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Highland Deception

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Scotland, 1642. Maggie and Lachlan must fight their growing attraction, battling suspicion, and intrigue as religious and political turmoil threaten to tear their clans apart. He has sworn he will never marry. Lachlan Cameron is honor bound to see a wounded lass to safety, although he has well learned women are deceivers, and this lovely maid harbors a wealth of secrets. But Maggie's free spirit and charms enthrall him while he works to discover if she is innocent . . . or a spy scheming with his enemies to destroy his clan. She has sworn she will never fall in love. Maggie Murray fled her home to avoid a political marriage to an abusive man. Salvation comes when the Cameron laird, unaware of her identity, protects her as she escapes. His kindness slowly warms her, and she's tempted to confess her real name. But his strong sense of honor would force him to return her to her father . . . and torment at the hands of her scorned betrothed. Contains mature themes.

Runtime: 8. 09 hours, 7 library CDs

295 pages, Kindle Edition

First published August 3, 2016

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Lori Ann Bailey

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Lori Ann Bailey is a best-selling author and winner of the National Readers’ Choice Award and Holt Medallion for Best First Book and Best Historical. Lori writes hunky highland heroes and strong-willed independent lasses finding their perfect matches in the Highlands of historic Scotland. Lori co-hosts the weekly podcasts, History, Books and Wine and Crime Feast. When not writing, reading or sharing her love of history, and romance or her fascination with true crime, Lori enjoys time with her real-life hero and four kids or spending time walking or drinking wine with her friends.

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317 reviews3,116 followers
May 18, 2017
It has been a long time since I have read a great Highlander historical romance. Highland Deception was an absolute treat! This is Ms. Bailey's debut novel, and I can't wait to read her next release. I loved her writing style and enjoyed it was told with a dual POV.

Lachlan and Maggie were so endearing and I really cared about their budding relationship. The storyline drew me right in and held my attention all the way through.

Maggie Murray, dressed in men's clothing, is on the run. Running from her father who insists she marries Conall, a cruel and evil man. While trying to reach the safety of a church, she witnesses a sword fight between two enemy clans. While the battle is raging, she sees a man flailing about on the ground and bleeding from the abdomen. She rushes out of hiding with her medicine bag in hand hoping all the skills her mother and grandmother taught her will be enough to save the man. After stitching the wound closed, she uses her dagger to slice off the sutures. Suddenly a large man is rushing towards her with intentions to harm.

Lachlan Cameron, laird of the clan, is traveling back to Kentillie Castle with his companions, when they are attacked by henchmen. After the sword fight ends, Lachlan searches for his younger brother and sees him lying on the ground and another man leaning over him with a dagger in hand. Lachlan grabs him by the neck and proceeds to choke the life out of him. He is totally surprised by the fact the man is actually a beautiful young woman who was trying to save his brother's life. He feels terrible he hurt her and agrees to get her to safety.

What an unexpected way to meet the most stunningly handsome man Maggie has ever seen. Staring into his eyes and he has his huge hands around her neck, cutting off her air supply! It doesn't take long in his grand presence for Lachlan to stir things within Maggie's body she has never felt before. She fancies what it would be like to lie with Lachlan before she devotes her life to a convent, where she hopes she will be safe from the brutal Conall.

Although the achingly gorgeous Maggie totally sets his body ablaze, Lachlan fights the temptation to get involved with her. Once bitten, twice shy, thank you very much! Never again would he let a woman humiliate him. He refuses to entertain the idea of marriage. Ah, but if any woman could get him to change his mind about marriage, it would be the delectable Maggie.

This was a delightful, entertaining read, which I found hard to put down!
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Author 38 books40 followers
August 22, 2016
It's an interesting read. I loved the story and the characters. Set in Highlands, the story revolves around Maggie who runs away from home so that she can avoid a disastrous marriage. But on her way to the convent, to safety, she found trouble. Lachlan has a mission. He must protect a boy and expose a traitor. Trust is a luxury he cannot afford. So when Maggie turn up right after they had an encounter with his enemies he decides to keep her close. She might very well be a spy after all.

But that's not the real reason... Try as he might he simply can't ignore the attraction he feels to her. He will wait until he can trust her then he will make her his. Maggie on the other hand want nothing more than to get as far away from home as possible. And if she can tag along with Lachlan then so be it. This way she will be safe from any harm. Because she knows in her heart that he will never hurt her.

