances.
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5,385 reviews74 followers
May 25, 2014
I am a Christian which means I follow Christ. His commandments were "Love The Lord your God and love your neighbor as yourself. "

The book was very well written although you had to pay attention to the chapters that went back in time but that wasn't nearly so difficult as some other books I've read that attempted because each chapter put you full on to another piece of an elaborate plot. I feel sad about young people in the news when they commit horrible crimes because I think something like this has happened to them like this father. It doesn't mean that every abused child will commit crimes because Josh hadn't but he acted his life in his music. I sincerely enjoyed this book. This copy ARC from Netgalley.
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124 reviews18 followers
March 14, 2014
I received this book from LibraryThing.

I was hooked from the beginning and could not put it down, though it made my heart heavy.

It's fiction, but based on real events of parents who followed a so-called Christian minister's guidebook to disciplining children by spanking or whipping them.
He recommends starting with a switch on their bare legs when they're only a few months old.
And you are to continue until you break the child's will. As the child gets older, the "rod" gets heavier. He recommends flexible plumbers pipe.

I'm warning you it will tear up your guts, but is so well written, you can't stop. You just keep hoping someone will get revenge.

A strong five stars.
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30 reviews21 followers
July 14, 2014
I am very impressed with this book. Once or twice the writing felt just a bit stilted, but it was made hardly noticeable within the well-timed plot progression, good character development, and fascinating social analysis. And if you are thinking it is "Christian fiction" as usually encountered, think again. Be ready for hard topics, flawed-yet-appreciable characters, and realistic treatments of language and sexuality.

One warning: An important aspect of the book involves child abuse (cast very clearly as horrific and morally wrong). This needs trigger warnings all over it, so be aware if that's a topic you need to avoid.
595 reviews3 followers
September 10, 2016
One of the storylines' about the investigation after a killer teenager and the other is the story of the singer of a heavy metal band. What connects them is that they both was heavily and repeatedly beaten and abused as a child. But in the background lurks an even bigger and more frightening secret. The author, a child abuse survivor himself, raise serious questions in his thought-provoking book in the disguise of the fast paced, readable plot.
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1,227 reviews12 followers
March 19, 2014
I thought this book was very well written and the author did a fair amount of research on topics. The characters were well developed and the storyline was impeccable. Only warning for this book is some people won't be able to handle some of the issues that it brings up. Also the book tends to jump from past to present, but it does so in a way that you as a reader are not constantly wondering "When did this happen?" I look forward to more from this author in the future.
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456 reviews10 followers
April 9, 2014
This was a good thriller. It holds your interest and keeps you turning pages. You feel for the victims which would be Josh and Chris. The parts of the child abuse all in the name of the bible and disciplining your children and the sex tapes with children were difficult to read. But all in all a good read. I received this from LibraryThing Members Giveaway for an honest review.
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532 reviews
September 17, 2016
This was a really well written book, but hard to read because of the abuse.
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