This debut author definitely has the writing style to make it big in the the competitive world of Scottish historical romance. From her authentic details, intriguing storyline, and interesting characters, who have just enough Scottish brogue to make any lass swoon, she has me wanting to know more about each and every character. However, as an avid true romantic at heart, there are some major character issues that leave me very disappointed, which caused me to lower my overall rating. I decided to break my review down into two categories to help clarify facts vs. my opinion.
FACT: Right from the start, Laird Lachlan and Maggie dance around each other and try to deny their instant attraction. He has so much baggage from a manipulative ex-fiance he refuses to ever trust a woman or his heart again. Since her betrayal, it’s all about the clan, man. Each move he makes will be about protecting his people. He repeatedly declares, not only will he never marry, he specifically won’t ever marry Maggie, the heroine. By refusing to reveal her true identity, he assumes she is hiding a secret that could lead to clan war or may even be a spy sent by his greatest enemy, Conall. He ultimately decides to just use her for bedsport, then take her wherever she wants to go once he is bored with her.
Margaret Murray is definitely on the run. Yes, she does have a connection to Conall, but it is an unwanted one. She��s being forced to marry the evil monster. Well, not if she can get to a nunnery first! Since her father and brothers won’t listen to her pleas, she takes matters into her own hands and flees. After Lachlan mistakenly almost kills her, he reluctantly takes her to his castle. She knows if she reveals Conall as her betrothed, Lachlan will immediately take her back to her father to avoid any possible clan conflict.
OPINION: Lachlan’s wounded pride/fear for his clan often clouded his judgement and made him paranoid. I did not like his lack of concern for Maggie’s reputation and his open willingness to use her body without any concern for her future. He often admitted he would be tossing her aside once he was bored with her. At one point, he justifies his actions by claiming if he didn’t someone else in his clan would anyway. How gracious of him to be the one to volunteer to despoil her virtue! His brief references to the many lasses he’s been with, including his ex-girlfriend, comparing them to Maggie, did not sit well, with me, either. When Maggie’s true identify was revealed, Lachlan immediately jumped to conclusions, found her guilty without letting her prove her innocence, and punished her. After the truth came off, he got off with a simple apology, folks. That also did not sit well with me.
Maggie had little self-respect for herself, as well. The “I’ll just enjoy him while he still wants me and cling to those passionate memories when I’m living in a nunnery” notion was pathetic. I’m not a fan of a doormat heroine. At least, she finally did try to leave Lachlan after thinking he had been with another woman.
At the end of the day, my fellow Scottish romance book-loving friends, I’ve got to like and respect the leading couple. Though Ms. Bailey’s writing was absolutely seamless, I had issues with Lachlan and Maggie. I’m hoping she will include a couple who will fight for their love at first glance in her next literary endeavor. After all, it is called romance for a reason. I look forward to reading this author again, but hope she will give us a more deserving couple who will stop at nothing until they get their HEA.
Title: Highland Deception, Series: Highland Pride (Book 1), Author: Lori Ann Bailey, Pages: 222, stand-alone, HEA, debut author, selfish/refuses to love hero quick to judge, hero did not stand up for/fight for his girl at times, heroine needed more self-respect, some violence, no love triangle, no cheating, heroine is kidnapped, predictable OW jealousy drama resulting in perilous situation, well-written, VERY steamy scenes with lusty language.
(This review is based on ARC ebook received via NetGalley in exchange for an honest, unbiased opinion. No monetary compensation was made. There is no relationship/affiliation between the reviewer and the author/publisher.)