Unfortunately what she didn't expect is falling for him. Now she has a problem. If he ever finds out her true identity he will definitely send her home. Therefore, she must leave without anyone being the wiser... It will not be an easy thing to do though

Absolutely amazing! I loved this book and I think it's a real treat for historical romance lovers. ;)
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August 13, 2016
Book: Highland Deception by Lori Ann Bailey

Reviewed: by Barb Massabrook

Heat Rating: Smokin Hot

Overall Rating 5/5 star

Release Date: 8/22/2016

Background with historical detail:

Setting in 1642 Scotland was on the cusp of Another religious civil war or a third Bishops wars, as it was called. As the Covenanters who were committing atrocious crimes against innocent Catholics as they feel everyone should be worshipping the Protestant faith! Conal Erskine, Maggie Murray's betrothed was one of those people. He was murdering innocents for no reason but they were devoted Catholics a different faith! He truly was a sado masochist who enjoyed others pain and suffering-promising his bride to be that was her future! He was a brutal demon indeed!


Scotland, 1642

Maggie swears she will never fall in love! Especially not like her deceased mother did! After all men only wanted one thing from women and then you are set aside! Don't they?

Lowlander, Margaret Murray is on the run after being betrothed to an abusive evil brute! She has stalled for over a year, but her time has run out! No matter how much she pleads her case-of how awful her betrothed is! It's a political match, as her father is the Duke of Kirk is forcing her to marry Conall Erskine! He will not listen nor will her as her betrothed and his family have a lot of political power and influence. Even Maggie's brothers won't defend her go against their father's wishes. Telling her she just must get used to his rough ways and love will come later! Like hell it will! Especially not after the he terrorized and used brute force against her best friend! Yet no one was aware of this due to fatal threats he made against her friend. He is so horrid and evil she doesn't dare doubt the threats he makes!

So after that she closes herself off from people fearing he would hurt someone else she cares for. This basically forces her to become a loners in seclusion. Yet deep inside wishes for family and friends that love and care for her. Even her dreams of children will never come to be. Better safe then sorry for herself and others connected to her. Her own mother ignored her why she basically ran wild and did as she pleased! Plus with an absent father never around who was unfaithful with many lovers. It is no wonder Maggie has no taste for men and wants to be a Bride of Christ! Yet what she wants most is freedom and for someone to love her,

It a frustrating no win situation for Maggie. So she decides she has no choice, but become a Bride of Christ and hide behind the walls of the convent. Well it's better then being beaten to submission! Alhough it saddens her too, as Maggie secretly dreamed of marrying for love and having a family. Now it wasn't even a possibility! So she steals a horse in boys clothes with her healing supplies as she is also a healer. As many of the women in her family before her were healers as well. Maggie takes off and this is when she starts her journey for the nunnery, heading north. Though she wants to taste true freedom and a bit of fun first!

Lachlan swears he will never marry again after his former betrothed plots against him and his clan in the worst possible way! He no longer trusts women thinks they are all liars and deceivers, but does still want them in his bed! Yet only in a physical way once his needs are met to be set aside.

Highlander, Royalist, Laird Lachlan Cameron, holds proof against the murderer, Conal Erskine! Whom is an Argyll and Covenanters supporter and Lachlan has proof of an asasination plot, plus he is protecting a young witness who saw him murder a Catholic priest. While in a skirmish with Conal's men, Lachlan mistakenly assumes Maggie was a plad. He nearly kills her as he thought shewas attempting to murder his brother, Malcolm. While in fact she had just stitched up a severe wound, probably just saved his brothers life! When honorable Lachlan realizes his mistake finding her a lass, he feels guilty as he would never raise a hand to a lass. He then brings the broken woman with him home to the highlands.

After Lachlan is able to question her he immediately mistrusts her knowing she lies, thinking she another faithless woman and having secrets. He suspects she as a spy when she wont answer his questions wont reveal who she is. Maggie knows if he knew whe a Dukes daughter he would just return her to her family. Then she would be forced to marry that monster who she fears will eventually kill her.

Maggie had never seen such a beautiful man in her life! This golden haired man with a warrior's body and protective heart, Of course Lachlan has secrets of his own. Lachlan fears she may be a spy and a threat, but once she's cleaned up is the most beautiful woman in Scotland! He puts his clan and family before anything! He will never let another woman into his heart nor put him or his people in danger ever again!

On their journey to his home to the Highlands, the attraction only grows stronger. Once he has her at his castle he sees her intelligence, caring for others realizing he wants her but still won't touch her until he knows who she is. He feels stirring of jealousy from the heady looks she gets from other men in his clan The attraction only grows stronger but both have so much mistrust in others and feel they sting of betrayal when bitter misunderstandings seem to surround them.

