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264 pages, Paperback
First published March 7, 2017
Story:
Lily is a succubus. She owns a private salon (in other words a brothel). Charles, a former tattoo artist who was turned into a vampire, is back and he's collecting his art. Unfortunately for them, he inked Lily and her friends, Dani (a witch) and Nate (a human), and he wants his tattoos back. When one of her clients is killed by the Souljacker in her salon, Lily's business goes downhill. She meets with Archer, a chaos demon, and asks his help to solve the case.
Characters:
I took my time to mention each's occupation because you would expect something wild. I mean fae, demons, vampires, witches, and humans in the same story sounds cool, yeah? Except that it was soo mundane. I mean they all sounded like normal humans. I expected Lily to be immoral and corrupted but she wasn't, not at all. She was good which I liked but too nice even for a human. She's supposed to be older than 600 years, yet, I saw no wisdom. She surely took many stupid and hasty decisions that ended in a very predictable way. I like her visit to the court, probably my favorite part of the book. Wynter seemed like a very interesting character, hope we'll learn more about her later. I expected a tyrant but she was not. Galenorn didn't fail to capture all the majesty surrounding the ice court.
Archer, the love interest, is just lame. I mean he's demon, come on! Yet, he was so normal, so human. I saw no wildness there but just a polite person who appeared suddenly in her life and stayed there as if he was a part of her life all along. I don't mean it in a positive way. Lily and Archer had no chemistry except for the "sparks" she felt when she shook his hand. After they slept together, it quickly became an insta-love.
Nate, her human best friend, sounded like a 17 years old. I thought he was a teen when she first mentioned him but only discovered later that he's at least in his late 20s. It's not that he was immature or something but I saw no manliness there. He was nothing special.
Dani, her other best friend, is a witch. I felt like she was the only one with some depth in her character. Maybe it's because her husband was turned into a vampire but even then, it was nothing impressive.
I couldn't connect with the characters. I didn't care if one of them died because they were so forgettable. Didn't see any 3-dimensional characters. I wasn't impressed. While I didn't hate any, none were the kind of character I'd remember.
Plot, worldbuilding & Writing:
The story kept me interested enough to finish it quickly. It was an easy and a fast read. It was fun and enjoyable but nothing more. Although we know some stuff about the world now, we know nothing about the past. All these creatures were just there. We learn that the government is corrupted supporting vampires, bloody rich and the enemies of everyone else, they surely acquired power with time but according to Lily they just "when the Fae and Weres had come out of the closet, everything blew up and went to hell." How and why did they appear? "Then, the vampires appeared on the scene and nobody was equipped to deal with them." How did they come? Were they always there? Why wasn't it mentioned?
Yasmine Galenorn explained how things work now, but neglected the history (except that they were hidden but not anymore) even though Lily was alive for more than 6 centuries. The writing was nothing outstanding and with some grammar mistakes.
Overall thoughts:
This is not a paranormal romance but more of urban fantasy in my opinion. It's more about the Souljacker hunting them rather than her relationship with Archer. The characters were flat and too tamed. The story while being entertaining didn't leave an effect on me. I feel like I've read this book before in a different setting, it was so predictable. Souljacker is my first book by Yasmine Galenorn and it saddens me to say also my last. I will not check out her other books but may read the sequel of this one in the future.
If you're looking for a light urban fantasy read that will keep you entertained then this book is for you but don't expect anything mindblowing.
***ARC kindly provided via NetGalley for the exchange of an honest review***



Then comes the news that the Souljacker--a tattoo-artist-turned-vampire--has escaped from an institution for criminally deranged Supernaturals. And he's hunting and killing everyone he has ever inked.(I'm guessing it's not a spoiler to tell you that the Souljacker is killing people to take his tattoos back.) Lily and her friends have those tattoos, and the police won't touch a case that involves those politically connected vampires. So Lily winds up with Archer Desmond, who's both an independent private detective and a chaos demon who has no problem at all giving Lily all the chi she needs--he quickly becomes her permanent feeding source in nicely detailed scenes.
"…the other inmates were relieved to see him go. Trust me, when criminally insane Fae and Were are 'relieved' that a fellow prisoner escaped, there's a problem."Her concept of magic changing the structure of our reality is intriguing, and a great set-up for future issues.
Yasmine Galenorn has all the elements in a story that I love. She even had a character that could feel inside your soul and bring out the tattoo that best suits your personality. Brilliant and unique that was! It wasn't the story that fell short. It was the storyteller. For me, Galenorn missed the mark.
I was bored with the story. It lacked suspense, action, and humor. Galenorn lacks in connecting feelings into her writing. Her style was very bland. The characters had no depth and all the characters seemed the same.
This story mostly revolved around that damn house, tea, and food. The "men" were constantly cooking and serving the women. Hurt your knee? You need some tea and toast! Yasmine Galenorn focused far too heavily on this.
Well, that's it for me, Galenorn. Farewell.