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236 pages, Paperback
First published January 1, 1978

"The elevator door closed like a shark's mouth." Really? Why are we bringing an utterly jarring shark metaphor into a story of a zombie epidemic that has nothing to do with the ocean? Can an elevator door that 4 people calmly walk into really close anything like a shark's mouth? Especially when the next sentence has them arriving safe and sound on the next floor?
"...they jumped into the trailer" when two bikers jump into the front of a tractor-trailer rig. They definitely did not start the engine and drive from within the trailer.
Several cases where it refers to a "holster" being strapped around someone's waist or a holster holding ammunition and strapped across someone's chest. It's clear the author meant a belt, but based on the number of times this mistake was repeated it's also clear the author doesn't know the difference between a belt and a holster. There were several similar mistakes where the author clearly didn't understand the words s/he was using. How these made it through editing baffles me.