Maggie determined to feel true freedom to have a little fun before entering the convent but it gets harder and harder to leave as his clan gives her the family and friendship she has always yearned. Plus for the first time she feels safe and secure. She knows the braw man will have his fun and eventually set her aside. As that is the way of these deceitful men but as she he. Plus Maggie knows he needs a political match and believes he thinks her a commoner.Then she starts wondering why not have a first and last fling-before she enters the convent. Well as long as her heart is not involved. Yet she soon starts to learns more about this good, kind, untrusting, handsome golden haired Laird with a body of a God. Maggie then realizes her heart is in jeopardy!

Not realizing that she might be putting his clan in the midst of a civil war and betraying the man she has begun to care for in the worst way. Will the final result be the worst form of betrayal? Or will these two mistrusting souls finally open their hearts and begin to trust again? Will Lachlan set Maggie aside if he ever gets her in his bed? Will free spirit Maggie become a bride of Christ and live a dull restricted life behind the high walls of a nunnery for the rest of her life? Has Maggie, cost his clan a civil war not revealing her secrets and who she really is ? Will Lachlan fall to pieces if another woman betrays him? Will these two truly ever open their hearts and let the love in? You will have to read and find out the answers from this magnificent book!



Must read this heart string puller with characters that glide off the pages right into the reader's heart. Even the secondary characters are extraordinary. Hope there is future books fo shy Fergus, Lachlan's brother Malcolm, the handsome flirtatious cousin Brodie or the best friend Alan who is direct, open and honest.

Wow! Wow! Wow this is new talented author “Lori Ann Bailey” debut book, “Highland
Deception”book one in her new (Highland Pride Series). I was totally delighted by this exceptional book and totally swept away! Having all the elements historical romance readers are looking for. It has a potent mixture of true factual Scottish history with an exhilarating fictional Scottish romance! As its is set on the aftermath of the first and second Bishops wars 1639-1640 and on the cusp of the third! As it was a horrid time of deadly treacherous political and religious plots, schemes, murder, assassination attempts, and more. Plus her fictional story is beautifully and superbly written, as she writes like a pro she has been writing novels for years!

Beautiful Scottish setting, amazing dialogue, powerful plots within plots! There is so many weaving twists and turns that the reader heads will spin, when you think you know everything and boom another surprise!

Bravo Ms. Bailey is it is obvious you picked a craft you were born to do! So thrilled you decided to go on this marvelous journey as a writer and picking my favorite genre Scottish historical romance! I can't wait to read the next book in your a Highland Pride series. Definitely readers this is a new author you don't want to miss! I highly recommend Highland Deception by Lori Ann Bailey!

**I received this arc from the publisher in an exchange for an honest review through netgalley.com**


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1,850 reviews75 followers
August 7, 2016

Highland Deception (Highland Pride, Book 1) by Lori Ann Bailey. WOW! What a captivating and seductive Scottish Romance set in 1642 Scotland. Hard to believe Ms. Bailey is a debut author!

Thqis is the story of Lachlan Cameron, Laird of Cameron and Maggie Murray, betrothed to a brutal, abusive man. The only thing left for her, is to run for her life and enter a convent for protection. But, she runs right into the path of Lachlan and his men. Swore to protect her, but afraid of her deception, for he knows she is not telling him everything. Is she a spy for his enemies?
Battling a fierce attraction, suspicion at every turn, and political and religious intrigue, as well, as turmoil that could threaten to tear two clans apart. Can Lachlan and Maggie find love amist intrigue and doubt? Steeped in deceit, treachery, betrayal, treason, and the brutal reality of warfare and a dangerous deception. Will Lachlan and Maggie learn to trust, heal, and find their HEA? Or lose everything to betrayal, and deceit?

Well written with well-developed, captivating and seductive characters. The storyline is unique, intriguing, powerful and compelling. An emotionally charged Scottish Romance that will pull any Scottish lover into the story and hold them in rapture.
Highly recommended! Fans of Scottish Romance, Highlanders, intrigue, treachery, treason and so much more, really should pick up "Highland Deception" for their reading pleasure. Impressive and treacherous! I look forward to the next installment.
Received for an honest review from Net Galley. However, all opinions and thoughts are my own.

Rating: 4.5
Heat rating: Mild-Some degree of hotness
Reviewed by: AprilR
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3,525 reviews27 followers
August 1, 2016
I received this from Netgalley in exchange for an honest review. This was a good story. I enjoyed it a great deal. Maggie is looking for her freedom and runs away from home to avoid being married to a horrible guy. Lachlan is a man trying to save his clan and protect his allies. The romance between the two characters was really fun to read about it. I will definitely be looking for more from this author.
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333 reviews6 followers
October 2, 2016
This book was great!! Hard to believe that this is her first book. I loved all the characters and can't wait to read Alan's story. She writes a beautiful story and she does an excellent job describing Scottland. I loved it!!!
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September 12, 2024
2.75

The distrust, misunderstandings, and non-communication frustrated me. There’s OW drama. The same kind that I’ve read numerous times. Other than that, it wasn’t too bad since I didn’t feel compelled to DNF.

