I had a hard time reading these stories as the grammar was not very good. If someone had proofread these stories then they would have caught all the mistakes I have found in just two stories. I would have enjoyed these stories more if they had been proofread better.
The book was decent to read. I think the storyline moved to fast.
I think this eBook has the potential to be a top notch book but I felt the story moved too fast.I think the only part that was real good to me was the sex scene. Otherwise, the kids loved it.