These two lusted after one another so there were steamy moments. I didn’t like the word choice “sleep” or “slept with” for sex, ie “Did you sleep with him?” “I slept with him.” It was too modern and took me out of the story whenever the narrator read it.

The narrator, for some reason, didn’t create unique voices for each character. 🤔🤔🤔 Fortunately, it wasn’t hard to follow along.
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August 10, 2016
I received a free ARC in exchange for an honest opinion.

Lachlan has sworn to never marry after the woman he was betrothed to since they were kids betrays him. Maggie has run away from home as her father planned to marry her off to a sadistic, abusive man.

Maggie is on the run, dressed as a boy. Her plans are to get away and go to a Convent for the rest of her life. Lachlan and his men are trying to get home and meet with other clan chiefs as they have a letter that is proof of treachery in a very tense political and religious time.

Maggie has stopped to water her horse and rest. She hears horses and hides and then hears more coming from the other side. Lachlan's group has met up and is skirmishing with others. The others soon leave as they know they are beat. Malcolm, his younger brother is hurt and Maggie rushes out to help him without any thought of danger to herself. She is a healer and she must help him.
When Lachlan sees this he thinks his brother is being harmed and grabs Maggie, or the lad he thinks she is, slamming her back and knocking her out.

As they travel Maggie keeps mainly to herself but one day she goes to wash and Lachlan follows her and discovers her secret! This is no lad!

It doesn't take long before the others know also but what bothers Lachlan is that she won't tell him who she is, where she is from. He knows she is running but has no idea why. Since he already has an issue with trusting women, this doesn't help.

There is an attraction growing between them. He finds himself protective of her as much as distrustful. Her distrust is that he will send her home.

Will they both survive to enjoy the love they feel?

Maggie wants nothing more than to live a normal life and be a healer. To her father, she was a pawn for political gain. Her mother only cared about getting love from a husband that was incapable of loving a woman.

Lachlan tries to find every reason not to care about her but nothing will free them until the threat that waits for them both show their face!

I enjoyed this book. Lachlan was a good man, he cared about his people and their welfare, he felt so betrayed by his ex-betrothed that trust was impossible. Maggie saw that he was caring of others but felt she couldn't trust him. He knew she would never make it at a convent. These two butted heads from the beginning....nice read.
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3,749 reviews490 followers
August 22, 2016
So disappointed this is a debut novel—I wish there were more!

I was in the mood to escape and that is exactly what I did in this romance set in the historical Scottish Highlands. Maggie is running from a brutal life she sees no other escape from. Her plan may not have been well thought out—with her bag of healing balms and a stolen horse her only possessions—but luck is with her when she finds Lachlan…

“She’d probably found the only man in all of Scotland who could find his way into her soul.”

I really did get lost in this sweet, suspenseful tale. Maggie and Lachlan, plus his family and clan, were all characters that were immediately likable and endearing. I loved Maggie from the start as her character was in no way a ‘poor little rich girl’. She was bold and practical, not afraid to get down in the mud or go toe-to-toe with the alpha clan leader. She had little reason to trust but Lachlan cornered the market on distrust and suspicion. His clan’s safety was his highest priority, but he couldn’t resist Maggie, even if he wanted to! He was a warrior despite his warming feelings for her, and it was not hard to picture him in the thick of battle with a kilt and claymore. Actually, it was quite pleasant to think of that!

Surrounded by political intrigue and danger from a few different corners, how this duo managed to connect despite the secrets they both kept was a testament to true love. The language may not have always felt like I was still in 1600’s Scotland—did they speak of sheet action as a ‘transcendent experience’ normally?—but that didn’t keep me from wanting to believe this world existed.

With characters I adored, along with suspense, chivalry, and love, why would I want to leave? ~ Diane, 4.5 stars
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997 reviews10 followers
August 9, 2016
I enjoyed Lori Ann Bailey's "Highland Deception", it was a well written, passionate historical romance. Maggie wants to escape a betrothal to a cruel man and decides the only way to accomplish that is to run away. Lachlan previously had his heart broken by a beautiful woman, they were engaged and he found out she was plotting his death behind his back.
Maggie dresses as a boy and leaves her father's keep. When she stumble upon a battle and sees a man hurt, she doesn't hesitate, she grabs her healing bag and begins to heal his almost life threatening wound. Lachlan doesn't trust this lovely woman dressed as a boy. He knows he wants her, but he doesn't trust her at all.
Maggie doesn't trust men either, she just wants away from her brutal fiancé and then she will close herself in a convent and take vows. Lachlan takes her with him on their journey. He is determined to find out who she is and find out of it he can trust her.
Maggie and Lachlan slowly fall for each other. Of course there is an instant attraction, but they take their time with each other. This is a sweet story between Maggie and Lachlan. There were a couple of times I wished they would talk to each other and there were only a few silly misunderstandings. Maggie had a knack for putting herself into danger and Lachlan had a knack for rescuing her. Good read, I recommend it!

I received a complimentary copy from NetGalley in exchange for an honest review
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3,500 reviews47 followers
August 3, 2016
Description:

Scotland, August 1642

Maggie and Lachlan must fight their growing attraction, battling suspicion and intrigue as religious and political turmoil threaten to tear their clans apart.

He has sworn he will never marry.

Lachlan Cameron is honor bound to see a wounded lass to safety, although he has well learned women are deceivers, and this lovely maid harbors a wealth of secrets. But Maggie's free spirit and charms enthrall him while he works to discover if she is innocent…or a spy scheming with his enemies to destroy his clan.

She has sworn she will never fall in love.

Maggie Murray fled her home to avoid a political marriage to an abusive man. Salvation comes when the Cameron laird, unaware of her identity, protects her as she escapes. His kindness slowly warms her, and she’s tempted to confess her real name. But his strong sense of honor would force him to return her to her father…and torment at the hands of her scorned betrothed.

My Thoughts:

This is a well written and well thought out debut novel. I loved the characters and the story. I had to make certain that this was a debut effort as I was amazed at the quality of the story as a whole.
This is an amazing debut novel that I would give a 4.75 star rating.
I anxiously await more from this author.
I received a digital ARC of this book in exchange for an honest review.
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1,015 reviews18 followers
August 18, 2016
In 1642, Lachlan Cameron is a man who has learned that women can’t be trusted. While in battle, he mistakes a maiden who is trying to help with one who kills. He feels honor bound to see the wounded lass to safety, but doesn’t know whether she’s a friend or a spy sent to destroy his clan. Maggie Murray ran away from a marriage to an abusive tyrant. When she meets Lachlan, she’s afraid to reveal her true identity. As she falls for Lachlan’s kindness, will she reveal the truth or get sidetracked by lies meant to deceive.
This is a good historical romance for anyone who loves high-spirited, intelligent women and the clansmen who love them. The action and suspense made me want to see what happened next, and I stayed up late to find out. However, the sexual scenes seemed awkwardly written and didn’t fit into the story. I want to read more from this author because I believe this will be a successful series. An Advanced Reading Copy was received in exchange for an honest review.
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Author 28 books250 followers
August 7, 2016
I was impressed with this debut book by Ms. Bailey. There was a solid plot with a few twists thrown in. The descriptions of landscapes were vivid and brought them alive for me. She did a good job of letting us know what Lachlan and Maggie were thinking and feeling. Their growing attraction despite Lachlan's reservations was believable. I was glad to see that Maggie was not a timid little mouse, but had a bit of a wild streak. Growing up with 3 older brothers allowed her to develop skills that young women were usually denied.

There were a few spots where I would have liked to know more, but overall, this was an enjoyable Highland romance. Fans of Scottish romance stories will definitely enjoy this one.

I received a copy of this book from the publisher in exchange for a fair and honest review.
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323 reviews5 followers
September 4, 2016
I am finding it hard to believe this is a book by a debut author. It was as woven together and solidly written as some of my favorite Highland romance authors. It had everything that made it impossible to put down; treachery, betrayal, suspense, romance and love.
Maggie was a strong female character fleeing from her home in order to escape a disastrous marriage set up by her father (who did not have any redeeming qualities himself). She runs into Lachlan, who is the complete opposite of man she has ever met. He had so many strong character traits that were likely due to the loving home he was brought up in. His most endearing quality was a heart for those who couldn't fight for themselves and his one major flaw was some major trust issues (he had been burned in the past). Maggie hid her identity from Lachlan for more than halfway through the book and while that is something that typically annoys me it worked with their storyline. I typically like a little more heat in a Highland romance but it was still wonderful and I hope the follow up story is just as riveting.
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1,500 reviews327 followers
August 24, 2016
This debut author definitely has the writing style to make it big in the the competitive world of Scottish historical romance. From her authentic details, intriguing storyline, and interesting characters, who have just enough Scottish brogue to make any lass swoon, she has me wanting to know more about each and every character. However, as an avid true romantic at heart, there are some major character issues that leave me very disappointed, which caused me to lower my overall rating. I decided to break my review down into two categories to help clarify facts vs. my opinion.

FACT: Right from the start, Laird Lachlan and Maggie dance around each other and try to deny their instant attraction. He has so much baggage from a manipulative ex-fiance he refuses to ever trust a woman or his heart again. Since her betrayal, it’s all about the clan, man. Each move he makes will be about protecting his people. He repeatedly declares, not only will he never marry, he specifically won’t ever marry Maggie, the heroine. By refusing to reveal her true identity, he assumes she is hiding a secret that could lead to clan war or may even be a spy sent by his greatest enemy, Conall. He ultimately decides to just use her for bedsport, then take her wherever she wants to go once he is bored with her.

Margaret Murray is definitely on the run. Yes, she does have a connection to Conall, but it is an unwanted one. She��s being forced to marry the evil monster. Well, not if she can get to a nunnery first! Since her father and brothers won’t listen to her pleas, she takes matters into her own hands and flees. After Lachlan mistakenly almost kills her, he reluctantly takes her to his castle. She knows if she reveals Conall as her betrothed, Lachlan will immediately take her back to her father to avoid any possible clan conflict.

OPINION: Lachlan’s wounded pride/fear for his clan often clouded his judgement and made him paranoid. I did not like his lack of concern for Maggie’s reputation and his open willingness to use her body without any concern for her future. He often admitted he would be tossing her aside once he was bored with her. At one point, he justifies his actions by claiming if he didn’t someone else in his clan would anyway. How gracious of him to be the one to volunteer to despoil her virtue! His brief references to the many lasses he’s been with, including his ex-girlfriend, comparing them to Maggie, did not sit well, with me, either. When Maggie’s true identify was revealed, Lachlan immediately jumped to conclusions, found her guilty without letting her prove her innocence, and punished her. After the truth came off, he got off with a simple apology, folks. That also did not sit well with me.

Maggie had little self-respect for herself, as well. The “I’ll just enjoy him while he still wants me and cling to those passionate memories when I’m living in a nunnery” notion was pathetic. I’m not a fan of a doormat heroine. At least, she finally did try to leave Lachlan after thinking he had been with another woman.

At the end of the day, my fellow Scottish romance book-loving friends, I’ve got to like and respect the leading couple. Though Ms. Bailey’s writing was absolutely seamless, I had issues with Lachlan and Maggie. I’m hoping she will include a couple who will fight for their love at first glance in her next literary endeavor. After all, it is called romance for a reason. I look forward to reading this author again, but hope she will give us a more deserving couple who will stop at nothing until they get their HEA.

Title: Highland Deception, Series: Highland Pride (Book 1), Author: Lori Ann Bailey, Pages: 222, stand-alone, HEA, debut author, selfish/refuses to love hero quick to judge, hero did not stand up for/fight for his girl at times, heroine needed more self-respect, some violence, no love triangle, no cheating, heroine is kidnapped, predictable OW jealousy drama resulting in perilous situation, well-written, VERY steamy scenes with lusty language.

(This review is based on ARC ebook received via NetGalley in exchange for an honest, unbiased opinion. No monetary compensation was made. There is no relationship/affiliation between the reviewer and the author/publisher.)

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4,818 reviews39 followers
August 19, 2016
I would never have known that Lori Ann was a debut author, I was captivated by this story from the very first page and couldn't put it down. I loved the characters, especially Lachlan , my new book boyfriend, and thought they interacted really well, I do hope she keeps them in mind for other books. I'm looking forward to reading more from her.

This is the story of Lachlan Cameron and Margaret Murray, they both have issues, he has been hurt and betrayed by his betrothed and doesn't trust women and so decides never to marry, she is betrothed to a monster who has sworn he will break her when they are wed, she has managed to put off the inevitable, but now her time has come to an end and she knows that her father won't break the contract as it is an aid for his political alliance, so she flees and thinks to go to a convent knowing it would be a better life than being used in the ways of men and alliances, and she doesn't want a marriage where her husband only sees her as chattel.

There is a lot more to the story, and this is just the opener. You'll find adventure, disloyalty, jealousy, bewilderment and romance in this want to read again and again book.
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3,091 reviews87 followers
August 22, 2016
Maggie Murray has run away from from her father's castle. She will not marry the monster that she has been betrothed to. Her father and brothers don't believe her when she tries to tell them what he is like. During her escape she finds herself in the middle of a battle. She must not let anyone know who she is .They will send her back to her Powerful Father.
Laird Lachlan Cameron is returning home from Edinburgh with evidence of a dangerous conspiracy and a boy that needs to be protected. The needs of his clan must come before anything or anyone. He can´t risk starting a war.
A grand highland adventure for a very protective Laird and a brave young healer. The characters are all great entertainment.
This story caught me on the first page and kept the pages flying past.
A sexy interesting read.
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2,043 reviews18 followers
August 24, 2016
Maggie Murray has ran away from a marriage to an abusive tyrant that her father insist is best for the Clan. Lachlan Cameron is a man who has learned that women can’t be trusted so when he meets Maggie trying to stab his brother he’s definitely leering of her motives. He is suspicion she’s a spy scheming with his enemies to destroy his clan and intrigue at the same time with the beautiful high-spirited and intelligent women. Maggie she’s afraid to reveal her true identity, she does not to be returned to her Father and her Clan. A great story with Lachlan and Maggie learning to trust each other filled with intrigue, treason, and betrayal and find their HEA.
I received an ARC copy from NetGalley and the publisher in exchange for an honest review.
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35 reviews7 followers
August 27, 2016
Lori Ann Bailey wove a wonderfully magical tale in this book. The plot was well thought out and the characters were artfully defined. There were just enough heart pounding moments to make keep you captivated. Lachlan and Maggie are a very entertaining match, each with their own idiosyncrasies to keep you both guessing and laughing. I cannot wait to read more of her books (especially looking forward to Alan's story)!
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9,119 reviews49 followers
August 22, 2016
Great historical read. Maggie is running away from home to escape a horrible marriage to an abusive man. When she is wounded she is rescued by Lachlan Cameron as their attraction grows for each other, Lachlan wonders how much he can truly trust her and what will he do when he finds out her identity. This is a fast paced historical read with great characters and plenty of drama and suspense. I loved it!
10 reviews1 follower
August 24, 2016
This is a great love story! You would never know this is a debut novel. Such a beautiful story of two people who had given up on love and happiness. I couldn't put it down! Definitely a MUST read!!!
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September 11, 2016
 

Highland Deception

Highland Pride #1

Lori Ann Bailey

 

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Big alpha male; kick-ass female; exhilarating romance!!!

He wanted-no, needed to see those blue eyes filled with pleasure, her head tilting back as she accepted his body into hers. by Lachlan

 


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Great cover! I can see the book in it after reading, I can guess is in Scotland, the title is pertinent to the book, the red on the grass backdrop is beautiful.
This book had a great plot. Everything was perfect! Clean (no typo mistakes),  relevant,  perfect cohesively, with no weak points. In fact, there are a few sub-plots going on with some twists.
I love the concept of a woman rebelling against the outdated idea of arranged marriage.
I love all the characters. Maggie, the kick-ass heroine that ran away from home dressed as a boy and knows how to ride and work the bow. Lachlan the huge, alpha warrior that is tempted by the girl but is hung up on the past. The secondary characters are also amazing.
I love the romance, the couple's chemistry was instantaneous and undeniable. The lovemaking is beautiful! With good descriptions, creativity, and real enough.
It was a hard to put down book. Pretty addictive read!
I have ended wanting more. I'm really looking forward to read I guess Lachlan's sister love story.


 

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It's not a book with a lot of fresh new ideas, but it's masterfully crafted that you don't miss the great originality.


He was her first, and he would be her only. He never wanted another man to see that look she'd given him as she'd climaxed beneath him. by Lachlan


 


You MAY read this book because you enjoy historical reads; you SHOULD read this book because you like great characters; you MUST buy this book to fall in love not only with a highland couple, but with an entire clan!
 
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864 reviews10 followers
February 23, 2021
I am always up for a feisty heroine, and Maggie does not disappoint. This is my first story by Lori Ann Bailey, and it will not be my last. I can't wait for the second on in this series. Now, on to the book.

Maggie is being forced by her family to marry truly awful man, who has already told her how he will break her spirit and make her his. She told her father and brothers over and over again, but they just brushed her off. She sees a final opportunity to escape while the men are all talking with the priest. Dressed as a boy she makes a break for it.

Lachlan is a strong laird of a mighty clan, and is working on bringing the clans together when he discovers a trader about the clans. There is a fight on a journey home, and this is where he meets Maggie. He has never wanted to marry, but slowly they are finding themselves drawn to each other.

If you are looking for a great read, with a HEA, this book will not disappoint.
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163 reviews22 followers
August 30, 2016
“Highland Deception” is the debut of author, Lori Ann Bailey, and is the first in her Highland Pride series. As a fan of all things Scotland, I was predisposed to like this book although, while Bailey does a great job with her debut, it was a tale of two cities for me.

The Story- Maggie is set to marry a rapist/murderer/real jerk, so she decides to run away and join a nunnery. On the road, she unwittingly falls in with a group of men from another clan while showcasing her healing skills. Fearing that they will return her to her fate, she refuses to tell them who she is, which is a problem for their leader, Lachlan. Lachlan falls for her; conflicts arise.

My Thoughts- This story began with a bang and hooked me immediately. Unfortunately, as soon as they arrive at Lachlan’s castle about halfway through, it felt like the story began to flail and random conflicts arose here and there which seemed like an attempt to add drama. I also took issue with the idea that a priest’s niece could be bedded and discarded with no issue. I didn’t swoon over the hero like I normally do when they are wearing kilts, and I think it’s because he did not treat her much better than the other men in her life. I did identify with Maggie, which could be why I took her mistreatment to heart.

The Good- Maggie is a great character: brave, kind, a woman who thinks for herself. The sex scenes and preceding build-up scenes were very hot and well-written. The Scottish brogue is just enough to hear the music of the language, but not over-done in a way that makes it difficult to read. The setting is perfectly described and makes you want to be in Scotland yesterday. The initial conflict and set-up is intriguing and captivating.

The Bottom Line- If you like stories set in Scotland, this is definitely one to pick up as it does a great job of bringing the history, culture and setting into the story instead of just plopping some random story down and saying that it’s Scotland and the hero wears a kilt and calls her “Lassie”. I had some issues with story toward the end and the hero, but it isn’t enough to keep me from recommending this book and looking forward to more from this author. 3 stars
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Author 70 books405 followers
September 5, 2016
Book Review originally published here: http://www.iheartreading.net/book-tou...

After watching season one of Outlander, I was in the mood for some Scottish historical romance, and Lori Ann Bailey’s novel, Highland Deception, certainly fit the bill. Maggie Muray fled her home to avoid a political marriage to a man who not only she doesn’t love, but who is also abusive. Maggie decides that the only way to escape is to run away, and join a convent, despite secretly dreaming of someone who will love her and cherish her.

Maggie escapes, and along the way, she meets Lachlan Cameron, whose honor binds him to see her to safety. Lachlan has a bad history with women, and thinks most of them are liars and deceivers. Yet he swears to protect her, and the more time he spends with Maggie, the more he realizes she’s a free spirit, has a lot of charm and wit, and is nothing at all like he feared she would be.

This was a fun, fast-paced and very romantic highlander romance that entertained me for quite a few hours. I really enjoyed this book, and the writing was excellent. I’m sure fans of the genre will love this.
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4,119 reviews12 followers
August 24, 2016
Even though this is the first one for this author she still will be able to weave magic enough to enthrall you with her tale. Also it takes alot any more for a another to entice me away from my op romances and paranormal of my norm lately which she did with the storyline and cover. Political unrest was even or more so costly in those times. I like also reading a author's perception of their thoughts on how a woman gets away with avoiding horrible and the like. In this one Maggie is hiding from a planned marriage that could cost her injury and more. Oh those days they get my blood boiling with how things went at times. Lachlan though he is a laird that does have a heart but does not tolerate bad. This author will weave their story like a fine tapestry with us being there to view. Suspicion is a large factor on how it will begin. I found I could not put this down until I had reached the very end which surprised me.
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36 reviews3 followers
August 29, 2016
Fast-paced Scottish historical romance with plenty of action, in all manners of speaking.

Maggie is our spunky heroine, desperate for freedom from her father's rule and her betrothal to a man who has promised her a marriage that would be nothing short of torture. Her escape attempt leads her to our hero, Lachlan, a fiercely loyal leader who has been burned by love before and swears he'll never fall for a woman again. They hold tight to each of their own secrets, trying to protect themselves and one another. This backfires, of course. But Maggie's hope for a taste of passion before joining a convent and Lachlan's overwhelming need to both claim and protect Maggie helps to break down the walls built by their secrets.

I had so much fun reading Highland Deception. It was hard to put down and I missed it when it was over. I look forward to reading more from Lori Ann Bailey!
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Author 92 books3,424 followers
September 12, 2016
I enjoyed Highland Deception and I am looking forward to more books in the series. Our heroine Maggie was pretty wonderful and it was her character that drew me into the story. She was witty, beautiful, tenacious and easy to fall in love with. Which was what our hero did despite his misgivings and the hurt and betrayal he had suffered in the past because of a woman. The attraction between Maggie and Lachlan developed nicely, it was believable, very sweet yet sensual. The overall plot was good, richly woven with history and beautiful description of the highlands. The romance was sweet and wonderful, and I am truly eager to read more from this author.
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1,447 reviews12 followers
August 24, 2016
Maggie is escaping her home she doesn't want to marry the abusive guy chosen for her.
Lachlan is going through to get home when he finds Maggie on the side of the road.
He takes her in and tries to figure out where she is from. She won't tell him anything. She is hoping that by not telling him who she is she is keeping him safe.
I thought this story was ok I had a hard time following it. It is not a genre I usually read. I thought I would try something different.

** I received a copy from NetGalley in exchange for an honest review**
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